Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS3KAEJW0CY87Y4FFZNSZ6

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
28.9s
Cost:
$0.000193
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain lashed against the pavement like a thousand tiny fists, each drop catching the sickly glow of the green neon sign above The Raven’s Nest. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles that reflected the distorted city lights, her breath coming in short bursts between steps. The air was thick with the scent of wet wool and distant exhaust, but beneath it all lingered something sharper—fear, maybe, or the metallic tang of blood. She didn’t know what she’d lost three years ago, but she knew the weight of that absence, how it carved hollows in her chest where certainty used to sit. Tomás Herrera moved like smoke through the alleyway, his dark curls plastered to his forehead by the rain. The scar along his left forearm caught the light, a thin white line that seemed to pulse with every step. His Saint Christopher medallion glinted faintly beneath his coat, a small anchor against the chaos. He’d seen worse than this—the hospital wards, the midnight calls, the faces of people who shouldn’t have survived—but tonight felt different. The air hummed, almost alive, as if the city itself were holding its breath. Harlow’s fingers tightened around the leather strap of her watch, worn smooth by years of gripping it during stakeouts and interrogations. She’d chased ghosts before, but never one like him. Not someone who carried both fear and resolve in equal measure. Her jaw set, she pushed open the creaking door of The Raven’s Nest, the bell above it jingling a half-hearted warning. Inside, the bar was a labyrinth of shadows and low voices, maps pinned to walls like trophies, photographs of faces long forgotten. A man in a trench coat leaned over a table, counting coins that shimmered unnaturally under the green light. “Tomás?” Harlow’s voice cut through the murmur, sharp as a blade. He looked up, eyes widening as recognition flickered across his face. For a heartbeat, neither moved. Then he stood, slow and deliberate, the scar on his arm catching the light again. “You shouldn’t be here.” “Neither should you,” he replied, voice steady despite the rain drumming against the roof. “But here we are.” The conversation hung between them, heavy with unspoken truths. Harlow’s gaze swept the room—past the patrons, past the hidden door behind the bookshelf, past the faint outline of something moving in the corner. Her mind raced through scenarios: a trap, a confession, a death. Three years ago, she’d learned that some answers came at too high a price. Tomás reached into his coat, pulling out a folded piece of paper. “I gave you this,” he said, thrusting it toward her. It fluttered to the table, landing beside a glass of amber liquid that smelled of burnt sugar and iron. Harlow picked it up, unfolding it carefully. The handwriting was jagged, urgent. Coordinates? A name? Or something else entirely? “Where’s he?” she asked, though she already knew the answer. Tomás shook his head. “Not him. *It.* Whatever’s waiting down there.” He tapped the hidden door behind him, the one she hadn’t noticed until now. “The Veil Market moves every full moon. If we go down there, we’re stepping into a world that doesn’t want us.” Harlow’s pulse quickened. She’d heard whispers about it—a black market beneath Camden, where enchanted goods changed hands and secrets were currency. But she’d dismissed them as urban legend. Now, faced with Tomás’s trembling hands and the weight of her own doubts, the line between myth and reality blurred. “You think I don’t know what’s at stake?” she snapped, though her voice wavered. “Three years ago, I lost someone because I ignored the signs. Because I thought I could control it.” Tomás stepped closer, his eyes reflecting the neon like fractured stars. “This isn’t about losing anyone else. This is about stopping whatever’s coming. And if we stay here, we’re just… waiting.” Outside, thunder rolled across the sky, shaking the windows. Somewhere in the distance, a siren wailed—a sound that might have been real or just another trick of the night. Harlow stared at the coordinates, then at Tomás, then back at the door. Her hand hovered over the handle, leather warm from his touch. She thought of her watch ticking away seconds, of the hollow space where her partner’s laughter used to live. Thought of the scar on her own forearm, a reminder that some wounds never heal. Thought of the girl who’d once believed justice was a straight line, now realizing it bent like the rain-slicked streets beneath her feet. “One more step,” she said finally, turning the handle. The door groaned open, revealing darkness so thick it seemed to swallow light whole. Tomás smiled, small and sad. “Welcome to the unknown.” They descended together, the air growing colder with each step, the smell of ozone mixing with damp stone. The hidden room beyond the bookshelf was narrower than she’d imagined, shelves lined with jars of glowing liquids and folded papers that whispered when touched. A figure stood at the far end, back turned, cloak shifting like smoke. Harlow’s breath caught—not from fear, but recognition. “You,” she breathed, stepping forward. The figure turned. And the world tilted. The air crackled, static raising the hairs on her arms. Shadows pooled around them, twisting into shapes that defied logic—a hand reaching from the wall, eyes blooming in the dark like flowers opening to poison. Tomás moved first, grabbing her wrist, pulling her back as the figure raised a hand, palm outward. “Don’t,” he whispered, voice raw. “It sees everything.” Harlow’s heart hammered against her ribs. She saw the coordinates still in her hand, saw the scar on Tomás’s arm, saw the way the green neon outside pulsed faster, brighter, as if feeding on their hesitation. Then the figure spoke, voice layered with echoes. “You cannot outrun what you’ve buried.” And the night swallowed them whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.118
94.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount983
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.53% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount983
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"almost alive"
count1
3
word"resolve"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"raced"
count1
8
word"fluttered"
count1
9
word"quickened"
count1
10
word"wavered"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"reminder"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count1
14
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"almost alive"
3"resolve"
4"shimmered"
5"flickered"
6"unspoken"
7"raced"
8"fluttered"
9"quickened"
10"wavered"
11"fractured"
12"reminder"
13"pulsed"
14"echoes"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
56.28% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences66
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords975
ratio0.001
matches
0"It."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount865
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Harlow9
Quinn1
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás9
Camden1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
places(empty)
globalScore0.98
windowScore0.833
57.41% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"line that seemed to pulse with every step"
1"as if feeding on their hesitation"
97.44% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.026
wordCount975
matches
0"not from fear, but recognition"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"learned that some"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean39
std29.41
cv0.754
sampleLengths
0102
188
2103
346
418
558
660
710
846
948
1032
1131
1253
1357
1423
159
1663
175
183
194
2052
218
2236
2314
246
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs155
matches
0"were holding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences74
ratio0.095
matches
0"The air was thick with the scent of wet wool and distant exhaust, but beneath it all lingered something sharper—fear, maybe, or the metallic tang of blood."
1"He’d seen worse than this—the hospital wards, the midnight calls, the faces of people who shouldn’t have survived—but tonight felt different."
2"Harlow’s gaze swept the room—past the patrons, past the hidden door behind the bookshelf, past the faint outline of something moving in the corner."
3"She’d heard whispers about it—a black market beneath Camden, where enchanted goods changed hands and secrets were currency."
4"Somewhere in the distance, a siren wailed—a sound that might have been real or just another trick of the night."
5"Harlow’s breath caught—not from fear, but recognition."
6"Shadows pooled around them, twisting into shapes that defied logic—a hand reaching from the wall, eyes blooming in the dark like flowers opening to poison."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount875
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.029714285714285714
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006857142857142857
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean13.18
std7.41
cv0.562
sampleLengths
025
121
227
329
418
520
615
721
814
921
109
1111
1221
1322
1419
1511
1611
175
1815
194
2014
214
229
2324
2411
2514
2612
2710
2819
297
305
311
322
334
3410
354
3621
3721
383
3918
407
4120
4214
4318
4411
4520
469
4720
4813
4911
75.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4594594594594595
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences64
matches
0"Then he stood, slow and"
1"Somewhere in the distance, a"
2"Then the figure spoke, voice"
ratio0.047
88.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences64
matches
0"She didn’t know what she’d"
1"His Saint Christopher medallion glinted"
2"He’d seen worse than this—the"
3"She’d chased ghosts before, but"
4"Her jaw set, she pushed"
5"He looked up, eyes widening"
6"he replied, voice steady despite"
7"Her mind raced through scenarios:"
8"he said, thrusting it toward"
9"It fluttered to the table,"
10"she asked, though she already"
11"He tapped the hidden door"
12"She’d heard whispers about it—a"
13"she snapped, though her voice"
14"Her hand hovered over the"
15"She thought of her watch"
16"she said finally, turning the"
17"They descended together, the air"
18"she breathed, stepping forward"
19"he whispered, voice raw"
ratio0.328
77.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences64
matches
0"Rain lashed against the pavement"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed"
2"The air was thick with"
3"She didn’t know what she’d"
4"Tomás Herrera moved like smoke"
5"The scar along his left"
6"His Saint Christopher medallion glinted"
7"He’d seen worse than this—the"
8"The air hummed, almost alive,"
9"Harlow’s fingers tightened around the"
10"She’d chased ghosts before, but"
11"Her jaw set, she pushed"
12"A man in a trench"
13"Harlow’s voice cut through the"
14"He looked up, eyes widening"
15"he replied, voice steady despite"
16"The conversation hung between them,"
17"Harlow’s gaze swept the room—past"
18"Her mind raced through scenarios:"
19"Tomás reached into his coat,"
ratio0.766
78.13% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"Now, faced with Tomás’s trembling"
ratio0.016
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles that reflected the distorted city lights, her breath coming in short bursts between steps."
1"He’d seen worse than this—the hospital wards, the midnight calls, the faces of people who shouldn’t have survived—but tonight felt different."
2"A man in a trench coat leaned over a table, counting coins that shimmered unnaturally under the green light."
3"It fluttered to the table, landing beside a glass of amber liquid that smelled of burnt sugar and iron."
4"Thought of the girl who’d once believed justice was a straight line, now realizing it bent like the rain-slicked streets beneath her feet."
5"The hidden room beyond the bookshelf was narrower than she’d imagined, shelves lined with jars of glowing liquids and folded papers that whispered when touched."
6"Tomás moved first, grabbing her wrist, pulling her back as the figure raised a hand, palm outward."
7"She saw the coordinates still in her hand, saw the scar on Tomás’s arm, saw the way the green neon outside pulsed faster, brighter, as if feeding on their hesit…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he replied, voice steady despite the rain drumming against the roof"
1"she snapped, though her voice wavered"
2"he whispered, voice raw"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she snapped (snap)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0.429
effectiveRatio0.353
76.8179%