Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRTTSJ4Z3J30QSGC2ZG722

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
36.8s
Cost:
$0.000224
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the rusted grates of the abandoned Tube tunnel. Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the mouth of the cavernous space, her leather watch catching the dim glow of a single lantern. The air smelled of damp stone and something sharper—ozone, maybe, or burnt incense. She adjusted her grip on the Veil Compass strapped to her wrist. Its brass casing was cool against her skin, the protective sigils etched into its face humming faintly. Eva Kowalski hovered near the entrance, her green eyes scanning the shadows. Her curly red hair stuck up in uneven tufts. She clutched a worn leather satchel tighter. “This isn’t right,” she muttered. “No footprints. No signs of struggle. Just… empty.” Harlow nodded, stepping deeper into the tunnel. The walls were slick with condensation. A faint glow emanated from a corner where a body lay sprawled on the floor. The victim wore a tattered coat, its fabric stitched with symbols that looked almost like runes. Harlow knelt beside it, gloved fingers brushing the neck. The skin was cold but unmarked. No wounds. No blood. Just a small silver coin pressed into the palm. “What’s the coin?” Eva asked, crouching on the other side. Her freckled cheeks flushed as she leaned closer. “It’s not from any currency I’ve seen.” Harlow held up the coin. It was old, its edges worn smooth. “Not a currency. A key. Or a marker.” She turned it over in her hand. The sigils on the compass needle twitched, pointing toward the far wall. “There’s something here. A rift. A portal.” Eva frowned. “Portals? This is a subway tunnel. How do we know there’s anything supernatural?” Harlow didn’t answer immediately. She traced the edge of the coin with her thumb. “The victim’s eyes were open. Not frozen. They were… watching. Like they saw something.” She glanced at Eva. “You study the occult. What does that mean?” Eva hesitated. “It means… the dead don’t just vanish. They leave traces. But this… this feels different.” She gestured to the empty space around them. “No bodies. No blood. Just… absence.” Harlow stood, her sharp jawline tightening. She pulled the compass from her belt and let it spin. The needle spun wildly before settling on a direction. “There’s a rift. Somewhere nearby.” She pointed down a narrow passageway that split off from the main tunnel. “Follow me.” They moved cautiously. The passage was narrower, the walls lined with faded posters advertising forgotten events. One depicted a woman with green eyes standing in front of a swirling vortex. Eva froze. “That’s…” She trailed off. “That’s the same symbol on the victim’s coat.” Harlow stopped. The compass trembled in her hand. “You think this is connected?” Eva nodded slowly. “The Veil Market moves every full moon. Maybe this is… a gateway.” She glanced at the ceiling. “But why leave the body here?” Harlow crouched again, brushing dust from the floor. Beneath the victim’s coat, she found a small vial filled with dark liquid. It shimmered faintly. “Alchemical substance. Banned. Could be a trigger.” She lifted the vial to the light. “Or a message.” Eva’s fingers twitched. “Message from whom? The dead don’t usually leave notes.” Harlow stood, holding up the vial. “Maybe they’re trying to say something. Or warn us.” She turned back to Eva. “We need to find the source of this rift. Before whatever’s on the other side comes through.” They reached the end of the passage. A heavy iron door loomed ahead, its surface carved with the same sigils as the compass. Harlow pressed her palm against it. The metal was cold, but the sigils pulsed faintly. She pulled out a small knife from her boot and sliced her glove. A thin line of blood welled up. The door shuddered. Eva stepped forward. “This isn’t just a door. It’s a threshold.” Harlow nodded. She placed the compass on the ground. The needle spun again, then stilled. “It’s stable. For now.” She turned to Eva. “We go through together. No one else.” Eva hesitated. “You think it’s safe?” Harlow met her gaze. “I don’t know. But I know what happens when we ignore the signs.” She gestured to the tunnel behind them. “The body’s still there. If we leave, it might disappear. Or worse.” Eva exhaled sharply. “Then let’s not leave.” She reached for the door handle. Harlow followed. The air grew colder as they crossed the threshold. The tunnel stretched into darkness, the compass spinning faster now. The sigils on the door began to glow brighter. Inside, the space was vast—a chamber carved into the earth, its walls lined with mirrors. Each mirror reflected a different version of the room: one showed the tunnel as it was, another as it had been decades ago. In the center stood a figure cloaked in shadows. Its face was obscured, but its hands moved with purpose, tracing symbols in the air. Eva gasped. “It’s… a ritual.” Harlow stepped forward. “Whoever it is, they’re channeling something. The rift must be feeding it.” She raised the compass. “If we disrupt the pattern, maybe we can close it.” The figure turned. Its voice echoed, layered and distorted. “You shouldn’t have come.” Eva’s breath hitched. “Who are you?” The figure raised a hand. The mirrors cracked. Harlow lunged, slamming the compass into the floor. The needle spun wildly, then stilled. The mirrors shattered. The figure screamed, dissolving into smoke. Silence fell. The chamber trembled. Harlow grabbed Eva’s arm. “Run.” They sprinted back through the passage. The door slammed shut behind them. The tunnel was empty again, the only sign of the rift a faint glow in the distance. Eva collapsed against the wall, panting. Harlow checked her watch. The moon had set hours ago. “What just happened?” Eva whispered. Harlow stared at the compass. Its needle pointed upward, toward the sky. “Something ancient woke up. And we just stopped it.” She paused. “For now.” Eva looked at the shattered mirrors. “And the victim?” Harlow shook her head. “Gone. Or somewhere else.” She slipped the compass into her pocket. “We’ll need to report this. But not yet. Not until we know more.” Eva nodded. “And the coin?” Harlow smiled faintly. “A key. To something bigger.” She turned toward the exit. “Let’s get out of here before the next full moon.” The rain had stopped. The city lights flickered in the distance. Somewhere beyond the horizon, the Veil Market would move again. But for now, the night belonged to them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.044
86.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1078
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"slowly"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1078
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"trembled"
count2
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"disrupt"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count2
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"scanning"
2"traced"
3"trembled"
4"shimmered"
5"loomed"
6"pulsed"
7"tracing"
8"disrupt"
9"echoed"
10"shattered"
11"silence"
12"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1076
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
18.94% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount763
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.62
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow20
Quinn1
Veil2
Compass1
Kowalski1
Eva20
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Compass"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Market"
places(empty)
globalScore0.189
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1076
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean29.89
std18.84
cv0.63
sampleLengths
075
141
272
325
446
515
640
731
846
944
1013
1126
1241
1312
1437
1561
1611
1730
186
1936
2043
2162
225
2329
2413
256
2631
2710
2845
295
3025
319
3228
335
3423
3529
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"was obscured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences137
ratio0.015
matches
0"The air smelled of damp stone and something sharper—ozone, maybe, or burnt incense."
1"Inside, the space was vast—a chamber carved into the earth, its walls lined with mirrors."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount765
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03137254901960784
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.01568627450980392
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean7.85
std4.98
cv0.635
sampleLengths
011
122
213
312
417
512
69
77
85
98
107
116
1215
1316
149
156
162
172
189
1910
208
217
225
237
2415
2512
267
272
2813
294
3010
3118
328
332
3423
356
366
3711
389
3918
402
413
4213
4314
442
454
468
472
486
495
48.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3284671532846715
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners45
70.18% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"Just a small silver coin"
1"Somewhere beyond the horizon, the"
ratio0.021
89.47% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences95
matches
0"She adjusted her grip on"
1"Its brass casing was cool"
2"Her curly red hair stuck"
3"She clutched a worn leather"
4"Her freckled cheeks flushed as"
5"It was old, its edges"
6"She turned it over in"
7"She traced the edge of"
8"She glanced at Eva"
9"She gestured to the empty"
10"She pulled the compass from"
11"She pointed down a narrow"
12"They moved cautiously."
13"She trailed off"
14"She glanced at the ceiling"
15"It shimmered faintly."
16"She lifted the vial to"
17"She turned back to Eva"
18"They reached the end of"
19"She pulled out a small"
ratio0.326
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences95
matches
0"Rain lashed against the rusted"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood at"
2"The air smelled of damp"
3"She adjusted her grip on"
4"Its brass casing was cool"
5"Eva Kowalski hovered near the"
6"Her curly red hair stuck"
7"She clutched a worn leather"
8"Harlow nodded, stepping deeper into"
9"The walls were slick with"
10"A faint glow emanated from"
11"The victim wore a tattered"
12"Harlow knelt beside it, gloved"
13"The skin was cold but"
14"Eva asked, crouching on the"
15"Her freckled cheeks flushed as"
16"Harlow held up the coin."
17"It was old, its edges"
18"She turned it over in"
19"The sigils on the compass"
ratio0.926
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.089
84.7758%