| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 911 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 83.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 911 | | totalAiIsms | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoes" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 903 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 49.71% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 48 | | wordCount | 698 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 2.01 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Nyx | 13 | | Aurora | 14 | | Shadow | 5 | | Isolde | 9 | | Veil | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Shadow" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Gluttony" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.497 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 903 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 20.07 | | std | 12.9 | | cv | 0.643 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 64 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 34 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 120 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath them shifts—soft moss gives way to stone that hums beneath their feet." | | 1 | "Their trunks twist into shapes—faces, maybe, or hands reaching." | | 2 | "The Heartstone pulses again, and the creature’s remnants swirl around them, forming a new shape—a tree with roots that dig into the earth and branches that reach into the sky." | | 3 | "The tree shudders, and a door materializes in the air—a simple archway of wood and ivy." | | 4 | "Each one shows a different version of themselves—Aurora as a child, laughing; Nyx as a shadow without form; Isolde with wings, with horns, with nothing at all." | | 5 | "Somewhere ahead, a voice calls—soft, familiar." | | 6 | "It’s not a call anymore—it’s a hunger." | | 7 | "A figure emerges from the darkness—a woman with Aurora’s face, but older, broken." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 706 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.026912181303116147 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0084985835694051 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 8.77 | | std | 5.27 | | cv | 0.601 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 30 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 62.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4077669902912621 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 44.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, a voice calls—soft," |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "they say, voice like wind" | | 1 | "They step forward." | | 2 | "Their scent is intoxicating, making" | | 3 | "She reaches out, but Nyx’s" | | 4 | "She wants to reach for" | | 5 | "She turns, but the trees" | | 6 | "Their trunks twist into shapes—faces," | | 7 | "It pulses with a sickly" | | 8 | "He raises a hand, and" | | 9 | "His voice changes, deeper, older." | | 10 | "Its leaves shimmer with the" | | 11 | "Her reflection smiles, then screams." | | 12 | "she says, but it’s too" | | 13 | "They cross the threshold." | | 14 | "It’s someone else’s." | | 15 | "It’s not a call anymore—it’s" | | 16 | "She thinks of the Heartstone," | | 17 | "she says, pulling Nyx and" |
| | ratio | 0.24 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 69 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickens with the" | | 1 | "Aurora’s boots crunch over loose" | | 2 | "Nyx drifts ahead, their shadow" | | 3 | "Isolde’s fingers brush the pendant" | | 4 | "Aurora murmurs, her voice barely" | | 5 | "Nyx tilts their head, the" | | 6 | "they say, voice like wind" | | 7 | "They step forward." | | 8 | "The ground beneath them shifts—soft" | | 9 | "Isolde pauses, her gaze fixed" | | 10 | "A cluster of flowers blooms" | | 11 | "Their scent is intoxicating, making" | | 12 | "She reaches out, but Nyx’s" | | 13 | "Aurora’s breath hitches." | | 14 | "She wants to reach for" | | 15 | "The Shadow leans closer, his" | | 16 | "A low rumble echoes through" | | 17 | "The Heartstone at her collar" | | 18 | "Isolde says, her voice tight" | | 19 | "She turns, but the trees" |
| | ratio | 0.92 | |
| 66.67% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Aurora can ask more," |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 66.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx drifts ahead, their shadow stretching unnaturally across the ground, as if it’s alive." | | 1 | "Isolde pauses, her gaze fixed on the horizon where the landscape bends, as though the world itself is breathing." | | 2 | "The Heartstone pulses again, and the creature’s remnants swirl around them, forming a new shape—a tree with roots that dig into the earth and branches that reac…" |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde says, her voice tight" |
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| 11.11% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 15 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispers (whisper)" | | 1 | "they warn (warn)" | | 2 | "Aurora shouts (shout)" | | 3 | "she breathes (breathe)" | | 4 | "Aurora asks (aurora ask)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.278 | |