| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "she asked aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.433 | | leniency | 0.867 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 72.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1293 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "tightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 11.06% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1293 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "desire" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "fractured" | | 9 | "echoes" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "radiant" | | 12 | "quickened" | | 13 | "loomed" | | 14 | "structure" | | 15 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "the air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 95 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 112 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1280 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.51% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1128 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 15 | | Evan | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Feast | 2 | | Hall | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Nyx | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Evan" | | 2 | "Prince" | | 3 | "Belphegor" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Hall" | | 6 | "Fae" | | 7 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.835 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 39.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "quite a tree, its trunk spiraling upward in impossible angles, leaves shimmering with colors that had no names" | | 1 | "seemed woven from smoke and starlight" | | 2 | "tasted like memories—her mother’s cooking" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.906 | | wordCount | 1280 | | matches | | 0 | "neither stone nor" | | 1 | "not metal, but something deeper, resonant, as if the sound came from the bo" | | 2 | "no longer glowed but" | | 3 | "Not from the Feast Hall, but from somewhere closer, muffled yet insistent" | | 4 | "not a room, but a sky" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 27.83 | | std | 21.01 | | cv | 0.755 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 82 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 33 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 49 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 71 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 40 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 36 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 27 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 48 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 45 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 40 | | 39 | 27 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 |
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| 94.18% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | | 0 | "been shaped" | | 1 | "was obscured" | | 2 | "were outstretched" | | 3 | "was cleared" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 217 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 112 | | ratio | 0.125 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath them was neither stone nor soil but something in between—a surface that shifted underfoot, warm in patches, cool in others, as though the earth itself breathed." | | 1 | "Somewhere distant, a bell tolled—not metal, but something deeper, resonant, as if the sound came from the bones of the world itself." | | 2 | "But she also thought of the pendant at her throat—the Heartstone, warm against her collarbone, beating in time with her heart." | | 3 | "Then darkness—shadows twisting into teeth, screams swallowed by the void." | | 4 | "At its center stood a figure—tall, cloaked in robes that seemed woven from smoke and starlight." | | 5 | "Aurora saw her own reflection in its eyes—distorted, fractured, but unmistakably hers." | | 6 | "The clearing brightened, sunlight filtering through leaves that no longer glowed but simply existed—ordinary, yet radiant." | | 7 | "They walked on, the air lighter now, though the hum remained—a steady, reassuring thrum." | | 8 | "Aurora’s boots no longer sank into the earth; they floated, just slightly, as though the ground itself wanted to keep them from leaving." | | 9 | "When they emerged from the trees, the Feast Hall loomed ahead—a structure of twisted wood and glass, its walls alive with vines that bloomed in real time." | | 10 | "Figures moved in the distance—some human, some not, their forms shifting between flesh and shadow." | | 11 | "The food tasted like memories—her mother’s cooking, Evan’s bitter words, the quiet joy of running through fields as a child." | | 12 | "Carved into it were symbols from the Heartstone pendant—the same crimson gem that had pulsed beneath her skin." | | 13 | "She stepped forward, the door creaking open to reveal not a room, but a sky—vast, star-strewn, and alive with whispers." |
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| 99.75% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1142 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 46 | | adverbRatio | 0.040280210157618214 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012259194395796848 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 112 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 112 | | mean | 11.43 | | std | 7.64 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 53.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3392857142857143 | | totalSentences | 112 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere distant, a bell tolled—not" | | 1 | "Then darkness—shadows twisting into teeth," | | 2 | "Then they heard it: music." | | 3 | "Somewhere, a bell tolled again." |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached out instinctively, and" | | 1 | "They pressed forward, the path" | | 2 | "It swayed gently, though there" | | 3 | "she murmured, reaching out" | | 4 | "Her fingertips met the surface," | | 5 | "She thought of the empty" | | 6 | "she said, voice steadier than" | | 7 | "She picked it up, and" | | 8 | "It was smooth, almost wet," | | 9 | "she said softly" | | 10 | "They moved deeper, the forest" | | 11 | "Its face was obscured, but" | | 12 | "She thought of the letter" | | 13 | "She thought of the Heartstone," | | 14 | "They walked on, the air" | | 15 | "She glanced at Isolde, then" | | 16 | "he said, his voice a" | | 17 | "It pulsed once, twice, then" | | 18 | "She took a deep breath," | | 19 | "She picked it up, and" |
| | ratio | 0.267 | |
| 58.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of iron" | | 1 | "The space around her pulsed" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted beside her, formless" | | 3 | "Isolde moved last, silver hair" | | 4 | "The ground beneath them was" | | 5 | "Aurora’s fingers brushed the rough" | | 6 | "She reached out instinctively, and" | | 7 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a" | | 8 | "Aurora nodded, though she didn’t" | | 9 | "The air thrummed against her" | | 10 | "They pressed forward, the path" | | 11 | "The trees grew taller, their" | | 12 | "Aurora’s breath caught when she" | | 13 | "It swayed gently, though there" | | 14 | "she murmured, reaching out" | | 15 | "Her fingertips met the surface," | | 16 | "The scent of ripe figs" | | 17 | "Nyx stepped closer, their form" | | 18 | "She thought of the empty" | | 19 | "she said, voice steadier than" |
| | ratio | 0.802 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 30.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of iron and honey as Aurora stepped across the threshold, her boots crunching on a carpet of moss that glowed faintly beneath her weight." | | 1 | "Aurora’s fingers brushed the rough bark of a tree that wasn’t quite a tree, its trunk spiraling upward in impossible angles, leaves shimmering with colors that …" | | 2 | "Somewhere distant, a bell tolled—not metal, but something deeper, resonant, as if the sound came from the bones of the world itself." | | 3 | "The trees grew taller, their branches weaving into a canopy that filtered light into hues of amber and violet." | | 4 | "She thought of the empty apartment she’d left behind, the silence that had followed Evan’s departure, the way her mother’s voice still echoed in her mind." | | 5 | "When they emerged from the trees, the Feast Hall loomed ahead—a structure of twisted wood and glass, its walls alive with vines that bloomed in real time." | | 6 | "Lanterns hung from branches overhead, casting light that changed color with each beat of the music." | | 7 | "Carved into it were symbols from the Heartstone pendant—the same crimson gem that had pulsed beneath her skin." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a rustle of wind through dry leaves" | | 1 | "she said, voice steadier than she felt" | | 2 | "the figure intoned, voice layered with echoes" | | 3 | "he said, his voice a blend of laughter and static" |
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| 83.33% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |