Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBK91PD246VDMNWEJTCJNT3

Run Details

Duration:
46.0s
Cost:
$0.008972
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the cobblestones of Camden High Street, turning the pavement into a black mirror that reflected the dying neon of the shops. Detective Harlow Quinn pushed through the downpour, her boots splashing through puddles that smelled of oil and rot. Her lungs burned with the cold air, each breath a jagged knife in her chest. She kept her eyes locked on the figure ahead. Tomás Herrera moved with a fluid grace that belied the urgency of his flight. His dark curly hair plastered to his scalp. He didn't look back. He knew this city better than she did. Quinn tightened her grip on the flashlight clipped to her belt. The beam cut a shaky cone through the gloom. She closed the distance. The rain stung her eyes, blurring the sharp line of her vision. She wiped her face with a gloved hand, leaving a smear of grime across her cheek. Eighteen years on the force had taught her patience, but the memory of Morris, lost to the dark three years ago, demanded speed. She wouldn't lose another lead. Tomás veered left, ducking under a rusted metal fence. Quinn followed, ignoring the scrape of wire against her coat. They reached the mouth of the abandoned Tube station. The entrance gaped like a wound in the brickwork. Grates covered the stairwell, welded shut with heavy iron bars. Tomás stopped at the bottom of the stairs. He turned, his chest heaving against the damp night. The Saint Christopher medallion around his neck swung wildly, catching the light from a streetlamp. Quinn halted ten paces away. She didn't raise her weapon yet. She wanted to hear him speak. "You shouldn't be here." Tomás's voice cracked. He clutched his left forearm, the scar running down the skin glowing faintly in the dim light. Quinn stepped over a pile of broken glass. "You're running from the law, Herrera. That makes this my jurisdiction." "This isn't London." Tomás shook his head. His warm brown eyes darted to the shadows beneath the stairs. "Not anymore." Quinn scanned the station mouth. The usual graffiti was gone. The walls were scrubbed clean, revealing bare brick. A low hum vibrated through the soles of her boots. It wasn't the rumble of a train. It sounded like a heartbeat. "Open the gate." Quinn pointed at the iron bars. Tomás laughed, a dry, humorless sound. "I can't. You need a token." He reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, jagged object. Bone. It looked like a finger phalanx, polished smooth by time. Quinn recognized the entry requirement from the file she'd buried in her desk. The Veil Market. A myth she'd dismissed until tonight. "Give me that." Quinn took another step. "No." Tomás stepped back, his heel hitting the edge of the stairwell. "It won't work for you. You don't have the blood." Quinn ignored the threat. She moved in, her military training kicking in. She closed the gap in two strides. Her hand shot out, aiming for the bone token. Tomás dodged, twisting his body. The medallion at his throat clinked against his chest. "You think you can just walk in?" Tomás backed up against the wall. "The Market moves. It changes. You step down there without a guide, and you'll never find the surface again." Quinn gripped the railing. The metal was cold, vibrating with that strange hum. She looked down the stairs. Darkness pooled at the bottom, deeper than the lack of light should allow. It felt heavy, pressing against her skin. "Morris didn't find his way back," Quinn said. The name hung in the air between them. Tomás flinched. "Morris was never meant to find his way back. He crossed a line he couldn't see." Quinn's jaw tightened. She didn't care about the lines. She cared about the truth. She cared about the partner who vanished into a case file labeled *Closed*. She looked at the bone token in Tomás's hand. It pulsed with a faint, rhythmic glow. "Hand it over." Tomás shook his head. "I'm not giving you a ticket to your death." "Then I'll take it." Quinn lunged. Tomás sidestepped and threw the token down the stairs. It clattered against the metal steps, bouncing into the abyss. The hum grew louder, a low thrum that rattled Quinn's teeth. The shadows at the bottom of the stairs seemed to stretch upward, reaching for the bone. "You see?" Tomás spread his hands. "It called to it. Now it knows you're here." Quinn looked down. The darkness shifted. Shapes moved in the gloom, indistinct and fluid. She could smell ozone and old earth. The air grew thick, harder to breathe. She reached for her radio, but the static drowned out any signal. "Go back." Tomás's voice dropped to a whisper. "The Market feeds on curiosity." Quinn holstered her radio. She didn't need to call for backup. They wouldn't come. They couldn't see what she saw. She looked at Tomás. He was waiting for her to run. He was waiting for her to turn back to the safety of the rain and the streetlights. She thought of Morris. She thought of the silence that followed his disappearance. Quinn stepped onto the first stair. The metal groaned under her weight. "Hell." Tomás cursed. Quinn didn't look up. She gripped the railing. The vibration traveled up her arm, settling in her bones. She checked her watch. The leather strap was worn, the face cracked. The second hand ticked forward, steady and indifferent. "Move." Quinn pointed at the darkness below. Tomás hesitated. He looked at the token, then at Quinn. "You're signing your own death warrant." "Better than dying in the rain." Quinn started down. Tomás followed. He moved quickly, keeping pace with her descent. The air grew colder with every step. The smell of ozone sharpened, cutting through the scent of wet wool and leather. They reached the landing halfway down. A heavy iron door stood open at the bottom. Beyond the door, lights flickered. Green neon hummed in the distance. The Raven's Nest. The bar was supposed to be in Soho. The geography didn't make sense. Quinn stopped at the threshold. She looked at the door, then at Tomás. The bone token lay on the floor near the doorframe, glowing brighter now. It waited. "Last chance to turn back." Tomás stood beside her. He didn't look at the token. He watched Quinn's face. Quinn holstered her gun. She didn't need it for what lay beyond. She stepped over the threshold. The darkness swallowed her boots. The hum rose to a crescendo, vibrating through her chest. Tomás followed her through the door. The iron slammed shut behind them, cutting off the sound of the rain. The silence that followed was absolute.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Tomás stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.52
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
95.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"gloom"
count2
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"scanned"
2"vibrated"
3"pulsed"
4"rhythmic"
5"whisper"
6"silence"
7"weight"
8"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences130
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1121
ratio0.001
matches
0"Closed"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
22.06% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount977
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity2.56
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn25
Herrera1
Morris2
Tube1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás22
Veil1
Market1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
7"Raven"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Soho"
globalScore0.221
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a finger phalanx, polished sm"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1121
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean27.34
std16.75
cv0.613
sampleLengths
065
154
260
347
449
524
619
720
840
99
1012
1145
127
1322
1442
1532
1638
1716
1818
1943
203
2113
226
2346
2415
2540
2613
2748
2813
2912
303
3138
327
3316
349
3546
3627
3728
3819
3932
4025
97.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences130
matches
0"was gone"
1"were scrubbed"
2"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was waiting"
1"was waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences141
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount977
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"clean, revealing bare brick."
1"heavy, pressing against her"
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.011258955987717503
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0040941658137154556
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean7.95
std4.07
cv0.512
sampleLengths
023
118
215
39
414
58
64
78
811
99
104
1112
1216
1323
145
159
1610
179
189
1910
208
219
2215
235
246
256
267
2717
288
2911
307
3111
322
335
345
358
3610
377
385
399
406
416
4212
431
4410
4513
463
476
487
4912
35.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.24113475177304963
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
ratio0
59.34% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences122
matches
0"Her lungs burned with the"
1"She kept her eyes locked"
2"His dark curly hair plastered"
3"He didn't look back."
4"He knew this city better"
5"She closed the distance."
6"She wiped her face with"
7"She wouldn't lose another lead."
8"They reached the mouth of"
9"He turned, his chest heaving"
10"She didn't raise her weapon"
11"She wanted to hear him"
12"He clutched his left forearm,"
13"His warm brown eyes darted"
14"It wasn't the rumble of"
15"It sounded like a heartbeat."
16"He reached into his pocket"
17"It looked like a finger"
18"She moved in, her military"
19"She closed the gap in"
ratio0.402
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences122
matches
0"Rain lashed the cobblestones of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pushed through"
2"Her lungs burned with the"
3"She kept her eyes locked"
4"Tomás Herrera moved with a"
5"His dark curly hair plastered"
6"He didn't look back."
7"He knew this city better"
8"Quinn tightened her grip on"
9"The beam cut a shaky"
10"She closed the distance."
11"The rain stung her eyes,"
12"She wiped her face with"
13"She wouldn't lose another lead."
14"Tomás veered left, ducking under"
15"Quinn followed, ignoring the scrape"
16"They reached the mouth of"
17"The entrance gaped like a"
18"Tomás stopped at the bottom"
19"He turned, his chest heaving"
ratio0.967
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rain lashed the cobblestones of Camden High Street, turning the pavement into a black mirror that reflected the dying neon of the shops."
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pushed through the downpour, her boots splashing through puddles that smelled of oil and rot."
2"Tomás Herrera moved with a fluid grace that belied the urgency of his flight."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Tomás stepped back, his heel hitting the edge of the stairwell"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.04
leniency0.08
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.1455%