Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS0GGMPVD8PGVCVDMAEWY7

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
28.5s
Cost:
$0.000203
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain fell in sheets across the cobblestones of Soho. Streetlamps blurred into smears of gold behind the hood of Detective Harlow Quinn’s trench coat. She ran, boots splashing through puddles that reflected the green glow of the Raven’s Nest sign. Her breath came sharp in the cold air. Behind her, footsteps echoed—quick, uneven, desperate. Tomás Herrera darted between alleyways, his scarred forearm brushing against the Saint Christopher medal at his throat. The medallion caught the light once before he ducked into a narrow passage. Harlow followed, eyes scanning for any sign of escape. “You can’t run forever,” she called, voice steady despite the thunder rolling overhead. Tomás paused, turning just enough to see her silhouette against the neon. “You think you’re the first to chase shadows?” His voice carried a rasp, tired but defiant. Harlow tightened her grip on her leather watch. The metal felt heavy, a reminder of the day DS Morris vanished. Three years ago, under a sky streaked with unnatural colors, they’d found nothing but silence where answers should’ve been. Tomás slipped through a hidden door marked by a bookshelf. The secret room yawned open, revealing a maze of tables stacked with strange objects. Black-and-white photographs lined the walls, faces frozen in time. The air smelled of incense and old paper. “Where are you going?” Harlow demanded, stepping inside. “Someone’s got to know why this place exists,” Tomás replied, gesturing toward a table cluttered with vials and scrolls. “Why they need it.” Harlow’s gaze swept the room. Her sharp jaw clenched. “You’re not telling me anything.” Tomás met her eyes. “You already know too much.” A low hum vibrated through the floorboards. Shadows shifted near the back of the market. Harlow’s hand drifted to the gun at her hip. “What’s your game here?” Tomás smiled faintly. “I’m just trying to survive.” The scent of ozone prickled her skin. Somewhere deep within the market, something stirred—a presence older than the buildings themselves. Harlow’s pulse quickened. She’d chased ghosts before, but never one this close. “You shouldn’t be here,” she warned, stepping forward. Tomás turned away, fingers tracing the edge of a map pinned to the wall. “You ever wonder why they hide things underground?” Harlow’s boots skidded on wet stone. “They’re criminals. They deserve to be found.” “Or maybe they’re protecting us,” Tomás countered softly. A flicker of movement caught her eye. A figure emerged from the gloom, cloak billowing like smoke. Its face remained obscured beneath a hood. Harlow’s hand flew to her radio, but static crackled instead. “Stay back,” she ordered, though her voice wavered. The figure raised a hand. The air thickened, pressure building until Harlow’s ears popped. Then, without warning, the ground gave way beneath her feet. She fell, tumbling through darkness, rainwater soaking her uniform. Tomás lunged, grabbing her arm just as they plunged into the hidden chamber below. The fall ended abruptly, landing on rough wooden planks. Harlow gasped, heart hammering against her ribs. “Where are we?” she demanded, pushing herself upright. Tomás stood, eyes wide. “The Veil Market. It moves every full moon. You can’t leave now.” Harlow’s gaze darted around the cavernous space. Shelves groaned under the weight of forbidden items—crystals humming with power, bottles filled with liquid starlight, scrolls bound in human skin. Shadows coiled along the edges of vision. “You knew this would happen,” she accused, voice trembling. Tomás shook his head. “I didn’t come here alone.” A low chant rose from deeper within the market. Harlow’s instincts screamed danger. She reached for her gun, but Tomás stopped her with a firm grip. “Wait,” he whispered. “Listen.” The chant grew louder, merging with the distant rumble of thunder. Harlow strained to hear beyond the noise. Something ancient pulsed beneath the floorboards, a heartbeat older than the city itself. “You’re lying,” she said, though doubt crept into her tone. Tomás hesitated. “I’m not. But you have to trust me.” Harlow’s eyes flicked to the hooded figure approaching them. Its movements were deliberate, almost ritualistic. The air grew colder, breath visible in the dim light. “What is that?” she demanded. Tomás swallowed hard. “It’s not human.” The figure stopped at the edge of the room. Its face slowly emerged from the shadows—a mask of bone and teeth, eyes glowing like embers. Harlow’s hand flew to her sidearm, but she froze. “Step closer,” the thing commanded, voice echoing as if from another world. Tomás stepped back, shielding Harlow. “Get away from her!” The entity raised a skeletal hand. The room shuddered. Shelves toppled, items scattering like leaves. Harlow braced herself, gun raised, but the moment stretched into eternity. Then, a sudden burst of light exploded from the center of the chamber. The entity screamed, dissolving into ash. The remaining figures scattered, retreating into the darkness. Harlow lowered her weapon, breathing ragged. “What just happened?” Tomás exhaled slowly. “Something woke up.” Harlow stared at the spot where the entity had been. Rain still fell outside, but now it sounded different—like whispers calling from the storm. “You need to go,” she said quietly. “This isn’t safe.” Tomás nodded, but his gaze lingered on the fallen ash. “Maybe. Or maybe it’s just beginning.” The neon sign outside flickered, casting green shadows across the room. Harlow tightened her grip on her watch, feeling the weight of every choice pressing down. Somewhere in the distance, thunder rolled again. Tomás turned toward the exit. “Come on. We’ll talk more later.” Harlow hesitated, then followed. The market stretched ahead, endless and unknown. Above them, the city slept unaware. Below, secrets stirred. And somewhere in the dark, something waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
75.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Tomás countered softly [softly]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.438
leniency0.875
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.125
83.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount934
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount934
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"footsteps"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"quickened"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"flicker"
count1
11
word"gloom"
count1
12
word"wavered"
count1
13
word"weight"
count2
14
word"pulsed"
count1
15
word"flicked"
count1
16
word"echoing"
count1
17
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoed"
2"scanning"
3"reminder"
4"silence"
5"jaw clenched"
6"vibrated"
7"pulse"
8"quickened"
9"tracing"
10"flicker"
11"gloom"
12"wavered"
13"weight"
14"pulsed"
15"flicked"
16"echoing"
17"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences95
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords930
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
9.51% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount783
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.81
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Detective1
Harlow22
Quinn1
Raven1
Nest1
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás18
Morris1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
7"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.095
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount930
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean19.79
std12.15
cv0.614
sampleLengths
054
139
213
328
439
541
68
723
814
99
1028
118
1232
138
1422
1513
168
1734
188
1933
2030
218
2216
2335
249
259
2626
274
2831
2910
3010
3125
325
336
3434
3512
369
3726
3827
399
406
4124
4210
4316
4433
4511
4627
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs155
matches(empty)
16.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences113
ratio0.044
matches
0"Behind her, footsteps echoed—quick, uneven, desperate."
1"Somewhere deep within the market, something stirred—a presence older than the buildings themselves."
2"Shelves groaned under the weight of forbidden items—crystals humming with power, bottles filled with liquid starlight, scrolls bound in human skin."
3"Its face slowly emerged from the shadows—a mask of bone and teeth, eyes glowing like embers."
4"Rain still fell outside, but now it sounded different—like whispers calling from the storm."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount789
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.032953105196451206
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0076045627376425855
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean8.23
std4.04
cv0.491
sampleLengths
09
115
216
38
46
517
613
79
813
912
1016
118
1212
1319
1410
1514
169
178
188
1919
204
215
224
235
244
255
267
278
289
294
303
315
327
3313
343
359
368
3714
388
396
407
418
427
4310
447
4510
468
475
489
4910
51.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3274336283185841
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences92
matches
0"Somewhere deep within the market,"
1"Then, without warning, the ground"
2"Then, a sudden burst of"
3"Somewhere in the distance, thunder"
ratio0.043
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences92
matches
0"She ran, boots splashing through"
1"Her breath came sharp in"
2"she called, voice steady despite"
3"His voice carried a rasp,"
4"Her sharp jaw clenched."
5"She’d chased ghosts before, but"
6"she warned, stepping forward"
7"Its face remained obscured beneath"
8"she ordered, though her voice"
9"She fell, tumbling through darkness,"
10"she demanded, pushing herself upright"
11"she accused, voice trembling"
12"She reached for her gun,"
13"she said, though doubt crept"
14"Its movements were deliberate, almost"
15"Its face slowly emerged from"
16"she said quietly"
ratio0.185
19.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences92
matches
0"Rain fell in sheets across"
1"Streetlamps blurred into smears of"
2"She ran, boots splashing through"
3"Her breath came sharp in"
4"Tomás Herrera darted between alleyways,"
5"The medallion caught the light"
6"Harlow followed, eyes scanning for"
7"she called, voice steady despite"
8"Tomás paused, turning just enough"
9"His voice carried a rasp,"
10"Harlow tightened her grip on"
11"The metal felt heavy, a"
12"Tomás slipped through a hidden"
13"The secret room yawned open,"
14"The air smelled of incense"
15"Harlow demanded, stepping inside"
16"Tomás replied, gesturing toward a"
17"Harlow’s gaze swept the room."
18"Her sharp jaw clenched."
19"Tomás met her eyes."
ratio0.88
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She ran, boots splashing through puddles that reflected the green glow of the Raven’s Nest sign."
1"Harlow tightened her grip on her watch, feeling the weight of every choice pressing down."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she called, voice steady despite the thunder rolling overhead"
1"His voice carried, tired but defiant"
2"she ordered, though her voice wavered"
3"she accused, voice trembling"
4"the thing commanded, voice echoing as if from another world"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Harlow demanded (demand)"
1"she warned (warn)"
2"she ordered (order)"
3"she demanded (demand)"
4"he whispered (whisper)"
5"she demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.375
74.9767%