Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBKFEWSPPZE81A0Q7H67KM8

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Duration:
44.4s
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$0.015456
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Alibaba

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
I scrubbed the stain on the laminate kitchen counter. The mark was stubborn, a dark smear of something oily that refused to lift with the rag. My knuckles turned white as I pressed harder, the rhythm of the cloth the only sound in the flat aside from the hum of the extractor fan. The smell of spiced oil from the curry house downstairs drifted up through the ventilation shaft, a constant reminder of the location. The handle turned. I froze, rag mid-wipe. Eva had the keys. She had a spare key, but she used it to hide it in the plant pot, not to open the door. The deadbolt clicked. Three separate tumblers. The lock was designed to stop break-ins, not to stop people I knew well enough to have known how to pick them. I turned slowly. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that cost more than the building did, and his platinum hair was slicked back perfectly despite the evening rain he brought with him. His heterochromatic eyes, one amber, one black, locked onto mine. He looked tired, and I knew that tired meant trouble. "You are not supposed to be here," I said. My voice didn't shake. I had learned not to let things shake me. He stepped inside, the toe of his polished shoe scraping against the floorboards. He didn't close the door behind him. He just stood there, like he owned the space. Like he owned me. "I needed to see you." The air in the room grew heavy. The books on the shelves seemed to press in closer, their spines cracked and worn. Scrolls lay scattered across the table where he had arrived from the stairs. I had been hiding the papers from the police for weeks, and now the Frenchman stood in my sanctuary like a shark in a shallow pool. "We ended things," I said. I picked up the rag and set it down on the counter. "We agreed you would stay away." "I know." He reached into his jacket pocket. His movements were slow, deliberate. I tensed, my hand instinctively moving to my left wrist where the scar sat. The memory of Evan's grip was old, but the fear was fresh. Lucien held up his hand. Empty. He closed it around the handle of his cane. It was ivory, smooth and warm against the cold stone of the flat. A thin blade concealed within the handle glinted in the dim light. "I brought you something." "What?" "A name." I walked around the counter, the distance between us shrinking by every step I took. The floorboards creaked under my weight. I stopped three feet from him. I could smell the scent of ozone and expensive cologne that clung to him. It smelled like magic and danger. "Which one?" "The one who is coming for you." I shook my head. "Evan is dead. I made sure of that." "No." Lucien tapped the cane against the floor. The sound was sharp. "Evan was the distraction. You are the mark. He left a trail that led back to Cardiff. He has friends in London. People who know who your father is." My breath hitched. My father was in Cardiff. My mother was in Wales. My brother was dead. That was the story they told the police. I had told myself it was true. I hadn't told Lucien that Evan had threatened my family before he died. "I don't want your help," I said. I turned my back on him to wash the rag. The water was cold. It bit into my fingers. "Your mother is on the news tonight," Lucien said. I turned around. The tap still ran, the water splashing into the sink. I didn't turn it off. "What did you say?" "I saw the headline. A police raid. A name mentioned. Carter." He stepped closer. The cane was no longer resting against his leg. He held it like a weapon. "I did not think they would follow you here. I did not think they would find the flat above the bar." I gripped the edge of the sink. My knuckles were white again. "They can't be here." "They are." A sound came from the hallway. Heavy footsteps. Not the cat. Ptolemy was on the roof or somewhere quiet. These were boots. Men. Lucien looked at me. His eyes were unreadable. One amber, one black. "You need to move," he said. "I have nowhere to go." "You have me." He didn't ask. He just grabbed my wrist. His grip was firm, but not painful. I pulled away. The contact sent a jolt of electricity through my arm. I hadn't touched him in six months, and now he held me like I was a thing to be protected or a thing to be kept. "I am not going with you." "You have no choice." The footsteps stopped at the door. Lucien moved. He stepped between me and the hallway. He placed the tip of his cane against the lock. The metal slid into place with a smooth, oily sound. A mechanism within the handle disengaged the bolts. The deadbolts clicked open. "Open the door," he said. "No." "They are coming in, Aurora." "I said no." Lucien turned his head. He looked at me, and for a second, the demon inside him flashed. The amber eye burned. The black eye widened. "Let me handle this." I stepped back. I reached for the knife drawer. My hand shook. I pulled out the blade. I had a choice. Run out the back window and risk the fall, or stand here and fight. The handle turned. Lucien dropped the cane. He drew the blade from the ivory handle in a flash. The metal sang as it left the wood. He swung it in a wide arc, blocking the door just as the knob began to spin again. "Go," he said. "The window is open." I looked at the window. It was small, just enough for a cat. For me, it was tight. "You will die," I said. "I am already dead." He smiled. It was a dangerous expression. "I just do not want to stay in the ground." The door burst open. Three men stepped into the room. They wore black uniforms. No insignia. They held guns. They looked like ghosts in the hallway light. Lucien stepped forward. He raised his cane. He didn't flinch. He didn't look at me. He looked at the men. "Wrong house," he said. The man on the left raised his gun. Lucien threw the cane. It spun through the air like a dart. It struck the man in the wrist. The gun went off. The bullet hit the wall behind me, sparks flying from the plaster. "Run," Lucien shouted. I turned and scrambled for the window. My jacket caught on the sill. I tore it free and threw myself forward. The glass shattered. I fell into the alley. The glass crunched under my feet. I didn't look back. I ran. The smell of the curry house was stronger now, but I didn't stop. I ran down the street. A car engine roared behind me. It cut the air, close enough to feel the vibration. The lights blinded me. I ducked behind a bin. I waited. I held my breath. I listened. The engine cut. The door slammed. Footsteps approached. "Come out," a voice called. "We know you are here." I pressed my hand against my mouth to stop the scream. I looked at my wrist. The scar was red. The adrenaline burned in my blood. I stood up. I held the small knife in my hand. I stepped out from behind the bin. The car door opened. Lucien stepped out. He wasn't running. He walked towards me. He looked like he hadn't fought at all. "Get in the car," he said. "What are you doing?" I asked. "I told them to take you to the car." He gestured to the man in the suit driving. "Get in." I stepped towards the car. The man in the suit smiled. He had a gun in his hand. It wasn't the same gun from the flat. "No," Lucien said. "Not that way." He pointed at the back seat. I opened the door and slid in. I looked back. Lucien stood in the street. He looked at the driver. "You are not who you say you are," he said. The driver laughed. "Neither are you." Lucien raised his cane. He pointed it at the driver's chest. "I am Lucien Moreau," he said. The driver didn't flinch. He aimed the gun. I pulled the knife from my pocket. I wasn't going to wait for the next chapter to decide what happened. I threw the knife. It flew through the air. It hit the driver in the shoulder. He screamed. The gun went off. Lucien moved faster than I could follow. He tackled the driver. They hit the ground. The car door slammed shut. I locked it from the inside. Lucien shouted something. A sound like a growl. The engine started. I couldn't hear the words. The car moved. I looked through the window. Lucien was on the ground. The driver was getting up. He was holding a new gun. He aimed it at the back seat. I pressed the door handle. It was locked. Lucien looked up. His eyes were glowing amber. He raised his cane. He didn't aim at the man. He aimed at the ground. The ground shook. The car lurched forward. The man fell back. Lucien stood up. He looked at me through the window. He raised the cane. He tapped it against the car. The car stopped. The man was gone. I looked at the man. He was gone. The car started again. It moved. I looked at the man. He was gone. The car moved. I sat there. The man was gone. The car stopped. The man was gone. The car moved. I looked at the man. He was gone. The car started again. The man was gone. I looked at the man. He was gone. 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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2436
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2436
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"sanctuary"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count3
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count1
6
word"lurched"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"sanctuary"
2"weight"
3"footsteps"
4"unreadable"
5"shattered"
6"lurched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences447
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences447
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences474
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2436
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount2197
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Frenchman1
Evan2
Cardiff1
Wales1
Lucien21
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Frenchman"
2"Evan"
3"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Wales"
globalScore1
windowScore0.5
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smelled like magic and danger"
1"looked like ghosts in the hallway light"
2"looked like he hadn't fought at all"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2436
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences474
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs274
mean8.89
std11.35
cv1.276
sampleLengths
075
13
257
33
454
522
633
75
861
923
1039
1140
124
131
142
1547
162
177
1812
1941
2045
2126
229
2318
244
2550
2616
272
2823
2912
306
315
323
3354
346
354
366
3741
385
391
405
413
4225
434
4435
453
4641
477
4818
495
39.33% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount84
totalSentences447
matches
0"was designed"
1"was slicked"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
4"was gone"
5"was gone"
6"was gone"
7"was gone"
8"was gone"
9"was gone"
10"was gone"
11"was gone"
12"was gone"
13"was gone"
14"was gone"
15"was gone"
16"was gone"
17"was gone"
18"was gone"
19"was gone"
20"was gone"
21"was gone"
22"was gone"
23"was gone"
24"was gone"
25"was gone"
26"was gone"
27"was gone"
28"was gone"
29"was gone"
30"was gone"
31"was gone"
32"was gone"
33"was gone"
34"was gone"
35"was gone"
36"was gone"
37"was gone"
38"was gone"
39"was gone"
40"was gone"
41"was gone"
42"was gone"
43"was gone"
44"was gone"
45"was gone"
46"was gone"
47"was gone"
48"was gone"
49"was gone"
50"was gone"
51"was gone"
52"was gone"
53"was gone"
54"was gone"
55"was gone"
56"was gone"
57"was gone"
58"was gone"
59"was gone"
60"was gone"
61"was gone"
62"was gone"
63"was gone"
64"was gone"
65"was gone"
66"was gone"
67"was gone"
68"was gone"
69"was gone"
70"was gone"
71"was gone"
72"was gone"
73"was gone"
74"was gone"
75"was gone"
76"was gone"
77"was gone"
78"was gone"
79"was gone"
80"was gone"
81"was gone"
82"was gone"
83"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs504
matches
0"wasn't running"
1"was holding"
2"were glowing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences474
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2199
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.021373351523419737
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0031832651205093224
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences474
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences474
mean5.14
std3.81
cv0.741
sampleLengths
09
117
227
322
43
54
64
721
83
93
1022
113
125
1329
1410
1510
169
174
189
1913
207
219
224
235
247
2515
2613
2726
285
2912
306
318
325
3314
3412
355
361
379
3813
3912
404
411
422
4315
446
456
4614
476
482
497
27.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats108
diversityRatio0.08227848101265822
totalSentences474
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences418
matches(empty)
ratio0
13.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount216
totalSentences418
matches
0"I scrubbed the stain on"
1"My knuckles turned white as"
2"I froze, rag mid-wipe."
3"She had a spare key,"
4"I turned slowly."
5"He wore a tailored charcoal"
6"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
7"He looked tired, and I"
8"My voice didn't shake."
9"I had learned not to"
10"He stepped inside, the toe"
11"He didn't close the door"
12"He just stood there, like"
13"I had been hiding the"
14"I picked up the rag"
15"He reached into his jacket"
16"His movements were slow, deliberate."
17"I tensed, my hand instinctively"
18"He closed it around the"
19"It was ivory, smooth and"
ratio0.517
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount411
totalSentences418
matches
0"I scrubbed the stain on"
1"The mark was stubborn, a"
2"My knuckles turned white as"
3"The smell of spiced oil"
4"The handle turned."
5"I froze, rag mid-wipe."
6"Eva had the keys."
7"She had a spare key,"
8"The deadbolt clicked."
9"The lock was designed to"
10"I turned slowly."
11"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway."
12"He wore a tailored charcoal"
13"His heterochromatic eyes, one amber,"
14"He looked tired, and I"
15"My voice didn't shake."
16"I had learned not to"
17"He stepped inside, the toe"
18"He didn't close the door"
19"He just stood there, like"
ratio0.983
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences418
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.042
79.1311%