| 97.44% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "she said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.385 | | leniency | 0.769 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.103 | |
| 82.60% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 862 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 18.79% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 862 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "quivered" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "vibrated" | | 4 | "charged" | | 5 | "furrowed" | | 6 | "traced" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "dance" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "scanned" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 107 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 857 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 31.48% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 675 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.37 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 1 | | Harlow | 16 | | Quinn | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Compass | 2 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Eva | 15 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Compass" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.315 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed unremarkable until now" |
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| 83.31% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.167 | | wordCount | 857 | | matches | | 0 | "not north but toward the far wall" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 26.78 | | std | 15.36 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 60 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 41 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 39 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 21 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 62.75% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 107 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp stone and something sharper—burnt copper." | | 1 | "Harlow traced the engravings—a series of symbols that matched those on the Veil Compass." | | 2 | "From the darkness emerged a figure—tall, indistinct, its form shifting like smoke." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 679 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.03240058910162003 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016200294550810016 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 107 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 107 | | mean | 8.01 | | std | 4.91 | | cv | 0.613 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 63.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3925233644859813 | | totalSentences | 107 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she spoke, voice steady" | | 1 | "Then it dissolved into mist," | | 2 | "Somewhere beyond, answers waited." |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 1 | "she murmured, fingers brushing the" | | 2 | "Her gaze fell on a" | | 3 | "She pulled out a small" | | 4 | "She flipped pages filled with" | | 5 | "She reached for the compass" | | 6 | "she said quietly" | | 7 | "They worked together, prying loose" | | 8 | "She held the compass higher," | | 9 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 10 | "She stepped forward, the compass" | | 11 | "They descended a narrow staircase," | | 12 | "Its ceiling was lost in" | | 13 | "she said softly" | | 14 | "She reached into her coat" | | 15 | "Its eyes glowed faintly, mirroring" | | 16 | "She looked at Eva, resolve" |
| | ratio | 0.227 | |
| 33.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain lashed against the rusted" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stood at" | | 2 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 3 | "She adjusted her grip on" | | 4 | "The needle quivered, pointing not" | | 5 | "Eva Kowalski stepped beside her," | | 6 | "she murmured, fingers brushing the" | | 7 | "Harlow knelt, tracing a finger" | | 8 | "Her gaze fell on a" | | 9 | "She pulled out a small" | | 10 | "Eva crouched opposite, pulling a" | | 11 | "She flipped pages filled with" | | 12 | "Harlow stood, holding the compass" | | 13 | "The needle spun wildly before" | | 14 | "A low hum vibrated through" | | 15 | "The air felt heavier, charged." | | 16 | "She reached for the compass" | | 17 | "she said quietly" | | 18 | "Eva’s brow furrowed." | | 19 | "Harlow tapped the wall with" |
| | ratio | 0.853 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, fingers brushing the strap of her satchel" | | 1 | "She stepped, the compass swinging between them like a pendulum" |
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| 47.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Eva’s (eva)" | | 2 | "she ordered (order)" | | 3 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.205 | | leniency | 0.41 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.205 | |