Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBKT95V5HP1SFXMR9MYH9N4

Run Details

Duration:
48.0s
Cost:
$0.013425
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chain lock rattled against the wood before the deadbolt clicked. Rory pulled the door open, the brass handle cold against her palm. Rain slicked the narrow hallway, smelling of wet wool and the stale alcohol drifting up from Silas' bar below. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, water beading on the charcoal wool of his suit. He held the ivory handle of his cane in a gloved hand, the tip resting lightly on the worn floorboards. He didn't step forward. He didn't smile. The amber eye caught the dim hallway light, while the black one remained a void. Rory leaned against the doorframe, her shoulder pressing into the peeling paint. She kept her left hand tucked into the pocket of her hoodie, fingers tracing the crescent scar on her wrist. You weren't supposed to be here. Her voice came out steady, though her throat felt tight. Lucien tilted his head. The platinum hair, usually slicked back, carried a few stray strands dampened by the London drizzle. Plans change. The city moves fast, Rory. You know that better than most. He shifted his weight. The cane clicked against the floor, a sharp sound in the quiet building. I'm busy. Busy delivering food or busy hiding? The question hung in the air. Rory pushed off the doorframe, stepping back to let him pass. He didn't move until she cleared the space. He stepped over the threshold, bringing the scent of expensive cologne and rain into the cramped flat. The air already held the smell of old books and dust from her research notes scattered on the coffee table. He set the cane against the wall. It stood straight, a silent threat disguised as decor. You're blocking the light. Rory crossed her arms. The fabric of her hoodie stretched over her shoulders. She watched his hands. They were steady. Always steady. I said I'm busy. And yet, you opened the door. Lucien moved deeper into the room. His boots made no sound on the floorboards. He stopped near the kitchenette, looking at the kettle sitting on the burner. A single cup sat on the counter, steam long gone. I didn't open it for you. You did. He turned. The movement was fluid, practiced. He looked at her, really looked at her, the way he used to before the last time they met in the alley behind the market. Before the blood and the fire. I need information. Rory let out a short breath that might have been a laugh. She walked past him toward the window, pulling the curtain back an inch. The streetlights below cast a yellow glow on the wet pavement. You have a phone. You have contacts. You have a network of spies and demons. You don't need me. I need you. The words landed heavy. Rory turned back. She kept her distance, the space between them charged with static. Why? The situation involves something you know. Something you saw. I saw a lot of things. Most of them I'd rather forget. Lucien reached into his jacket pocket. Rory flinched, her hand instinctively moving toward the knife she kept in her boot. He pulled out a folded piece of paper, not a weapon. He placed it on the table. The paper slid across the wood, stopping inches from her hand. It's a location. A time. She didn't touch it. Why bring it to me? Because you think clearly when you're angry. Rory picked up the paper. Her fingers trembled, just once. She smoothed the crease. The address was in the East End. A warehouse district. This is a trap. It's a meeting. With who? Lucien walked to the window, standing beside her. He didn't look at the street. He looked at her reflection in the glass. Someone who knows your father. Rory's grip tightened on the paper. The edges crinkled under her thumb. She looked at the scar on her wrist again. Brendan Carter. The barrister who left Cardiff and never looked back. The man who told her to run. He's dead. Is he? Lucien's voice dropped, losing its polished edge. The amber eye seemed to glow in the dim light. I don't know. That's why I'm here. I need to know if he's alive before I walk into that warehouse. You want me to go with you. I want you to decide. Rory dropped the paper on the table. It landed with a soft thud. She walked to the kitchen, pouring cold water from the tap into the empty cup. She drank it in one long pull, the water sharp and metallic. If I go, I'm not your backup. I wouldn't expect you to be. I'm not your partner. No. You're the only one who can read the cipher on the door. She set the cup down. The porcelain clicked against the laminate. You're asking me to walk into a room with a demon hunter because of a hunch about my dead father. I'm asking you to walk into a room because you're the only person I trust with a gun. Rory turned. She looked at the cane leaning against the wall. The blade concealed within. She looked at the man who held it. You don't trust anyone. I trust you to survive. Rory walked to the coat rack. She pulled down a heavier jacket, shaking the dust from the fabric. She slid her arms into the sleeves, zipping it up to her chin. I need my bag. Lucien nodded. He didn't move from the window. He watched her move, his posture relaxed, but his eyes sharp. Take the knife. I have it. Good. Rory grabbed her bag from the chair. She slung it over her shoulder, checking the weight of the contents. She walked past him to the door. Wait. She stopped, hand on the knob. If this is a setup, Lucien. It isn't. You better be right. She opened the door. The noise from the bar below swelled, a bass-heavy thump that vibrated through the floor. Lucien stepped out into the hallway, closing the distance between them. He didn't touch her, but his presence filled the narrow space. We leave now. Rory looked at him. The rain outside had picked up, drumming against the brickwork of the building. She thought of the scar on her wrist. The pain that never fully faded. Lead the way. Lucien turned, his cane tapping once against the wood. He didn't look back. He knew she was following. He knew she had no choice. They walked down the stairs, the shadows swallowing them one by one. The door to the flat clicked shut, leaving the paper on the table, the steam from the kettle long cold.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"porcelain"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"weight"
2"charged"
3"trembled"
4"porcelain"
5"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences153
filterMatches
0"know"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1115
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1112
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.35
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Lucien10
Moreau1
London1
Rory15
East1
End1
Carter1
Cardiff1
You13
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Carter"
4"You"
places
0"London"
1"East"
2"End"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.826
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1115
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean15.07
std15.78
cv1.047
sampleLengths
077
122
232
36
410
520
613
717
82
96
1062
1116
124
1322
144
156
1637
176
182
1938
203
2136
2219
233
2418
251
269
2712
2848
295
304
315
327
3324
344
353
362
3722
385
3939
402
412
4217
4320
447
455
4640
477
486
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs220
matches
0"was following"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences153
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount39
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount0
adverbRatio0
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean7.29
std4.78
cv0.656
sampleLengths
011
112
219
315
420
54
63
715
812
920
106
1110
124
1316
142
155
166
174
1813
192
206
216
2211
238
2417
2520
267
279
284
294
309
314
323
332
344
356
366
378
3813
3910
406
412
422
435
4425
456
463
4712
4813
4911
39.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.22875816993464052
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences136
matches(empty)
ratio0
2.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount74
totalSentences136
matches
0"He held the ivory handle"
1"He didn't step forward."
2"He didn't smile."
3"She kept her left hand"
4"You weren't supposed to be"
5"Her voice came out steady,"
6"You know that better than"
7"He shifted his weight."
8"He didn't move until she"
9"He stepped over the threshold,"
10"He set the cane against"
11"It stood straight, a silent"
12"You're blocking the light."
13"She watched his hands."
14"They were steady."
15"I said I'm busy."
16"His boots made no sound"
17"He stopped near the kitchenette,"
18"I didn't open it for"
19"He looked at her, really"
ratio0.544
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount126
totalSentences136
matches
0"The chain lock rattled against"
1"Rory pulled the door open,"
2"Rain slicked the narrow hallway,"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"He held the ivory handle"
5"He didn't step forward."
6"He didn't smile."
7"The amber eye caught the"
8"Rory leaned against the doorframe,"
9"She kept her left hand"
10"You weren't supposed to be"
11"Her voice came out steady,"
12"Lucien tilted his head."
13"The platinum hair, usually slicked"
14"The city moves fast, Rory."
15"You know that better than"
16"He shifted his weight."
17"The cane clicked against the"
18"The question hung in the"
19"Rory pushed off the doorframe,"
ratio0.926
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences136
matches
0"Before the blood and the"
1"Because you think clearly when"
2"If I go, I'm not"
3"If this is a setup,"
ratio0.029
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The noise from the bar below swelled, a bass-heavy thump that vibrated through the floor."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.6068%