Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBKSVZC8047XJHHQJ4P5Z8B

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.014961
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The damp concrete of Camden North station smelled of wet rust and ozone. Harlow Quinn stepped off the worn escalator, the soles of her boots clicking against the grime-covered tiles. Salt-and-pepper hair remained cropped close, shielding the sharp angle of her jaw. She adjusted the cuff of her coat and checked the leather strap on her left wrist. The watch ticked, marking the minutes while the rest of the station seemed to hold its breath. The Veil Market lay hidden beneath the public eye. This wasn't the first time she had visited the spot. Usually, it smelled of spices and old parchment. Tonight it smelled like copper. Quinn crossed the platform where yellow tape fluttered like dead birds. A body lay sprawled near the third rail. The victim wore the clothes of a London tourist, but the blood pooled around the head wasn't red. It was black. Detective Inspector Sterling stood beside the yellowing police evidence markers. He looked tired. His face was tight, jaw clenched against the headache of a case he didn't understand. "It looks like a drug overdose gone wrong," Sterling muttered, kicking the toe of his shoe against a discarded wrapper. "No marks of struggle. No defensive wounds." Quinn didn't speak. She knelt beside the body. The heat from the rail hadn't been high enough to cook the flesh, but the temperature of the station was freezing. Frost formed on the victim's eyelids. She reached out, gloved hand hovering over the black fluid. "Look at the positioning, Harlow," Sterling said. "The body is prone," Quinn replied. She lifted the sleeve of the dead man. The skin beneath was pale, unblemished by friction burns. "He fell from a height? The angle of the neck doesn't match a fall onto concrete. It's a snap. A break, not a bruise." "Could be a fall from a platform ledge," Sterling offered. He tapped his notebook with a pen. "Tourist, drunk, slipped. Standard." Quinn ignored him. She stood and turned to the edge of the platform. Beyond the platform, the shadows moved without light sources to cast them. Shelves of goods lined the brickwork. Glass jars glowing with violet light stood next to cages of silent insects. The Market had moved. It sat here tonight instead of King's Cross. Eva stood near the ticket booth, her curly red hair pulled back. She wore round glasses that reflected the dim electric bulbs hanging from the ceiling. Her leather satchel hung heavy over one shoulder. She held a notebook, scribbling furiously. Her finger tucked hair behind her left ear, a nervous tic she always performed when the air felt heavy. "The energy signatures are wrong, Harlow," Eva said without looking up. She closed the notebook and walked toward the body. "This isn't a natural death." "Everything is natural until proven otherwise," Quinn snapped. She turned back to the body. "No. Look at the blood," Eva said, crouching. She pointed a gloved finger at the black pool. "It's not coagulating. It's pooling like a magnet. Iron. Or ash. It's rejecting the surface." Quinn looked closer. Eva was right. The black fluid clung to the concrete as if glued. It didn't soak in. It sat on top. "It could be an alchemical substance," Eva whispered, leaning over. "A protection spell gone wrong? They were selling protection charms down that tunnel. Maybe the subject failed." Quinn stood up and brushed dust from her knee. "A protection charm?" She scanned the area. "Where is the vendor?" "Over there." Eva pointed toward a stall that had no sign. A hooded figure stood behind a counter, head bowed. The figure didn't move. "Security doesn't want vendors at a crime scene," Quinn said. "Security doesn't want to know what sold the poison," Eva corrected. She reached into her satchel and pulled out a small brass object. The casing had a patina of verdigris. "I brought the Compass. It's pointing." Quinn stopped. She looked at the device. The Veil Compass spun slowly, its face etched with protective sigils. The needle trembled. "Where is it pointing?" Quinn asked. "Not at the body," Eva said. She held the compass out. The needle jerked toward the wall behind the stall. "It points toward the rift. The energy spike originated from behind the vendor. Not here." Quinn stepped back from the body. Her eyes moved to the wall Eva indicated. The brickwork looked solid, but the texture was off. Mortar lines were straighter than the surrounding structure. "It's a portal," Quinn said. "Or a wall," Sterling interjected. He was walking toward the vendor. "The man is just standing there. He didn't run when the coppers arrived." Quinn moved faster than Sterling. She walked past the stall. The hooded figure stood still, hands resting on the counter. Quinn reached out. The figure didn't react. She pressed her palm against the brick wall behind the vendor. Cold. The stone was freezing, colder than the tunnel air. "It's hollow," Quinn said. She pressed harder. The bricks didn't shift. She looked at Eva. "Eva. Does the Compass react to this wall?" Eva nodded. She held the Compass closer to the bricks. The needle spun wildly, then settled. It pointed directly into the mortar. "There's a door there," Eva said. Quinn frowned. She crouched to examine the gap between the bricks. The gap was too perfect. A seam where two things met. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a flashlight. The beam hit the seam. "Stand back," Quinn warned. She produced a crowbar from her belt. It wasn't her gear, but it belonged to the scene. She wedged the tip into the mortar seam. Metal screeched against stone. The wall groaned. Dust fell onto her boots. "What are you doing?" Sterling shouted from behind her. "Finding the source," Quinn growled. She pushed. The bricks shifted an inch. Darkness poured out from the gap, smelling of sulfur and old smoke. "Quinn!" Sterling stepped forward. Quinn ignored him. She leaned into the gap. The darkness wasn't empty. It breathed. The Compass in Eva's hand whined. The brass casing grew hot under her glove. "It's not a wall," Quinn said. "It's a throat." Eva moved closer, eyes wide behind the glass. "That's the rift. The Market doesn't move through stations. It moves through the rift. The body didn't die on the platform. It fell in here." Quinn looked back at the body. She walked to the head again. She lifted the chin. The eyes were closed, but the pupils had dilated fully, the black blood in the tear ducts. She stood and looked at the wall. "The blood," Quinn said. "It's not black. It's ink. The mark of a contract." Eva tilted her head. "A blood sacrifice?" "No," Quinn said. "A payment." She turned to the hooded vendor. The figure had turned its head slightly. Quinn could see the outline of a mouth. "He paid the toll," Quinn said. She looked at the Compass again. The needle had stopped spinning. It pointed at the vendor. "That's impossible," Sterling said, his voice dropping. "The vendor is just standing there." "Exactly," Quinn said. "He didn't try to leave." She stepped toward the vendor. The cold from the wall radiated outward. The air in the station dropped another degree. Eva tightened her grip on the satchel. The satchel was full of books, but Quinn saw the way the fabric shifted. The weight wasn't paper. "Quinn, wait," Eva said. She didn't move. "The Compass... it's heating up." Quinn looked at the device. Verdigris spots on the casing flared red. The needle was no longer pointing at the vendor. It was pointing at Quinn. "It thinks I'm the breach," Quinn said. She looked at her own wrist. The leather watch strap felt tight. She had brought her own gear into a forbidden zone. The market demanded a toll. Sterling drew his weapon. The click of the hammer echoed off the tiles. "Stand down, Detective," Sterling ordered. Quinn didn't move. She looked at the compass needle. It trembled. It wanted direction. "It doesn't point to the killer," Quinn said. "It points to the key." She looked at the vendor again. The figure had lowered its head. It held something in its hand. Quinn squinted. "What is he holding?" Eva asked. "Nothing," Quinn said. "Everything." The wall behind the vendor vibrated. A low hum filled the station. The light bulbs flickered and died. The emergency lights on the floor kicked in, casting long red shadows across the platform. Quinn stepped into the shadow of the vendor. "Step away from the breach!" Sterling shouted. "I'm the one who finds the truth," Quinn said. "Not the one who closes it." She reached into the vendor's stall. Her hand closed on something cold. A token. Bone. Eva gasped. "That's the entry fee." "It's a bone token," Quinn said. "He took it." She held the token up. The light from the Compass flared. The needle jerked hard. It spun and locked into a new direction. The wall behind the stall opened fully. Quinn stared into the void. The darkness inside wasn't empty. It swirled. Eva took a step forward. "Harlow. Don't." Quinn ignored her. She dropped the token onto the floor. It hit the concrete with a sound like a pistol shot. "Harlow!" Quinn didn't turn. She looked at the body on the floor. The black blood was moving. It flowed toward the wall. It flowed toward the open rift. "The body wasn't the victim," Quinn said. "It was the bait." Eva gripped her arm. "That's not how the Market works." "This isn't the Market anymore," Quinn said. The shadows detached themselves from the wall. They crawled across the floor. They approached the open rift. Quinn raised her hand. The Crowbar was still in her grip. "Quinn, look at the needle," Eva said. Quinn looked down. The Compass lay on the floor. The needle was broken. The brass face had cracked. "It's not broken," Quinn said. "It's finished." The shadows surged forward. Quinn moved. She didn't run. She planted her feet and held the Crowbar out. The metal hummed. The shadows recoiled. Eva shouted. Sterling shouted. Quinn heard them, but she didn't react. She focused on the wall. The thing behind the wall had moved closer. The pressure of it pressed against her chest. She could feel the breath of something vast waiting on the other side. She looked at the vendor. The vendor was gone. In his place stood a man in a long coat. He smiled. His teeth were filed to points. "You brought the token," the man said. His voice came from the wall. "I found what I was looking for," Quinn replied. Eva stepped between Quinn and the wall. "That's not a man. It's a Shade." Quinn looked past her. She saw the Compass. It was glowing bright white. The needle was a shard of light. "It's a beacon," Quinn said. The Shade stepped out. He walked on the shadows. The shadows didn't support him. They held him up. He raised a hand. "Stop," Quinn ordered. The Shade ignored her. He walked toward the body. He touched the head. The black blood lifted. It formed a sphere. It spun around his hand. "What are you doing?" Eva asked. "Collecting the payment," Quinn said. She looked at the Shade. She looked at the Compass. She saw the sigils on the needle. They weren't protective. They were directional. The Compass wasn't pointing at the rift. It was pointing at the station. "The rift isn't the exit," Quinn said. "It's the entrance." The Shade turned. He looked at Quinn. He smiled. "You understand," the Shade said. Quinn didn't blink. She held the Crowbar. The metal began to burn. She didn't let go. "Then help me," Quinn said. The Shade tilted his head. The Shadows swirled faster. The station shook. The lights flickered again. "Quinn," Eva whispered. Quinn looked at her friend. She saw the fear in Eva's green eyes. "I know," Quinn said. "But we aren't done." The Compass on the floor lit up again. The needle spun once more. It pointed at the wall. Then it pointed at the body. Then it pointed at Quinn. The Shade laughed. "Let's see," Quinn said. She raised the Crowbar. The wall began to crack. Quinn struck the wall. A sound tore through the station. The Shadows screamed. The Compass exploded into dust. Quinn didn't fall. She stood firm. The dust settled on her coat. Eva stepped back. "Harlow," Sterling said. Quinn looked at the wall. It was a hole now. Through it, she saw the street above. Camden High Street. Traffic. People. "It's not the Market," Quinn said. "It's a door." She stepped forward. The Shade lunged. Quinn blocked the strike with her arm. The Shade pushed. Quinn slid backward. Her boots dragged on the concrete. "Leave it," the Shade said. "Not yet," Quinn said. She kicked the Shade in the chest. The figure staggered. Quinn grabbed the Crowbar. She drove it into the hole in the wall. The metal bent. The Shade roared. Quinn looked at Eva. "Get the Compass," Quinn ordered. Eva shook her head. "It's gone." Quinn looked at the debris. The brass was gone. The sigils were gone. "It's still there," Quinn said. "In the air." She closed her eyes. She felt the pressure in the station drop. The silence was absolute. The Shade stopped moving. He watched her. "What are you?" Quinn asked. "I am the debt," the Shade said. Quinn stepped forward. She stepped over the hole. She stepped into the darkness. The door slammed shut behind her. Eva screamed. Sterling ran to the edge of the hole. "Quinn!" Eva ran past him. She looked into the darkness. The hole was gone. The wall was solid again. Eva fell to her knees. She picked up a piece of brass from the floor. It was cold. She looked at the body. The blood had vanished. The station was empty. The Market had moved. Eva stood up. She walked to the edge of the platform. She looked down at the tracks. Quinn was there. The Shade was gone. Quinn stood on the tracks. The rain fell on her. She looked up at the station. "Quinn," Eva called. Quinn didn't answer. She walked away. The Compass was gone. The Veil Market was gone. Eva ran to the tracks. She slipped. She fell into the darkness. The shadows took her. The door opened. The Market moved again. The station was silent.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags62
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences98
tagDensity0.633
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2410
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2410
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"jaw clenched"
count1
2
word"standard"
count1
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"charm"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count2
8
word"structure"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count2
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"beacon"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"jaw clenched"
2"standard"
3"electric"
4"charm"
5"scanned"
6"etched"
7"trembled"
8"structure"
9"perfect"
10"weight"
11"echoed"
12"vibrated"
13"flickered"
14"could feel"
15"beacon"
16"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences368
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences368
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences404
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2410
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions48
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions181
wordCount1947
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity4.06
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity8
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
North1
Quinn79
Veil3
Market5
London1
Inspector1
Sterling15
King1
Cross1
Eva36
Compass12
Crowbar5
Shade15
Shadows2
High1
Street1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Market"
2"Sterling"
3"King"
4"Cross"
5"Eva"
6"Shade"
7"Shadows"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences131
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2410
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences404
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs169
mean14.26
std12.47
cv0.875
sampleLengths
075
132
240
328
427
545
67
747
821
956
1059
1125
1214
1332
1424
1527
1620
1724
1810
1936
2021
216
2235
2331
245
2524
2638
271
289
2923
3022
316
3237
334
3437
359
3624
374
3828
399
4033
4140
4214
437
445
4521
4622
4713
488
4945
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences368
matches
0"was gone"
1"were filed"
2"was gone"
3"were gone"
4"was gone"
5"was gone"
6"was gone"
7"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs433
matches
0"was walking"
1"was pointing"
2"was glowing"
3"wasn't pointing"
4"was pointing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences404
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1950
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.021538461538461538
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.004615384615384616
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences404
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences404
mean5.97
std3.49
cv0.585
sampleLengths
013
117
212
316
417
59
610
78
85
911
108
1118
123
1310
143
1515
1620
177
183
195
2021
216
2210
237
246
258
269
2724
2810
297
304
313
3210
3312
346
3513
364
378
3812
3914
408
416
4219
4311
449
455
468
476
488
499
35.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats57
diversityRatio0.1485148514851485
totalSentences404
uniqueOpeners60
33.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences298
matches
0"Usually, it smelled of spices"
1"Then it pointed at the"
2"Then it pointed at Quinn."
ratio0.01
71.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount111
totalSentences298
matches
0"She adjusted the cuff of"
1"It was black."
2"He looked tired."
3"His face was tight, jaw"
4"She knelt beside the body."
5"She reached out, gloved hand"
6"She lifted the sleeve of"
7"He tapped his notebook with"
8"She stood and turned to"
9"It sat here tonight instead"
10"She wore round glasses that"
11"Her leather satchel hung heavy"
12"She held a notebook, scribbling"
13"Her finger tucked hair behind"
14"She closed the notebook and"
15"She turned back to the"
16"She pointed a gloved finger"
17"It didn't soak in."
18"It sat on top."
19"She scanned the area"
ratio0.372
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount292
totalSentences298
matches
0"The damp concrete of Camden"
1"Harlow Quinn stepped off the"
2"Salt-and-pepper hair remained cropped close,"
3"She adjusted the cuff of"
4"The watch ticked, marking the"
5"The Veil Market lay hidden"
6"This wasn't the first time"
7"Tonight it smelled like copper."
8"Quinn crossed the platform where"
9"A body lay sprawled near"
10"The victim wore the clothes"
11"It was black."
12"Detective Inspector Sterling stood beside"
13"He looked tired."
14"His face was tight, jaw"
15"Sterling muttered, kicking the toe"
16"Quinn didn't speak."
17"She knelt beside the body."
18"The heat from the rail"
19"Frost formed on the victim's"
ratio0.98
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences298
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She wore round glasses that reflected the dim electric bulbs hanging from the ceiling."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags62
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Sterling said, his voice dropping"
37.93% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags58
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"Sterling muttered (mutter)"
1"Quinn snapped (snap)"
2"Eva whispered (whisper)"
3"Eva corrected (correct)"
4"Sterling interjected (interject)"
5"Quinn warned (warn)"
6"Sterling shouted (shout)"
7"Quinn growled (growl)"
8"Sterling ordered (order)"
9"Sterling shouted (shout)"
10"Quinn ordered (order)"
11"Eva whispered (whisper)"
12"Quinn ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences98
tagDensity0.592
leniency1
rawRatio0.224
effectiveRatio0.224
81.0818%