Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCRZV3782R0TY2KGKTB4W1H

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
21.2s
Cost:
$0.000166
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air inside The Raven's Nest hung thick with smoke and the low hum of distant jazz. Aurora Carter pushed open the door, her boots clicking against the worn wooden floor. She paused, scanning the dimly lit room. The green neon sign flickered above the entrance, casting shadows across faces she hadn’t seen since university. A figure stood near the bar, hunched over a glass of amber liquid. His silhouette was familiar—grey-streaked auburn hair, the same sharp jawline she remembered. But something was off. The man’s posture had straightened, shoulders squared as if carrying invisible weight. His hands, once quick to gesture when speaking, now rested still. “Rory?” The word slipped out before she could stop it. The man turned. Hazel eyes met hers, the color muted by years of cigarettes and late nights. A small scar peeked from beneath his collar—a crescent shape, identical to the one on her own wrist. “You look… different,” he replied. His voice carried the same gravelly timbre, but softer, edged with something like caution. She stepped closer, the scent of whiskey mingling with the bar’s stale air. “Five years? I thought you moved to Edinburgh.” He shrugged, a faint creak in his knee betraying the movement. “Did. Then came back. Took a job here. Silas owns the place now.” He nodded toward the bar, where a silver sign glinted under the neon glow. Aurora’s fingers brushed the edge of her coat. “You always did hate change.” His laugh was brief, bitter. “Some things stay the same.” He lifted his glass, the ice clinking like a warning. “What about you? Still delivering orders for Yu-Fei’s kitchen?” She stiffened. “You remember that?” “Of course I do.” His gaze dropped to her hands, calloused from years of pedaling through rain-slick streets. “You were always faster than anyone else. Even then.” The bartender slid a fresh drink toward her. Aurora didn’t touch it. Instead, she studied the man’s face—the lines deeper, the gray threading his hair like frost on glass. “Why’d you come back?” she asked. He stirred his drink, watching the swirl of liquid. “Silas needed someone he could trust. Someone who knew how to disappear.” His eyes flicked to hers. “You know what that means.” Aurora’s throat tightened. She thought of evictions, of Eva’s frantic calls, of the night she’d fled with nothing but a duffel bag and a promise to herself. “I didn’t think you’d still be here.” “Neither did I.” He leaned forward, elbows on the bar. “But here we are.” The silence stretched between them, heavy with unspoken words. Outside, rain began to patter against the windows, blurring the neon into streaks of light. “I heard about your mother,” he said suddenly. Her breath caught. “How?” “Evelyn passed last winter. Cancer. She… wanted to see you before she went.” His voice dropped. “Said you’d forgotten how to smile.” Aurora’s fingers curled into her palms. “She never stopped trying.” “Neither did I.” He reached into his pocket, pulling out a folded photograph. “Found this in my coat. You were younger. Smiling.” She took it, tracing the edges with her thumb. The image showed a woman in a floral dress, laughing beside a younger Silas. The memory surged—sunlight through café windows, the smell of fresh bread, Eva’s laughter echoing down cobblestone streets. “You kept this?” she whispered. “Every year on her birthday.” His jaw tightened. “I couldn’t let go.” The bartender refilled her glass, but neither moved to drink. Aurora studied the man across from her—the man who had once shared her dreams, who had promised to stand by her side no matter what. Now, he looked like a stranger wearing pieces of the past. “Do you ever wonder,” she began, “what happens when the people we trust disappear?” He met her gaze. “Every day.” Outside, thunder rumbled. Inside, the neon sign buzzed, casting their shadows on the wall—two figures, one tall and rigid, the other shorter, bent by years of carrying burdens. “I wonder,” Aurora said quietly, “if we ever really left each other behind.” He didn’t answer. The silence settled, thick as the smoke hanging in the air. Somewhere, a clock ticked. Somewhere else, a train whistled. Here, in the dim glow of The Raven’s Nest, two old friends sat across from each other, the weight of years pressing between them like the glass in her hand. The rain grew louder. The photograph trembled in her grip. And somewhere in the distance, a door creaked open. Neither moved to close it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said suddenly [suddenly]"
1"Aurora said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.517
leniency1
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.133
86.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount756
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount756
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"echoing"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"flickered"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"flicked"
5"silence"
6"unspoken"
7"tracing"
8"echoing"
9"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences61
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords749
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.34% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount577
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Carter1
Aurora7
Eva2
Silas1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Aurora"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.893
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences38
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if carrying invisible weight"
1"something like caution"
2"looked like a stranger wearing pieces of"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount749
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean22.7
std14.81
cv0.653
sampleLengths
055
152
210
335
419
521
638
713
829
95
1027
1129
126
1331
1434
1514
1624
178
184
1922
2010
2122
2240
235
2412
2546
2614
276
2828
2913
3053
3119
325
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs104
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences75
ratio0.08
matches
0"His silhouette was familiar—grey-streaked auburn hair, the same sharp jawline she remembered."
1"A small scar peeked from beneath his collar—a crescent shape, identical to the one on her own wrist."
2"Instead, she studied the man’s face—the lines deeper, the gray threading his hair like frost on glass."
3"The memory surged—sunlight through café windows, the smell of fresh bread, Eva’s laughter echoing down cobblestone streets."
4"Aurora studied the man across from her—the man who had once shared her dreams, who had promised to stand by her side no matter what."
5"Inside, the neon sign buzzed, casting their shadows on the wall—two figures, one tall and rigid, the other shorter, bent by years of carrying burdens."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount585
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.020512820512820513
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006837606837606838
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean9.99
std6.32
cv0.633
sampleLengths
017
114
27
317
413
512
64
712
811
910
103
1114
1218
135
1414
1513
168
1711
1827
198
205
215
2215
239
242
253
2618
279
288
294
3017
316
329
3317
345
353
3624
377
3810
394
409
4115
428
433
441
4516
466
476
484
4913
69.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.44
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences56
matches
0"Instead, she studied the man’s"
1"Somewhere, a clock ticked."
2"Somewhere else, a train whistled."
ratio0.054
62.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences56
matches
0"She paused, scanning the dimly"
1"His silhouette was familiar—grey—streaked auburn"
2"His hands, once quick to"
3"His voice carried the same"
4"She stepped closer, the scent"
5"He shrugged, a faint creak"
6"He nodded toward the bar,"
7"His laugh was brief, bitter."
8"He lifted his glass, the"
9"His gaze dropped to her"
10"He stirred his drink, watching"
11"His eyes flicked to hers"
12"She thought of evictions, of"
13"He leaned forward, elbows on"
14"he said suddenly"
15"Her breath caught."
16"His voice dropped"
17"He reached into his pocket,"
18"She took it, tracing the"
19"His jaw tightened"
ratio0.393
40.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences56
matches
0"The air inside The Raven's"
1"Aurora Carter pushed open the"
2"She paused, scanning the dimly"
3"The green neon sign flickered"
4"A figure stood near the"
5"His silhouette was familiar—grey—streaked auburn"
6"The man’s posture had straightened,"
7"His hands, once quick to"
8"The word slipped out before"
9"The man turned."
10"Hazel eyes met hers, the"
11"A small scar peeked from"
12"His voice carried the same"
13"She stepped closer, the scent"
14"He shrugged, a faint creak"
15"He nodded toward the bar,"
16"Aurora’s fingers brushed the edge"
17"His laugh was brief, bitter."
18"He lifted his glass, the"
19"His gaze dropped to her"
ratio0.839
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Now, he looked like a"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The man’s posture had straightened, shoulders squared as if carrying invisible weight."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He lifted, the ice clinking like a warning"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.172
leniency0.345
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.069
83.8972%