Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRZ6ZC0VTC9KB0BE4R3WFD

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
28.3s
Cost:
$0.000230
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thickens with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter, almost metallic. Aurora’s boots crunch over loose gravel that glints faintly under a sky streaked with colors that don’t belong to any sun. Nyx drifts ahead, their shadow stretching unnaturally across the ground, as if it’s alive. Isolde’s fingers brush the pendant at her throat, the Heartstone throbbing softly against her skin. “Stay close,” Aurora murmurs, her voice barely louder than the rustle of unseen leaves. “This place… it’s not just old. It’s *old* in a way that makes your bones ache.” Nyx tilts their head, the violet glow of their eyes flickering like candlelight in a draft. “The Veil weakens here,” they say, voice like wind through hollow reeds. “The boundary thins. We’re walking where even the stars forget to look.” They step forward. The ground beneath them shifts—soft moss gives way to stone that hums beneath their feet. Isolde pauses, her gaze fixed on the horizon where the landscape bends, as though the world itself is breathing. “Look,” she whispers. A cluster of flowers blooms where none should grow, petals translucent and veined with gold. Their scent is intoxicating, making her knees weak. She reaches out, but Nyx’s hand stops her. “Don’t touch,” they warn. “The Fae guard these places. They’ll twist what they love most.” Aurora’s breath hitches. She wants to reach for the flowers, to taste their sweetness, but Nyx’s grip is firm. “What happens if we ignore them?” The Shadow leans closer, his voice a sigh. “The Veil isn’t just a wall. It’s a mirror. What you see here… it’s not what’s real.” Before Aurora can ask more, the ground trembles. A low rumble echoes through the trees, and the air grows colder. The Heartstone at her collar flares, casting red light on the path ahead. “Something’s coming,” Isolde says, her voice tight. She turns, but the trees behind them have shifted. Their trunks twist into shapes—faces, maybe, or hands reaching. Nyx steps back, their form flickering. “The Fae aren’t the only ones who dwell here. The Gluttony… it’s hungry.” A sound like tearing fabric fills the air. From the shadows emerges a creature, its body a mass of writhing tendrils and jagged teeth. It pulses with a sickly green light, eyes like burning coals. “Get behind me!” Aurora shouts, but the Shadow moves faster. He raises a hand, and the creature recoils, hissing. “Not so fast,” Nyx says, stepping forward. His voice changes, deeper, older. “You think this is a battle? This is a *test*.” The creature lunges. Aurora throws herself aside as Nyx’s shadow swallows it whole. The Shadow’s hand glows, and the beast dissolves into smoke. “You’re… not human,” she breathes. “No,” he replies. “But neither are you. Not really.” Isolde’s eyes widen. “The Veil… it’s reacting to us. To *you*.” The Heartstone pulses again, and the creature’s remnants swirl around them, forming a new shape—a tree with roots that dig into the earth and branches that reach into the sky. Its leaves shimmer with the same crimson light as the pendant. “What is this?” Aurora asks, awe and fear warring in her chest. Nyx kneels, touching the tree’s bark. “A guardian. A memory. The Fae made this to protect what lies beyond.” Aurora’s fingers brush the trunk. The tree shudders, and a door materializes in the air—a simple archway of wood and ivy. Beyond it, the air is warmer, filled with the sound of laughter and distant music. “Where does it lead?” she asks. The Shadow’s voice is quiet. “The heart of the Gluttony. Where desires are fed… and devoured.” Isolde hesitates. “We shouldn’t go in there.” “Why not?” Nyx’s eyes gleam. “Because you’re afraid?” The door creaks open, revealing a corridor lined with mirrors. Each one shows a different version of themselves—Aurora as a child, laughing; Nyx as a shadow without form; Isolde with wings, with horns, with nothing at all. “Choose,” the Shadow says. “Which reflection is real?” Aurora steps forward. The mirrors ripple, and the reflections begin to change. Her reflection smiles, then screams. Nyx’s form fractures, becoming something vast and unknowable. Isolde’s face softens, then hardens into stone. “Stop,” she says, but it’s too late. The door swings wider, and the scent of honey and iron fills the air. They cross the threshold. The corridor stretches endlessly, but the walls pulse with a heartbeat. Somewhere ahead, a voice calls—soft, familiar. Aurora’s name. “Rory,” it says. She freezes. The voice isn’t hers. It’s someone else’s. Nyx’s shadow wraps around her ankle. “It’s trying to trick you. The Gluttony feeds on longing.” Isolde grips her hand. “We stick together. No matter what.” The voice grows louder, closer. It’s not a call anymore—it’s a hunger. Aurora’s breath quickens. She thinks of the Heartstone, of the pendant given to her by an unknown hand. Of the stories her father told about the Veil, about the thin line between worlds. “Come on,” she says, pulling Nyx and Isolde forward. The corridor narrows. The mirrors shatter, and the reflections turn on each other. A figure emerges from the darkness—a woman with Aurora’s face, but older, broken. “You shouldn’t have come,” the doppelgänger says. “Now you’ll never leave.” Aurora steps forward, her voice steady. “I’m not afraid of you.” The woman laughs, a sound like breaking glass. “You don’t know what you’ve done.” The air crackles. The Heartstone blazes. And the Gluttony begins to feed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount911
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount911
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"echoes"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"echoes"
1"pulse"
2"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"begin to"
1"begins to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords903
ratio0.003
matches
0"old"
1"test"
2"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
49.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount698
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.01
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone5
Nyx13
Aurora14
Shadow5
Isolde9
Veil1
Gluttony1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Nyx"
2"Aurora"
3"Shadow"
4"Isolde"
5"Gluttony"
places(empty)
globalScore0.497
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount903
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean20.07
std12.9
cv0.643
sampleLengths
064
130
240
337
434
515
625
725
833
925
1019
1135
1219
1322
1423
155
169
1711
1841
1912
2019
2136
226
2316
247
258
2637
278
2832
2921
304
3119
323
339
3416
3510
3612
3733
389
3926
4011
4111
4214
436
446
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs120
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences103
ratio0.078
matches
0"The ground beneath them shifts—soft moss gives way to stone that hums beneath their feet."
1"Their trunks twist into shapes—faces, maybe, or hands reaching."
2"The Heartstone pulses again, and the creature’s remnants swirl around them, forming a new shape—a tree with roots that dig into the earth and branches that reach into the sky."
3"The tree shudders, and a door materializes in the air—a simple archway of wood and ivy."
4"Each one shows a different version of themselves—Aurora as a child, laughing; Nyx as a shadow without form; Isolde with wings, with horns, with nothing at all."
5"Somewhere ahead, a voice calls—soft, familiar."
6"It’s not a call anymore—it’s a hunger."
7"A figure emerges from the darkness—a woman with Aurora’s face, but older, broken."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount706
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.026912181303116147
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0084985835694051
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean8.77
std5.27
cv0.601
sampleLengths
014
121
214
315
414
516
616
712
812
93
1015
1119
123
1315
148
158
164
1711
183
1916
206
218
2217
238
2412
2513
267
279
289
296
3013
318
3216
3311
3410
359
367
375
3810
393
4010
4110
425
433
446
453
468
4730
4811
4912
62.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4077669902912621
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners42
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Somewhere ahead, a voice calls—soft,"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences75
matches
0"they say, voice like wind"
1"They step forward."
2"Their scent is intoxicating, making"
3"She reaches out, but Nyx’s"
4"She wants to reach for"
5"She turns, but the trees"
6"Their trunks twist into shapes—faces,"
7"It pulses with a sickly"
8"He raises a hand, and"
9"His voice changes, deeper, older."
10"Its leaves shimmer with the"
11"Her reflection smiles, then screams."
12"she says, but it’s too"
13"They cross the threshold."
14"It’s someone else’s."
15"It’s not a call anymore—it’s"
16"She thinks of the Heartstone,"
17"she says, pulling Nyx and"
ratio0.24
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences75
matches
0"The air thickens with the"
1"Aurora’s boots crunch over loose"
2"Nyx drifts ahead, their shadow"
3"Isolde’s fingers brush the pendant"
4"Aurora murmurs, her voice barely"
5"Nyx tilts their head, the"
6"they say, voice like wind"
7"They step forward."
8"The ground beneath them shifts—soft"
9"Isolde pauses, her gaze fixed"
10"A cluster of flowers blooms"
11"Their scent is intoxicating, making"
12"She reaches out, but Nyx’s"
13"Aurora’s breath hitches."
14"She wants to reach for"
15"The Shadow leans closer, his"
16"A low rumble echoes through"
17"The Heartstone at her collar"
18"Isolde says, her voice tight"
19"She turns, but the trees"
ratio0.92
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Before Aurora can ask more,"
ratio0.013
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Nyx drifts ahead, their shadow stretching unnaturally across the ground, as if it’s alive."
1"Isolde pauses, her gaze fixed on the horizon where the landscape bends, as though the world itself is breathing."
2"The Heartstone pulses again, and the creature’s remnants swirl around them, forming a new shape—a tree with roots that dig into the earth and branches that reac…"
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Isolde says, her voice tight"
11.11% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she whispers (whisper)"
1"they warn (warn)"
2"Aurora shouts (shout)"
3"she breathes (breathe)"
4"Aurora asks (aurora ask)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.278
82.2235%