Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRY6GN831B8P5QZ9GXE7J7

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
25.8s
Cost:
$0.000214
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thickens as the door creaks shut behind them. Aurora’s boots crunch on glass-like fragments scattered across the floor. Her breath fogs in the sudden chill. Nyx drifts ahead, shadows stretching unnaturally around their form. Isolde pauses, eyes narrowing at the faint shimmer just beyond the threshold. “Feels like stepping into a dream,” Aurora murmurs, fingers brushing the pendant at her throat. The Heartstone thrums softly against her skin. “Dreams don’t pulse,” Nyx replies, voice barely audible. “They whisper.” Isolde steps forward, silver blade catching stray light. The Fae-Forged Blade glints, casting sharp lines across walls that seem to breathe. Vines coil like serpents, their leaves humming low notes. The ground shifts beneath their feet—soft moss gives way to something harder, crystalline. A low rumble echoes from below. Dust drifts down from unseen heights. Aurora reaches out, tracing a pattern on a wall etched with symbols that rearrange themselves as she watches. “These aren’t words,” she says, frowning. “They’re… warnings.” Nyx tilts their head. “Or invitations.” Isolde kneels, pressing a palm to the stone. A pulse travels up her arm. Images flash—feasts under endless skies, shadows dancing around bonfires, hands reaching from mist. She pulls back, eyes wide. “Something’s watching us,” she whispers. The ground trembles again. From the darkness ahead, tendrils of shadow unfurl, curling around each traveler’s ankles. Aurora yanks free, heart hammering. Nyx steps forward, shadowy form rippling. “Stay close,” they say. Their voice carries a strange resonance, like wind through hollow bones. Isolde raises the blade. The edge glows faintly, cutting through the gloom. The tendrils recoil, hissing. Aurora grips the pendant tighter. The Heartstone pulses brighter, syncing with the blade’s light. They press onward. The corridor widens into a cavernous hall. Vines spiral upward, forming arches that support a ceiling lost in darkness. Bioluminescent flowers bloom along the edges, casting shifting colors across the walls. A distant waterfall trickles somewhere overhead, its sound muffled yet persistent. “Listen,” Aurora breathes. The water sings in harmony with the hum of the earth. Nyx closes their eyes. “It’s alive.” Isolde nods. “Not just alive. Remembered.” Footsteps echo—soft, deliberate. Something approaches. Aurora’s hand drifts to the knife at her belt. Nyx’s form flickers, shadows stretching toward the sound. A figure emerges from the mist. Tall, cloaked in darkness that seems to swallow light. Eyes glow faintly violet, matching Nyx’s own. The stranger’s voice resonates like a bell struck underwater. “You tread where few dare,” it intones. “Why have you come?” Aurora steps forward, voice steady despite the tremor in her chest. “We seek answers. We mean no harm.” The figure tilts its head. “Answers cost. What will you give?” Isolde meets its gaze. “We offer stories. Memories. Truths we’ve buried.” The stranger’s lips curl into something like a smile. “Then let us see.” The cavern darkens further. Shadows coil around the newcomer, forming shapes—a crown, a sword, a burning tree. Images flicker across the walls, revealing battles fought and lost, love turned to ash. The stranger’s eyes narrow. “This place remembers,” it says. “And it judges.” Nyx steps closer, shadow merging with the darkness. “We judge nothing. We listen.” The stranger’s form begins to dissolve, becoming mist itself. “Then listen well. The Veil thins here. Soon, all will cross.” Aurora feels the pendant burn against her skin. The Heartstone’s glow intensifies, casting long shadows that twist unnaturally. Nyx’s voice carries on the wind. “This isn’t just a place. It’s a choice.” Isolde draws the blade, its light cutting through the mist. “What choice?” The stranger’s laughter rings out, hollow and ancient. “To leave unchanged… or become part of the story.” The cavern trembles. Roots burst from the ground, wrapping around the travelers’ wrists. Aurora gasps as memories flood her mind—childhood laughter, first heartbreak, moments forgotten. Nyx’s shadow flickers, struggling against the tide. Isolde stands firm, blade raised. “Tell me,” the stranger urges, “what would you sacrifice?” Aurora’s voice cracks. “Everything.” Nyx steps forward, shadow merging with Nyx’s form. “Then take it.” The cavern erupts in light. The Heartstone blazes, casting everything in silver. The blade sings, slicing through the Veil’s remnants. The stranger dissolves into stardust, scattering across the chamber. Silence falls. The cavern stabilizes, vines retreating, flowers wilting into dust. Aurora collapses to her knees, breath ragged. Nyx’s form flickers, stabilizing. Isolde lowers the blade, eyes scanning the walls. “They’re gone,” she says quietly. “But the path remains.” Aurora looks up. The corridor stretches ahead, now lined with glowing runes. Each step feels heavier, yet lighter. The air smells of rain and iron. “We go together,” she declares, standing. Nyx nods. “The Veil watches. But so do others.” Isolde smiles faintly. “Then let’s see what waits beyond.” They walk deeper, shadows trailing behind them like forgotten promises. The cavern fades behind, replaced by a tunnel of crystal and fire. Somewhere far off, a bell tolls—a sound both mournful and hopeful. The journey continues.
created_at"2026-02-26T10:46:58.164Z" 2/26/2026, 10:46:58 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she says quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.688
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.063
93.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount822
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount822
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"crystalline"
count1
4
word"echoes"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"dancing"
count1
8
word"resonance"
count1
9
word"gloom"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count1
13
word"silence"
count1
14
word"scanning"
count1
15
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"pulse"
2"whisper"
3"crystalline"
4"echoes"
5"tracing"
6"etched"
7"dancing"
8"resonance"
9"gloom"
10"footsteps"
11"echo"
12"flicker"
13"silence"
14"scanning"
15"crystal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"seems to"
2"begins to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords816
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
46.76% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount678
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.06
worstName"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Isolde10
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Nyx14
Aurora13
Veil1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Isolde"
2"Blade"
3"Nyx"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0.468
windowScore0.5
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"walls that seem to breathe"
1"darkness that seems to swallow light"
2"something like a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount816
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean18.98
std12.25
cv0.645
sampleLengths
048
122
210
343
430
58
66
732
85
928
1015
1130
1245
1314
146
156
1622
1731
1811
1918
2011
2111
2213
2335
248
2513
2620
2732
2812
2917
3037
319
324
3311
3429
3530
369
3725
386
399
409
4133
423
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs137
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences117
ratio0.051
matches
0"The ground shifts beneath their feet—soft moss gives way to something harder, crystalline."
1"Images flash—feasts under endless skies, shadows dancing around bonfires, hands reaching from mist."
2"Footsteps echo—soft, deliberate."
3"Shadows coil around the newcomer, forming shapes—a crown, a sword, a burning tree."
4"Aurora gasps as memories flood her mind—childhood laughter, first heartbreak, moments forgotten."
5"Somewhere far off, a bell tolls—a sound both mournful and hopeful."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount529
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.03213610586011342
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.011342155009451797
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean6.97
std3.4
cv0.487
sampleLengths
010
110
27
39
412
515
67
78
82
98
1013
119
1213
136
146
1518
166
172
184
192
208
216
2213
235
245
254
2613
275
286
294
3011
314
328
334
345
359
363
377
3812
3912
4011
413
4211
434
442
452
464
473
482
499
57.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.36752136752136755
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners43
38.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Somewhere far off, a bell"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences87
matches
0"Her breath fogs in the"
1"she says, frowning"
2"She pulls back, eyes wide."
3"Their voice carries a strange"
4"They press onward."
5"she says quietly"
6"she declares, standing"
7"They walk deeper, shadows trailing"
ratio0.092
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences87
matches
0"The air thickens as the"
1"Aurora’s boots crunch on glass-like"
2"Her breath fogs in the"
3"Nyx drifts ahead, shadows stretching"
4"Isolde pauses, eyes narrowing at"
5"Aurora murmurs, fingers brushing the"
6"The Heartstone thrums softly against"
7"Nyx replies, voice barely audible"
8"Isolde steps forward, silver blade"
9"The Fae-Forged Blade glints, casting"
10"Vines coil like serpents, their"
11"The ground shifts beneath their"
12"A low rumble echoes from"
13"Dust drifts down from unseen"
14"Aurora reaches out, tracing a"
15"she says, frowning"
16"Nyx tilts their head."
17"Isolde kneels, pressing a palm"
18"A pulse travels up her"
19"Images flash—feasts under endless skies,"
ratio0.966
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The Fae-Forged Blade glints, casting sharp lines across walls that seem to breathe."
1"The Heartstone’s glow intensifies, casting long shadows that twist unnaturally."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx replies, voice barely audible"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Nyx replies (nyx reply)"
1"she whispers (whisper)"
2"Aurora breathes (breathe)"
3"it intones (intone)"
4"she declares (declare)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.281
leniency0.563
rawRatio0.556
effectiveRatio0.313
73.9168%