Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRY4VTECK9GYRH9V5YN32T

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
25.6s
Cost:
$0.000189
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the rusted grates of the abandoned Tube tunnel. Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the mouth of the cavernous space, her leather watch catching the dim glow of a single lantern. The air smelled of damp stone and something sharper—burnt copper. She adjusted her grip on the Veil Compass, its brass casing cool against her palm. The needle quivered, pointing not north but toward the far wall where shadows pooled thick. Eva Kowalski stepped beside her, her green eyes scanning the walls lined with faded posters and graffiti. “This isn’t right,” she murmured, fingers brushing the strap of her satchel. “No footprints. No signs of struggle. Just… emptiness.” Harlow knelt, tracing a finger along the edge of a broken crate. “Look here.” Her gaze fell on a faint smear of blood, almost invisible unless the light hit just so. She pulled out a small vial from her pocket, dabbing at it with a cloth. “Not human. This is older.” Eva crouched opposite, pulling a notebook from her bag. “Maybe it’s from the old lines. The ones they say still run beneath the city.” She flipped pages filled with scribbled notes and diagrams. “You think this is connected to the disappearances?” “Not yet.” Harlow stood, holding the compass aloft. The needle spun wildly before settling on a spot near the center of the room. “Something’s pulling us here. Or someone.” A low hum vibrated through the floor. Eva shivered. “Do you feel that?” Harlow nodded. The air felt heavier, charged. She reached for the compass again, its needle now pointing toward a section of wall that seemed unremarkable until now. “There’s a rift,” she said quietly. “Or a door.” Eva’s brow furrowed. “A door? In a tunnel?” “Not exactly.” Harlow tapped the wall with her knuckle. The stone gave slightly, revealing a seam. “Something’s been sealed here. For a long time.” They worked together, prying loose slabs of concrete. Beneath lay a metal frame, corroded but intact. Harlow traced the engravings—a series of symbols that matched those on the Veil Compass. “These aren’t random,” she said. “They’re instructions.” Eva leaned closer, her breath fogging in the cold. “Instructions for what?” “The compass,” Harlow replied. “It’s not just pointing north. It’s guiding us.” A sudden gust of wind howled through the tunnel, though no doors were open. The lantern flickered violently. Eva grabbed Harlow’s arm. “What’s happening?” Harlow didn’t answer immediately. She held the compass higher, watching the needle dance. Then she spoke, voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. “We need to follow it.” They moved deeper into the tunnel, the compass leading them past collapsed sections and pools of stagnant water. The air grew warmer, thicker. Eva’s freckled cheeks flushed as she muttered, “This place… it’s alive.” Harlow paused at a junction. Two paths diverged. The compass needle jerked toward the left. “Left,” she ordered. “It’s the only way.” Eva hesitated. “But what if we’re walking into a trap?” Harlow’s jaw tightened. “Traps are part of the job.” She stepped forward, the compass swinging between them like a pendulum. “Trust me.” They descended a narrow staircase, the walls closing in. At the bottom lay a chamber unlike any other. Its ceiling was lost in darkness, but the floor was paved with tiles etched with the same symbols from the wall. In the center stood a pedestal, and atop it a small box carved from obsidian. The air here thrummed with static. Eva’s hand hovered over her satchel. “That’s it? The source of everything?” Harlow approached slowly. The compass hovered inches above the box. “No,” she said softly. “That’s the lock.” She reached into her coat and pulled out a thin wire, threading it through the keyhole. The mechanism clicked open. Inside lay a scroll bound with crimson ribbon. Eva untied it, her fingers trembling. The parchment crackled as she unfolded it. The script was archaic, but Eva’s expertise cut through the confusion. “It’s a map,” she breathed. “Of the tunnels. And names. People who vanished.” Harlow’s eyes scanned the lines. “Not vanished. Taken. By something that feeds on fear.” A low growl echoed from the shadows. Both women froze. The compass spun wildly, needle pointing upward. From the darkness emerged a figure—tall, indistinct, its form shifting like smoke. Its eyes glowed faintly, mirroring the hum in the air. Eva backed away, knocking over a lantern. The flame died, plunging them into near-total darkness. The creature took another step forward. Harlow raised the compass, its needle blazing like a star. “Step back,” she commanded. “Now.” The creature halted. For a moment, there was silence. Then it dissolved into mist, leaving only the scent of ozone. The compass fell from Harlow’s hand, landing with a soft clink. Eva exhaled shakily. “What was that?” Harlow picked up the compass, inspecting it. “A guardian. Or a warning.” She looked at Eva, resolve hardening her features. “We need to find out who—or what—this is. And why it chose us.” Eva nodded, clutching her satchel. “Then let’s start digging.” The tunnel stretched ahead, dark and endless. Somewhere beyond, answers waited. But the air still hummed, waiting for the next move.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.44% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said quietly [quietly]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.103
82.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount862
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount862
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"quivered"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"furrowed"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"dance"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"quivered"
1"scanning"
2"tracing"
3"vibrated"
4"charged"
5"furrowed"
6"traced"
7"flickered"
8"dance"
9"etched"
10"scanned"
11"echoed"
12"silence"
13"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen24
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords857
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
31.48% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount675
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.37
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow16
Quinn1
Veil2
Compass2
Kowalski1
Eva15
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Compass"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.315
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed unremarkable until now"
83.31% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.167
wordCount857
matches
0"not north but toward the far wall"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean26.78
std15.36
cv0.574
sampleLengths
073
137
251
341
429
513
636
78
824
937
1012
1112
1224
1329
1434
1522
1610
1722
1860
1912
2017
2141
2224
2314
2439
2521
2615
2731
286
2933
309
3121
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"was lost"
1"was paved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
62.75% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences107
ratio0.028
matches
0"The air smelled of damp stone and something sharper—burnt copper."
1"Harlow traced the engravings—a series of symbols that matched those on the Veil Compass."
2"From the darkness emerged a figure—tall, indistinct, its form shifting like smoke."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount679
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.03240058910162003
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.016200294550810016
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean8.01
std4.91
cv0.613
sampleLengths
011
122
210
315
415
517
612
78
812
919
1015
115
129
1324
148
158
1615
176
187
192
204
212
225
2320
246
253
263
275
289
297
308
318
328
3314
345
352
369
373
384
398
4014
414
424
432
444
459
4611
475
4818
495
63.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3925233644859813
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences75
matches
0"Then she spoke, voice steady"
1"Then it dissolved into mist,"
2"Somewhere beyond, answers waited."
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences75
matches
0"She adjusted her grip on"
1"she murmured, fingers brushing the"
2"Her gaze fell on a"
3"She pulled out a small"
4"She flipped pages filled with"
5"She reached for the compass"
6"she said quietly"
7"They worked together, prying loose"
8"She held the compass higher,"
9"They moved deeper into the"
10"She stepped forward, the compass"
11"They descended a narrow staircase,"
12"Its ceiling was lost in"
13"she said softly"
14"She reached into her coat"
15"Its eyes glowed faintly, mirroring"
16"She looked at Eva, resolve"
ratio0.227
33.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences75
matches
0"Rain lashed against the rusted"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood at"
2"The air smelled of damp"
3"She adjusted her grip on"
4"The needle quivered, pointing not"
5"Eva Kowalski stepped beside her,"
6"she murmured, fingers brushing the"
7"Harlow knelt, tracing a finger"
8"Her gaze fell on a"
9"She pulled out a small"
10"Eva crouched opposite, pulling a"
11"She flipped pages filled with"
12"Harlow stood, holding the compass"
13"The needle spun wildly before"
14"A low hum vibrated through"
15"The air felt heavier, charged."
16"She reached for the compass"
17"she said quietly"
18"Eva’s brow furrowed."
19"Harlow tapped the wall with"
ratio0.853
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she murmured, fingers brushing the strap of her satchel"
1"She stepped, the compass swinging between them like a pendulum"
47.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Eva’s (eva)"
2"she ordered (order)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.41
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.205
82.6343%