Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBKM9FYD1FF9VA0GY94S87M

Run Details

Duration:
48.5s
Cost:
$0.012644
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bass from Silas' bar thumped through the floorboards, vibrating against the soles of Aurora's boots. She froze, hand hovering over the kettle. Another knock rattled the door, heavier this time. Impatient. She knew the rhythm. No one else in the building knocked like that, three sharp raps followed by a pause. She set the mug down. The ceramic clinked against the wood, loud in the small kitchen. Aurora walked to the door, her bare feet silent on the worn rug. She didn't look through the peephole. She knew who it was. The air in the hallway always smelled like stale beer and rain whenever he visited, and that scent seeped under the wood even through the three deadbolts she'd installed herself. She turned the lock. The metal clicked. She pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, water dripping from the hem of his charcoal coat. The streetlamp outside cast a pale glow on his platinum hair, slicked back and immaculate despite the storm. He held his ivory-handled cane in his right hand, the tip resting on the threshold. One of his eyes caught the light, amber and sharp. The other remained a void, black as the alley behind the bar. "You're not supposed to be here," Aurora said. Lucien stepped forward without waiting for an invitation. He crossed the threshold, bringing the scent of wet wool and expensive cologne into the flat. He stopped just inside the room, close enough that she felt the heat radiating off him. "The door was unlocked," he said. His voice was low, smooth like poured whiskey. "I unlocked it to kick you out." She crossed her arms. The movement pulled her sleeve up, revealing the small crescent scar on her left wrist. She pulled her sleeve down immediately. Lucien's gaze dropped to her wrist, then flicked back to her eyes. He didn't comment on the scar. He never did. "You look tired, Rory." "And you look like you've been walking in a monsoon." "The rain is necessary for the atmosphere." He shifted his weight. The cane tapped once against the floorboards. "May I come in properly? Or do you intend to leave me standing in the hallway while the neighbors stare?" Aurora stepped back. She held the door open wider. Lucien entered, closing the door behind him with a firm push. He turned and leaned against it, blocking the exit. She moved to the kitchen counter, putting distance between them. The bar downstairs roared with laughter. A glass shattered. The noise felt like a shield. "What do you want, Lucien?" He pushed off the door and walked into the living space. He didn't touch anything. He kept his hands on the cane, using it to navigate the clutter of books and papers on the coffee table. He picked up a stack of files, glanced at the top page, and set it back down. "I need a favor." "You always need a favor." "This one requires your specific talents." Aurora leaned back against the counter. She gripped the edge of the wood until her knuckles turned white. "I'm not working for you anymore. Not after the last time." "The last time ended in a misunderstanding." "It ended with a knife in a wall and you walking away." Lucien turned to face her. He took a step closer. The distance between them shrank. She could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the sharp line of his jaw. He smelled like danger and old money. "I did not walk away," he said. "I left you to recover. There is a difference." "You left me in a warehouse with a broken leg and a bounty on my head." "And you survived." He tilted his head. "You always do. That is why I am here." Aurora pushed off the counter. She walked toward him, stopping just out of arm's reach. The tension in the room tightened, like a wire pulled too hard. "Why now?" "Because the situation has changed." He reached into his coat pocket. She flinched, her hand moving toward the knife she kept in her boot. Lucien saw the movement. He stopped. He pulled out a folded piece of paper and held it out. She didn't take it. "I don't want your intel." "It concerns Eva." Aurora's breath hitched. The name hung in the air, heavy and sharp. She looked at the paper, then back at his face. "What about her?" "She is in trouble." Lucien's voice dropped an octave. "The kind of trouble you cannot fix with a delivery bag or a sharp tongue." Aurora snatched the paper from his hand. She unfolded it. It was a photograph of Eva's flat on Brick Lane. The window was smashed. A symbol was scrawled on the glass in red paint. "Who did this?" "Does it matter?" "It matters to me." "It matters to me too." Lucien took another step. He was close enough now that she could feel the static of his presence. He was half-demon, and the air around him always felt charged, like the moment before a lightning strike. "I cannot handle this alone. I need your access. I need your mind." Aurora looked up at him. Her blue eyes searched his face for a lie. She found none. Only a cold, hard determination. "You're asking me to trust you." "I am asking you to save her." Aurora crumpled the photo in her fist. She looked down at the paper, then at the scar on her wrist. It throbbed, a phantom pain from an old injury. "If I do this," she said, "you owe me. Everything." "Name it." "I want the truth." Lucien's expression didn't change. He didn't blink. "You already have it." "No." She shook her head. "I want to know why you really came back. Why now, after six months of silence." Lucien looked at the window. The rain streaked the glass, blurring the streetlights outside. "I told you. I need your help." "That's not the truth." He turned back to her. The distance between them vanished. He reached out, his hand hovering near her face. He didn't touch her. He let his fingers hang in the air, inches from her cheek. "You know why." Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs. She didn't step back. She leaned into the space his hand occupied, feeling the heat of his skin. "I don't know anything." "You know better." She grabbed his wrist. His skin was cool, too cool for a human. She felt the pulse there, slow and steady. She pulled his hand away from her face and held it against her chest. "Then tell me." Lucien looked down at her hand on his wrist. He didn't pull away. He let her hold him. The silence stretched, filled only by the bass from the bar below and the rain against the window. "I cannot," he said. "Then get out." "I will not." Aurora squeezed his wrist. Her grip tightened. She could break it if she wanted. She knew the leverage. She knew the pressure points. She didn't let go. "Lucien." He looked her in the eye. The black eye seemed to swallow the light. "I am not leaving until you agree." Aurora stared at him. She thought about the photo in her other hand. She thought about Eva. She thought about the six months of silence that had felt like a lifetime. She let go of his wrist. "Go to the door," she said. Lucien didn't move. "I said go to the door." He straightened his jacket. He adjusted the cuff of his shirt. He picked up his cane. "I am standing here." "Then you'll stand there while I pack." She turned her back on him. She walked to the bedroom, leaving the door open. She didn't look back. She heard him follow. His footsteps were silent on the floorboards. She opened the closet. She grabbed a duffel bag. She threw in a change of clothes, her boots, and the knife. "Where are we going?" Lucien asked from the doorway. "Wherever you need me." She zipped the bag. She turned around. Lucien stood in the doorway, his silhouette framed by the dim light of the living room. "Good." He stepped aside. She walked past him, the bag heavy on her shoulder. She stopped at the door. She looked at him. "If you lie to me again, I will kill you." Lucien smiled. It was a thin, sharp thing. "I would expect nothing less." Aurora opened the door. The noise from the bar rushed in, loud and chaotic. She stepped into the hallway. Lucien followed. She locked the door behind them. The hallway smelled like old wood and dust. She walked toward the stairs. Lucien matched her pace. They descended together, the tension still humming between them, unresolved and sharp.
created_at"2026-02-25T23:54:56.386Z" 2/25/2026, 11:54:56 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.441
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1470
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1470
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"shattered"
count1
3
word"navigate"
count1
4
word"tension"
count2
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"silence"
count3
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"weight"
2"shattered"
3"navigate"
4"tension"
5"could feel"
6"charged"
7"throbbed"
8"silence"
9"pulse"
10"footsteps"
11"chaotic"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences151
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences151
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences197
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1470
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1109
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Lucien17
Aurora13
Eva2
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
3"Eva"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.734
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"smelled like stale beer and rain whenever"
1"felt like a shield"
2"smelled like danger and old money"
3"felt like a lifetime"
4"smelled like old wood and dust"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1470
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences197
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs88
mean16.7
std14.28
cv0.855
sampleLengths
052
116
254
312
448
522
68
740
814
97
1025
1121
124
1310
1438
1529
1625
175
1853
194
205
216
2229
237
2412
2539
2616
2716
2816
2927
302
3142
324
335
343
3522
363
3724
3834
393
403
414
4254
4322
446
457
4629
4710
482
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences151
matches
0"was smashed"
1"was scrawled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs205
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences197
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount234
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.03418803418803419
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.008547008547008548
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences197
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences197
mean7.46
std4.54
cv0.609
sampleLengths
016
17
28
31
44
516
65
711
813
96
105
1130
124
133
145
1515
1618
1715
1810
1912
208
218
2216
2316
246
258
267
274
2815
296
3012
316
323
334
3410
3511
367
3720
383
396
4011
419
4210
436
443
456
465
4711
484
4921
33.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats32
diversityRatio0.16751269035532995
totalSentences197
uniqueOpeners33
23.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"Only a cold, hard determination."
ratio0.007
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount88
totalSentences141
matches
0"She froze, hand hovering over"
1"She knew the rhythm."
2"She set the mug down."
3"She didn't look through the"
4"She knew who it was."
5"She turned the lock."
6"She pulled the door open."
7"He held his ivory-handled cane"
8"He crossed the threshold, bringing"
9"He stopped just inside the"
10"His voice was low, smooth"
11"She crossed her arms."
12"She pulled her sleeve down"
13"He didn't comment on the"
14"He never did."
15"He shifted his weight"
16"She held the door open"
17"He turned and leaned against"
18"She moved to the kitchen"
19"He pushed off the door"
ratio0.624
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount138
totalSentences141
matches
0"The bass from"
1"She froze, hand hovering over"
2"Another knock rattled the door,"
3"She knew the rhythm."
4"She set the mug down."
5"The ceramic clinked against the"
6"Aurora walked to the door,"
7"She didn't look through the"
8"She knew who it was."
9"The air in the hallway"
10"She turned the lock."
11"The metal clicked."
12"She pulled the door open."
13"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
14"The streetlamp outside cast a"
15"He held his ivory-handled cane"
16"The other remained a void,"
17"Lucien stepped forward without waiting"
18"He crossed the threshold, bringing"
19"He stopped just inside the"
ratio0.979
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.119
leniency0.237
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.8770%