Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRXVMD1N6TVHB3E7D7RPHE

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
24.5s
Cost:
$0.000185
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside The Raven’s Nest hung thick with smoke and memory. Flickering neon cast shadows across the scarred wooden tables. Aurora Carter pushed through the door, her boots echoing against the floorboards. She paused, scanning the room. Then she saw him. Silas Blackwood sat alone at the far corner table, silver signet ring catching the dim light. His grey-streaked auburn hair fell over his brow. The limp in his left leg was barely noticeable now, but the way he held himself—measured, deliberate—spoke volumes. She moved toward him, the clink of her delivery bag against her leg the only sound. “Silas,” she said, voice low. He looked up. His hazel eyes widened slightly before settling into something unreadable. “Aurora.” Her smile didn’t reach her eyes. “Long time.” He nodded once. “You look… different.” She shrugged, sliding into the chair opposite. “So do you.” The bartender slid a glass of whiskey toward her. She didn’t touch it. “How’ve you been?” “Still here.” He tapped the signet ring. “Same as ever.” Aurora studied him. The lines around his mouth had deepened. His posture carried the weight of decades. “You never left Cardiff, did you?” “Not really.” He took a slow sip. “I stayed close enough to watch you grow up.” Her fingers traced the rim of her untouched drink. “You always said you’d leave London someday.” “I did.” He set the glass down. “But not for the reasons you think.” She leaned forward. “Then why?” He exhaled through his nose. “Because I couldn’t handle the noise anymore.” The words hung between them. Aurora’s gaze flickered to the hidden back room behind the shelves. “What does that mean?” “It means I stopped running.” She frowned. “You always ran.” “Not anymore.” He met her eyes. “You know what I mean.” Outside, rain began to patter against the window. Inside, the neon buzzed faintly. Aurora’s fingers drummed against the table. “You’re not the same man who left Cardiff.” “No.” His jaw tightened. “I’m not.” She studied his hands. The knuckles were rougher now. Calloused. “You used to paint. I remember.” “That was before.” He smiled faintly. “Before everything changed.” Aurora’s throat tightened. “What happened?” He looked away. “Evan came back.” Her breath caught. “Evan?” “My old flame. She thought she could fix things. Tried to drag me back to Prague.” He shook his head. “I wouldn’t hear her out. Not then.” “And now?” “Now I know better.” He turned back to her. “You left too.” She nodded slowly. “I did.” Silas reached across the table. His hand hovered near hers but didn’t touch. “You should’ve told me.” “I tried.” Her voice cracked. “But you weren’t there.” His expression softened. “I’m here now.” The silence stretched. Rain intensified outside. Aurora’s eyes glistened. “Do you regret it?” He considered her question. “Regret’s a luxury I can’t afford.” She laughed bitterly. “Funny. I thought we’d be laughing about this instead.” He chuckled. “We are. Just not in the way we hoped.” Aurora traced a finger along the rim of her glass. “You kept the signet ring.” “Always have.” “Why?” He met her gaze. “Because some things shouldn’t be forgotten.” The bartender refilled her glass. She didn’t drink. “You ever think about Cardiff?” “Every day.” His voice dropped. “But not for the reasons you think.” She leaned closer. “Tell me.” He sighed. “Your father… he never forgave me for leaving. For letting you down.” Aurora’s chest ached. “He still doesn’t?” “No.” “And your mother?” “She understood.” He paused. “She always did.” The neon buzzed louder. Outside, thunder rolled. Aurora’s hand trembled slightly. “What about Eva?” Silas’s jaw tightened. “She’s gone now.” “Where?” “To a place where we don’t have to see each other.” She stared at him. “You think leaving was the answer?” He shook his head. “It felt like it at the time.” “And now?” “Now I wonder if running was just another kind of running.” They sat in silence. The rain grew heavier. Somewhere in the back room, a door creaked open. Neither moved to investigate. Finally, Aurora spoke. “You still work here?” “Every night.” He gestured to the bar. “It’s all I have left.” She nodded. “And me?” “You?” She hesitated. “I’m still delivering packages.” He smiled. “Still getting out of bed.” “Still fighting.” “Always.” The neon flickered. Their reflections blurred together in the glass. Outside, the city pulsed with life. Inside, two old friends sat in the quiet aftermath of years lost. Silas reached out. This time, his fingers brushed hers. Not quite a touch. Almost. “Next time,” he said softly, “we’ll talk properly.” She didn’t pull away. “Next time.” The rain continued to fall. The neon hummed. And somewhere in the shadows of The Raven’s Nest, a secret room waited—quiet, waiting, holding the weight of every word unsaid.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He smiled faintly [faintly]"
1"He turned back [back]"
2"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.078
68.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount797
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount797
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"carried the weight"
count1
5
word"traced"
count2
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"aftermath"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"scanning"
2"measured"
3"unreadable"
4"carried the weight"
5"traced"
6"flickered"
7"silence"
8"trembled"
9"pulsed"
10"aftermath"
11"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords794
ratio0
matches(empty)
89.29% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Finally, Aurora spoke."
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount480
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.08
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Blackwood1
Aurora10
Silas4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Aurora"
5"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.458
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences25
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount794
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences154
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean11.03
std8.44
cv0.765
sampleLengths
042
142
216
35
414
58
66
710
816
910
1023
1116
1216
1314
145
1512
1620
175
185
1911
2027
216
2216
239
245
256
264
2727
282
2912
305
3117
329
336
3413
3510
3612
3711
3815
392
401
4110
4213
4312
445
4514
466
471
483
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs106
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences154
ratio0.013
matches
0"The limp in his left leg was barely noticeable now, but the way he held himself—measured, deliberate—spoke volumes."
1"And somewhere in the shadows of The Raven’s Nest, a secret room waited—quiet, waiting, holding the weight of every word unsaid."
98.29% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount484
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.04132231404958678
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.02066115702479339
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean5.16
std3.56
cv0.691
sampleLengths
012
19
212
35
44
516
68
718
816
95
103
1110
121
136
142
153
163
177
183
199
204
213
227
233
243
257
267
276
287
299
309
317
327
337
343
352
365
377
385
3911
404
415
422
433
446
455
468
475
486
498
53.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.33116883116883117
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences82
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Somewhere in the back room,"
2"Finally, Aurora spoke."
ratio0.037
15.12% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences82
matches
0"She paused, scanning the room."
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair fell"
2"She moved toward him, the"
3"she said, voice low"
4"He looked up."
5"His hazel eyes widened slightly"
6"Her smile didn’t reach her"
7"He nodded once."
8"She shrugged, sliding into the"
9"She didn’t touch it."
10"He tapped the signet ring"
11"His posture carried the weight"
12"He took a slow sip"
13"Her fingers traced the rim"
14"He set the glass down"
15"She leaned forward."
16"He exhaled through his nose."
17"He met her eyes"
18"His jaw tightened"
19"She studied his hands."
ratio0.512
33.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences82
matches
0"The air inside The Raven’s"
1"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
2"She paused, scanning the room."
3"Silas Blackwood sat alone at"
4"His grey-streaked auburn hair fell"
5"The limp in his left"
6"She moved toward him, the"
7"she said, voice low"
8"He looked up."
9"His hazel eyes widened slightly"
10"Her smile didn’t reach her"
11"He nodded once."
12"She shrugged, sliding into the"
13"The bartender slid a glass"
14"She didn’t touch it."
15"He tapped the signet ring"
16"Aurora studied him."
17"The lines around his mouth"
18"His posture carried the weight"
19"He took a slow sip"
ratio0.854
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences77
tagDensity0.026
leniency0.052
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.8755%