| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Harlow says quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.432 | | leniency | 0.864 | | rawRatio | 0.053 | | effectiveRatio | 0.045 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1483 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.17% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1483 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echo" | | 1 | "measured" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "intensity" | | 5 | "tracing" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "almost alive" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "echoes" | | 10 | "unwavering" | | 11 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 47.62% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 5 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 130 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1468 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 28.37% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 63 | | wordCount | 1151 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.43 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 2 | | Harlow | 28 | | Quinn | 2 | | Veil | 2 | | Compass | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Morris | 6 | | Eva | 20 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Compass" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Morris" | | 5 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.284 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 20.13% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sensing something just beyond sight" | | 1 | "pulse that seems to breathe" | | 2 | "as if pleading" | | 3 | "quite hear" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.681 | | wordCount | 1468 | | matches | | 0 | "not their faces but a scene: a man in a trench coat standing in the same tunnel" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 32.62 | | std | 22.82 | | cv | 0.699 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 113 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 68 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 58 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 46 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 66 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 49 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 59 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 26 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 41 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 50 | | 38 | 32 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 41 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 37 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 207 | | matches | | 0 | "were breathing" | | 1 | "was working" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 130 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "She pauses at the edge of a service corridor where the walls are scrawled with chalk symbols—some familiar, some not." | | 1 | "Harlow presses her hand to the metal; it’s warm, almost alive." | | 2 | "She remembers the night DS Morris died—how the air had felt wrong, how the shadows had moved like they were breathing." | | 3 | "The reflection shifts, showing Eva instead—her eyes wide, hands raised as if pleading." | | 4 | "She thinks of Morris—of the way his eyes had gone blank, the way he’d whispered, “They’re coming for us all,” before the darkness took him." | | 5 | "A sound echoes through the chamber—a low hum, almost musical." | | 6 | "She sees it now—the wound beneath his coat, the jagged scar that glows faintly." | | 7 | "The mirror cracks, splitting into a thousand shards that reflect endless versions of themselves—some smiling, some screaming." | | 8 | "She thinks of the case Morris was working on—the missing artifacts, the strange symbols, the whispers of a cult that believed in crossing the veil." | | 9 | "But in its glow, she sees Morris’s face—his eyes clear, his lips forming words she can’t quite hear." | | 10 | "She pockets the compass, feeling its weight—a promise, a threat, a key." | | 11 | "And Harlow Quinn knows that this isn’t over—not yet." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1164 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.0352233676975945 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007731958762886598 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 130 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 130 | | mean | 11.29 | | std | 6.46 | | cv | 0.572 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 24 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 50.51% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.35384615384615387 | | totalSentences | 130 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the light fades, and" | | 1 | "Only the compass remains, its" | | 2 | "Somewhere in the distance, a" | | 3 | "Somewhere in the dark, something" |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots echo against the" | | 1 | "She pauses at the edge" | | 2 | "Her curls catch the light," | | 3 | "She tucks a strand of" | | 4 | "They move deeper into the" | | 5 | "She feels the tremor in" | | 6 | "She remembers the night DS" | | 7 | "She reaches for it, but" | | 8 | "She thinks of Morris—of the" | | 9 | "His coat billows though there" | | 10 | "His face is a void," | | 11 | "she says, voice steady despite" | | 12 | "She sees it now—the wound" | | 13 | "She thinks of Morris’s last" | | 14 | "She thinks of Eva’s books," | | 15 | "She feels the weight of" | | 16 | "She thinks of the case" | | 17 | "She thinks of the night" | | 18 | "she says, voice barely audible" | | 19 | "Its needle points upward now," |
| | ratio | 0.22 | |
| 20.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain slicks the platform like" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn steps over" | | 2 | "The air smells of rust" | | 3 | "Her boots echo against the" | | 4 | "She pauses at the edge" | | 5 | "The Veil Compass rests in" | | 6 | "Eva Kowalski stands beside her," | | 7 | "Her curls catch the light," | | 8 | "She tucks a strand of" | | 9 | "Eva murmurs, voice low, almost" | | 10 | "Harlow nods, eyes tracing the" | | 11 | "The protective marks glow faintly" | | 12 | "They move deeper into the" | | 13 | "The compass needle spins, then" | | 14 | "Harlow presses her hand to" | | 15 | "She feels the tremor in" | | 16 | "Eva says, kneeling to examine" | | 17 | "Harlow’s gaze drifts to the" | | 18 | "The rain outside drums harder," | | 19 | "She remembers the night DS" |
| | ratio | 0.88 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 2.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smells of rust and damp wool, the kind of scent that clings to old stone and forgotten things." | | 1 | "The Veil Compass rests in her palm, its brass casing cool against her skin, the needle quivering as if sensing something just beyond sight." | | 2 | "Eva Kowalski stands beside her, satchel slung across one shoulder, green eyes scanning the room with the intensity of someone who has spent too many nights pori…" | | 3 | "Her curls catch the light, red strands framing a face that looks both young and ancient all at once." | | 4 | "The protective marks glow faintly under her watch’s light, a soft green pulse that seems to breathe." | | 5 | "The reflection shifts, showing Eva instead—her eyes wide, hands raised as if pleading." | | 6 | "From its surface rises a figure, indistinct at first, then sharpening into a shape that could be a man or something worse." | | 7 | "Harlow’s hand flies to her gun, but the weapon feels useless against something that exists between worlds." | | 8 | "The mirror cracks, splitting into a thousand shards that reflect endless versions of themselves—some smiling, some screaming." | | 9 | "She thinks of the case Morris was working on—the missing artifacts, the strange symbols, the whispers of a cult that believed in crossing the veil." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva says, kneeling to examine the serpent’s scales" | | 1 | "Harlow says, voice rough" | | 2 | "the figure speaks, voice layered, as if multiple people speak at once" | | 3 | "she says, voice steady despite the terror coiling in her gut" | | 4 | "she says, voice barely audible" | | 5 | "Eva asks, voice trembling" |
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| 13.64% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva murmurs voice (voice)" | | 1 | "Harlow asks (harlow ask)" | | 2 | "Eva whispers (whisper)" | | 3 | "the figure speaks (speak)" | | 4 | "the figure intones (intone)" | | 5 | "Eva urges (urge)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.386 | | leniency | 0.773 | | rawRatio | 0.353 | | effectiveRatio | 0.273 | |