Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRYQE1B9AX545FACMM5EXD

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
21.5s
Cost:
$0.000263
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory’s knuckles rapped twice against the worn oak door before she pushed it open. The flat smelled faintly of burnt toast and the ghost of last night’s curry. A single lamp glowed in the corner, throwing shadows across the cluttered kitchen table where a half-empty mug waited. “You’re early,” she said, not turning around. Her voice carried the same cool edge it had the night she’d left, but there was something else beneath it now—tension, maybe, or the ache of unspoken words. Lucien stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his boots clicking against the floorboards. The ivory handle of his cane tapped once against the threshold, a rhythm that matched the steady thud of his heart. His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flicked over the room, landing on her with a slow, deliberate intensity. “Late for what?” he asked, his tone smooth but edged. He didn’t move toward the couch where she’d once sat, where their laughter had once echoed. Now the cushions were bare, the fabric frayed. Rory finally turned, her bright blue eyes narrowing. The small crescent scar on her wrist caught the lamplight, a silent reminder of the accident that had left her with a limp and a grudge. “You could’ve called.” “I did,” he said, leaning against the doorframe. “But some things are better faced head-on.” His gaze dropped to her mouth, then flicked up to meet hers. “Like this.” The air between them thickened. Rory’s fingers curled into the hem of her sweater, the wool rough against her skin. She remembered the way his hand had brushed hers that night in Cardiff, the way his touch had lingered a second too long. Now, the memory felt like a wound reopened. “Why now?” she asked, her voice quieter. “Because I need to know if you’ve moved on.” His words were sharp, but there was a vulnerability in them that made her chest tighten. “Or if you’re still… *here*.” A laugh escaped her, bitter and raw. “You always did have a way of making things complicated.” She took a step closer, the distance between them shrinking until she could see the faint lines etched into his face, the way his jaw tightened when he was trying not to speak. Lucien’s cane tapped again, this time against the floor beside her. “You left without a word. No note. No explanation.” “And you didn’t come back.” Her breath hitched. “What were you waiting for?” His silence stretched, heavy and unyielding. Then, slowly, he reached into his coat pocket and pulled out a folded piece of paper. It fluttered to the floor as he extended it toward her. “Read it,” he said, his voice low. Rory hesitated, her fingers hovering over the paper. The edges were worn, the ink smudged in places. She picked it up, her pulse hammering in her ears. The words were brief, but they carved deeper than any blade. *“I’m sorry. I was wrong. Come to the old warehouse. Midnight. Alone.”* The lamp cast her shadow against the wall, tall and trembling. She looked up, meeting his gaze. “You expected me to come?” Lucien’s lips pressed into a thin line. “I expected you to understand.” The room seemed to hold its breath. Rory’s throat felt dry, her mind racing. The warehouse. The place where they’d once shared a kiss that had tasted like salt and regret. Where everything had changed. “Why now?” she whispered again, but this time it wasn’t a question. It was a plea. His cane tapped once more, a sound like a heartbeat. “Because I’ve been waiting for you to decide.” The lamp flickered, casting their shadows side by side on the wall. Rory’s hand trembled as she reached for the paper, her fingertips brushing his. The contact sent a jolt through her, sharp and electric. “You always did know how to make a mess of things,” she said, her voice barely audible. Lucien didn’t answer. He stepped closer, the space between them closing until their breaths mingled. The air smelled of old wood and something metallic, like blood. Or memory. Outside, the city hummed, distant and indifferent. Inside, the only sound was the soft crackle of the lamp’s flame, burning low as if holding its breath. Rory’s fingers tightened around the paper. “What happens now?” Lucien’s gaze didn’t waver. “Now, we find out if we can still be something.” The lamp’s light dimmed, leaving them in shadow, but neither moved. The past hung between them, heavy and unspoken, waiting for the next word.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she whispered again [again]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
93.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount753
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount753
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"tension"
count1
1
word"unspoken"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count2
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"fluttered"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"electric"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"unspoken"
2"flicked"
3"intensity"
4"echoed"
5"reminder"
6"etched"
7"silence"
8"fluttered"
9"pulse"
10"racing"
11"flickered"
12"trembled"
13"electric"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords13
totalWords750
ratio0.017
matches
0"here"
1"“I’m sorry. I was wrong. Come to the old warehouse. Midnight. Alone.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount628
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Cardiff1
Lucien5
Rory7
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.943
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a wound reopened"
1"tasted like salt and regret"
2"as if holding its breath"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount750
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
98.49% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean26.79
std13.25
cv0.495
sampleLengths
047
135
251
334
437
529
651
77
830
950
1020
1113
1233
137
1438
1512
1622
1712
1835
1916
2018
2135
2217
2328
2426
259
2614
2724
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs112
matches
0"was trying"
60.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences69
ratio0.029
matches
0"Her voice carried the same cool edge it had the night she’d left, but there was something else beneath it now—tension, maybe, or the ache of unspoken words."
1"His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flicked over the room, landing on her with a slow, deliberate intensity."
99.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount632
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.04113924050632911
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007911392405063292
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean10.87
std7.01
cv0.645
sampleLengths
014
114
219
37
428
514
621
716
810
916
108
118
1226
133
148
1519
162
175
1815
1923
208
217
2225
235
247
2543
2611
279
288
295
306
3116
3211
337
348
359
3610
3711
3812
3911
406
415
427
435
447
457
462
4715
484
4912
57.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.36231884057971014
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners25
59.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Then, slowly, he reached into"
ratio0.018
62.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences56
matches
0"she said, not turning around"
1"Her voice carried the same"
2"His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flicked"
3"he asked, his tone smooth"
4"He didn’t move toward the"
5"he said, leaning against the"
6"His gaze dropped to her"
7"She remembered the way his"
8"she asked, her voice quieter"
9"His words were sharp, but"
10"She took a step closer,"
11"Her breath hitched"
12"His silence stretched, heavy and"
13"It fluttered to the floor"
14"he said, his voice low"
15"She picked it up, her"
16"She looked up, meeting his"
17"she whispered again, but this"
18"It was a plea."
19"His cane tapped once more,"
ratio0.393
13.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount50
totalSentences56
matches
0"Rory’s knuckles rapped twice against"
1"The flat smelled faintly of"
2"A single lamp glowed in"
3"she said, not turning around"
4"Her voice carried the same"
5"Lucien stepped inside without waiting"
6"The ivory handle of his"
7"His heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—flicked"
8"he asked, his tone smooth"
9"He didn’t move toward the"
10"Rory finally turned, her bright"
11"The small crescent scar on"
12"he said, leaning against the"
13"His gaze dropped to her"
14"The air between them thickened."
15"Rory’s fingers curled into the"
16"She remembered the way his"
17"she asked, her voice quieter"
18"His words were sharp, but"
19"A laugh escaped her, bitter"
ratio0.893
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences56
matches
0"Now the cushions were bare,"
1"Now, the memory felt like"
ratio0.036
37.04% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Lucien stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, his boots clicking against the floorboards."
1"The ivory handle of his cane tapped once against the threshold, a rhythm that matched the steady thud of his heart."
2"The small crescent scar on her wrist caught the lamplight, a silent reminder of the accident that had left her with a limp and a grudge."
3"Inside, the only sound was the soft crackle of the lamp’s flame, burning low as if holding its breath."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she said, not turning around"
1"he asked, his tone smooth but edged"
2"she asked, her voice quieter"
3"he said, his voice low"
4"she said, her voice barely audible"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered again (whisper)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.318
leniency0.636
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.091
79.1880%