Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBKES4DC7RCAKGTD5DZGGMG

Run Details

Duration:
39.6s
Cost:
$0.010993
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The lock clicked open on the third try. Three deadbolts. A security habit born from paranoia and the need for sanctuary. Rory slid the bolt back and pulled the door inward. Cold air rushed in, smelling of damp London brick and frying oil from the curry house below. She stood in the frame, hand gripping the wood, knuckles white against the paint. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway. Charcoal fabric swallowed the dim light of the stairwell. Platinum hair slicked back, perfectly groomed, stood out against the shadows. He leaned his weight on an ivory-handled cane, though the street outside offered no obstacle. One amber eye and one black eye locked onto hers. No smile. No greeting. Rory’s throat tightened. She remembered the last time they had been in this position. She remembered the silence that followed a scream. She stepped back, letting the door swing shut behind him. She didn't turn to face him immediately. She engaged the deadbolts, metal sliding against metal. It is past midnight. He hadn’t knocked. Rory turned to face him. Her blue eyes were flat, devoid of the warmth she usually kept under lock and key. She wiped flour from her right hand onto a rag hanging from her waist. A smudge of dough remained on her left wrist, near the crescent scar. She watched his gaze drop to it. You have the nerve to come here. It isn't your place to decide. He shifted his weight, the cane shifting with a sharp rap against the floorboards. The flat was a mess of paper and ink. Scrolls lay across the table. Books stacked like barricades against the single window. Ptolemy the tabby hissed from atop the refrigerator, fur bristling. You said you wouldn't come back. Rory walked past him, moving into the small kitchenette. She picked up a glass of water, hands steady. She took a sip. The water was cold. Plans change. Your plans were written in blood and silence. Rory set the glass down. The sound rang through the cramped room. She leaned against the counter, crossing her arms over her chest to hide the tremor in her hands. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a phantom memory of a different kind of violence. Evan had never been here. Evan never understood the locks. Lucien always understood them. You are a liar. Lucien pushed off the wall and took a step into the room. The scent of expensive cologne mixed with the ozone of the supernatural. He stopped in the center of the rug, surrounded by her research. I am a fixer. I solve problems. She looked at the scrolls spread on the table. Her own handwriting was visible on the margins. This wasn't his work. This was hers. Why are you here, Lucien? The demon half of him bristled. He didn't say anything for a moment. He adjusted his cuff. A gold watch face glinted in the low light. I need information. About what? About the girl with the blue eyes and the demon's scent. Rory pushed off the counter. Her boots hit the floor hard. She walked to the table, her fingers grazing a stack of papers. She picked one up. It was a map of the underground districts. Red ink marked several routes. That isn't my business anymore. It was always your business. She slammed the paper down. Ink splattered across the wood grain. She didn't apologize. She walked around the table, closing the distance between them. The height difference was slight. He was tall, but she held her ground. Her hair fell over her shoulder, black against her pale skin. You have no right. He reached out. His hand hovered near her arm. He stopped inches from the fabric of her jacket. The gesture was a question. The air between them hummed with electricity. He hadn't spoken in years, and yet the silence felt louder than the traffic above them. Rory looked at his heterochromatic eyes. Amber and black. The pupil of the black eye contracted. He was hungry. Not for food. For something else. You're dangerous. Lucien pulled his hand back, letting it fall to his side. He tapped the handle of his cane. The ivory handle gleamed. I know. The cat jumped from the fridge and landed on the table with a thud. He knocked over a stack of books. Rory flinched but didn't reach for him. She watched Lucien’s reaction. He didn't flinch. He simply watched the cat with a detached amusement. You are avoiding the question. I am not. I told you why I am here. Liar. Rory turned her back to him. She walked to the window and looked down at the street. The rain streaked the glass. The curry house lights were still on. She could see the delivery drivers moving in and out. Normal life. Normal routine. Then why are you still standing there? The floorboards creaked under his weight. He moved closer. She could feel the heat radiating from him. It was unnatural for a human. It was too much warmth for a body that burned too cold. Because you left. You were not supposed to follow. I followed because you are in trouble. She turned around slowly. Her expression didn't change. She knew he was capable of protecting her. She also knew he was capable of destroying her. That was the balance they had struck once. That was the history. Who is after me? Lucien didn't blink. He didn't answer immediately. He looked around the room, his gaze landing on the books. The magic scent of old parchment. No one. Not directly. But the circle is closing. Rory crossed her arms tighter. The scar on her wrist was still exposed, a pale white crescent against the dark skin. She flexed her hand. I don't trust you. I never asked for your trust. He leaned forward slightly. His voice dropped, smooth and low. It brushed against the edge of her ear. I asked for your attention. Rory stepped back. The corner of the table dug into her spine. She didn't move away, though. She stared up at him. The amber eye caught the light of the room. The black one remained deep, like a void. You don't get to ask for anything here. I don't have to. I have already taken what I came for. Lucien reached into his jacket. Rory tensed, her muscles coiling, ready to fight, ready to run. He pulled out a small envelope. He didn't hand it to her. He laid it on the table. His fingers traced the edge. It isn't about you. It is always about you. She looked at the envelope. It was heavy. The wax seal was intact. She could feel the pull of it. She knew what it contained. She didn't want to know. Open it. Not tonight. Lucien picked up the envelope. He held it out to her again. He didn't push. He waited. His other hand rested on the ivory cane. He looked tired. A crack in the perfect suit. A shadow under the eye. Rory hesitated. The room was cold. The rain continued to tap against the glass. Take it. Her hand moved before she thought. She took the envelope. It felt warm in her grip. She didn't open it. She turned and walked back toward the door, placing it on the table again. She picked up the glass of water. I need to go to work. You need to leave. Rory turned the lock on the door. She didn't open it yet. She looked at him over her shoulder. The lights of the street cast a glow across her profile. If you come back again... I won't. He lied. She knew it. She knew the demon blood in his veins made him a creature of habit. He didn't leave things unfinished. Good. She pulled the door open. The hallway smelled of rain and old stone. She stepped out. He stood in the room, surrounded by the clutter of her life. He looked at the door, then at the room, then at her. He didn't follow her out. He didn't speak. She closed the door. The deadbolt slid home. The locks clicked. Three times. She stood in the dark hallway, listening. The silence inside the flat was heavier than the silence outside. She waited. She listened for footsteps. There were none. She turned and walked toward the stairs. She didn't run. She walked. At the bottom of the stairs, she paused. She checked her pocket. Her fingers brushed against the paper she had placed inside the flat. It was a memory. It was a threat. She took a breath and stepped out into the street. The rain fell harder. It soaked her hair instantly. She didn't move. She just stood there, listening to the city breathe.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
89.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1468
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1468
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"sanctuary"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"silence"
count5
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count2
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"sanctuary"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"warmth"
4"throbbed"
5"could feel"
6"traced"
7"perfect"
8"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences232
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences232
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences232
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1468
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount1468
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
London1
Moreau1
Lucien9
Rory14
You9
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"You"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences114
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1468
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences232
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs80
mean18.35
std16.91
cv0.921
sampleLengths
062
155
222
325
44
53
655
77
86
946
106
1126
122
138
1459
154
1636
177
1824
195
2026
213
222
2311
2440
255
265
2748
284
2946
3025
312
3222
332
3444
355
3610
371
3843
397
4035
413
426
437
4437
454
4624
479
4825
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences232
matches
0"were written"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs286
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences232
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1469
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.025867937372362152
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006126616746085773
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences232
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences232
mean6.33
std3.48
cv0.55
sampleLengths
08
12
211
310
417
514
66
79
811
915
1010
112
122
133
1411
158
1610
177
188
194
203
215
2216
2314
2413
257
267
276
2814
299
305
318
3210
336
349
359
364
374
382
398
405
417
4218
4315
445
455
464
474
4812
4912
29.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats48
diversityRatio0.1896551724137931
totalSentences232
uniqueOpeners44
15.95% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences209
matches
0"Then why are you still"
ratio0.005
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount126
totalSentences209
matches
0"She stood in the frame,"
1"He leaned his weight on"
2"She remembered the last time"
3"She remembered the silence that"
4"She stepped back, letting the"
5"She didn't turn to face"
6"She engaged the deadbolts, metal"
7"It is past midnight."
8"He hadn’t knocked."
9"Her blue eyes were flat,"
10"She wiped flour from her"
11"She watched his gaze drop"
12"You have the nerve to"
13"It isn't your place to"
14"He shifted his weight, the"
15"You said you wouldn't come"
16"She picked up a glass"
17"She took a sip."
18"Your plans were written in"
19"She leaned against the counter,"
ratio0.603
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount195
totalSentences209
matches
0"The lock clicked open on"
1"A security habit born from"
2"Rory slid the bolt back"
3"She stood in the frame,"
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"Charcoal fabric swallowed the dim"
6"Platinum hair slicked back, perfectly"
7"He leaned his weight on"
8"Rory’s throat tightened."
9"She remembered the last time"
10"She remembered the silence that"
11"She stepped back, letting the"
12"She didn't turn to face"
13"She engaged the deadbolts, metal"
14"It is past midnight."
15"He hadn’t knocked."
16"Rory turned to face him."
17"Her blue eyes were flat,"
18"She wiped flour from her"
19"A smudge of dough remained"
ratio0.933
47.85% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences209
matches
0"Because you left."
1"If you come back again..."
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.1662%