Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRTTSFD7348D0ZVJ9DMKJA

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
36.3s
Cost:
$0.000213
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain fell in sheets over Soho, turning cobblestones to black glass and streetlamps to smears of gold. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles as she pursued the figure ahead—Tomas Herrera, cloak dark against the wet night, moving with the loose-limbed grace of someone who’d spent years patching wounds in shadows. His Saint Christopher medallion caught the neon glow of The Raven’s Nest sign, a green pulse that flickered like a warning. Harlow’s leather watch ticked against her wrist, each beat a reminder of the hour, of the case that had gnawed at her for eighteen years. Three years since DS Morris vanished, swallowed by something that wore the shape of a man but breathed like a storm. The alley behind the bar narrowed, walls sweating moss. Tomas ducked into a side passage, rain hissing where it struck the iron grate. Harlow followed, her breath a sharp line in the damp air. The secret room behind the bookshelf was no more than a closet, but the way Tomas paused—shoulder brushing the spine of a leather-bound atlas—spoke of ritual. She stepped inside, boots echoing on concrete. The scent hit first: burnt sage and iron, then something sweeter, like overripe figs rotting in sunlight. Shelves bowed under the weight of maps marked with symbols she didn’t recognize, their edges frayed like old scars. A woman in a hooded cloak turned from a stall selling vials of liquid shadow; her eyes glowed faintly, pupils slit like a cat’s. Tomas reached for her, but Harlow’s hand flew to the grip of her sidearm. The woman’s lips parted, revealing teeth too sharp, and Harlow understood. This wasn’t just a market—it was a cathedral for things that preyed on the living. “You’re trespassing,” Harlow said, voice low, steady. Her gaze swept the room. A table held a human heart suspended in amber fluid, veins pulsing faintly. Another shelf displayed a child’s doll stitched with human hair, its face smeared with what looked like dried blood. Tomas’s scar throbbed—a reminder of the knife that had nearly killed him, the night he’d learned some wounds don’t close. He met her eyes, calm, almost amused. “You think I’m here to arrest you? Or to beg?” His accent carried the warmth of Seville, but his hands were steady, calloused from years of holding lives in his palms. “You’re looking for answers. I’ve got questions.” Harlow’s jaw tightened. The backroom reeked of desperation, of people trading pieces of themselves for power they couldn’t name. She’d seen this before—in the case of the girl who’d sold her memories to become invisible, in the man who’d traded his shadow for a second chance. The Raven’s Nest had always been a threshold, a place where the city’s rot festered and bloomed. Tomas knew this. He’d lived here longer than she did, buried himself in its underbelly like a man trying to drown his ghosts. But why bring her here? To force her to see what he’d seen in Morris’s eyes the night he died—the thing that had whispered in his ear, promising answers if he’d just look closer. A bell chimed overhead, its tone warped, as if sung through water. The woman in the hooded cloak stepped forward, her voice a rasp like dry leaves. “Detective Quinn. You shouldn’t be here.” Her fingers traced the edge of a map, pointing to a location marked only with a symbol: a raven devouring its own tail. Harlow’s watch ticked faster. She’d heard rumors of the Veil Market, the underground bazaar that moved with the moon, trading in things that made men scream. But this… this was different. This felt like a trap, or a test. Tomas watched her, his expression unreadable. “You want to know what happened to Morris,” he said quietly. “But some doors, once opened, can’t be closed.” Harlow’s hand drifted to her gun, but she hesitated. The air tasted metallic, like blood on the tongue. She thought of Morris’s last words—*Look deeper*—and the way his knees had buckled mid-sentence, as if something inside him had turned against itself. Tomas had been there, hadn’t he? Had he seen it too? The scar on his arm throbbed again, a phantom pain. “I’ll find him,” she said, though the words felt hollow. The city had swallowed too many truths, too many lies. She’d spent eighteen years chasing shadows, and now she stood at the edge of one so vast it had its own gravity. The woman in the hooded cloak smiled, revealing teeth too white, too sharp. “He’s not here,” she said, but her eyes lingered on Harlow, calculating. “But you are. And you’re close.” She gestured to a door at the far end of the room, its wood carved with ravens mid-flight. Behind it, a staircase spiraled down into darkness, lit by candles that burned blue. Tomas’s breath hitched, a small sound like a sigh. “The Veil Market,” he murmured. “They say it’s where the old gods go to die. Or be born.” Harlow’s boots shifted, weight pressing forward. The staircase called to her, a siren song of secrets. But the air grew colder, the kind of cold that seeped into bones and whispered of things best left buried. She glanced at Tomas—his posture tense, hand hovering near the medallion at his throat. He knew this place. Knew its dangers. Yet he stood beside her, a silent ally in a war she didn’t understand. The choice hung between them: turn back, leave the Nest’s mysteries untouched, or descend into the dark where even the rain forgot to fall. The woman’s laughter rang out, high and brittle. “Decide quickly,” she said. “The Veil moves when the moon is full. And tonight… it’s hungry.” Harlow’s watch screamed time. She thought of Morris, of the way his eyes had gone wide and glassy the day he died, as if he’d seen something that shattered his mind. She thought of Tomas, of the way he’d held her hand the night after Morris vanished, as if anchoring her to the world of the living. The staircase yawned, its steps slick with condensation. Somewhere below, a bell tolled—a sound like a funeral knell. Tomas reached for her arm, his touch warm despite the chill. “Come with me,” he said. “I’ll show you what they did to him. Show you why you keep chasing ghosts.” His eyes held hers, pleading. “Or stay here, and let the city eat you alive.” The choice was clear, but not simple. The Veil Market promised answers, but at what cost? Harlow’s jaw set, she stepped toward the stairs. The woman’s smile widened. The rain outside fell harder, as if the sky itself wept for what was coming.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.083
95.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1120
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1120
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count2
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"throbbed"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"calculating"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"flickered"
2"reminder"
3"echoing"
4"weight"
5"throbbed"
6"warmth"
7"traced"
8"unreadable"
9"calculating"
10"shattered"
11"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
88.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences82
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1111
ratio0.002
matches
0"Look deeper"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
85.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1000
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow13
Quinn1
Tomas12
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Raven2
Nest3
Morris5
Seville1
Veil2
Market2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomas"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Raven"
7"Nest"
8"Morris"
9"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"Seville"
globalScore0.85
windowScore1
27.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like dried blood"
1"felt like a trap, or a test"
2"as if anchoring her to the world of the living"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.9
wordCount1111
matches
0"not here,” she said, but her eyes lingered on Harlow, calculating"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
13.04% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean111.1
std21.74
cv0.196
sampleLengths
0118
1167
2109
3120
4120
5104
690
795
899
989
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs188
matches
0"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences82
ratio0.122
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles as she pursued the figure ahead—Tomas Herrera, cloak dark against the wet night, moving with the loose-limbed grace of someone who’d spent years patching wounds in shadows."
1"The secret room behind the bookshelf was no more than a closet, but the way Tomas paused—shoulder brushing the spine of a leather-bound atlas—spoke of ritual."
2"A woman in a hooded cloak turned from a stall selling vials of liquid shadow; her eyes glowed faintly, pupils slit like a cat’s."
3"This wasn’t just a market—it was a cathedral for things that preyed on the living."
4"Tomas’s scar throbbed—a reminder of the knife that had nearly killed him, the night he’d learned some wounds don’t close."
5"She’d seen this before—in the case of the girl who’d sold her memories to become invisible, in the man who’d traded his shadow for a second chance."
6"To force her to see what he’d seen in Morris’s eyes the night he died—the thing that had whispered in his ear, promising answers if he’d just look closer."
7"She thought of Morris’s last words—*Look deeper*—and the way his knees had buckled mid-sentence, as if something inside him had turned against itself."
8"She glanced at Tomas—his posture tense, hand hovering near the medallion at his throat."
9"Somewhere below, a bell tolled—a sound like a funeral knell."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1013
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.028627838104639685
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006910167818361303
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences82
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences82
mean13.55
std7.79
cv0.575
sampleLengths
017
134
221
325
421
59
614
711
826
97
1017
1119
1224
1314
1411
1515
167
175
1813
1919
2020
217
2231
237
243
2516
2627
2717
283
2920
305
3129
3212
3315
3429
354
3622
372
383
398
406
4111
428
439
449
4523
466
475
4810
4910
48.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.32926829268292684
totalSentences82
uniqueOpeners27
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Somewhere below, a bell tolled—a"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences75
matches
0"His Saint Christopher medallion caught"
1"She stepped inside, boots echoing"
2"Her gaze swept the room."
3"He met her eyes, calm,"
4"His accent carried the warmth"
5"She’d seen this before—in the"
6"He’d lived here longer than"
7"Her fingers traced the edge"
8"She’d heard rumors of the"
9"he said quietly"
10"She thought of Morris’s last"
11"she said, though the words"
12"She’d spent eighteen years chasing"
13"she said, but her eyes"
14"She gestured to a door"
15"She glanced at Tomas—his posture"
16"He knew this place."
17"She thought of Morris, of"
18"She thought of Tomas, of"
19"His eyes held hers, pleading"
ratio0.267
20.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences75
matches
0"Rain fell in sheets over"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed"
2"His Saint Christopher medallion caught"
3"Harlow’s leather watch ticked against"
4"The alley behind the bar"
5"Tomas ducked into a side"
6"Harlow followed, her breath a"
7"The secret room behind the"
8"She stepped inside, boots echoing"
9"The scent hit first: burnt"
10"Shelves bowed under the weight"
11"A woman in a hooded"
12"Tomas reached for her, but"
13"The woman’s lips parted, revealing"
14"This wasn’t just a market—it"
15"Harlow said, voice low, steady"
16"Her gaze swept the room."
17"A table held a human"
18"Another shelf displayed a child’s"
19"Tomas’s scar throbbed—a reminder of"
ratio0.88
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"To force her to see"
ratio0.013
38.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles as she pursued the figure ahead—Tomas Herrera, cloak dark against the wet night, moving with the loose-l…"
1"His Saint Christopher medallion caught the neon glow of The Raven’s Nest sign, a green pulse that flickered like a warning."
2"To force her to see what he’d seen in Morris’s eyes the night he died—the thing that had whispered in his ear, promising answers if he’d just look closer."
3"She thought of Morris’s last words—*Look deeper*—and the way his knees had buckled mid-sentence, as if something inside him had turned against itself."
4"She thought of Morris, of the way his eyes had gone wide and glassy the day he died, as if he’d seen something that shattered his mind."
5"She thought of Tomas, of the way he’d held her hand the night after Morris vanished, as if anchoring her to the world of the living."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Harlow said, voice low, steady"
1"His accent carried, but his hands were steady, calloused from years of holding lives in his palms"
2"she said, though the words felt hollow"
3"she said, but her eyes lingered on Harlow, calculating"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Harlow’s watch screamed (scream)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
72.8497%