Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRZECNQR9Z66GZC37ZX62Q

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
26.2s
Cost:
$0.000188
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door creaks open on its own, as if the flat itself exhales a breath it’s held since dawn. Aurora stands in the threshold, one hand braced against the frame, the other curled around the strap of the canvas bag slung across her shoulder. The late-morning light slants through the narrow window above the sink, catching dust motes that drift like tiny planets around her head. She hasn’t moved from the spot where she waited—shoulders squared, eyes sharp, the small crescent scar on her left wrist catching the glow like a secret. Behind her, the silence is thick enough to taste. The kettle hums somewhere down the hall, but no footsteps answer. She hears the soft click of the latch turning, the faint scrape of the bolt sliding back. Her pulse thrums once, then steadies. She knows the sound; she’s heard it in dreams. The door swings inward without ceremony. Lucien steps through, coat brushing the doorframe, the ivory handle of his cane catching the light like a promise he never meant to keep. His hair is slicked back, platinum strands catching the gold of the sun, and his eyes—one amber, one black—find hers instantly. They hold the weight of every word they never said, every night they spent apart in separate rooms, each counting the hours until the next impossible meeting. “You’re early,” she says, voice steady, though her throat tightens. He doesn’t smile. Instead, he tilts his head, the gesture half apology, half challenge. “I had time to think.” His gaze drifts past her to the cluttered room—the stacks of parchment, the map pinned to the wall with pins that bleed red ink into the paper, the single chair pushed neatly beneath the desk. It’s the same space where they once argued over futures, where her laughter had been sharp as broken glass and his silence heavier than stone. She closes the distance between them, slow enough that neither has to flinch. The air smells of bergamot and old paper, of the lavender sachet she keeps tucked under the bed. His cologne—something dark, smoky, foreign—brushes her cheek. She doesn’t move away. “I didn’t come to talk,” he says, but the words are already slipping away, replaced by the need to see her. His cane rests against the wall, blade hidden but present, a reminder of the world they inhabit. Her fingers twitch at her side. She wants to ask why he’s here, why now, why the ghost of their last argument still lingers like smoke. Instead, she reaches out, touches the sleeve of his charcoal suit. The fabric is cool, smooth, worn in places where his elbows rest. She traces the seam where the jacket meets the shirt, her nails grazing the fabric. “I thought you’d be gone,” she murmurs. “Not entirely.” His thumb brushes the edge of her wrist, where the scar peeks through the cuff of her sleeve. The touch is deliberate, careful, as if testing whether the memory of pain still burns there. “But I needed to see you first.” The room seems to shrink. The cat—Ptolemy—stirs on the windowsill, tail flicking, eyes narrowing at the tension coiling between them. Aurora’s breath hitches. She remembers the way he used to read her moods like open books, how he could calm storms with a single glance. Now, the same eyes hold something else: fear, maybe, or regret. He steps closer, close enough that his breath mingles with hers. “You left without saying goodbye.” “I had nothing left to say.” Her voice cracks, but she doesn’t look away. “You left because you couldn’t bear the weight of what we were.” His jaw tightens. “And what weight was that?” She lifts her chin, meeting his gaze. “The kind that doesn’t lift. The kind that stays.” For a moment, neither speaks. The clock ticks. Somewhere below, a child laughs, sharp and bright. Lucien’s hand rises, hesitates, then rests lightly on her knee. Not a claim, just presence. A question without words. She studies him—the way his hair catches the light, the faint scar along his jawline, the way his eyes flicker to the map pinned to the wall. A labyrinth of routes and destinations, some traveled, others abandoned. She wonders if he sees it too: the paths they chose, the roads they burned. “I should have stayed,” she says finally. “Instead, I ran.” His fingers tighten, just slightly. “And now?” She exhales, a sound like wind through leaves. “Now I’m here.” The silence stretches, taut as a bowstring. Then, slowly, he leans forward. His forehead presses against hers—not a kiss, not yet, but the promise of one. Her lips part, breath catching. The scent of him floods her senses: cedar, ink, something metallic that might be blood or possibility. When they part, it’s with a shared tremor. His hand slides to her waist, thumb brushing the curve of her hip. She turns her face into his palm, closes her eyes. The weight of years presses between them, but here, now, it feels lighter. “Tell me,” he whispers, “what changed?” She opens her eyes. “You.” The admission hangs, fragile as glass. He nods, as if accepting a truth he’d feared would never come. Outside, the sun dips lower, painting the room in amber. Ptolemy leaps down, pads across the floor, and settles beside her feet. They don’t speak again. They don’t need to. The space between them fills with the quiet hum of understanding, the kind that needs no translation. Aurora rests her head against his shoulder, feeling the steady beat of his heart beneath the wool of his coat. Somewhere in the distance, a bell rings. The kettle boils. And in this cramped flat above a curry house, two people who once broke each other’s hearts find themselves stitching them back together, thread by thread, breath by breath.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she says finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.118
84.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount979
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount979
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"weight"
count4
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"footsteps"
2"pulse"
3"weight"
4"reminder"
5"tension"
6"flicker"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seems to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords969
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions5
wordCount889
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity0.34
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
Aurora3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if testing whether the memory of pain still burns there"
1"as if accepting a truth he’d feared would never come"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.064
wordCount969
matches
0"not a kiss, not yet, but the promise of one"
1"not yet, but the promise of one"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean35.89
std24.38
cv0.679
sampleLengths
092
152
278
310
479
542
638
764
87
943
1056
1116
1226
138
1416
1535
1652
1710
187
1911
2048
2144
226
235
2440
2545
2639
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"is slicked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences84
ratio0.095
matches
0"She hasn’t moved from the spot where she waited—shoulders squared, eyes sharp, the small crescent scar on her left wrist catching the glow like a secret."
1"She knows the sound; she’s heard it in dreams."
2"His hair is slicked back, platinum strands catching the gold of the sun, and his eyes—one amber, one black—find hers instantly."
3"“I had time to think.” His gaze drifts past her to the cluttered room—the stacks of parchment, the map pinned to the wall with pins that bleed red ink into the paper, the single chair pushed neatly beneath the desk."
4"His cologne—something dark, smoky, foreign—brushes her cheek."
5"The cat—Ptolemy—stirs on the windowsill, tail flicking, eyes narrowing at the tension coiling between them."
6"She studies him—the way his hair catches the light, the faint scar along his jawline, the way his eyes flicker to the map pinned to the wall."
7"His forehead presses against hers—not a kiss, not yet, but the promise of one."
99.03% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount900
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04111111111111111
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006666666666666667
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean11.54
std7.66
cv0.664
sampleLengths
019
125
222
326
49
511
617
76
89
96
1024
1121
1227
1310
143
1511
1640
1725
1813
1918
207
214
2221
2317
246
2520
2611
2712
2815
297
3020
3116
327
335
3415
353
3622
3711
3811
395
4014
4112
423
435
447
459
465
473
488
4910
47.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.2976190476190476
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners25
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences73
matches
0"Instead, he tilts his head,"
1"Instead, she reaches out, touches"
2"Somewhere below, a child laughs,"
3"Then, slowly, he leans forward."
4"Somewhere in the distance, a"
ratio0.068
17.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences73
matches
0"She hasn’t moved from the"
1"She hears the soft click"
2"Her pulse thrums once, then"
3"She knows the sound; she’s"
4"His hair is slicked back,"
5"They hold the weight of"
6"she says, voice steady, though"
7"He doesn’t smile."
8"His gaze drifts past her"
9"It’s the same space where"
10"She closes the distance between"
11"His cologne—something dark, smoky, foreign—brushes"
12"She doesn’t move away."
13"he says, but the words"
14"His cane rests against the"
15"Her fingers twitch at her"
16"She wants to ask why"
17"She traces the seam where"
18"His thumb brushes the edge"
19"She remembers the way he"
ratio0.507
42.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences73
matches
0"The door creaks open on"
1"Aurora stands in the threshold,"
2"The late-morning light slants through"
3"She hasn’t moved from the"
4"The kettle hums somewhere down"
5"She hears the soft click"
6"Her pulse thrums once, then"
7"She knows the sound; she’s"
8"The door swings inward without"
9"Lucien steps through, coat brushing"
10"His hair is slicked back,"
11"They hold the weight of"
12"she says, voice steady, though"
13"He doesn’t smile."
14"His gaze drifts past her"
15"It’s the same space where"
16"She closes the distance between"
17"The air smells of bergamot"
18"His cologne—something dark, smoky, foreign—brushes"
19"She doesn’t move away."
ratio0.836
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Now, the same eyes hold"
ratio0.014
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The late-morning light slants through the narrow window above the sink, catching dust motes that drift like tiny planets around her head."
1"Lucien steps through, coat brushing the doorframe, the ivory handle of his cane catching the light like a promise he never meant to keep."
2"The touch is deliberate, careful, as if testing whether the memory of pain still burns there."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she says, voice steady, though her throat tightens"
1"he says, but the words are already slipping away, replaced by the need to see her"
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmurs (murmur)"
1"he whispers (whisper)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.588
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.235
75.3290%