| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 2 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 716 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 716 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanning" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "reminder" | | 10 | "searing" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 21 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 8 | | totalWords | 712 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "unfolded" | | 1 | "“Some doors shouldn’t be opened.”" | | 2 | "“You’re late.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.26% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 705 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.13 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Pendant | 1 | | Aurora | 8 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.933 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 65.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if listening" | | 1 | "as if feeding on her fear" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.809 | | wordCount | 712 | | matches | | 0 | "not words but something older, something" | | 1 | "Not in threat, but in invitation" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 12 | | mean | 59.33 | | std | 5.27 | | cv | 0.089 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 55 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 61 | | 10 | 71 | | 11 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 6.80% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—purple that bled into black, yellow that pulsed like a heartbeat." | | 1 | "Its face was a void, but she saw fragments—eyes that weren’t eyes, mouths that weren’t mouths." | | 2 | "Fear surged, but so did something else—a memory." | | 3 | "The grove dissolved around her, replaced by a flash of light—too bright, too sudden." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 709 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.03385049365303244 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007052186177715092 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 8.48 | | std | 4.67 | | cv | 0.551 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 48.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.35714285714285715 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the slow drip of" | | 1 | "Only wildflowers remained, blooming where" | | 2 | "Somewhere in the distance, a" |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, breath shallow, eyes" | | 1 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 2 | "Their shadows stretched toward her," | | 3 | "Her head swiveled, but nothing" | | 4 | "She moved forward, each step" | | 5 | "They swayed without wind, heads" | | 6 | "She swallowed, throat dry." | | 7 | "She turned, but the trees" | | 8 | "She clutched the chain, nails" | | 9 | "It didn’t walk." | | 10 | "It *unfolded*, stretching longer, limbs" | | 11 | "She backed away, boots slipping" | | 12 | "It just watched, head tilted," | | 13 | "She stumbled, catching herself on" | | 14 | "Its face was a void," | | 15 | "It was something else." | | 16 | "Her knees buckled." | | 17 | "She fell to her hands" | | 18 | "Her father’s voice, sharp and" | | 19 | "She’d forgotten the weight of" |
| | ratio | 0.28 | |
| 26.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted metallic, like" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped off the narrow" | | 2 | "The moon hung low, a" | | 3 | "She paused, breath shallow, eyes" | | 4 | "The Heartstone Pendant pressed cold" | | 5 | "A silence pressed in, thick" | | 6 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 7 | "The standing stones loomed at" | | 8 | "Their shadows stretched toward her," | | 9 | "A twig snapped." | | 10 | "Her head swiveled, but nothing" | | 11 | "The pendant’s glow flickered once," | | 12 | "She moved forward, each step" | | 13 | "The ground seemed to breathe" | | 14 | "The clearing opened suddenly, and" | | 15 | "The Heartstone glowed brighter now," | | 16 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—purple" | | 17 | "They swayed without wind, heads" | | 18 | "She swallowed, throat dry." | | 19 | "The air hummed, a low" |
| | ratio | 0.867 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "To find answers." | | 1 | "To escape the past." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 23.81% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped off the narrow path, boots crunching on dry leaves that didn’t rustle underfoot." | | 1 | "She moved forward, each step deliberate, boots sinking into moss that felt wetter than it should." | | 2 | "A whisper slithered through the air, not words but something older, something that clawed at the edges of thought." | | 3 | "She fell to her hands and knees, the pendant slipping lower, its warmth fading." | | 4 | "The Heartstone lay beside her, its crimson glow steady now, as if content." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |