| 69.57% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said slowly [slowly]" | | 1 | "They pointed upward [upward]" | | 2 | "she said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.605 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.13 | | effectiveRatio | 0.13 | |
| 82.72% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1447 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "lightly" | | 3 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1447 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "unreadable" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "tension" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "gleaming" | | 10 | "etched" | | 11 | "comforting" | | 12 | "structure" | | 13 | "crystal" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "depths" | | 16 | "echo" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 108 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 123 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1435 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 20 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.76% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 1266 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.18 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 15 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 2 | | Isolde | 7 | | Nyx | 14 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Veil | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Blade" | | 6 | "Veil" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.908 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a physical thing" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 7 | | per1kWords | 4.878 | | wordCount | 1435 | | matches | | 0 | "neither earth nor" | | 1 | "not a forest at all, but a labyrinth of towering vines" | | 2 | "not empty but dense, filled with the weight of unseen eyes" | | 3 | "Not sung, but felt, vibrating in their bones" | | 4 | "not the sky above but a swirling cosmos of stars" | | 5 | "not herself but a figure cloaked in shadow, their face obscured" | | 6 | "not down, but inward, into the heart of the Veil itself" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 46.29 | | std | 25.71 | | cv | 0.555 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 96 | | 1 | 77 | | 2 | 84 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 77 | | 5 | 78 | | 6 | 77 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 75 | | 11 | 41 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 38 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 75 | | 19 | 55 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 59 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 4 |
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| 98.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | 0 | "were interwoven" | | 1 | "was swallowed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 231 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 123 | | ratio | 0.089 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath them was neither earth nor stone but something in between—a surface that shifted underfoot, warm one moment, cold the next, as though the land itself breathed." | | 1 | "Flowers bloomed in colors that defied description—some pulsed with internal fire, others exhaled mist that smelled of forgotten dreams." | | 2 | "Somewhere in the distance, a sound echoed—low, resonant, like a bell struck by a hand that did not exist." | | 3 | "“Too thin. The boundaries are fraying.” They pointed upward, where the sky had begun to fracture, revealing glimpses of a realm beyond—vast, starless, and alive with movement." | | 4 | "The creature—a thing of tangled limbs and too many eyes—screeched, dissolving into smoke." | | 5 | "Then, a sound—a song." | | 6 | "At its center floated a structure—a tower of black crystal, its surface etched with the same glowing runes they’d seen on the trees." | | 7 | "It rippled, revealing glimpses of other realms—fields of gold, cities of bone, oceans that sang in languages long dead." | | 8 | "From the depths rose a figure—tall, slender, its form composed of shifting shadows and starlight." | | 9 | "Images flooded her mind—memories not her own: a child’s laughter, a woman’s tears, a crown of thorns dissolving into ash." | | 10 | "The world around them dissolved into light and shadow, and Aurora felt herself falling—not down, but inward, into the heart of the Veil itself." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1279 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "echoed—low, resonant, like" |
| | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.03049257232212666 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0109460516028147 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 123 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 123 | | mean | 11.67 | | std | 6.46 | | cv | 0.554 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 27 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 48.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3008130081300813 | | totalSentences | 123 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the distance, a" | | 1 | "Then, a sound—a song." | | 2 | "Somewhere, a clock struck midnight." |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "They had come seeking the" | | 1 | "they whispered, their voice a" | | 2 | "she murmured, though the word" | | 3 | "they said, their tone unreadable" | | 4 | "It yielded like water, then" | | 5 | "she said, more to herself" | | 6 | "Her gaze lifted to the" | | 7 | "Their branches were interwoven with" | | 8 | "They pressed forward, the path" | | 9 | "they said, voice strained" | | 10 | "They were beautiful, but their" | | 11 | "she said slowly" | | 12 | "Her words hung in the" | | 13 | "They pointed upward, where the" | | 14 | "they shouted, though their voice" | | 15 | "they said, voice hollow" | | 16 | "She trailed off, her words" | | 17 | "They pressed on, the path" | | 18 | "It was ancient, mournful, yet" | | 19 | "They stood at the edge" |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 15.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of iron" | | 1 | "Nyx drifted behind her, a" | | 2 | "Isolde moved last, her silver" | | 3 | "The ground beneath them was" | | 4 | "They had come seeking the" | | 5 | "Aurora’s fingers brushed the rough" | | 6 | "The air hummed with a" | | 7 | "Nyx tilted their head, their" | | 8 | "they whispered, their voice a" | | 9 | "The forest around them was" | | 10 | "Flowers bloomed in colors that" | | 11 | "The ground was alive, roots" | | 12 | "Aurora paused, her breath catching." | | 13 | "she murmured, though the word" | | 14 | "The air here was thicker," | | 15 | "Nyx reached out, fingertips grazing" | | 16 | "they said, their tone unreadable" | | 17 | "Isolde knelt, brushing her hand" | | 18 | "It yielded like water, then" | | 19 | "she said, more to herself" |
| | ratio | 0.889 | |
| 50.51% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Before anyone could answer, the" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted behind her, a silhouette stitched from twilight, their form flickering as if caught between two realities." | | 1 | "The ground beneath them was neither earth nor stone but something in between—a surface that shifted underfoot, warm one moment, cold the next, as though the lan…" | | 2 | "Aurora’s fingers brushed the rough chain around her neck, the gemstone within thrumming faintly, a rhythm that matched the pulse of her own pulse." | | 3 | "The forest around them was not a forest at all, but a labyrinth of towering vines that coiled like serpents, their leaves shimmering with bioluminescent veins." | | 4 | "Above, the sun hung low and swollen, casting long shadows that moved independently of their sources." | | 5 | "Their branches were interwoven with threads of light, strands that hummed in harmony with the Heartstone’s pulse." | | 6 | "They pressed forward, the path unfolding beneath them as if the land itself guided their steps." | | 7 | "Somewhere in the distance, a sound echoed—low, resonant, like a bell struck by a hand that did not exist." | | 8 | "The flowers along the path burst into bloom, their petals unfurling to reveal tiny, winged creatures that flitted between the blossoms." | | 9 | "They were beautiful, but their wings left trails of smoke that lingered too long, dissolving into the air like ghosts." | | 10 | "Nyx lunged, their shadowy body coalescing into a blade of darkness that sliced through the air." | | 11 | "Aurora felt the pendant grow heavier, as though it were pulling her forward, urging her toward something inevitable." | | 12 | "They stood at the edge of a vast expanse, a lake that reflected not the sky above but a swirling cosmos of stars and shadows." | | 13 | "It rippled, revealing glimpses of other realms—fields of gold, cities of bone, oceans that sang in languages long dead." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, their voice a breath against the wind" | | 1 | "she murmured, though the word felt inadequate" | | 2 | "they said, their tone unreadable" | | 3 | "she said, more to herself than the others" | | 4 | "they said, voice strained" | | 5 | "they shouted, though their voice was swallowed by the growing chaos" | | 6 | "they said, voice hollow" | | 7 | "it said, though its mouth did not move" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 19 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "they hissed (hiss)" | | 3 | "they shouted (shout)" | | 4 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 6 | "they warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.368 | | effectiveRatio | 0.368 | |