Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBKT6079S6AS9HH7EC725J9

Run Details

Duration:
50.0s
Cost:
$0.002346
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The concrete floor of the abandoned Tube station smelled of wet coal dust and stale, recirculated air. Harlow Quinn stepped over a line of blue police tape, her boots cracking loudly on the tiles. The station sat silent beneath the roar of London above. No traffic hummed here. No footsteps echoed. Just the drip of water from a broken pipe echoing somewhere in the dark throat of the tunnel. The Veil Market lay a hundred meters deeper, but this platform belonged to the mundane. Quinn stopped beside the body. Dark blood pooled around the head, soaking into the grout. The victim lay face down on the tracks, limbs arranged in an unnatural spread. The yellow streetlights overhead flickered, buzzing against Quinn’s sensitive hearing. She adjusted the leather strap of her watch on her left wrist. The hands moved with a rhythmic ticking sound that she usually ignored. Now it felt like a countdown. Eva Kowalski stood near the far wall, her red curls framing a face pale beneath the harsh light of the torch she held. Eva lowered the beam to sweep the victim’s hands. It’s a rift burn. I can feel the residual heat. Eva tucked a stray lock of hair behind her left ear. Her round glasses reflected the flashlight beam, turning them into two glowing orbs. She knelt beside the corpse, ignoring the blood staining the knees of her trousers. She opened her worn leather satchel and pulled out a gloved hand. Her fingers hovered inches above the victim's skin without touching. The energy signature is off. Quinn moved closer. She leaned in, her jaw tightening as she scanned the body from boots to scalp. The clothes were expensive. Silk. A cut of fabric a street thug wouldn't own. It doesn't smell of ozone, Eva. Eva lifted her gaze, the green eyes sharp behind the lenses. The radiation levels are normal, Detective. But the aura. It’s not natural. Something pulled him through. Quinn ignored the comment about the aura. Focus on the concrete. She crouched and dragged a gloved finger through the dust around the body’s torso. No drag marks. The body didn't move across floor tiles. Someone carried it here. Who carries a six-foot man up onto a dead railway without scuffing the soles? The silence stretched between them. A rat squeaked somewhere in the darkness of the ventilation shaft. Quinn stood up and looked down at the tracks again. A glint of brass sparked under the flickering tube light. She moved along the edge of the platform, stepping down onto the sleepers. The metal screamed under her weight. She found it: a small brass compass, lying face up in the grime. The casing had a patina of verdigris, green and white corrosion eating at the edges. Pick it up. Quinn held the compass. The needle spun wildly, clicking against the glass. Her own fingers trembled for a second. Not from fear. From the vibration of the metal against your skin. She snapped on the leather gloves. The compass had markings etched into the face. Protective sigils. The markings looked old, hand-carved by a Shade artisan. It’s a Veil Compass. Eva stood up, brushing dust off her knees. She reached into her satchel again, pulling out a notebook. Her handwriting was cramped and tight. I’ve read about these. They point to the nearest rift. Why is it here then? The needle settled. Quinn held it out. The needle pointed directly at the victim’s chest. Not the rift. The body. That means the portal closed on him. He was the anchor. Eva shook her head. She stepped closer to Quinn, the leather satchel swinging against her hip. The compass must have been lost in the chaos. Quinn turned the compass over in her palm. The metal was warm. Not hot, but warm like skin. She looked back at the body. The blood was fresh, wet. But the compass? The patina was dry. It had sat here for days. That’s impossible. Quinn stepped back from the tracks. She looked at the platform floor again. The tiles were dry here. No dust disturbance. Just the blood spreading in a wide, static bloom. If he died in a portal tear, the air would be thick with sulfur. I don't smell sulfur. I smell leather goods. Expensive leather. Eva frowned. She walked over to the body and pointed at the collar of the dead man’s suit. There was a scorch mark on the fabric. It looked like burn damage. The heat signature is there. Quinn pulled a small knife from her pocket. The blade was sharp and black. She scraped the scorch mark. The black residue flaked off. She rubbed it between her gloved thumb and forefinger. Nothing. Eva leaned in. Quinn pushed her back with her elbow. The gesture was sharp, military precision in her movement. Get away from the scene. Let me clean it. Quinn turned back to the compass. She held it up to the light. The casing was tarnished. But the needle was clean. No grime. No blood. She looked at the victim’s hands. They were empty. No pocket. No wallet. Just the clothes. You’re wrong. Eva straightened. Her face hardened. That’s the only explanation for the burn. Someone opened a rift and got unlucky. Quinn walked to the tracks again. She pulled the knife and pried up the corner of a floor tile near the body’s feet. The adhesive was still tacky. No dust. Someone had laid this tile down recently. The compass points to energy. If this was a rift event, the energy would have shifted the floor. The tiles would be cracked. The metal rails would have warped. Quinn pointed the tip of her knife at the rails. They were straight. Unbent. The tracks were clean. Someone moved him. Eva opened her mouth to argue. The fluorescent lights above flickered and died for a full second. The darkness rushed in, heavy and suffocating. The only illumination came from Eva’s torch and the moonlight filtering down from the emergency exit hatch high above. The market is shifting, Quinn. We need a bone token to leave. The station moves with the moon. Quinn didn't look at the ceiling. Her eyes locked on the compass needle. It had started twitching again. Not pointing at the body. Pointing away. Toward the stairs. Toward the rest of the station. The needle is stable. It’s not reacting to the station. It’s reacting to something on the corpse. Eva gasped. She looked at the body, then at Quinn. You mean the body *generated* the pull? Quinn crouched down again. She looked at the fingers. They were curled inward. Not rigid death, but clenched. Like a fist holding something tight. She took the compass and placed it over the victim's left hand. The compass needle didn't point to the chest anymore. It didn't point to the stairs. It pointed straight into the palm of the dead man's hand. The victim wasn't dragged. He was carrying the anchor. Eva lowered her torch. The beam shivered in her hand. He died protecting it. Quinn wiped her glove on the dead man’s sleeve. She left the compass on the chest. Eva stepped closer. Her shadow fell across Quinn’s feet. Why? Quinn stood up. She wiped the knife on her trousers. The leather watch face caught the dim light. She didn't answer. She looked past the body. Past Eva. Into the darkness of the tunnel where the Veil Market stalls were set up. The shadows among the stalls shifted. Something moved. Not a ghost. Not a demon. Someone else. Quinn’s eyes scanned the perimeter. Her jaw set sharp. We’re not looking at a tragedy, Eva. We’re looking at a transaction. Eva gripped her satchel straps. The leather creaked. A transaction that ended. Quinn took the compass back. The needle was spinning fast now, blurring. She snapped it shut. The sound was final. The sound of a lock clicking dead. The blood on the floor was still warm. The compass was still cold. The discrepancy sat heavy between the two. Quinn looked at the body one last time. I don't see a martyr here. I see the bait.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1361
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1361
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"echoing"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count2
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"glint"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoed"
2"echoing"
3"flickered"
4"rhythmic"
5"scanned"
6"silk"
7"silence"
8"glint"
9"weight"
10"trembled"
11"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences210
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences210
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences210
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1361
ratio0.001
matches
0"generated"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1361
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.91
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Quinn26
London1
Veil3
Market2
Kowalski1
Eva18
Detective1
Shade1
Compass1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Market"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.545
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a countdown"
53.05% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.47
wordCount1361
matches
0"Not hot, but warm like skin"
1"Not rigid death, but clenched"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences210
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean24.75
std20.85
cv0.843
sampleLengths
084
169
232
310
460
55
632
76
827
939
1014
1183
123
1356
144
1534
165
1720
1811
1925
2042
212
2230
2324
2436
2534
2619
279
2842
292
3019
3137
3229
3318
343
3543
3618
3734
3817
3917
4062
419
4210
434
4416
459
461
4758
489
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences210
matches
0"been lost"
1"were curled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs237
matches
0"was carrying"
1"was spinning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences210
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1363
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.025678650036683785
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005135730007336757
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences210
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences210
mean6.48
std3.88
cv0.599
sampleLengths
017
117
210
34
43
518
615
75
810
914
1010
1112
1212
136
1423
159
164
176
1811
1913
2014
2112
2210
235
243
2515
264
271
289
296
3011
316
323
333
344
357
364
3714
383
397
404
4114
425
4311
4410
4510
4613
476
4813
4915
39.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.19523809523809524
totalSentences210
uniqueOpeners41
52.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences189
matches
0"Just the drip of water"
1"Just the blood spreading in"
2"Just the clothes."
ratio0.016
88.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount62
totalSentences189
matches
0"She adjusted the leather strap"
1"It’s a rift burn."
2"I can feel the residual"
3"Her round glasses reflected the"
4"She knelt beside the corpse,"
5"She opened her worn leather"
6"Her fingers hovered inches above"
7"She leaned in, her jaw"
8"It doesn't smell of ozone,"
9"It’s not natural."
10"She crouched and dragged a"
11"She moved along the edge"
12"She found it: a small"
13"Her own fingers trembled for"
14"She snapped on the leather"
15"It’s a Veil Compass."
16"She reached into her satchel"
17"Her handwriting was cramped and"
18"I’ve read about these."
19"They point to the nearest"
ratio0.328
47.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount156
totalSentences189
matches
0"The concrete floor of the"
1"Harlow Quinn stepped over a"
2"The station sat silent beneath"
3"The Veil Market lay a"
4"Quinn stopped beside the body."
5"The victim lay face down"
6"The yellow streetlights overhead flickered,"
7"She adjusted the leather strap"
8"The hands moved with a"
9"Eva Kowalski stood near the"
10"Eva lowered the beam to"
11"It’s a rift burn."
12"I can feel the residual"
13"Eva tucked a stray lock"
14"Her round glasses reflected the"
15"She knelt beside the corpse,"
16"She opened her worn leather"
17"Her fingers hovered inches above"
18"The energy signature is off."
19"Quinn moved closer."
ratio0.825
79.37% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences189
matches
0"Now it felt like a"
1"If he died in a"
2"If this was a rift"
ratio0.016
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.6500%