Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRVQMQS6Y8N1YWST9AG8H0

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
19.7s
Cost:
$0.000183
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tastes metallic, sharp enough to cut. Aurora’s boots crunch over glass-like pebbles that shimmer with a violet sheen. Nyx drifts ahead, shadows stretching unnaturally toward the group. Isolde’s fingers brush the Heartstone Pendant at her throat, feeling its pulse sync with her heartbeat. “Stay close,” Isolde murmurs, her voice barely audible over the low hum vibrating through the ground. “The Veil thins here.” Ahead, the walls of the cavern twist into impossible angles. Vines of bioluminescent moss coil around jagged stalactites, dripping nectar that evaporates before hitting the floor. Aurora kneels, brushing a hand over the moss. It recoils, then surges back, tendrils curling like living threads. “Not alive,” she says, eyes narrowing. “But aware.” Nyx tilts their head, shadows rippling. “The Fae call this place Dymas. Gluttony’s heart. But this…” They gesture to the ceiling where fruit-sized berries hang, pulsing with light. “This isn’t hunger. This is memory.” A sudden gust carries the scent of burnt sugar. Aurora’s breath hitches. The Heartstone glows brighter, casting jagged red patterns across the walls. Isolde steps back, her gaze fixed on the nearest berry. It splits open, releasing a cloud of golden dust that swirls into shapes—faces, places, a child’s laughter echoing from nowhere. “Evan’s voice,” Aurora whispers. Her knuckles whiten around the pendant. Nyx’s form flickers, edges blurring. “He wasn’t alone here. The Fae took more than just his body.” The ground trembles. From the shadows, something emerges—a creature of twisted vines and teeth, its eyes twin embers. It snarls, but the sound warps mid-air, becoming a child’s cry. Aurora raises a hand, palm outward. “Don’t attack. It’s… lost.” The beast hesitates, then dissolves into smoke. Where it stood, a door materializes—carved from obsidian, etched with runes that shift when looked at directly. Isolde approaches, tracing a finger over the symbols. “The Fae Courts’ seal. This isn’t just a threshold. It’s a test.” Nyx steps forward, shadows pooling at their feet. “Or a trap. The Veil weakens here. If we cross, we might not return.” Aurora’s throat tightens. She thinks of Evan’s empty chair, the way he’d stared at the sky before vanishing. “Then we find another way.” She reaches for the pendant, but it slips from her grasp, rolling toward the door. Isolde catches it mid-air. “Wait. The Heartstone reacts to intent. Maybe it needs a sacrifice.” “Sacrifice?” Aurora’s laugh is brittle. “Like what?” The door pulses, revealing a glimpse beyond—a vast hall lit by floating orbs, figures moving in slow motion. A woman stands at the center, her back turned. Aurora’s blood runs cold. That posture, that tilt of the head… “No,” Isolde breathes. “It’s her. My mother.” Nyx freezes. “The Fae Courts don’t let go easily.” Aurora’s hand flies to her pendant. “If I step through, I could lose myself. Like Evan.” She meets Isolde’s eyes. “But if I don’t try…” The door widens, exhaling a breath of warm air scented with jasmine. The woman turns. Aurora’s knees buckle. The figure wears the same silver hair, the same scarred wrist. But the eyes—empty, hollow. “Mother?” Aurora’s voice cracks. The figure smiles, but it’s not a smile. “You shouldn’t have come here.” Behind them, the cavern begins to collapse. Vines snap like twine. The ground splits, revealing a chasm filled with swirling darkness. Nyx grabs Aurora’s arm. “Run.” They sprint, the door slamming shut behind them. The cavern collapses into ash, leaving only the door—now fused with their skin, pulsing like a heartbeat. Isolde collapses to her knees. “What did you do?” Aurora stares at her pendant. The Heartstone has cracked, revealing a core of pure white light. “I think… I made a choice.” Nyx’s voice is quiet. “The Veil’s thin. We’re not safe yet.” Above them, the sky fractures into a thousand shards of color. Somewhere, a clock ticks backward. The journey has only begun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.269
leniency0.538
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount645
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.99% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount645
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"echoing"
2"etched"
3"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"begins to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords639
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
19.74% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount499
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.61
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Ahead1
Nyx7
Evan1
Isolde8
Aurora13
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Nyx"
2"Evan"
3"Isolde"
4"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.197
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount639
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean23.67
std13.9
cv0.587
sampleLengths
045
120
244
38
434
553
610
717
839
944
1022
1138
1215
137
1438
157
169
1725
1833
194
2013
2126
2225
239
2422
2511
2621
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs102
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences78
ratio0.077
matches
0"It splits open, releasing a cloud of golden dust that swirls into shapes—faces, places, a child’s laughter echoing from nowhere."
1"From the shadows, something emerges—a creature of twisted vines and teeth, its eyes twin embers."
2"Where it stood, a door materializes—carved from obsidian, etched with runes that shift when looked at directly."
3"The door pulses, revealing a glimpse beyond—a vast hall lit by floating orbs, figures moving in slow motion."
4"But the eyes—empty, hollow."
5"The cavern collapses into ash, leaving only the door—now fused with their skin, pulsing like a heartbeat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount508
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.031496062992125984
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.00984251968503937
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean8.19
std4.86
cv0.594
sampleLengths
08
112
29
316
416
54
610
716
88
910
106
112
126
1322
146
159
163
1711
1810
1920
204
216
225
2312
243
2515
2611
276
284
297
3017
318
3212
338
3414
353
3615
3720
384
3911
405
412
4218
439
444
457
463
474
482
497
75.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.46153846153846156
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners36
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Somewhere, a clock ticks backward."
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences58
matches
0"It recoils, then surges back,"
1"she says, eyes narrowing"
2"They gesture to the ceiling"
3"It splits open, releasing a"
4"Her knuckles whiten around the"
5"It snarls, but the sound"
6"She thinks of Evan’s empty"
7"She reaches for the pendant,"
8"She meets Isolde’s eyes"
9"They sprint, the door slamming"
ratio0.172
20.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences58
matches
0"The air tastes metallic, sharp"
1"Aurora’s boots crunch over glass-like"
2"Nyx drifts ahead, shadows stretching"
3"Isolde’s fingers brush the Heartstone"
4"Isolde murmurs, her voice barely"
5"Vines of bioluminescent moss coil"
6"Aurora kneels, brushing a hand"
7"It recoils, then surges back,"
8"she says, eyes narrowing"
9"Nyx tilts their head, shadows"
10"They gesture to the ceiling"
11"A sudden gust carries the"
12"Aurora’s breath hitches."
13"The Heartstone glows brighter, casting"
14"Isolde steps back, her gaze"
15"It splits open, releasing a"
16"Her knuckles whiten around the"
17"Nyx’s form flickers, edges blurring."
18"The ground trembles."
19"It snarls, but the sound"
ratio0.879
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences19
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Vines of bioluminescent moss coil around jagged stalactites, dripping nectar that evaporates before hitting the floor."
1"It splits open, releasing a cloud of golden dust that swirls into shapes—faces, places, a child’s laughter echoing from nowhere."
2"The cavern collapses into ash, leaving only the door—now fused with their skin, pulsing like a heartbeat."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she says, eyes narrowing"
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispers (whisper)"
1"Isolde breathes (breathe)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.154
79.9637%