Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS306DVKFQTN2R9H8W4P1A

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
14.2s
Cost:
$0.000111
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted metallic, like blood left too long in a tin cup. Aurora stepped off the narrow path, boots crunching on dry leaves that didn’t rustle underfoot. The moon hung low, a pale eye peering through branches that seemed to lean closer. She checked the Heartstone Pendant at her throat. It thrummed once, soft as a heartbeat, then stilled. A silence pressed against her ears, thick enough to choke on. Somewhere beyond the ring of ancient oaks, a branch snapped. Not wind. Too sharp. Her hand drifted to the small knife at her belt. The pendant pulsed again, faint heat seeping through fabric. She moved forward, each step deliberate. The ground sloped downward, roots curling like skeletal fingers. Shadows pooled thick between trunks, swallowing light. A flicker caught her eye—a shape darting between trees. Gone before she could focus. Her breath hitched. The air shifted, carrying a scent not of earth or decay, but something sweeter, cloying. Like honey left to rot. She swallowed hard, throat dry. The pendant’s glow dimmed, then brightened, casting jagged patterns on bark. Footsteps echoed behind her. Slow. Uneven. She spun, but saw only darkness. The sound stopped. Then started again, closer now. Her pulse thudded in her ears. A whisper slithered through the air, not quite words. It slid under her skin, settling cold in her chest. She gripped the knife tighter. The pendant burned hotter, almost painful. The trees ahead twisted inward, forming a tunnel of gnarled limbs. She stepped through. The ground softened, spongy with moss. Something wet brushed her ankle—slime? No. Something else. She stumbled back, heart racing. A low hum rose, vibrating in her bones. The pendant flared, blindingly bright. Shapes emerged from the gloom: tall, indistinct figures with elongated limbs. Their faces were smooth, featureless, yet she felt their gaze like needles. She backed away, tripping over a root. Kneeling, she clawed at the dirt. The pendant slipped free, landing with a clink. The figures paused. The hum ceased. A single word formed in her mind, unbidden: *Stay.* Her legs gave out. She lay back, staring at the canopy above. Stars blinked through leaves, but the sky felt wrong—too close, too heavy. The pendant lay beside her, pulsing once more. A shadow detached itself from the trees. It moved with purpose now, slow and deliberate. Aurora’s breath came shallow. The pendant’s glow faded, leaving only the memory of warmth. The figure reached for her. She closed her eyes. The world went dark. Then— A scream tore from her throat, raw and unanswered. The pendant lay still. The figures vanished. The grove held its breath. And somewhere, deep in the earth, something ancient stirred.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount448
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount448
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"racing"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulsed"
2"flicker"
3"footsteps"
4"echoed"
5"pulse"
6"whisper"
7"racing"
8"gloom"
9"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen15
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords445
ratio0.002
matches
0"Stay."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions2
wordCount445
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity0.22
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity0
worstWindowName(null)
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
persons
0"Pendant"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
82.43% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite words"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords2.247
wordCount445
matches
0"not of earth or decay, but something sweeter, cloying"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean21.19
std16.66
cv0.786
sampleLengths
060
144
236
339
426
530
633
736
827
99
1032
1129
125
134
144
151
169
174
183
195
209
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs88
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences66
ratio0.061
matches
0"A flicker caught her eye—a shape darting between trees."
1"Something wet brushed her ankle—slime?"
2"Stars blinked through leaves, but the sky felt wrong—too close, too heavy."
3"Then—"
88.13% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount448
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.05357142857142857
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.006696428571428571
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean6.74
std3.54
cv0.525
sampleLengths
013
115
215
38
49
511
610
72
82
910
109
116
129
137
149
155
163
1715
185
195
2011
214
221
231
246
253
265
276
289
2910
305
316
3211
333
346
355
361
372
385
398
405
4111
4212
437
446
458
463
473
489
494
48.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3484848484848485
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners23
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"Somewhere beyond the ring of"
1"Then started again, closer now."
ratio0.034
97.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences59
matches
0"She checked the Heartstone Pendant"
1"It thrummed once, soft as"
2"Her hand drifted to the"
3"She moved forward, each step"
4"Her breath hitched."
5"She swallowed hard, throat dry."
6"She spun, but saw only"
7"Her pulse thudded in her"
8"It slid under her skin,"
9"She gripped the knife tighter."
10"She stepped through."
11"She stumbled back, heart racing."
12"Their faces were smooth, featureless,"
13"She backed away, tripping over"
14"Her legs gave out."
15"She lay back, staring at"
16"It moved with purpose now,"
17"She closed her eyes."
ratio0.305
10.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences59
matches
0"The air tasted metallic, like"
1"Aurora stepped off the narrow"
2"The moon hung low, a"
3"She checked the Heartstone Pendant"
4"It thrummed once, soft as"
5"A silence pressed against her"
6"Her hand drifted to the"
7"The pendant pulsed again, faint"
8"She moved forward, each step"
9"The ground sloped downward, roots"
10"Shadows pooled thick between trunks,"
11"A flicker caught her eye—a"
12"Her breath hitched."
13"The air shifted, carrying a"
14"She swallowed hard, throat dry."
15"The pendant’s glow dimmed, then"
16"Footsteps echoed behind her."
17"She spun, but saw only"
18"The sound stopped."
19"Her pulse thudded in her"
ratio0.898
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences15
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Aurora stepped off the narrow path, boots crunching on dry leaves that didn’t rustle underfoot."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.7866%