Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRYY051VX2QH3WAPXB2NNG

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
33.0s
Cost:
$0.000233
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain slicks the iron stairs of the abandoned Camden Tube station, each step a hollow echo against the vaulted ceiling. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots leave dark prints on the grime-streaked tiles, the worn leather of her watch catching the faint glow of a single lantern suspended from a frayed cable. The air smells of rust and damp wool, a scent that clings to the back of her throat like a memory she can’t quite place. She pauses at the mouth of a narrow passage, the bone token at her belt cold against her hip, and glances over her shoulder at Eva Kowalski, whose green eyes flicker between the shadows and the map spread across the makeshift table. “Still think this is a ritual?” Eva asks, her voice low, fingers tracing the edge of a parchment stained with ink and something darker. The satchel at her side sways with each movement, its contents rustling like dry leaves. “Or just another dead end?” Harlow’s jaw tightens. She doesn’t answer right away. Instead, she steps forward, the compass in her pocket humming faintly against her thigh. The Veil Compass—crafted by a Shade artisan, its needle etched with sigils that shimmer when the moon is full—has been her only clue since the body was found here, half-submerged in a puddle of black water that smelled of burnt sage and iron. The victim, a man named Lucien Voss, had been a collector of forbidden texts, his apartment in Bloomsbury littered with crumbling grimoires and a single, unmarked envelope addressed to “the one who sees beyond the veil.” Eva follows her gaze to the water. “No signs of struggle,” she says, tapping the parchment. “Just a circle drawn in chalk, but the edges are uneven. Someone tried to erase it, but the dust still clings to the floor. And the water… it’s not from the pipes. It’s too cold, too still.” Harlow kneels, brushing her fingers over the rim of the puddle. The surface ripples, though there’s no wind. Her watch ticks, a steady rhythm against the silence. “He died here,” she murmurs, more to herself than Eva. “But how?” Eva leans closer, her freckled cheek brushing the edge of the map. “No wounds. No poison. Just… a single drop of blood on his palm. And this.” She pulls a small vial from her satchel, the liquid inside swirling like oil on water. “It’s not human. Look at the color.” Harlow lifts the vial, holding it to the lantern’s light. The substance pulses faintly, as if alive. “Aetherial residue,” she says, recalling the old case files from her time in the Met’s occult division. “Used in rituals to bind spirits to the physical world. But it’s rare. Almost extinct.” Eva nods, her fingers tracing the sigils on the compass. “The needle pointed here. To the Veil Market. But that’s a myth, isn’t it? A story told to scare kids into staying away from the tunnels.” Harlow stands, her gaze sweeping the station. The walls are lined with graffiti—symbols carved into the concrete, some familiar, others alien. A circle of salt, a spiral, a jagged line that looks like a broken chain. “Not a myth,” she says. “Just… forgotten.” She turns back to Eva, her eyes sharp. “We’re not looking for a killer. We’re looking for a door.” The detective’s boots echo as she moves deeper into the station, the compass in her pocket guiding her toward the source of the disturbance. The air grows heavier, thick with the scent of ozone and something sweet, like overripe fruit left to rot. Eva trails behind, her breath shallow, her mind racing through the theories she’s pieced together from ancient texts and half-remembered legends. “Lucien was obsessed with the Veil Market,” she says, her voice barely above a whisper. “He believed it was real. That it moved, that it chose who could enter. But the stories say it only opens for those who’ve lost something. A loved one. A truth.” Harlow stops at a junction where the tunnel splits, the walls here covered in faded posters advertising events that don’t exist anymore. One bears the image of a woman with eyes like cracked glass, her face half-erased. “And what did he lose?” she asks. Eva hesitates. “His sister. She vanished when they were kids. The police said she ran away. But Lucien… he never stopped looking.” She pulls a photograph from her satchel—a young girl with the same green eyes as her own, standing in front of a crumbling castle. “This was his last clue. A letter, a map, a key. All leading here.” Harlow studies the image, her fingers brushing the girl’s face. The resemblance is uncanny. “The compass is pointing to the Market,” she says. “But the Market moves. So where does it go tonight?” Eva’s eyes flick to the lantern, then to the shadows beyond. “Under the full moon. It shifts every night. But there’s a pattern. The Market appears where the veil is thinnest—where the living and the dead overlap.” Harlow’s pulse quickens. She thinks of the body in the Tube station, the way the water had clung to the victim’s skin as if reluctant to let him go. The aetherial residue in the vial. The symbols carved into the walls. “We need to find the next location,” she says. “Before the moon rises again.” They move through the tunnels, the compass’s needle trembling with each step. The air grows colder, the darkness pressing in like a living thing. Eva’s hand brushes Harlow’s arm, her touch brief but urgent. “What if the Market isn’t a place?” she asks. “What if it’s a person?” Harlow doesn’t answer. She’s already scanning the walls, searching for the next clue. Her watch ticks, a metronome against the silence. Somewhere ahead, a door creaks open, though no wind stirs. The compass spins, then steadies, pointing toward a narrow archway veiled by a curtain of ivy. “Here,” she says, her voice steady. “The Market.” Eva’s breath catches. The ivy parts, revealing a stone archway etched with the same sigils from the puddle. The air around it hums, a low vibration that makes Harlow’s teeth ache. She reaches out, her fingers grazing the carvings. “It’s real,” she whispers. Harlow steps forward, the compass burning against her ribs. The world seems to hold its breath. Somewhere in the distance, a bell tolls—three times, then silence. The Market is awake, and it’s waiting. Eva’s hand finds hers, her grip tight. “What do we do now?” Harlow glances at the archway, then at the compass, its needle now pointing inward. “We find the next piece,” she says. “And we don’t stop until we understand why the dead are still trying to speak.” The ivy shifts, revealing a path deeper into the earth. The rain outside has stopped, but the air is thick with the scent of rain, though the sky remains clear. Somewhere in the distance, a voice calls—not loud, but insistent, like a thread tugging at the edge of memory. Harlow takes a step forward, the compass humming in time with her heartbeat. The Market is not a myth. It is a wound. And they are about to bleed into it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.485
leniency0.97
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1204
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1204
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"echo"
count2
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count2
3
word"etched"
count2
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"racing"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"uncanny"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"flicker"
2"tracing"
3"etched"
4"silence"
5"familiar"
6"racing"
7"whisper"
8"uncanny"
9"pulse"
10"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
66.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seems to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1197
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount878
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.59
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube2
Harlow14
Quinn1
Eva13
Kowalski1
Veil1
Compass1
Shade1
Lucien1
Voss1
Bloomsbury1
Met1
Market2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
4"Compass"
5"Lucien"
6"Voss"
places
0"Tube"
1"Met"
globalScore0.703
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.835
wordCount1197
matches
0"not loud, but insistent, like a thread tugging at the edge of memory"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
95.93% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean46.04
std22.36
cv0.486
sampleLengths
0117
144
2101
353
439
550
649
736
843
919
1064
1146
1244
1360
1433
1537
1655
1748
1847
198
2043
2133
2212
2336
2449
2531
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"was found"
1"are lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs133
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences92
ratio0.054
matches
0"The Veil Compass—crafted by a Shade artisan, its needle etched with sigils that shimmer when the moon is full—has been her only clue since the body was found here, half-submerged in a puddle of black water that smelled of burnt sage and iron."
1"The walls are lined with graffiti—symbols carved into the concrete, some familiar, others alien."
2"“His sister. She vanished when they were kids. The police said she ran away. But Lucien… he never stopped looking.” She pulls a photograph from her satchel—a young girl with the same green eyes as her own, standing in front of a crumbling castle."
3"Somewhere in the distance, a bell tolls—three times, then silence."
4"Somewhere in the distance, a voice calls—not loud, but insistent, like a thread tugging at the edge of memory."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount888
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.02364864864864865
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0045045045045045045
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean13.01
std9.54
cv0.733
sampleLengths
020
130
225
342
424
515
65
73
85
914
1043
1136
127
139
1437
1511
167
179
1810
192
2012
2131
227
2310
247
2517
2615
2710
2826
297
3014
3115
325
332
348
3511
3624
3719
3821
3915
4031
4122
4215
437
442
4544
4614
4710
484
499
48.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.33695652173913043
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences67
matches
0"Instead, she steps forward, the"
1"Somewhere ahead, a door creaks"
2"Somewhere in the distance, a"
3"Somewhere in the distance, a"
ratio0.06
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences67
matches
0"She pauses at the mouth"
1"She doesn’t answer right away."
2"she says, tapping the parchment"
3"Her watch ticks, a steady"
4"she murmurs, more to herself"
5"She pulls a small vial"
6"she says, recalling the old"
7"She turns back to Eva,"
8"she says, her voice barely"
9"She pulls a photograph from"
10"She thinks of the body"
11"They move through the tunnels,"
12"She’s already scanning the walls,"
13"Her watch ticks, a metronome"
14"she says, her voice steady"
15"She reaches out, her fingers"
16"It is a wound."
ratio0.254
4.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences67
matches
0"Rain slicks the iron stairs"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots leave"
2"The air smells of rust"
3"She pauses at the mouth"
4"Eva asks, her voice low,"
5"The satchel at her side"
6"Harlow’s jaw tightens."
7"She doesn’t answer right away."
8"The Veil Compass—crafted by a"
9"The victim, a man named"
10"Eva follows her gaze to"
11"she says, tapping the parchment"
12"Harlow kneels, brushing her fingers"
13"The surface ripples, though there’s"
14"Her watch ticks, a steady"
15"she murmurs, more to herself"
16"Eva leans closer, her freckled"
17"She pulls a small vial"
18"Harlow lifts the vial, holding"
19"The substance pulses faintly, as"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The air smells of rust and damp wool, a scent that clings to the back of her throat like a memory she can’t quite place."
1"The Veil Compass—crafted by a Shade artisan, its needle etched with sigils that shimmer when the moon is full—has been her only clue since the body was found he…"
31.25% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she murmurs, more to herself than Eva"
1"she says, her voice barely above a whisper"
2"she says, her voice steady"
89.39% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmurs (murmur)"
1"she whispers (whisper)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.394
leniency0.788
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.121
80.9514%