Run: 2026-02-26-01KJBM4BY9ZPTYAVMNHVTPEC8K

Run Details

Duration:
31.2s
Cost:
$0.009435
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked in succession, three distinct metal sounds that echoed in the small vestibule. Rory pulled the chain back with a shaking hand before twisting the handle. She should have ignored him. She really should have. The rain in London always tasted like soot, but the air on Brick Lane was sharper, wetter, carrying the scent of cumin and frying oil from the curry house below. The door swung inward. Lucien stood in the hallway light, water beading on the shoulders of his tailored charcoal suit. He looked like a knife that had somehow managed to cut through the rain. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, but the tips of his hair were dark with moisture. One amber eye and one black eye fixed on her, the heterochromatic gaze doing something terrible to her insides. I told you to leave London, Rory said. Her voice was too steady, too cold. She gripped the frame of the door. I told you to listen to me, Lucien replied. His voice was smooth, a low baritone that usually made her skin hum. Now it only made her ache. He held a long, thin umbrella in his right hand, resting the ivory handle against his palm. The tip of his cane was planted firmly on the wet concrete of the step. It's not like that. Is it not? Lucien didn't step in. He hovered in the threshold, a silhouette of a man who knew exactly how much damage he could do. He was a fixer in the supernatural underworld, and here he was, standing in her personal space with the kind of intent that made Rory forget about the delivery bags she'd carried earlier that day. She could feel the heat of the curry house below rising through the floorboards, mingling with the chill of the night. You have nowhere else to go? she asked, stepping back. She didn't want him to come in. She needed the door between them to remain closed, or open, anything but that liminal space where he was half-in and half-out. I have nowhere else to go that is safe. And you know why. Rory swallowed. She moved to close the door, but Lucien's hand shot out. The palm was warm, firm. He pressed against the wood, stopping the swing. The movement was casual, but it was enough to make her breath hitch. He never raised his voice. He never needed to. Ptolemy meowed from the living room, the sound muffled by the distance of the hallway. The tabby cat circled Lucien's ankles, a silent judge of the situation. Rory hadn't let Ptolemy out for anyone since Evan, since the bruises, since the fear that turned her into something smaller than she had to be. I'm not in the mood for a game, Lucien. It isn't a game, Rory. It's a request. The word hung there. Request. It was the one thing Lucien Moreau rarely used. He took things. He fixed problems. He didn't ask. You're not a fixer for me anymore, she said. The words tasted like ash. They had parted on complicated terms, yes, but this wasn't just a professional distance. It was the kind of silence that happens when you look at someone who knew the worst of you and you didn't want to look back at them for fear of what they might see. He stepped inside. The door clicked shut behind him, locking with a soft thud. The rain was immediately cut off. The smell of his cologne—something expensive, dark, with hints of wood and iron—mixed with the smell of wet wool. The flat was a cramped one-bedroom, a testament to her inability to afford anything bigger. Every surface was covered with books, scrolls, and research notes. It was a chaotic archive of the life she was building for herself, a fortress of information against a world that wanted to keep her out. Lucien's presence made the space shrink. Where are you staying? she asked, forcing her gaze to the stack of invoices on the coffee table. I'm staying where I can work. You can't work here. I have a shift at Silas' in an hour. Silas is a distraction, Lucien said. He moved into the room, the cane tapping rhythmically against the wood. He stopped just inside the perimeter of the circle of light from the lamp. His suit jacket was off, hanging over his arm. Underneath, a black shirt, tailored perfectly. He looked like a man who could command a boardroom and a demon hound with equal authority. I don't need your protection, Rory said. She felt the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throb where her pulse beat. It was a phantom sensation from the last time he had touched her, not a wound on her skin. I'm not here to protect you. I'm here to tell you that they're close. Her heart stuttered. The air in the room seemed to drop ten degrees. Who? The men who sent me here. They aren't satisfied with the silence. Lucien reached out and touched the spine of a book on the table. His fingers, pale and long, brushed the cover. He didn't look at her. He looked at the paper, the ink, the mess of her life. I can handle it myself, she said. But she knew she couldn't. That was the thing about him, the thing that had driven her away. He was the only person in London who understood what she was fighting. He turned then, and the movement was fluid. He stepped closer, into her space. The amber eye caught the light, the black one swallowing it. Rory felt the heat of him. You always think you can handle it alone, he said. It was the most honest thing he had ever said. That's why I'm here, he continued. Because I know you'll try. But the price is too high this time. Rory stepped back until her hips hit the edge of the sofa. The cushions were worn, the fabric soft from years of use. She looked up at him. He was a man of the demon realm of Avaros, yet he was here, in this cramped flat, wearing a suit that cost more than her car. Why are you really here? she asked. Lucien looked down at her. His expression didn't change, but the air shifted. He stepped in again, closing the gap until she could see the faint trace of a smile, a ghost of the amusement that used to draw her in. Because I want to, he said. The words were simple. Brutal. There was no subtext, no lie. Rory's throat tightened. She looked away, her breath catching in a way that felt like betrayal. She turned back to him, her blue eyes wide, bright. You don't get to, she whispered. I know. He reached out, his hand hovering near her face, not touching. He could have. He could have touched her face, her shoulder, the scar on her wrist, and the world wouldn't have ended. But he didn't. He pulled his hand back, sliding it into his pocket. I'll be here for a few days. Just to work? Just to work. Lucien turned toward the door again, the cane clicking against the floor. Rory watched him. She wanted to stop him. She wanted to tell him to stay, to tell him that she was tired of the silence, of the fear, of the constant running. But the door was still in the other room. The cat was still in the hallway. The rain was still falling outside. If you're here, I expect you to stay out of my way, she said. I expect the same of you, he replied. He paused with his hand on the doorknob. He glanced back, the heterochromatic gaze locking onto hers. One eye bright, one dark. Two truths. I'm not going anywhere, he said. He opened the door. The sound of the street filled the room again—the hum of traffic, the distant wail of a siren, the smell of cumin and wet stone. He stepped out, disappearing into the rain. Rory stood in the doorway, listening until his footsteps faded, until the only thing left was the sound of her own breathing and the low hum of the flat. She closed the door. She turned the deadbolts. She leaned her forehead against the wood. The flat was quiet. Too quiet. She walked to the table. The book Lucien had touched was still on the edge. She picked it up. It was heavy. She set it down. She didn't know why he had come. She didn't know why he had left. She only knew that for the first time in years, the silence wasn't empty. It was full of him. She exhaled. A long, shuddering breath. Rory looked toward the kitchen. She needed tea. She needed to forget. She walked to the kettle. She turned the handle. The water began to boil. The sound was loud in the quiet flat. She listened to the steam rise. She listened to the rain. And she waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"firmly"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"testament"
count1
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"throb"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"firmly"
2"could feel"
3"chill"
4"silence"
5"testament"
6"chaotic"
7"throb"
8"pulse"
9"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences169
matches(empty)
83.69% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences169
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences169
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1521
ratio0
matches(empty)
8.33% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions7
matches
0"I told you to leave London, Rory said."
1"I told you to listen to me, Lucien replied."
2"Silas is a distraction, Lucien said."
3"I can handle it myself, she said."
4"You always think you can handle it alone, he said."
5"Because I want to, he said."
6"I expect the same of you, he replied."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1517
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London3
Brick1
Lane1
Rory13
Lucien13
Ptolemy2
Evan1
Moreau1
Silas1
Avaros1
You5
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Evan"
4"Moreau"
5"Silas"
6"You"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences104
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"tasted like soot, but the air on Brick La"
1"looked like a knife that had somehow mana"
2"looked like a man who could command a boa"
3"felt like betrayal"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.657
wordCount1521
matches
0"not a strand out of place, but the tips of his hair were dark with moisture"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences169
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean27.16
std22.59
cv0.832
sampleLengths
067
14
272
322
460
54
63
779
839
913
1048
1153
129
138
1423
1563
1639
1757
1818
196
2013
2164
2241
2314
2414
2512
2638
2738
2831
2920
3019
3155
327
3341
346
3511
3626
376
382
3946
407
413
423
4366
4414
4532
466
4765
4815
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences169
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was planted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs284
matches
0"was, standing"
1"was building"
2"was fighting"
3"was still falling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences169
ratio0.012
matches
0"The smell of his cologne—something expensive, dark, with hints of wood and iron—mixed with the smell of wet wool."
1"The sound of the street filled the room again—the hum of traffic, the distant wail of a siren, the smell of cumin and wet stone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount701
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.028530670470756064
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.009985734664764621
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences169
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences169
mean9
std6.76
cv0.751
sampleLengths
015
113
25
34
430
54
616
714
823
919
108
117
127
139
1413
156
1617
1715
184
193
204
2119
2235
2321
246
254
267
2722
289
294
302
3111
325
338
3413
355
364
3715
3812
3926
409
415
423
434
441
459
463
473
483
499
29.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats34
diversityRatio0.1952662721893491
totalSentences169
uniqueOpeners33
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences160
matches
0"Just to work?"
1"Just to work."
ratio0.013
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount96
totalSentences160
matches
0"She should have ignored him."
1"She really should have."
2"He looked like a knife"
3"His platinum blond hair was"
4"I told you to leave"
5"Her voice was too steady,"
6"She gripped the frame of"
7"I told you to listen"
8"His voice was smooth, a"
9"He held a long, thin"
10"It's not like that."
11"He hovered in the threshold,"
12"He was a fixer in"
13"She could feel the heat"
14"You have nowhere else to"
15"she asked, stepping back."
16"She didn't want him to"
17"She needed the door between"
18"I have nowhere else to"
19"She moved to close the"
ratio0.6
19.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount141
totalSentences160
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked in succession,"
1"Rory pulled the chain back"
2"She should have ignored him."
3"She really should have."
4"The rain in London always"
5"The door swung inward."
6"Lucien stood in the hallway"
7"He looked like a knife"
8"His platinum blond hair was"
9"I told you to leave"
10"Her voice was too steady,"
11"She gripped the frame of"
12"I told you to listen"
13"His voice was smooth, a"
14"He held a long, thin"
15"The tip of his cane"
16"It's not like that."
17"Lucien didn't step in."
18"He hovered in the threshold,"
19"He was a fixer in"
ratio0.881
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences160
matches
0"Now it only made her"
1"Because I know you'll try."
2"Because I want to, he"
3"If you're here, I expect"
ratio0.025
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He was a fixer in the supernatural underworld, and here he was, standing in her personal space with the kind of intent that made Rory forget about the delivery …"
1"It was a chaotic archive of the life she was building for herself, a fortress of information against a world that wanted to keep her out."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.8098%