| 84.06% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said suddenly [suddenly]" | | 1 | "His voice cracked slightly [slightly]" | | 2 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 3 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 69 | | tagDensity | 0.29 | | leniency | 0.58 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.116 | |
| 49.07% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1080 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 7.41% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1080 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echo" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "traced" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "unreadable" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "unspoken" | | 12 | "charged" | | 13 | "electric" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 141 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1072 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.24% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 20 | | wordCount | 792 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.742 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.933 | | wordCount | 1072 | | matches | | 0 | "neither accusation nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 70 | | mean | 15.31 | | std | 11.9 | | cv | 0.777 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 45 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 1.01% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 141 | | ratio | 0.05 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, breath held, listening to the rhythm of boots inside—three quick steps, then a hesitation." | | 1 | "The scent of leather and something darker—perhaps cedar or ink—followed him." | | 2 | "Rory’s eyes traced the familiar chaos—the half-empty mug on the side table, the faint smudge of dust on the windowsill." | | 3 | "“Because I needed to see you.” His voice was calm, but there was something raw beneath it—something she recognized." | | 4 | "Rory studied his face—the tension in his brow, the way his lips pressed into a thin line." | | 5 | "Rory studied his face—the vulnerability in his eyes, the way his breath hitched when she looked at him." | | 6 | "Inside, the silence was no longer heavy—it was alive." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 166 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 5 | | adverbRatio | 0.030120481927710843 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 141 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 141 | | mean | 7.6 | | std | 5.41 | | cv | 0.712 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 47.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.2978723404255319 | | totalSentences | 141 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 76.63% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, slowly, she sank back" | | 1 | "Slowly, carefully, he reached for" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, breath held, listening" | | 1 | "Her heart thudded once, hard," | | 2 | "she called, voice steady despite" | | 3 | "His hair gleamed platinum in" | | 4 | "he said, stepping forward" | | 5 | "His tone carried neither accusation" | | 6 | "Her fingers twitched near the" | | 7 | "His voice dropped lower, almost" | | 8 | "he said, moving past her" | | 9 | "It looked untouched since yesterday." | | 10 | "His gaze met hers, steady" | | 11 | "His voice was calm, but" | | 12 | "She exhaled sharply, sharp enough" | | 13 | "He stepped closer, close enough" | | 14 | "She remembered the way his" | | 15 | "she said suddenly, voice low" | | 16 | "His jaw tightened." | | 17 | "His gaze dropped to her" | | 18 | "His voice cracked slightly" | | 19 | "She turned to face him" |
| | ratio | 0.552 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s knuckles rapped against the" | | 1 | "She paused, breath held, listening" | | 2 | "Her heart thudded once, hard," | | 3 | "she called, voice steady despite" | | 4 | "The door swung inward, revealing" | | 5 | "His hair gleamed platinum in" | | 6 | "he said, stepping forward" | | 7 | "His tone carried neither accusation" | | 8 | "Rory replied, watching him cross" | | 9 | "The scent of leather and" | | 10 | "Lucien’s gaze flickered over her" | | 11 | "Her fingers twitched near the" | | 12 | "His voice dropped lower, almost" | | 13 | "he said, moving past her" | | 14 | "The living room was cluttered" | | 15 | "A single lamp cast warm" | | 16 | "Rory’s eyes traced the familiar" | | 17 | "It looked untouched since yesterday." | | 18 | "Lucien set his cane against" | | 19 | "His gaze met hers, steady" |
| | ratio | 0.931 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, voice steady despite the storm inside" | | 1 | "she said suddenly, voice low" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "he agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 69 | | tagDensity | 0.159 | | leniency | 0.319 | | rawRatio | 0.273 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |