Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBKRRKY49FKNZGCY9FTR5MW

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Duration:
25.9s
Cost:
$0.008174
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air down here tasted different. It carried the metallic tang of old copper and the damp, organic smell of soil that hadn't seen light in a century. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her coat, the fabric stiff against her neck, and stepped over the yellow crime scene tape that had been hastily draped across the tracks. The abandoned Underground station beneath Camden smelled of ozone, a scent that didn't belong on a crime scene unless you knew the specific, unnatural signature of a breach. Quinn’s boots clicked sharply against the wet concrete, the rhythm precise, military. Her salt-and-pepper hair was cropped close to her skull, the grey strands catching the dim glow of the emergency lights that flickered overhead. She ran a hand over her sharp jaw, feeling the stubble there, a reminder that she hadn't slept properly in three nights. She tapped her left wrist. The worn leather strap of her watch felt too tight. A body lay on the tracks, covered by a white sheet. Two uniformed officers stood back, looking uneasy, shifting their weight from one foot to the other as if the cold was settling into their bones. Quinn didn't look at them. She looked at the ground. It was dry. There were no skid marks. No drag marks. The dust had settled undisturbed around the victim's feet, suggesting he hadn't fallen there. Eva Kowalski stood near the edge of the platform, her small frame swallowed by a heavy wool coat. The red curls peered out from under a hood, a cascade of tight ringlets framing a face dusted with freckles. She wore her round glasses, which she was currently wiping with a handkerchief, her brow furrowed in concentration. Beside her, a worn leather satchel bulged with the weight of books. Quinn approached Eva, stopping just a foot away. The proximity felt intimate in the vast, echoing space. "You didn't call me in to look at this, Evie. Not without a reason." Quinn’s voice was low, cutting through the damp silence. Eva didn't flinch. She tucked a stray lock of hair behind her left ear, a nervous habit she hadn't broken since Oxford. She reached into her satchel and pulled out a small object. It was heavy brass, tarnished to a dull grey with a layer of verdigris creeping into the seams. A protective sigil was etched into the glass face, scratched and faint. "The Compass," Eva said softly. Her green eyes were wide behind the lenses. "It was in his pocket. Dead weight. But it wasn't." Quinn took the object. Her fingers brushed the cold metal. It was cold enough to burn. She checked the needle. It wasn't pointing North. It wasn't pointing South. It was pointing at the wall behind the body, specifically at a section of crumbling brickwork that looked structurally sound. "He was killed by a human," Quinn stated, testing the hypothesis even as the words felt wrong. "Or it looks like a murder. No visible wounds. No weapon." "There are no wounds because there was no weapon," Eva corrected, her voice trembling slightly. "The pulse stopped. There was no trauma to the skin. This isn't a homicide, Harlow. It's an extraction." Quinn held the compass up to the light. The needle twitched, not settling but hunting, vibrating against the casing with a frequency she could feel in her teeth. She glanced back at the body. It was a young man, late twenties, dressed in a coat too thin for the temperature. "This market," Quinn said, the name tasting like bile. "They moved again." "It moves every full moon. We were close." Eva looked down at her satchel. "The bone token... how did you get through without one, Harlow? The barrier is solid." "I didn't need one," Quinn lied. She didn't. The station wasn't technically in the Veil Market yet; it was the waiting room. The place where things waited to be pulled. She had bypassed the token barrier because she wasn't entering the Market, she was entering a containment zone. A grave. She knelt beside the body, the knees of her trousers creaking. She checked her watch again. The second hand was stuttering. The leather strap was worn, the stitching frayed. She remembered Morris, her partner. Three years ago, he had been taken. No body. No evidence. Just a gap in the timeline and a compass that stopped spinning. Quinn had never found the body, and she had never stopped hunting. The officers here were going to say overdose. They were going to say accidental death. Quinn stood up and walked to the wall the compass was pointing at. She ran her hand over the brick. It was cold. Not the cold of the damp air, but a cold that drained heat from the skin, leaving a numbness that spread up her arm. "Tell me again," Quinn said, not turning around. "How does a man walk off the edge of the world without a fall?" Eva stepped up behind her. She wasn't offering comfort. She was offering data. "Rifts don't leave evidence on the side of the exit. They leave evidence on the side of the entry. The energy dissipates into the ether." Quinn turned back to the body. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a penlight. She shone it on the victim's hands. There were burn marks. Not the soot of fire, but the silvery scarring of exposure to something that wasn't air. The burns formed a pattern. A grid. A lock. "He was opened," Quinn murmured. Eva nodded. "He was a courier. Someone from the Market wanted something he was carrying. They pulled the container, and the man died from the pressure drop." Quinn gripped the Veil Compass tighter. The needle swung wildly now, no longer pointing at the wall. It spun, searching, then snapped back, locking onto the same spot on the brickwork. If this compass was genuine, crafted by a Shade artisan, then it didn't point to a person. It pointed to a location in the Veil. Quinn looked at the officer in charge, who was lingering by the tape. "Move the body," Quinn ordered. Her tone brooked no argument. "Detective, the coroner—" "Move the body," Quinn snapped. She stepped to the wall and kicked off a loose brick. It didn't fall. It hovered for a second, caught in a gravity well, before clattering to the floor. Behind the brick, the air shimmered. A distortion, like heat rising off asphalt in July. The smell hit her then, stronger. The scent of old dust and ozone, but underneath it, the musk of something living. Eva took a step back, tucking her hair again. "Harlow. If you go near that..." "The evidence doesn't add up," Quinn said, her eyes narrowing to slits. "There's a crime scene here, Evie. But it's not a murder. It's a theft." The compass needle in her hand spun once more. It settled, pointing directly at the shimmering air. "Then we don't call it a theft," Quinn said, pulling a small notebook from her coat. She opened it, the pages filled with notes from three years ago. Morris's file. "We call it a kidnapping. And we find out who's running the Market." She pocketed the compass. It felt heavy, pulling at her side like a dead weight. She looked at the body one last time. No blood. No cause. Just a hole in the universe. "Coroner isn't coming in until morning," Quinn said, checking her watch again. The hands had stopped moving. "We have until the sun goes up to figure out where he went." She turned her back on the wall and looked at Eva. "You know where the next moon falls. You know where the Market moves." "I know," Eva whispered. "I have the map in my bag." Quinn took a breath, filling her lungs with the stale air. She looked like she had seen it a thousand times, but the weight of it was new. This time, the compass was hers. "Then we better start walking before the moon changes," Quinn said. She turned her back on the body and led the way up the stairs, leaving the shimmering void behind her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.968
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.065
89.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"reminder"
count1
2
word"weight"
count5
3
word"furrowed"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"grave"
count1
10
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"reminder"
2"weight"
3"furrowed"
4"echoing"
5"silence"
6"etched"
7"pulse"
8"could feel"
9"grave"
10"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences120
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1365
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1089
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.2
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn24
Underground1
Camden1
Kowalski1
Eva11
Oxford1
North1
South1
Veil3
Market2
Morris2
Compass1
Shade1
July1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Morris"
places
0"Oxford"
1"Veil"
2"July"
globalScore0.398
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like she had seen it a thousand ti"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.198
wordCount1365
matches
0"not settling but hunting, vibrating against the casing with a frequency she c"
1"Not the cold of the damp air, but a cold"
2"Not the soot of fire, but the silvery scarring of exposure to something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean31.74
std18.69
cv0.589
sampleLengths
087
172
246
33
422
568
617
723
863
923
1048
1128
1233
1350
1412
1529
1650
1721
1863
1947
2022
2138
2223
234
2425
255
2627
2731
2825
2923
303
3134
3236
3315
3426
3517
3643
3733
3830
3924
4011
4134
4231
96.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences120
matches
0"was cropped"
1"was etched"
2"been taken"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount11
totalVerbs190
matches
0"was settling"
1"was currently wiping"
2"wasn't pointing"
3"wasn't pointing"
4"was pointing"
5"was entering"
6"wasn't entering"
7"was stuttering"
8"was pointing"
9"was offering"
10"was lingering"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences135
ratio0.007
matches
0"The station wasn't technically in the Veil Market yet; it was the waiting room."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1091
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03391384051329056
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.010999083409715857
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean10.11
std6.42
cv0.635
sampleLengths
06
122
231
328
412
523
622
75
810
911
1025
115
125
133
145
153
1614
1718
1820
1918
2012
218
229
2323
243
2519
2611
2718
2812
295
308
3110
324
336
346
354
364
374
3820
3917
4011
4115
4218
438
4420
456
4616
479
483
4914
38.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.23703703703703705
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners32
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"Just a gap in the"
1"Just a hole in the"
ratio0.019
50.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences104
matches
0"It carried the metallic tang"
1"Her salt-and-pepper hair was cropped"
2"She ran a hand over"
3"She tapped her left wrist."
4"She looked at the ground."
5"It was dry."
6"She wore her round glasses,"
7"She tucked a stray lock"
8"She reached into her satchel"
9"It was heavy brass, tarnished"
10"Her green eyes were wide"
11"Her fingers brushed the cold"
12"It was cold enough to"
13"She checked the needle."
14"It wasn't pointing North."
15"It wasn't pointing South."
16"It was pointing at the"
17"She glanced back at the"
18"It was a young man,"
19"She had bypassed the token"
ratio0.423
17.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences104
matches
0"The air down here tasted"
1"It carried the metallic tang"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the"
3"The abandoned Underground station beneath"
4"Quinn’s boots clicked sharply against"
5"Her salt-and-pepper hair was cropped"
6"She ran a hand over"
7"She tapped her left wrist."
8"The worn leather strap of"
9"A body lay on the"
10"Quinn didn't look at them."
11"She looked at the ground."
12"It was dry."
13"The dust had settled undisturbed"
14"Eva Kowalski stood near the"
15"The red curls peered out"
16"She wore her round glasses,"
17"Quinn approached Eva, stopping just"
18"The proximity felt intimate in"
19"Quinn’s voice was low, cutting"
ratio0.885
48.08% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"If this compass was genuine,"
ratio0.01
43.19% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"It carried the metallic tang of old copper and the damp, organic smell of soil that hadn't seen light in a century."
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her coat, the fabric stiff against her neck, and stepped over the yellow crime scene tape that had been hastily dr…"
2"The abandoned Underground station beneath Camden smelled of ozone, a scent that didn't belong on a crime scene unless you knew the specific, unnatural signature…"
3"Two uniformed officers stood back, looking uneasy, shifting their weight from one foot to the other as if the cold was settling into their bones."
4"It was pointing at the wall behind the body, specifically at a section of crumbling brickwork that looked structurally sound."
5"Not the cold of the damp air, but a cold that drained heat from the skin, leaving a numbness that spread up her arm."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Eva corrected, her voice trembling slightly"
1"Quinn said, not turning around"
2"Quinn said, her eyes narrowing to slits"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Quinn stated (state)"
1"Eva corrected (correct)"
2"Quinn lied (lie)"
3"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
4"Quinn ordered (order)"
5"Quinn snapped (snap)"
6"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.452
leniency0.903
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.452
71.7203%