Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS0ANEB1KFPJXS3AYDY74S

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
20.1s
Cost:
$0.000151
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted metallic, like blood left too long in a tin cup. Aurora stepped off the narrow path, boots crunching on dry leaves that didn’t rustle underfoot. The moon hung low, a pale eye watching through branches that twisted like skeletal fingers. She paused, breath shallow, eyes scanning the clearing ahead. The Heartstone Pendant pressed cold against her chest, its faint pulse matching the thud of her heart. A silence pressed in, thick enough to choke on. No crickets. No wind. Just the slow drip of something unseen. She tightened her grip on the silver chain, knuckles whitening. The standing stones loomed at the edge of the grove, ancient and unmoving, their bark split by time and something darker. Their shadows stretched toward her, curling like smoke. A twig snapped. Not close. Too far. Her head swiveled, but nothing stirred. The pendant’s glow flickered once, then steadied. She moved forward, each step deliberate, boots sinking into moss that felt wetter than it should. The ground seemed to breathe beneath her, a slow rise and fall that matched her own heartbeat. The clearing opened suddenly, and Aurora stopped. The Heartstone glowed brighter now, casting jagged light across the earth. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—purple that bled into black, yellow that pulsed like a heartbeat. They swayed without wind, heads tilting as if listening. She swallowed, throat dry. The air hummed, a low vibration that made her teeth ache. Footsteps. Light, deliberate. Not hers. She turned, but the trees offered no shape, only shifting darkness. The pendant pulsed faster, warmer now, as if feeding on her fear. A whisper slithered through the air, not words but something older, something that clawed at the edges of thought. She clutched the chain, nails digging into her palm. The ground trembled. Leaves rained down, though no wind stirred them. The flowers bent inward, their petals closing like fists. Aurora’s breath hitched. The pendant’s glow dimmed, then flared again, revealing a figure in the distance. Tall, thin, cloaked in shadows that moved independently of the trees. It didn’t walk. It *unfolded*, stretching longer, limbs bending backward before snapping forward. She backed away, boots slipping on moss. The figure didn’t move closer. It just watched, head tilted, eyes reflecting the Heartstone’s crimson light. Aurora’s pulse roared in her ears. The pendant’s chain bit into her skin, a sharp reminder of why she’d come here. To find answers. To escape the past. But the grove had other plans. The figure raised a hand. Not in threat, but in invitation. Aurora’s legs moved before her mind caught up. She stumbled, catching herself on a stone. The pendant burned now, searing against her chest. The flowers around her began to bleed, dark sap pooling where petals had been. The air thickened, pressing against her lungs. A sound like tearing fabric filled the grove. The figure took another step, and Aurora’s breath caught. Its face was a void, but she saw fragments—eyes that weren’t eyes, mouths that weren’t mouths. The Heartstone’s glow spiked, illuminating the truth: this thing wasn’t from the Fae realm. It was something else. Something that had waited. Her knees buckled. She fell to her hands and knees, the pendant slipping lower, its warmth fading. The figure loomed closer, and Aurora saw the reflection of her own face in its void. Fear surged, but so did something else—a memory. Her father’s voice, sharp and final. *“Some doors shouldn’t be opened.”* She’d forgotten the weight of those words until now. The pendant slipped from her grasp, landing with a soft clink. The figure reached out, fingers brushing her cheek. Cold. Then warmth. The grove dissolved around her, replaced by a flash of light—too bright, too sudden. When her vision cleared, she stood in a different place. The Heartstone lay beside her, its crimson glow steady now, as if content. The standing stones were gone. Only wildflowers remained, blooming where she’d fallen. A whisper brushed her ear. *“You’re late.”* The words vanished. Aurora turned, but the grove was empty. The pendant’s chain lay coiled at her feet, its silver dull. Somewhere in the distance, a clock chimed midnight. She didn’t know how long she’d been there. Time had moved differently. The flowers closed their petals again, and the grove fell silent.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount716
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount716
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count2
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count1
10
word"searing"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count2
12
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"loomed"
4"flickered"
5"pulsed"
6"footsteps"
7"whisper"
8"trembled"
9"reminder"
10"searing"
11"warmth"
12"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of those words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords8
totalWords712
ratio0.011
matches
0"unfolded"
1"“Some doors shouldn’t be opened.”"
2"“You’re late.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount705
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone5
Pendant1
Aurora8
Fae1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore0.933
windowScore1
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if listening"
1"as if feeding on her fear"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.809
wordCount712
matches
0"not words but something older, something"
1"Not in threat, but in invitation"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
0.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs12
mean59.33
std5.27
cv0.089
sampleLengths
069
159
253
357
456
560
657
755
855
961
1071
1159
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences84
ratio0.048
matches
0"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—purple that bled into black, yellow that pulsed like a heartbeat."
1"Its face was a void, but she saw fragments—eyes that weren’t eyes, mouths that weren’t mouths."
2"Fear surged, but so did something else—a memory."
3"The grove dissolved around her, replaced by a flash of light—too bright, too sudden."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount709
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03385049365303244
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007052186177715092
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean8.48
std4.67
cv0.551
sampleLengths
013
115
215
39
417
59
62
72
87
910
1021
118
123
132
142
156
167
1716
1817
197
2011
2115
229
234
2411
251
262
272
2811
2912
3019
319
323
338
349
353
3613
3711
383
3910
407
415
4211
436
4415
453
464
476
485
496
48.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.35714285714285715
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences75
matches
0"Just the slow drip of"
1"Only wildflowers remained, blooming where"
2"Somewhere in the distance, a"
ratio0.04
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences75
matches
0"She paused, breath shallow, eyes"
1"She tightened her grip on"
2"Their shadows stretched toward her,"
3"Her head swiveled, but nothing"
4"She moved forward, each step"
5"They swayed without wind, heads"
6"She swallowed, throat dry."
7"She turned, but the trees"
8"She clutched the chain, nails"
9"It didn’t walk."
10"It *unfolded*, stretching longer, limbs"
11"She backed away, boots slipping"
12"It just watched, head tilted,"
13"She stumbled, catching herself on"
14"Its face was a void,"
15"It was something else."
16"Her knees buckled."
17"She fell to her hands"
18"Her father’s voice, sharp and"
19"She’d forgotten the weight of"
ratio0.28
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences75
matches
0"The air tasted metallic, like"
1"Aurora stepped off the narrow"
2"The moon hung low, a"
3"She paused, breath shallow, eyes"
4"The Heartstone Pendant pressed cold"
5"A silence pressed in, thick"
6"She tightened her grip on"
7"The standing stones loomed at"
8"Their shadows stretched toward her,"
9"A twig snapped."
10"Her head swiveled, but nothing"
11"The pendant’s glow flickered once,"
12"She moved forward, each step"
13"The ground seemed to breathe"
14"The clearing opened suddenly, and"
15"The Heartstone glowed brighter now,"
16"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—purple"
17"They swayed without wind, heads"
18"She swallowed, throat dry."
19"The air hummed, a low"
ratio0.867
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"To find answers."
1"To escape the past."
ratio0.027
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Aurora stepped off the narrow path, boots crunching on dry leaves that didn’t rustle underfoot."
1"She moved forward, each step deliberate, boots sinking into moss that felt wetter than it should."
2"A whisper slithered through the air, not words but something older, something that clawed at the edges of thought."
3"She fell to her hands and knees, the pendant slipping lower, its warmth fading."
4"The Heartstone lay beside her, its crimson glow steady now, as if content."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.5874%