Run: 2026-02-26-01KJBMB2SKQKWQDPEFFE7JR9ND

Run Details

Duration:
42.2s
Cost:
$0.013208
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gate clicked shut behind Aurora. The sound echoed too loudly in the dead air. She stood within the ring of ancient oak standing stones. The air inside the Fae Grove tasted different. Metallic. Sweet. Like rotting fruit. Night wrapped around the clearing, but the darkness held a strange luminescence. Wildflowers bloomed in the mud at her boots. Petals glowed with a faint bioluminescence. They should have been dormant this time of year. Aurora touched the silver chain at her throat. The Heartstone Pendant rested against her sternum. It hummed. A low vibration traveled up her arm. The gemstone pulsed with a deep crimson light. It beat in time with her own heart. She scanned the perimeter. The trees stood too straight. Their branches formed a lattice overhead, blocking the moon. Shadows pooled between the roots. They shifted when she looked away. "Hello?" Her voice dropped flat. No echo returned. The silence swallowed the word whole. She tightened her grip on the pendant. The metal grew hot against her skin. She pulled it free from her shirt. The crimson stone flared. Something rustled in the undergrowth to her left. A dry snap of a twig. "Show yourself." Aurora took a step forward. Her boots crunched on the gravel path. The gravel didn't belong here. This was a pocket between realms. The ground should have been soft moss. She looked down. The stones were grey and sharp. They cut into the soles of her trainers. The pendant pulsed again. Faster this time. Heat seeped into her palm. She tucked it back under her shirt. The warmth spread down her chest. It settled in her stomach. She walked toward the center of the grove. The standing stones formed a perfect circle. Each one towered over her. Bark peeled away in long strips. The wood looked fresh, like the trees were bleeding. A scent of ozone drifted through the air. It stung her nose. "Is anyone there?" The question hung in the air. A bird called from the canopy. The sound was wrong. It lacked the rhythm of a song. It sounded like a machine grinding metal. Aurora stopped. She pressed her back against the nearest stone. The wood felt warm. Too warm. Like skin. She pushed off and moved away. Her left wrist tingled. The small crescent-shaped scar from her childhood accident throbbed. She rubbed the mark. The pain grounded her. She needed to find the source of the portal. The benefactor who gave her the pendant said it would lead her here. They said the time dilation would protect her. They lied. Time felt thick here. Minutes stretched into hours. Her watch had stopped at 11:59 PM. A low hum vibrated through the ground. It traveled up her legs. Her teeth chattered. The air temperature dropped. Frost coated the wildflowers. They didn't freeze. They turned black. "Stop it." She spoke to the grove. The trees didn't answer. A shadow detached itself from the trunk of a large oak. It stood upright. It had no face. It wore the shape of a person. Aurora drew her breath in sharply. Her hand went to her pocket. She pulled out the pepper spray. She kept it for delivery runs. It felt useless here. "Get back." The figure stepped forward. It moved without sound. No leaves crunched. No grass bent. It glided over the earth. The pendant burned against her chest. It became too hot to touch. She ripped the chain from her neck. The stone hovered in her hand. It pointed toward the figure. The figure stopped. It tilted its head. A sound came from the shape. A wet click. Like a throat clearing itself. Aurora backed away. Her heel caught on a root. She stumbled. The pendant flew from her hand. It landed in the dirt. The crimson light flared, illuminating the clearing. The figure was not alone. Shadows moved between the other stones. Dozens of them. They stood in a ring. They watched her. None of them breathed. None of them blinked. "Where is Eva?" Aurora shouted. She needed to anchor herself to reality. Her friend had sent her here. She needed to know if Eva was safe. The figure in front of her raised an arm. The hand elongated. Fingers stretched. They ended in points of black glass. The hand pointed at the pendant. Aurora scrambled for the stone. Her fingers closed around the silver chain. The heat seared her palm. She didn't let go. She stood up. The pendant pulled at her hand. It wanted to go back to the figure. She shoved it into her pocket. The figure lunged. Aurora rolled to the side. She hit the ground hard. Dirt filled her mouth. She spat it out. The figure hovered over her spot. It reached down. The glass fingers grazed the air where her head had been. She kicked out. Her boot connected with the figure's shin. It made a sound like breaking pottery. The figure didn't fall. It didn't feel pain. It straightened. "Leave me alone." The figure stepped closer. The air smelled of sulfur. It burned her lungs. She scrambled backward. Her hands dug into the soil. She found a rock. It was jagged and heavy. She held the rock up. Her knuckles turned white. The pendant in her pocket pulsed against her thigh. It beat like a second heart. The figure stopped. It lowered its arm. The glass fingers retracted. The shape of the face shifted. It formed a mouth. The mouth opened. "Rory." The voice sounded like her own. It sounded like her father. It sounded like her ex, Evan. Aurora froze. The rock slipped from her fingers. It hit the ground with a dull thud. "Who are you?" The figure took another step. It was close enough to touch. She could feel the cold radiating from it. It smelled of old books and dust. "You brought us the key." The figure pointed at her pocket. The pendant. "I didn't bring anything." "You carried the stone. You opened the door." Aurora backed up until her spine hit the standing stone. The wood pressed into her shoulder blades. It felt alive. It pulsed with the same rhythm as the pendant. "I want to go home." The figure tilted its head. The mouth stretched wider. It showed too many teeth. They were sharp and yellow. "Home is gone." The ground shook. The wildflowers turned to ash. The standing stones groaned. The grove began to close in. The trees leaned toward her. The branches tangled. Aurora pulled the pendant from her pocket. She held it up. The crimson light blinded her. "Take it." She threw the stone at the figure. It sailed through the air. The figure caught it. The light died. The grove plunged into darkness. Aurora heard the sound of tearing metal. She heard the sound of her own scream. She didn't open her eyes. She pressed her hands over her ears. The silence returned. She opened one eye. The figure stood in the center of the grove. It held the pendant. It looked at her. "Thank you." The figure turned. It walked into the shadows. The other figures followed. They vanished one by one. Aurora stood alone. The pendant was gone. The stones stood silent. The wildflowers were dead. She looked at her wrist. The scar burned. She looked at her watch. The hands spun backward. "Where am I?" The trees answered. They whispered her name.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1242
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"silence"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"throbbed"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"pulsed"
2"scanned"
3"echo"
4"silence"
5"warmth"
6"stomach"
7"perfect"
8"throbbed"
9"vibrated"
10"could feel"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences225
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences225
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences242
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen13
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1242
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.18% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1190
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.18
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora14
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Eva1
Evan1
Like3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Pendant"
2"Eva"
3"Evan"
4"Like"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.912
windowScore1
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sounded like a machine grinding metal"
1"sounded like her own"
2"sounded like her ex, Evan"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1242
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences242
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean20.36
std15.75
cv0.774
sampleLengths
074
140
229
31
438
514
62
747
830
947
103
1130
1245
1347
1429
152
1634
1728
182
1949
2021
2129
225
2325
243
2523
2627
2738
289
2938
3027
313
3231
3324
3424
351
3617
3716
383
3926
405
418
424
438
4429
455
4619
473
4826
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences225
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs239
matches
0"were bleeding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences242
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1191
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.014273719563392108
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0016792611251049538
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences242
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences242
mean5.13
std2.13
cv0.415
sampleLengths
07
19
210
38
41
51
63
712
88
96
109
118
127
132
147
158
168
174
185
199
205
216
221
234
243
256
267
277
287
294
308
316
322
335
347
355
366
377
383
396
408
414
423
435
447
456
465
478
487
495
36.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats33
diversityRatio0.18181818181818182
totalSentences242
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences212
matches(empty)
ratio0
36.98% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount97
totalSentences212
matches
0"She stood within the ring"
1"They should have been dormant"
2"It beat in time with"
3"She scanned the perimeter."
4"Their branches formed a lattice"
5"They shifted when she looked"
6"Her voice dropped flat."
7"She tightened her grip on"
8"She pulled it free from"
9"Her boots crunched on the"
10"She looked down."
11"They cut into the soles"
12"She tucked it back under"
13"It settled in her stomach."
14"She walked toward the center"
15"It stung her nose."
16"It lacked the rhythm of"
17"It sounded like a machine"
18"She pressed her back against"
19"She pushed off and moved"
ratio0.458
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount206
totalSentences212
matches
0"The iron gate clicked shut"
1"The sound echoed too loudly"
2"She stood within the ring"
3"The air inside the Fae"
4"Night wrapped around the clearing,"
5"Wildflowers bloomed in the mud"
6"Petals glowed with a faint"
7"They should have been dormant"
8"Aurora touched the silver chain"
9"The Heartstone Pendant rested against"
10"A low vibration traveled up"
11"The gemstone pulsed with a"
12"It beat in time with"
13"She scanned the perimeter."
14"The trees stood too straight."
15"Their branches formed a lattice"
16"Shadows pooled between the roots."
17"They shifted when she looked"
18"Her voice dropped flat."
19"The silence swallowed the word"
ratio0.972
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences212
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences7
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The benefactor who gave her the pendant said it would lead her here."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.1156%