Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS0ZQJ1K5BYR76DNJH9VRF

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
23.0s
Cost:
$0.000172
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the rusted grates of the abandoned Tube tunnel. Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the mouth of the cavernous space, her leather watch catching the dim glow of a single lantern. The air smelled of damp stone and something sharper—burnt copper. She adjusted her grip on the Veil Compass, its brass casing cool against her palm. The needle quivered, pointing not north but toward the far wall where shadows pooled thick. Eva Kowalski crouched nearby, fingers tracing the edge of a tattered map. Her green eyes flickered between the map and the scene. “This isn’t right,” she murmured. “The victim’s position… it’s off.” Harlow knelt beside her, boots squelching on wet tiles. “Show me.” Eva spread the parchment on a crate. A circle marked with chalk, lines radiating outward like spider legs. “Look here.” She tapped a spot near the center. “The blood spatter’s too uniform. Like someone staged this.” Harlow nodded, pulling a small vial from her coat. “The Compass says there’s a rift nearby. But this…” She held the vial to the light. “No trace of magic here. Just iron filings.” “Or maybe the magic’s hidden,” Eva countered, brushing dust from a cracked mirror. “See how the glass reflects the ceiling? It’s warped. Like it’s been bent.” Harlow leaned closer. The mirror’s surface rippled, distorting the room. A flicker passed over her face—something sharp in her gaze. “You think the killer used a physical trick?” “Or a mental one,” Eva said. “The victim’s last words were ‘They’re watching.’ But no one saw anyone. Unless they were looking in the mirror.” A low hum vibrated through the floor. Harlow froze. The Compass spun wildly, needle scraping metal. “There’s a rift,” she whispered. “But it’s not natural.” Eva’s hand hovered over her satchel. “What if it’s tied to the Veil Market? They say it moves every full moon.” Harlow stood, eyes narrowing. “Then we need to find the entry point. Now.” They moved deeper into the tunnel. The walls pulsed faintly, veins of light threading through the concrete. Eva paused at a junction. “This way,” she said, pointing to a door half-hidden by debris. “The map shows a symbol here—a spiral. Like the compass.” Harlow pushed the door open. Inside, a chamber glowed with bioluminescent moss. At its center stood a pedestal holding a shattered hourglass. Sand trickled upward, defying gravity. The air thrummed with static. Eva stepped forward. “It’s a temporal loop. The victim got stuck here.” Harlow approached the pedestal. The sand swirled faster. Her reflection in the mirror showed her older—older than forty-one. She blinked. Gone. The Compass buzzed. “Someone’s manipulating time.” Eva reached out, hesitating. “Touch it?” Harlow shook her head. “Wait.” She pulled a small device from her pocket—a signal jammer. “We disrupt the field first.” The moment the jammer activated, the chamber shuddered. The hourglass cracked further. Eva yanked her hand back as shards flew. Harlow grabbed the compass. “The rift’s destabilizing. We need to seal it.” Eva scanned the walls. “There’s a pattern. Like a lock.” She traced the symbols. “If we align them…” Harlow nodded. Together, they pressed their hands to the markings. The moss flared bright. The sand halted mid-air. The hum faded. The hourglass lay still. Eva exhaled. “It worked.” Harlow studied the pedestal. A single word was carved into the base: *Remember*. She turned to Eva. “Who was this?” Eva hesitated. “The victim wasn’t a victim. He was a witness.” Harlow’s jaw tightened. “Then why did he die?” Eva glanced at the mirror. The reflection now showed a figure standing behind them—tall, faceless. She didn’t turn. “Because he knew too much.” The tunnel groaned again. The entrance began to collapse. Harlow grabbed Eva’s arm. “Move!” They sprinted as stones rained down. The door slammed shut behind them. In the sudden dark, Harlow fumbled for her flashlight. The beam caught a final clue: a bone token on the ground. It glinted like the compass. Eva picked it up. “Found this earlier. Thought it was just trash.” Harlow’s breath hitched. “It’s a key. To the next rift.” Eva smiled faintly. “Or a warning.” Outside, dawn broke. The tunnel vanished behind them. Somewhere, a clock struck midnight. Harlow clutched the token. Somewhere, another rift stirred. And in the distance, a voice whispered, *You’ll come back.* But that was tomorrow’s problem. For now, they had work to do.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.257
leniency0.514
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount733
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount733
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"quivered"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"disrupt"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"quivered"
1"tracing"
2"flickered"
3"flicker"
4"vibrated"
5"pulsed"
6"shattered"
7"disrupt"
8"scanned"
9"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords727
ratio0.006
matches
0"Remember"
1"You’ll come back."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount516
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity3.29
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow17
Quinn1
Veil1
Compass3
Kowalski1
Eva17
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Compass"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
62.45% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.376
wordCount727
matches
0"not north but toward the far wall"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean22.72
std13.66
cv0.601
sampleLengths
073
132
211
336
433
526
628
725
825
921
1013
1143
1232
1312
1427
156
1620
1732
1818
1925
204
2120
2211
238
2423
2514
2638
2712
2810
296
3031
3112
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"was carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs111
matches(empty)
12.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences110
ratio0.045
matches
0"The air smelled of damp stone and something sharper—burnt copper."
1"A flicker passed over her face—something sharp in her gaze."
2"Her reflection in the mirror showed her older—older than forty-one."
3"“Wait.” She pulled a small device from her pocket—a signal jammer."
4"The reflection now showed a figure standing behind them—tall, faceless."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount524
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.019083969465648856
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0057251908396946565
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean6.61
std3.89
cv0.589
sampleLengths
011
122
210
315
415
512
610
75
85
99
102
117
1211
139
149
159
1616
178
1813
1913
203
217
2210
238
246
2519
267
272
287
295
304
316
3215
334
349
356
3611
375
3811
3910
405
417
4210
435
445
453
469
474
484
4910
56.06% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners40
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Somewhere, a clock struck midnight."
1"Somewhere, another rift stirred."
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences75
matches
0"She adjusted her grip on"
1"Her green eyes flickered between"
2"She tapped a spot near"
3"She held the vial to"
4"They moved deeper into the"
5"she said, pointing to a"
6"Her reflection in the mirror"
7"She pulled a small device"
8"She traced the symbols"
9"She turned to Eva."
10"She didn’t turn."
11"They sprinted as stones rained"
12"It glinted like the compass."
ratio0.173
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences75
matches
0"Rain lashed against the rusted"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood at"
2"The air smelled of damp"
3"She adjusted her grip on"
4"The needle quivered, pointing not"
5"Eva Kowalski crouched nearby, fingers"
6"Her green eyes flickered between"
7"Harlow knelt beside her, boots"
8"Eva spread the parchment on"
9"A circle marked with chalk,"
10"She tapped a spot near"
11"Harlow nodded, pulling a small"
12"She held the vial to"
13"Eva countered, brushing dust from"
14"Harlow leaned closer."
15"The mirror’s surface rippled, distorting"
16"A flicker passed over her"
17"A low hum vibrated through"
18"The Compass spun wildly, needle"
19"Eva’s hand hovered over her"
ratio0.867
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.229
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.114
82.3899%