Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS063NGG0TR9XF1814R9EA

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
25.5s
Cost:
$0.000189
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the rusted grates of the abandoned Tube tunnel. Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the mouth of the cavernous space, her leather watch catching the dim glow of a single lantern. The air smelled of damp stone and something sharper—burnt copper. She adjusted her grip on the Veil Compass, its brass casing cool against her palm. The needle quivered, pointing not north but toward the far wall where shadows pooled thick. Eva Kowalski stepped beside her, her green eyes scanning the cracked tiles. “This isn’t right,” she murmured, fingers brushing the strap of her satchel. “No footprints. No signs of struggle. Just… silence.” Harlow knelt, tracing a finger along the edge of a broken crate. “The victim’s wounds were precise. Not random. Someone wanted this to look like a robbery gone wrong.” Her gaze flicked to Eva’s trembling hands. “But the blood’s too clean. No splatter. Like it was drained first.” Eva pulled a small notebook from her pocket, flipping pages filled with scribbled symbols. “Look here. These markings near the body—they’re not graffiti. They’re wards. Old ones. From the Veil Market’s old contracts.” She tapped a page marked *Veil Compass* in red ink. “That compass you found? It’s not just pointing north. It’s guiding us to something buried.” Harlow stood, brushing dust from her coat. “Then why’s the needle spinning?” She gestured to the compass. Its needle now jerked violently, trembling like a struck bell. “It’s reacting to something alive.” A low hum vibrated through the tunnel. Eva froze. “Did you hear that?” Her voice was barely a whisper. Harlow nodded. The sound came again—a rhythmic thrum, almost like a heartbeat. She pressed the compass to the ground. The needle steadied, pointing toward a section of wall where moss had grown in the shape of a spiral. “There.” Eva crouched, brushing away the moss. Beneath it lay a metal plate, corroded but intact. She pried it loose, revealing a keyhole carved into stone. “A lock,” she breathed. “But how did they get in here?” Harlow examined the plate. “Not locked. Sealed. Someone wanted this place forgotten.” She glanced at Eva. “You think this was planned?” Eva hesitated. “The victim was an informant. He’d been digging into the Veil Market’s dealings. Maybe he found something he shouldn’t have.” “Or maybe he was the one who opened it.” Harlow’s eyes narrowed. She tapped the compass against the plate. The needle pulsed brighter. “This thing’s reacting to more than just location. It’s responding to… intent.” Eva’s brow furrowed. “Intent?” “Someone left a message here. A warning. Or a challenge.” Harlow lifted the compass, holding it between them. “We need to follow it. Now.” They moved deeper into the tunnel, the hum growing louder. The walls seemed to press closer, the air thickening with the scent of ozone. Eva stumbled over a loose tile. Harlow caught her arm. “Stay sharp.” At the next junction, a faint light glowed ahead. It wasn’t electric—it was bioluminescent, pulsing like a living thing. The compass spun wildly, pointing toward a narrow crevice in the rock. Eva squeezed her eyes shut. “I feel… something.” Harlow knelt, pressing her palm to the crevice. The hum resolved into a voice, low and resonant. “Turn back.” The words echoed in their skulls. Eva gasped. “It’s not a voice. It’s… memory.” Harlow’s breath hitched. The compass trembled violently. “Memory?” Eva’s hand shook as she reached into her satchel. She pulled out a small vial filled with dark liquid. “This was in the victim’s pocket. It’s not poison. It’s a catalyst. It opens doors.” She uncorked the vial. “But only for those who know the right words.” Harlow took the vial, studying it. “What do we say?” Eva swallowed hard. “The compass points to the truth. But we have to speak it aloud.” She met Harlow’s gaze. “Are you ready?” Harlow nodded. “Let’s see what’s hidden.” She uncorked the vial. The liquid dripped onto the compass’s face. The needle flared white-hot. The tunnel shuddered. A section of the wall dissolved into mist, revealing a chamber beyond. Inside, a pedestal held a book bound in black leather. Its pages fluttered as if caught in an unseen wind. Eva stepped forward. “Open it.” Harlow hesitated. “If we read it, we might not be able to close it.” Eva’s voice was steady. “We’ve come too far.” Harlow exhaled. “For justice.” The book snapped open. Words spilled out, not in any language they knew, but in sensations—fear, greed, longing. The air grew colder. The compass fell silent. Eva backed away. “What does it mean?” Harlow stared at the pages. “It means someone here made a pact. With something older than the Veil Market.” She turned to Eva. “And we just signed it.” The hum returned, louder now. The chamber began to collapse. They ran, the tunnel collapsing behind them. As they emerged into the rain-soaked night, Harlow clutched the compass. Its needle now pointed toward the city skyline. “Where now?” Eva asked. Harlow glanced at the horizon. “To find the next clue. Before they find us.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.325
leniency0.65
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount846
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount846
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"quivered"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"furrowed"
count1
10
word"electric"
count1
11
word"resolved"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"fluttered"
count1
highlights
0"quivered"
1"scanning"
2"silence"
3"tracing"
4"flicked"
5"vibrated"
6"whisper"
7"rhythmic"
8"pulsed"
9"furrowed"
10"electric"
11"resolved"
12"echoed"
13"trembled"
14"fluttered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
88.61% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences79
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords841
ratio0.002
matches
0"Veil Compass"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount556
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity3.24
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow18
Quinn1
Veil2
Compass2
Kowalski1
Eva18
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Compass"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.378
wordCount841
matches
0"not north but toward the far wall"
1"not in any language they knew, but in sensations"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean25.48
std17.23
cv0.676
sampleLengths
073
132
248
358
432
519
639
736
821
922
1035
114
1224
1336
1439
1525
168
178
1847
1910
2023
216
2250
235
2414
258
264
2726
287
2928
3036
314
3214
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs119
matches(empty)
34.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences105
ratio0.038
matches
0"The air smelled of damp stone and something sharper—burnt copper."
1"The sound came again—a rhythmic thrum, almost like a heartbeat."
2"It wasn’t electric—it was bioluminescent, pulsing like a living thing."
3"Words spilled out, not in any language they knew, but in sensations—fear, greed, longing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount562
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.017793594306049824
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0071174377224199285
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean8.01
std5.44
cv0.679
sampleLengths
011
122
210
315
415
512
612
78
812
924
1012
1114
1229
1315
147
1510
1610
175
187
192
2010
212
2210
237
2419
251
266
279
2810
294
307
314
3212
335
342
3520
3612
377
384
3912
403
411
4218
436
4410
4514
466
474
482
499
62.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences70
matches
0"She adjusted her grip on"
1"she murmured, fingers brushing the"
2"Her gaze flicked to Eva’s"
3"She tapped a page marked"
4"She gestured to the compass"
5"Its needle now jerked violently,"
6"Her voice was barely a"
7"She pressed the compass to"
8"She pried it loose, revealing"
9"She glanced at Eva"
10"She tapped the compass against"
11"They moved deeper into the"
12"It wasn’t electric—it was bioluminescent,"
13"She pulled out a small"
14"She uncorked the vial"
15"She met Harlow’s gaze"
16"She uncorked the vial."
17"Its pages fluttered as if"
18"She turned to Eva"
19"They ran, the tunnel collapsing"
ratio0.3
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences70
matches
0"Rain lashed against the rusted"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood at"
2"The air smelled of damp"
3"She adjusted her grip on"
4"The needle quivered, pointing not"
5"Eva Kowalski stepped beside her,"
6"she murmured, fingers brushing the"
7"Harlow knelt, tracing a finger"
8"Her gaze flicked to Eva’s"
9"Eva pulled a small notebook"
10"She tapped a page marked"
11"Harlow stood, brushing dust from"
12"She gestured to the compass"
13"Its needle now jerked violently,"
14"A low hum vibrated through"
15"Her voice was barely a"
16"The sound came again—a rhythmic"
17"She pressed the compass to"
18"The needle steadied, pointing toward"
19"Eva crouched, brushing away the"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she murmured, fingers brushing the strap of her satchel"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.075
leniency0.15
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.1
76.1121%