| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.292 | | leniency | 0.583 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1268 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1268 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echo" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "almost alive" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "etched" | | 6 | "desire" | | 7 | "dance" | | 8 | "crystal" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "anticipation" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "velvet" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 130 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 147 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1257 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.13% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 1145 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.4 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 16 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Pendant | 2 | | Isolde | 11 | | Nyx | 13 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.801 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 42.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 93 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "something between awe and dread" | | 1 | "corridor that seems to breathe" | | 2 | "light that seem to come from nowhere" | | 3 | "as if reshaping themselves" |
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| 40.89% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.591 | | wordCount | 1257 | | matches | | 0 | "not of the travelers, but of something deeper, older" | | 1 | "not words but concepts: trust, sacrifice, balance" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 22.85 | | std | 13.05 | | cv | 0.571 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 41 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 42 | | 40 | 27 | | 41 | 30 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 26 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 218 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 147 | | ratio | 0.075 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere far off, a bell tolls—though no bell is visible." | | 1 | "Above, constellations swirl in colors that shouldn’t exist—greens that bleed into purples, blues that taste metallic." | | 2 | "It tastes like memory—her mother’s laughter, her father’s stern frown, the sting of betrayal." | | 3 | "The water ripples, forming shapes—a figure with wings made of smoke, another with eyes like burning coals." | | 4 | "Aurora spots a cluster of mushrooms glowing softly—bioluminescent caps pulsing in rhythm with their footsteps." | | 5 | "Beneath the hum, she hears a melody—familiar yet altered, like a lullaby sung in a dream." | | 6 | "With every step, the world changes subtly—colors deepen, sounds sharpen, the weight of centuries presses upon their shoulders." | | 7 | "Recognition flashes in their eyes—not of the travelers, but of something deeper, older." | | 8 | "One raises a hand, and the cavern fills with music—songs of creation and destruction intertwined." | | 9 | "She understands suddenly—the pendant is a key, a bridge between worlds." | | 10 | "They stand together, breathless, as the world around them shifts once more—subtly, irrevocably." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 71 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 0 | | adverbRatio | 0 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 147 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 147 | | mean | 8.55 | | std | 4.57 | | cv | 0.534 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 51.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.32653061224489793 | | totalSentences | 147 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 52.49% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere far off, a bell" | | 1 | "Somewhere in the distance, a" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 28 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "They step into a corridor" | | 1 | "Their voice carries a whisper," | | 2 | "Her fingers leave faint imprints" | | 3 | "It pulses brighter, warm against" | | 4 | "she says, though her voice" | | 5 | "She needs to believe she’s" | | 6 | "They enter a chamber where" | | 7 | "It tastes like memory—her mother’s" | | 8 | "she asks, voice barely audible" | | 9 | "They vanish before anyone can" | | 10 | "They move deeper, past archways" | | 11 | "Its frame is twisted iron," | | 12 | "She steps back, heart hammering." | | 13 | "she says, though doubt gnaws" | | 14 | "It ripples like water." | | 15 | "They exchange glances." | | 16 | "she says, though caution lingers" | | 17 | "It emits a soft chime," | | 18 | "She sees herself older, alone," | | 19 | "She sees Nyx dissolving into" |
| | ratio | 0.22 | |
| 38.74% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 107 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hums with a" | | 1 | "Aurora’s boots echo on the" | | 2 | "Nyx drifts ahead, their silhouette" | | 3 | "Isolde lingers at the threshold," | | 4 | "Aurora murmurs, hand resting on" | | 5 | "The silver dagger catches the" | | 6 | "They step into a corridor" | | 7 | "The walls pulse gently, veins" | | 8 | "The scent of ripe fruit" | | 9 | "Nyx tilts their head." | | 10 | "Their voice carries a whisper," | | 11 | "Aurora traces a finger along" | | 12 | "The surface feels warm, almost" | | 13 | "Footsteps echo, but not theirs." | | 14 | "The sound comes from everywhere" | | 15 | "Isolde presses a palm to" | | 16 | "Her fingers leave faint imprints" | | 17 | "A low growl reverberates through" | | 18 | "The ground trembles beneath their" | | 19 | "Aurora draws the Heartstone Pendant." |
| | ratio | 0.843 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Above, constellations swirl in colors that shouldn’t exist—greens that bleed into purples, blues that taste metallic." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Their voice carries, as if spoken by wind through hollow reeds" | | 1 | "she says, though her voice lacks conviction" | | 2 | "she asks, voice barely audible" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora asks (aurora ask)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.208 | | leniency | 0.417 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |