Run: 2026-02-25-01KJBKX5AQAD9Y08VZYSQ75D89

Run Details

Duration:
55.1s
Cost:
$0.002563
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Damp air clung to the concrete walls of the abandoned Camden North station. A single flickering bulb cast long shadows across the tracks, illuminating dust motes dancing above the grimy platform. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the edge of the train line onto the wet sleepers. Her boots clicked against the metal rail. Water dripped from her hair, the salt-and-pepper strands sticking to a sweat-darkened collar. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist. The second hand ticked a precise rhythm against the silence. Eva Kowalski stood by the yellow police tape. The orange plastic fluttered without wind. Eva held a clipboard against her chest like a shield. Round glasses slid down her nose. Freckles stood out starkly against her pale skin in the harsh light. She tucked a lock of curly red hair behind her left ear. She hadn't taken the gloves off yet. Faint dirt under the fingernails suggested she had been digging. "You didn't call for backup," Eva said. She didn't look at Quinn. Her eyes remained on the taped-off area. "This isn't a scene you broadcast to the Met, Evie." Quinn stopped five feet from the tape. She wore her trench coat open, revealing the service pistol in the cross-draw holster. "The energy signature spiked," Eva replied. She set the clipboard down on a pile of crates. "It pulled me here before the alarm even reached my phone. I found something Quinn. Something buried." Quinn stepped under the tape. She ignored the wet floor. Her boots found purchase on the gritty concrete. The smell hit her first. Ozone and old blood. Not copper rust. Wet iron. "What kind of something?" Quinn crouched near the body. It lay face down in a puddle of darkness. A heavy weight of a man. Dark suit. No visible wounds on the back of the head, just a singed patch of hair. His tie hung loose over the collar. "Stigmata," Eva said. Her voice dropped an octave. The voice of the researcher she was. "Thermal shock. I checked the vitals when I arrived. His skin temperature was absolute zero. The body is frozen to the bone, yet the blood is liquid." "You think a curse killed him." Quinn leaned closer. The air crackled around the corpse. Static raised the hair on her arms. "I think the Veil breached," Eva said. She moved a step closer, keeping her hands in her pockets. "The Circle is opening the rifts again. We found a bone token in his pocket. This wasn't a suicide." Quinn didn't look at the baggy coat pocket. She looked at the floor. The blood spreading from beneath the suit wasn't pooling. It was moving. Thin rivulets crawled against gravity toward a drain cover. "This floor is dry," Quinn said. She reached into her pocket and pulled out a small brass object. The Veil Compass. Verdigris had eaten the corners. Protective sigils were etched deep into the face. She didn't open it. She just let it hang against the leather strap at her wrist. "If the floor is dry, why is the blood moving?" Eva asked. "Capillary action. Or a draft." Quinn stood up. She brushed dust from her trousers. "Blood doesn't defy physics, Eva. Even if a ghost walks the lines, fluids obey laws." "The laws are different here, Harlow." Eva stepped closer to the compass. "Look at the needle." Quinn glanced down. The brass needle trembled inside the glass. It wasn't pointing north. It was pointing at the wall behind the body. A wall of solid brick, no door, no seam. "It points to the nearest supernatural rift," Quinn recited the item description aloud. She remembered the commission notes for the Compass. She had been issued it three years ago. The week after Morris died. The week she stopped sleeping in her own bed. "But there’s nothing on the other side of that wall. Just the old maintenance tunnels." "Tunnels lead everywhere," Eva said. She pulled her satchel straps tighter. "The Market is under construction tonight. New gates open." "If there are new gates, there's a guard." Quinn scanned the perimeter. The surveillance cameras were smashed. Not with a punch or a bullet. Scratched. Deep gouges in the metal lense. Something heavy had taken them out. "We are the guards," Eva said. "We watch the breach points." "This isn't a breach." Quinn walked around the body. She stopped at the head. The face was pale, lips blue. No trauma. But the eyes were open. Staring. Pupils dilated black until nothing remained. "See? They took him for the ritual." Eva moved to the wall, pressing her hand against the cold bricks. She closed her eyes. Quinn didn't listen to her. She focused on the blood trail. It stopped at the drain cover. She pulled a flashlight from her jacket. The beam cut through the gloom. She angled the light low, skimming the surface. The blood trail didn't stop at the grate. It dipped under the metal edge. "There's no drain," Quinn said. The metal cover wasn't part of the original architecture. It was newer. Welded steel, dark grey. "Maybe the city built over the track," Eva replied. "It was abandoned." "Who welds a cover in an abandoned station?" Quinn knelt again. She pried the edge of the metal plate. It wasn't bolted down. Just lying there. Heavy. It moved. Eva tensed. "Harlow. Don't." Quinn lifted the plate. It made a grinding metal sound. Beneath lay an opening. Not a tunnel. A narrow hatch leading down into darkness. A ladder. Fresh steel rungs. "This wasn't here yesterday," Quinn said. She shone the light down into the hole. The beam reflected off wet stone. Not concrete. Natural bedrock. "And look at the ladder. Military spec. Heavy duty." "It's for the transport," Eva said. Her voice lacked confidence. She took a step back. "The clique moves the goods." "Not goods." Quinn pulled the flashlight tighter. Shadows deepened in the hatch. "Morris used to talk about the transport schedules when the weather was bad. He said the Met moved people through the underground when the city went to grey." Eva didn't answer. She stared at the hatch. Her hand hovered over her satchel. Inside sat the books. The restricted archives. "That blood," Quinn continued. She stood up, wiping dust from her hands. "It points to this hole. But you said it's liquid blood, even though the body is frozen. Why is the blood warmer than the body?" Eva looked at Quinn. "Because magic makes it so." "No." Quinn shook her head. "Because the body isn't the source." Quinn pointed down into the darkness. The flashlight beam caught something small in the dark water below. Not water. Oil. A trail of black sludge running toward a drain vent. "That's hydraulic fluid," Quinn said. The realization hit her with the force of a physical blow. "Who puts hydraulic fluid in a drainage system?" Eva swallowed hard. She tucked the hair behind her ear again. "The Veil Market machines." "Not machines. People on machines." Quinn holstered her flashlight. She checked the Veil Compass. The needle had stopped shaking. It spun slowly now. Clockwise. Then counter-clockwise. It refused to settle. The Needle pointed back at the body. Not at the wall. Not at the hatch. At the body itself. "The Compass points to rifts or portals," Quinn murmured. She looked at the compass, then at the dead man, then at the hatch. "But a dead body isn't a portal. Unless it's meant to look like one." The silence in the station grew thick. The smell of ozone faded. Only the smell of stale water and metal remained. "You think he's bait?" Eva asked. Her voice cracked. Quinn walked to the hatch. She pulled a penlight from her pocket and clipped it to her coat. She looked at the blood that was moving toward the drain. It had stopped moving the moment the Compass needle locked onto the corpse. "If it's bait," Quinn said, her voice low. "Then it's a trap for someone else." "Who?" Quinn looked past Eva. Toward the far end of the platform. Toward the darkness where the tracks ended. She couldn't see them, but the static in the air told her something changed. The hairs on her arms stood rigid. The Compass needle spun again. "Nobody," Quinn said. She started moving toward the tracks. "I want to know." "Eva?" Quinn didn't stop walking. She didn't look back. The satchel strap tightened as Eva gripped it. Her shoes squeaked on the wet floor. She followed. "The Market moved," Eva said softly. "The tunnels shifted." "Everything moves," Quinn muttered. "Until the trap snaps." She stopped at the edge of the tracks. The rails gleamed. Black. Smooth. No rust. They looked recently cleaned. "Who cleans these tracks?" Quinn asked. The question hung in the air. The wind picked up. Dust swirled. The compass needle pointed straight ahead. Down the line. Into the dark. Quinn took the first step off the platform. She didn't check for the live wire. She stepped into the gap. The rail clattered under her boot. "You need to stop." Eva reached for her arm. The grip was tight. Her fingers dug into the fabric of Quinn's coat. "If the body is a lure, the hunter is nearby," Quinn said. She didn't look at Eva. She scanned the tunnel mouth at the end. A shadow moved. A shape. Large. Tall. It wasn't human. The legs were too long. The stride too wide. It paused at the edge of the light. "Harlow." Eva pulled her back. Quinn wrenched her arm free. Her eyes stayed fixed on the shadow. "Don't move," Quinn ordered. The command didn't come from her throat. It came from the air itself, heavy. The shadow took a step forward. It made no sound. The Compass spun wildly. The needle broke free from its casing. It flew out, spinning like a coin, landing on the wet ballast between the tracks. Quinn watched the needle. It pointed directly at the shadow. The shadow pointed back. "It's not a shadow," Quinn whispered. She watched the blood on the floor. It began to crawl toward the needle. The oil and blood mixed. The liquid boiled. The shadow reached out. A hand. Metal fingers. Black. Quinn pulled her service revolver. She didn't hesitate. She didn't warn them. "No!" Eva screamed. The shadow vanished. The lights exploded. Darkness swallowed the station. Quinn stood in the blackness. She held the gun steady. She waited to hear the breathing in the dark. She waited to hear the click of the lock. She heard the click. A metallic clicking. Not a gun. A machine. "Harlow, look at the needle," Eva shouted. The light from a handheld torch flared in the black. Quinn dropped to one knee. She felt the cold metal under her cheek. The ballast. The needle was gone. But the blood had pooled around the spot where it landed. "The blood," Quinn said. "It's not dead," Eva said. The beam of the light moved across the wet floor. "It's not blood," Quinn corrected. She reached into her pocket. She needed to see the evidence again. She held up a small vial she had taken from her coat. The liquid inside had changed from clear to pink. "The body on the floor," Quinn said. She stood up. "The one we found. I haven't checked the pulse on him again." "Harlow, stop it. We need to report the breach." "It's not a breach," Quinn said. She checked the watch. The leather strap creaked. "The body is gone." "What?" Quinn looked back at the yellow tape. The body wasn't there. Only the suit remained. Eva gasped. The blood on the floor was moving away from the suit. It flowed toward the wall behind the body. "It was never a corpse," Quinn said. She stepped closer to the empty space. "It was a container." "Who puts a person in a suit?" Quinn looked at the watch on her wrist. The second hand had stopped. "Look," Quinn said. "The Compass." The brass compass lay on the ground. It wasn't spinning anymore. It was pointing straight up at the ceiling. The station lights flickered back on. "Someone told you magic," Quinn said. She picked up the compass. The needle was stuck. Broken. "This was designed to find a portal. But the needle is pointing at the floor. Or at the ceiling." "The body was a decoy," Eva said. "For what?" "Harlow." The voice came from the darkness behind the platform entrance. Not the tunnel. The station exit. Quinn turned. A figure stood in the doorway. Wearing a Met Police uniform. The badge said 'DS Morris'. The shadow cast by the figure didn't match the shape. Quinn froze. She didn't lower the gun. "That's not possible," Quinn said. The 'Morris' stepped forward. His uniform was dry. His face was smooth. No shadow on the eyes. "I told you to leave the scene," Morris said. Quinn checked the compass again. It was reading hot. The needle bent. Quinn moved. She didn't shoot. She aimed for the ground. "Don't touch me," Morris said. Quinn kept the gun steady. She scanned the floor. The blood had stopped. She looked at the compass. It pointed at Morris. But she checked the room again. There was no way to be on both sides of the tunnel. Quinn holstered the gun. She stepped back. "If the needle is pointing at you," Eva said. "Then you're not real." "No," Quinn said. She watched Morris's hands. They didn't have gloves. Her real Morris had a scar on his left thumb. A burn from a case three years ago. The figure's left hand was bare. It was smooth. "Where is your scar?" Quinn asked. Morris smiled. "It healed." "It doesn't heal," Quinn said. She looked past him. The shadow on the wall. It didn't match the body. The body lay on the floor. Empty suit. No blood. "Eva!" Quinn shouted. She grabbed her arm. "We are moving." "Where?" Eva asked. "Out." Quinn shoved her toward the exit. Morris didn't move. He watched them go. Quinn knew the truth. The Veil Compass was wrong. Or the Veil was wrong. She checked the needle. It pointed at her. She checked it again. It pointed at Eva. The truth shifted. The compass lied. Quinn pulled her phone. No signal. She turned back to the station. Morris was gone. The station was empty. She turned back to Eva. "The body," Eva whispered. "Look," Quinn said. The compass was in Quinn's hand. It was broken. The needle had snapped. "The suit," Quinn said. The suit was lying on the floor. Empty. Quinn looked at the floor. The blood started to move again. It flowed into a seam in the floor. A door opened. She looked at the needle. It was pointing at the door. "Eva," Quinn said. They walked toward the door. The compass spun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags67
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Quinn walked around [around]"
1"Quinn knelt again [again]"
2"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.657
leniency1
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.045
95.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2486
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2486
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"dancing"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"fluttered"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count3
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"dancing"
1"silence"
2"fluttered"
3"weight"
4"etched"
5"trembled"
6"scanned"
7"gloom"
8"pulse"
9"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences376
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences376
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences412
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2486
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions46
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions133
wordCount1919
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity3.7
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
North1
Harlow1
Quinn71
Kowalski1
Veil4
Compass7
Morris9
Shadows1
Needle1
Eva34
Met1
Police1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Compass"
4"Morris"
5"Shadows"
6"Needle"
7"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences135
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2486
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences412
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs141
mean17.63
std14.13
cv0.801
sampleLengths
086
171
219
331
433
532
69
739
842
922
1037
1134
1250
1312
1429
1516
1632
1758
1820
1937
2011
2134
2223
2352
2421
2512
2629
274
2829
2933
3020
3140
3221
3337
349
3511
3630
3724
3815
3930
4019
4137
4221
439
4442
4515
461
4744
4813
499
99.66% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences376
matches
0"were etched"
1"been issued"
2"were smashed"
3"was gone"
4"was stuck"
5"was gone"
33.33% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount9
totalVerbs360
matches
0"wasn't pooling"
1"wasn't pointing"
2"was pointing"
3"was moving"
4"wasn't spinning"
5"was pointing"
6"was reading"
7"was lying"
8"was pointing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences412
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1617
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.0191713048855906
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.0055658627087198514
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences412
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences412
mean6.03
std3.76
cv0.623
sampleLengths
013
118
215
37
413
510
610
78
86
910
106
1112
1212
137
1410
157
165
177
1817
1914
206
2110
2217
235
245
258
265
274
283
292
309
319
326
332
3415
357
363
375
387
3927
409
416
427
437
4411
4519
468
475
489
493
40.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats41
diversityRatio0.2111650485436893
totalSentences412
uniqueOpeners87
34.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences291
matches
0"Just lying there."
1"Only the smell of stale"
2"Only the suit remained."
ratio0.01
59.18% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount117
totalSentences291
matches
0"Her boots clicked against the"
1"She adjusted the worn leather"
2"She tucked a lock of"
3"She hadn't taken the gloves"
4"She didn't look at Quinn."
5"Her eyes remained on the"
6"She wore her trench coat"
7"She set the clipboard down"
8"She ignored the wet floor."
9"Her boots found purchase on"
10"It lay face down in"
11"His tie hung loose over"
12"Her voice dropped an octave."
13"She moved a step closer,"
14"She looked at the floor."
15"It was moving."
16"She reached into her pocket"
17"She didn't open it."
18"She just let it hang"
19"She brushed dust from her"
ratio0.402
16.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount258
totalSentences291
matches
0"A single flickering bulb cast"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
2"Her boots clicked against the"
3"Water dripped from her hair,"
4"She adjusted the worn leather"
5"The second hand ticked a"
6"Eva Kowalski stood by the"
7"The orange plastic fluttered without"
8"Eva held a clipboard against"
9"Freckles stood out starkly against"
10"She tucked a lock of"
11"She hadn't taken the gloves"
12"She didn't look at Quinn."
13"Her eyes remained on the"
14"Quinn stopped five feet from"
15"She wore her trench coat"
16"She set the clipboard down"
17"Quinn stepped under the tape."
18"She ignored the wet floor."
19"Her boots found purchase on"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences291
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags67
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice low"
51.96% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags49
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Quinn continued (continue)"
1"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
2"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
3"Quinn ordered (order)"
4"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
5"Eva screamed (scream)"
6"Eva shouted (shout)"
7"Quinn corrected (correct)"
8"Quinn shouted (shout)"
9"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.48
leniency0.961
rawRatio0.204
effectiveRatio0.196
80.1693%