Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBKCQVB2F005AMGQJYYS7QG

Run Details

Duration:
15m 39s
Cost:
$0.199789
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stood at the edge of the standing stones. The oaks loomed over the clearing, their bark rough and grey against the night sky. Richmond Park slept beyond the boundary, but here, inside the Grove, the air hummed with a vibration that settled in her teeth. She adjusted the collar of her coat, the fabric stiff with cold. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom sensation from a childhood fall that never fully healed. The Heartstone Pendant rested against her sternum. The deep crimson gem pulsed with a faint inner glow. It beat in time with her own heart, a slow, heavy rhythm. She touched the silver chain. The metal burned cold against her fingertips. Wildflowers bloomed in the grass. They defied the season, petals bright and unblemished in the dark. The scent of them cloyed the air, sweet and heavy like rotting fruit. She stepped past the first stone. The light from the city vanished. The darkness here was absolute, a physical weight pressing against her shoulders. A twig snapped. She froze. Her boots crunched on the gravel path. The sound echoed too loudly, bouncing off the trees in a way that suggested distance where none existed. She turned her head. The shadows between the trunks shifted. No wind moved the leaves. "Hello?" Her voice died in the air. The silence rushed back to fill the space. The pendant grew warmer. The heat spread through her shirt, searing the skin beneath. She walked forward. The path curved away from the boundary. The trees closed in, their branches interlocking overhead. The sky disappeared. She counted her steps. One. Two. Three. The rhythm broke when she heard breathing. It came from the left. It matched her own pace. She stopped. The breathing stopped. She turned. Nothing but the dark shapes of the oaks. The wildflowers seemed to lean toward her, their stems twisting in the stillness. The pendant pulsed faster. A sharp spike of pain shot through her chest. She gripped the gem. The warmth intensified. "Who's there?" The air grew colder. Her breath plumed in front of her face. The white mist lingered too long before dissipating. She looked down. Her footprints in the grass were already fading. The earth swallowed the impression as if it never happened. A rustle came from the right this time. It sounded like dry leaves skittering over stone. She spun around. A shape detached itself from the trunk of an oak. It stood ten paces away. It had no features, just a silhouette darker than the surrounding night. "Show yourself." The figure did not move. It simply waited. The pendant vibrated against her skin. She could feel the hum in her bones. The flowers around her base began to wilt. Their petals turned brown and curled inward. The scent of rotting fruit grew stronger. She took a step back. The ground felt spongy beneath her boots. Roots shifted under the soil, seeking purchase. The figure took a step forward. The distance between them closed without the sound of movement. "Stop." The figure tilted its head. The motion was jerky, unnatural. The pendant flared. A beam of crimson light cut through the darkness, illuminating the clearing. The light revealed the ground. The grass was gone. The earth beneath was black and cracked, like dried mud in a drought. The figure raised a hand. It had no fingers, just a smooth surface. Aurora backed away. Her heel caught on a root. She stumbled. The pendant slipped from her grip, the chain catching on her coat button. It dangled at her waist. The figure lunged. Aurora scrambled backward. Her hand found the standing stone. The bark scraped her palm. She slid down the trunk, the rough texture tearing at her glove. The figure hovered over her, its form expanding to fill the space between the trees. She pulled the pendant up. The gem pressed against her throat. The heat became a brand. She squeezed her eyes shut. The darkness behind her eyelids was not black. It was filled with eyes. Hundreds of them, watching from the void. The figure reached out. The smooth hand descended. Aurora opened her eyes. The hand stopped inches from her face. The air between them shimmered. The pendant flared again, brighter this time. The light pushed the figure back. It hissed, a sound like steam escaping a pipe. She stood. Her legs shook. The figure retreated into the shadows of the trees. The wildflowers bloomed again, fresh and vibrant. The scent of rot vanished. She looked at the pendant. The crimson gem had turned a dull grey. The inner glow faded. "Come on," she whispered. She turned toward the boundary stones. The path was gone. The ground was a sea of black mud. The standing stones stood in a circle, but the gap she entered through was sealed by a wall of thorns. She walked to the stones. The thorns moved. They parted as she approached, then closed behind her. The circle was complete. The pendant pulsed once. A single beat. Then silence. Aurora looked at the trees. The shadows between them deepened. The figure was gone. The silence returned. She touched the scar on her wrist. The skin felt hot. The pendant hung still against her chest. The grey gem showed no sign of life. She waited. The night stretched on. The wildflowers bloomed and died in the span of a breath. The cycle repeated. Aurora closed her eyes. The darkness pressed in. The silence held.
created_at"2026-02-25T23:50:48.943Z" 2/25/2026, 11:50:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount918
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount918
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"searing"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulsed"
2"weight"
3"echoed"
4"silence"
5"searing"
6"warmth"
7"vibrated"
8"could feel"
9"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences141
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords918
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount910
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Park1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Aurora6
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Park"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like dry leaves skittering over st"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount918
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean27
std19.05
cv0.706
sampleLengths
077
141
253
33
442
51
628
745
85
943
102
1141
1246
132
1444
1535
161
1747
1842
193
2041
2141
228
2338
2426
2517
264
2738
2821
299
3017
3126
3220
3311
92.82% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences141
matches
0"was gone"
1"was filled"
2"was gone"
3"was sealed"
4"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs161
matches
0"were already fading"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences145
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount910
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.020879120879120878
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0032967032967032967
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean6.33
std3.81
cv0.602
sampleLengths
09
115
222
312
419
57
610
712
85
97
105
1111
1213
136
146
1512
163
172
187
1918
204
216
225
231
246
258
264
2710
283
297
308
313
324
331
341
351
367
375
385
392
403
412
428
4313
444
459
464
473
482
494
26.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats34
diversityRatio0.15862068965517243
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences130
matches
0"She adjusted the collar of"
1"It beat in time with"
2"She touched the silver chain."
3"They defied the season, petals"
4"She stepped past the first"
5"Her boots crunched on the"
6"She turned her head."
7"Her voice died in the"
8"She walked forward."
9"She counted her steps."
10"It came from the left."
11"It matched her own pace."
12"She gripped the gem."
13"Her breath plumed in front"
14"She looked down."
15"Her footprints in the grass"
16"It sounded like dry leaves"
17"She spun around."
18"It stood ten paces away."
19"It had no features, just"
ratio0.3
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount129
totalSentences130
matches
0"Aurora stood at the edge"
1"The oaks loomed over the"
2"Richmond Park slept beyond the"
3"She adjusted the collar of"
4"The crescent scar on her"
5"The Heartstone Pendant rested against"
6"The deep crimson gem pulsed"
7"It beat in time with"
8"She touched the silver chain."
9"The metal burned cold against"
10"Wildflowers bloomed in the grass."
11"They defied the season, petals"
12"The scent of them cloyed"
13"She stepped past the first"
14"The light from the city"
15"The darkness here was absolute,"
16"A twig snapped."
17"Her boots crunched on the"
18"The sound echoed too loudly,"
19"She turned her head."
ratio0.992
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.4
81.2558%