Run: 2026-02-26-01KJBM19ZJXGQ0R4KBTBRB6DV0

Run Details

Duration:
52.6s
Cost:
$0.002515
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Underground station tasted of wet rust and stale tobacco. Yellow police tape stretched across the platform, fluttering in a draft that shouldn’t exist three stories underground. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over the barrier, her boots crushing a loose coin against the gritty tiles. She adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Salt-and-pepper hair framed a sharp jaw beneath the flickering fluorescents. "Heart attack," Sergeant Evans said. He stood near the body, clipboard in hand, avoiding eye contact. "Cardiomyopathy. Older male, no trauma." Quinn ignored him. She knelt by the corpse. A man lay sprawled near the tracks. His mouth hung open, tongue blue. No blood stains on the tracks. Not a drop. "No blood," Quinn said. Her brown eyes scanned the grimy platform. "He died sitting down," Evans replied. He stepped forward. "The coroner says his heart stopped. The station layout doesn't explain the location of the body. Just... collapsed from exhaustion." "Dead men bleed," Quinn muttered. She pulled a penlight from her pocket. The beam cut through the gloom, highlighting dust motes suspended in the stagnant air. She moved closer to the man. Her military precision guided her hands. She didn't touch the body. She scanned the concrete beneath the man's coat. "He fell from a standing position," Evans argued. His boots clicked on the tiles. "The fall was short. He dropped into the gap." Quinn ignored the gap between platform and tracks. Her gaze locked on the man's right hand. It lay palm up. In his grip, a small brass object gleamed dully in the dark. It sat there like it belonged. "You missed this," Evans said. "I see it," Quinn snapped. She reached out. Metal felt cold through her glove. Brass. Etched with sigils that shifted under the light. Patina of verdigris covered the casing. "Compass?" Evans frowned. "Antique. Worth something?" "Not a compass for navigation," Quinn said. She tilted the object. The needle twitched. It wasn't pointing north. It pointed toward the dark tunnel mouth, then swung back to the body. "A trinket found on a dead shopkeeper," Evans said. "Evidence of theft. He was robbing someone." "He was killed," Quinn said. "Why no blood on the tracks?" "He died elsewhere. Body hauled here by unknown parties." Quinn stood up. Her joints cracked. She stared at the tunnel walls. The peeling posters from decades past screamed in silence. "Blood takes time to dry. It splatters on impact." She turned to Evans. "This body is fresh. Less than an hour." "Autopsy confirms it." "So why is there no spatter?" Quinn stepped closer to the tunnel. The air grew colder near the tracks. "And look at his clothes. No mud. No grime. We're three miles underground." Evans sighed. He scribbled something on his pad. "He was waiting for a train." "There are no trains on this line." "Maintenance." Quinn kicked the toe of her boot against the rails. The sound echoed too long. Too smooth. No metal-on-metal grind. "The compass," Quinn said. She held the object up. The needle spun wildly. It was pointing at a rift. Or a portal. "It's pointing at a rift. Or a portal." "You know I don't deal in superstition, Quinn." "This isn't superstition. This is physics." Quinn pointed the needle toward the tunnel wall. "The casing. Look at the patina. Verdigris forms over copper exposure, but the etchings? They aren't decorative. They're containment." Evans stopped writing. He looked at the compass. The needle stopped dead. It vibrated. "You think this object is controlling the death?" Evans asked. "I think it found him because he was a breach point." Quinn turned back to the body. She examined the man's collar. A pin. Metal. Engraved. A symbol matching the compass face. "That's a vendor badge," Evans said. "Veil Market." "The market doesn't operate in broad daylight," Quinn said. "Or anywhere on the surface." "This is a black site investigation. Forensics hasn't cleared the perimeter yet." Quinn ignored the warning. She crouched again. She lifted the man's wrist. The pulse point. She pressed hard. No heartbeat. She rubbed the skin. Her thumb found a bruise. Purple. Faint. Faint rings on the wrist where chains usually bound a prisoner. "Who found him?" Quinn asked. "Bystanders. Someone called 999." "Bystanders don't have bone tokens." Quinn pointed to the ground near the head. A shard of something. White. Porous. A tooth fragment? Or bone dust. She scooped it into a plastic bag. "Don't you dare," Evans said. "Evidence," Quinn said. She didn't put the bag down. She looked at the compass again. "This thing hums. I hear it." "You need a hearing test." "The market moves locations every full moon," Quinn said, quoting the rumors. "Tonight is waxing gibbous. Three days away." "It's still Wednesday." "The market doesn't follow the calendar. It follows the moon phases." Quinn stood and brushed dirt from her coat. "Morris would have loved this." Evans stiffened. "Leave Morris out of this." "He knew something went wrong with the case," Quinn said. "He found similar signatures." "He died." "He died because he got too close to the Veil." Quinn pocketed the bone dust bag. She kept the compass in her hand. The needle swung back toward the tunnel. It hummed louder. "Let's call for tech to bag this," Evans said. "No," Quinn said. "If we move the compass, the needle swings random." "Then we secure the perimeter?" "The perimeter is wrong." Quinn walked toward the ticket office. The windows were dark. The shadows stretched long. "This spot isn't the dead zone. It's the entry." Evans followed her. "I'm not authorizing that." "Check your badge reader, Evans. The scanner doesn't work." Quinn tapped the wall. A low vibration traveled through the concrete. It matched the hum of the brass compass. "I checked this morning." "Check it again." Quinn stopped at the ticket barrier. The metal arm was rusted. She grabbed it. "The market sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances." "Corridors don't sell substances, Harlow." "Vendors do." The compass in her hand spun faster. The needle pointed upward now. Toward the ceiling. Toward the street above. "You want to call for the coroner?" Evans asked. "I want to know why the blood didn't hit the tiles." Quinn knelt by the barrier. A spot on the metal. Wet. Dark. "There is residue. Not blood. Something sticky." She wiped her finger on the bar. She held it up. It glowed faintly before vanishing. "That's grease," Evans said. "Old machinery." "It's oil." Quinn stared at her finger. "Thermal residue. Something heated this area rapidly." "Heat source?" "Rift energy." Quinn looked at Evans. Her expression hardened. "The needle pointed to the body. Then the tunnel. Then the ceiling. It's tracking flow." "Flow of what?" "Life." Quinn stood up. She held the compass up to the fluorescent light. The etched lines glowed green. "He didn't die of natural causes. He died of exposure." "Exposure to what?" "To the market." Quinn looked at the dark tunnel again. The shadows seemed to deepen, pulling toward the tracks. "He came to sell. Someone stole his goods. Then they took him." "Theft doesn't explain the physics," Evans said. "The physics is the evidence." Quinn pocketed the compass. She didn't bag it. "Keep your tape in." "I can't leave the body." "Then leave this." She tossed the plastic bag of bone dust to Evans. He fumbled it. "It's an entry token fragment. It belongs here." Evans caught the bag. He looked at Quinn. "You're violating standard procedures." "Standard procedures won't stop the tide." Quinn walked to the edge of the platform. The hum from the tunnel got louder. The air grew heavy. "Where are you going?" Evans shouted. "To find who opened the door." Quinn looked back. Her brown eyes narrowed under the dim light. "And I'm bringing you with me." The compass in her pocket ticked once. Sharp and precise. She stepped over the yellow tape.
created_at"2026-02-26T00:02:02.873Z" 2/26/2026, 12:02:02 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags46
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences95
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.968
rawRatio0.022
effectiveRatio0.021
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1318
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"scanned"
count2
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"standard"
count2
highlights
0"scanned"
1"gloom"
2"etched"
3"silence"
4"echoed"
5"vibrated"
6"pulse"
7"standard"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences158
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences207
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1318
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount771
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity4.67
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Underground1
Harlow1
Quinn36
Evans22
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Evans"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1318
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences207
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean17.34
std13.04
cv0.752
sampleLengths
068
121
230
311
429
551
623
738
85
929
106
1131
1216
1311
149
1542
163
1732
1814
197
201
2120
2230
238
2433
2514
2610
2732
288
2914
3012
3142
325
334
3432
355
3621
375
3819
393
4024
417
4214
432
4433
459
4612
475
4827
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences158
matches
0"was rusted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs153
matches
0"wasn't pointing"
1"was pointing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences207
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount775
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.024516129032258065
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005161290322580645
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences207
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences207
mean6.37
std3.85
cv0.605
sampleLengths
014
117
217
310
410
55
611
75
83
95
107
116
126
133
144
157
166
173
1820
195
207
2114
226
236
245
258
268
276
289
298
308
314
3212
336
345
355
363
376
381
398
406
413
423
437
444
453
464
4713
489
497
50.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.34782608695652173
totalSentences207
uniqueOpeners72
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.93% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences119
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"He stood near the body,"
2"She knelt by the corpse."
3"His mouth hung open, tongue"
4"Her brown eyes scanned the"
5"He stepped forward."
6"She pulled a penlight from"
7"She moved closer to the"
8"Her military precision guided her"
9"She didn't touch the body."
10"She scanned the concrete beneath"
11"His boots clicked on the"
12"Her gaze locked on the"
13"It lay palm up."
14"It sat there like it"
15"She reached out."
16"She tilted the object."
17"It wasn't pointing north."
18"It pointed toward the dark"
19"Her joints cracked."
ratio0.42
10.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences119
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"She adjusted the worn leather"
3"Salt-and-pepper hair framed a sharp"
4"Sergeant Evans said"
5"He stood near the body,"
6"Quinn ignored him."
7"She knelt by the corpse."
8"A man lay sprawled near"
9"His mouth hung open, tongue"
10"Her brown eyes scanned the"
11"He stepped forward."
12"She pulled a penlight from"
13"The beam cut through the"
14"She moved closer to the"
15"Her military precision guided her"
16"She didn't touch the body."
17"She scanned the concrete beneath"
18"His boots clicked on the"
19"Quinn ignored the gap between"
ratio0.899
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences11
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Yellow police tape stretched across the platform, fluttering in a draft that shouldn’t exist three stories underground."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags46
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags25
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
1"Evans argued (argue)"
2"Quinn snapped (snap)"
3"Evans shouted (shout)"
dialogueSentences95
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.16
effectiveRatio0.084
80.9596%