| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said suddenly [suddenly]" | | 1 | "Aurora said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.517 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.133 | | effectiveRatio | 0.133 | |
| 86.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 756 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 756 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "flicked" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "echoing" | | 9 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 749 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.34% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 577 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.21 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Aurora | 7 | | Eva | 2 | | Silas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Nest" | | 2 | "Carter" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Silas" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.893 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if carrying invisible weight" | | 1 | "something like caution" | | 2 | "looked like a stranger wearing pieces of" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 749 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 22.7 | | std | 14.81 | | cv | 0.653 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 55 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 40 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 46 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 53 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.08 | | matches | | 0 | "His silhouette was familiar—grey-streaked auburn hair, the same sharp jawline she remembered." | | 1 | "A small scar peeked from beneath his collar—a crescent shape, identical to the one on her own wrist." | | 2 | "Instead, she studied the man’s face—the lines deeper, the gray threading his hair like frost on glass." | | 3 | "The memory surged—sunlight through café windows, the smell of fresh bread, Eva’s laughter echoing down cobblestone streets." | | 4 | "Aurora studied the man across from her—the man who had once shared her dreams, who had promised to stand by her side no matter what." | | 5 | "Inside, the neon sign buzzed, casting their shadows on the wall—two figures, one tall and rigid, the other shorter, bent by years of carrying burdens." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 585 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 12 | | adverbRatio | 0.020512820512820513 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006837606837606838 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 9.99 | | std | 6.32 | | cv | 0.633 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 69.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.44 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she studied the man’s" | | 1 | "Somewhere, a clock ticked." | | 2 | "Somewhere else, a train whistled." |
| | ratio | 0.054 | |
| 62.86% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, scanning the dimly" | | 1 | "His silhouette was familiar—grey—streaked auburn" | | 2 | "His hands, once quick to" | | 3 | "His voice carried the same" | | 4 | "She stepped closer, the scent" | | 5 | "He shrugged, a faint creak" | | 6 | "He nodded toward the bar," | | 7 | "His laugh was brief, bitter." | | 8 | "He lifted his glass, the" | | 9 | "His gaze dropped to her" | | 10 | "He stirred his drink, watching" | | 11 | "His eyes flicked to hers" | | 12 | "She thought of evictions, of" | | 13 | "He leaned forward, elbows on" | | 14 | "he said suddenly" | | 15 | "Her breath caught." | | 16 | "His voice dropped" | | 17 | "He reached into his pocket," | | 18 | "She took it, tracing the" | | 19 | "His jaw tightened" |
| | ratio | 0.393 | |
| 40.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 47 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside The Raven's" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter pushed open the" | | 2 | "She paused, scanning the dimly" | | 3 | "The green neon sign flickered" | | 4 | "A figure stood near the" | | 5 | "His silhouette was familiar—grey—streaked auburn" | | 6 | "The man’s posture had straightened," | | 7 | "His hands, once quick to" | | 8 | "The word slipped out before" | | 9 | "The man turned." | | 10 | "Hazel eyes met hers, the" | | 11 | "A small scar peeked from" | | 12 | "His voice carried the same" | | 13 | "She stepped closer, the scent" | | 14 | "He shrugged, a faint creak" | | 15 | "He nodded toward the bar," | | 16 | "Aurora’s fingers brushed the edge" | | 17 | "His laugh was brief, bitter." | | 18 | "He lifted his glass, the" | | 19 | "His gaze dropped to her" |
| | ratio | 0.839 | |
| 89.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The man’s posture had straightened, shoulders squared as if carrying invisible weight." |
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| 91.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He lifted, the ice clinking like a warning" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.172 | | leniency | 0.345 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |