| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora glanced upward [upward]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.654 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.059 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 95.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1236 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 31.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1236 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "quickened" | | 5 | "almost alive" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "mosaic" | | 9 | "unspoken" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "wavered" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "shattered" | | 14 | "flicker" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.21% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 42 | | totalWords | 1224 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "This is where the stories begin" | | 1 | "“Find the place where the Veil is thin.”" | | 2 | "“You have come seeking answers. But answers are not free.”" | | 3 | "“The Heartstone is not a tool. It is a choice.”" | | 4 | "“The stories are not over. They never are.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "*This is where the stories begin*, they murmured." |
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| 74.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1062 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.51 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 16 | | Veil | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | One | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "One" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.747 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 77.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "gold that seemed to breathe" | | 1 | "as if acknowledging them" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.268 | | wordCount | 1224 | | matches | | 0 | "not stone but something older, veined with threads of gold" | | 1 | "Not fixed points, but rivers of light weaving between constellations" | | 2 | "not their faces, but fragments of memories" | | 3 | "not to hold her back, but to anchor her" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 45.33 | | std | 26.19 | | cv | 0.578 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 95 | | 1 | 81 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 76 | | 4 | 89 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 76 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 59 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 64 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 54 | | 18 | 57 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 61 | | 26 | 29 |
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| 97.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "been stitched" | | 1 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 207 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifted beside her, formless yet present, their shadow stretching unnaturally across the ground—thin fingers reaching toward the ceiling of this impossible chamber." | | 1 | "She thought of her grandmother’s stories—how the world had once been stitched together with magic, how the Veil thinned in places where the old gods had bled." | | 2 | "The shadow behind her shifted, forming shapes that dissolved before she could name them—wings, antlers, a face that might have been hers." | | 3 | "“Every step here leaves a mark.” She pointed to faint etchings—symbols that shifted when looked at directly, like ink trying to escape its page." | | 4 | "Carvings adorned it—faces, some familiar, others twisted into screams." | | 5 | "Inside, the chamber was vast, its walls lined with mirrors that reflected not their faces, but fragments of memories—Aurora saw herself as a child, laughing in a sunlit courtyard; Nyx as a figure in a crown of thorns; Isolde as a girl, clutching a locket that burned with light." | | 6 | "From the depths rose a figure—tall, cloaked in moth-wing fabric, eyes like dying embers." | | 7 | "She thought of the stories her grandmother told—of heroes who traded pieces of themselves for power, for love, for survival." | | 8 | "Aurora saw flashes—her mother’s hands kneading dough, the taste of salt on her lips, the way the Veil had thinned the night she’d first heard Nyx’s voice." | | 9 | "As she bit into it, the taste was of every joy and sorrow she’d ever known—sweetness and bitterness tangled, indistinguishable." | | 10 | "Somewhere, a bell chimed—a sound that might have been a warning or a welcome." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1076 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.022304832713754646 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0055762081784386614 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 11.66 | | std | 7.66 | | cv | 0.657 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 49 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 40.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.29523809523809524 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 79.37% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she reached out, touching" | | 1 | "Somewhere, a bell chimed—a sound" |
| | ratio | 0.024 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "She thought of her grandmother’s" | | 1 | "She wondered if this was" | | 2 | "They walked deeper." | | 3 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 4 | "She pointed to faint etchings—symbols" | | 5 | "They followed it to a" | | 6 | "She thought of the Heartstone" | | 7 | "She wanted to ask about" | | 8 | "It recoiled, then surged forward," | | 9 | "Her voice wavered" | | 10 | "They pushed the door open." | | 11 | "It spoke without moving its" | | 12 | "She thought of Evan, the" | | 13 | "She thought of the stories" | | 14 | "She saw the Heartstone, glowing" | | 15 | "They were back in the" | | 16 | "They turned to leave, but" | | 17 | "Her eyes were still bright" |
| | ratio | 0.214 | |
| 37.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of iron" | | 1 | "The space around her pulsed" | | 2 | "Nyx drifted beside her, formless" | | 3 | "Isolde moved last, her silver" | | 4 | "The walls were not stone" | | 5 | "Aurora’s hand brushed a pillar," | | 6 | "She thought of her grandmother’s" | | 7 | "She wondered if this was" | | 8 | "Nyx’s voice came without sound," | | 9 | "*This is where the stories" | | 10 | "Aurora didn’t turn, but her" | | 11 | "The shadow behind her shifted," | | 12 | "They walked deeper." | | 13 | "The floor tilted slightly, as" | | 14 | "Isolde paused, her fingers trailing" | | 15 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 16 | "She pointed to faint etchings—symbols" | | 17 | "Aurora traced one, and it" | | 18 | "A sound echoed ahead: a" | | 19 | "They followed it to a" |
| | ratio | 0.845 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 21.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of iron and honey as Aurora stepped across the threshold, her boots crunching on a carpet of moss that glowed faintly beneath her weight." | | 1 | "Isolde moved last, her silver hair catching the light of something unseen, her pale lavender eyes reflecting constellations that did not belong to any sky she k…" | | 2 | "Nyx’s voice came without sound, a whisper that curled around her thoughts like smoke." | | 3 | "Isolde paused, her fingers trailing over a wall that felt warm, almost alive." | | 4 | "The root retreated, leaving a trail of bioluminescent spores that glowed brighter with each step." | | 5 | "Inside, the chamber was vast, its walls lined with mirrors that reflected not their faces, but fragments of memories—Aurora saw herself as a child, laughing in …" | | 6 | "She thought of the stories her grandmother told—of heroes who traded pieces of themselves for power, for love, for survival." | | 7 | "In their place stood a single tree, its branches heavy with fruit that glowed like embers." |
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| 36.76% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice barely audible" | | 1 | "The mirrors began, their liquid silver pooling at their feet" | | 2 | "Aurora plucked, its skin warm against her palm" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |