| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.471 | | leniency | 0.941 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 94.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 983 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 13.53% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 983 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "almost alive" | | 3 | "resolve" | | 4 | "shimmered" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "unspoken" | | 7 | "raced" | | 8 | "fluttered" | | 9 | "quickened" | | 10 | "wavered" | | 11 | "fractured" | | 12 | "reminder" | | 13 | "pulsed" | | 14 | "echoes" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.28% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 975 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 865 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.04 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Tomás" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Harlow | 9 | | Quinn | 1 | | Herrera | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Tomás | 9 | | Camden | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Harlow" | | 2 | "Quinn" | | 3 | "Herrera" | | 4 | "Saint" | | 5 | "Christopher" | | 6 | "Tomás" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.98 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "line that seemed to pulse with every step" | | 1 | "as if feeding on their hesitation" |
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| 97.44% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.026 | | wordCount | 975 | | matches | | 0 | "not from fear, but recognition" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 39 | | std | 29.41 | | cv | 0.754 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 102 | | 1 | 88 | | 2 | 103 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 57 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 63 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 52 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.095 | | matches | | 0 | "The air was thick with the scent of wet wool and distant exhaust, but beneath it all lingered something sharper—fear, maybe, or the metallic tang of blood." | | 1 | "He’d seen worse than this—the hospital wards, the midnight calls, the faces of people who shouldn’t have survived—but tonight felt different." | | 2 | "Harlow’s gaze swept the room—past the patrons, past the hidden door behind the bookshelf, past the faint outline of something moving in the corner." | | 3 | "She’d heard whispers about it—a black market beneath Camden, where enchanted goods changed hands and secrets were currency." | | 4 | "Somewhere in the distance, a siren wailed—a sound that might have been real or just another trick of the night." | | 5 | "Harlow’s breath caught—not from fear, but recognition." | | 6 | "Shadows pooled around them, twisting into shapes that defied logic—a hand reaching from the wall, eyes blooming in the dark like flowers opening to poison." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 875 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.029714285714285714 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006857142857142857 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 13.18 | | std | 7.41 | | cv | 0.562 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 75.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4594594594594595 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he stood, slow and" | | 1 | "Somewhere in the distance, a" | | 2 | "Then the figure spoke, voice" |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 88.75% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t know what she’d" | | 1 | "His Saint Christopher medallion glinted" | | 2 | "He’d seen worse than this—the" | | 3 | "She’d chased ghosts before, but" | | 4 | "Her jaw set, she pushed" | | 5 | "He looked up, eyes widening" | | 6 | "he replied, voice steady despite" | | 7 | "Her mind raced through scenarios:" | | 8 | "he said, thrusting it toward" | | 9 | "It fluttered to the table," | | 10 | "she asked, though she already" | | 11 | "He tapped the hidden door" | | 12 | "She’d heard whispers about it—a" | | 13 | "she snapped, though her voice" | | 14 | "Her hand hovered over the" | | 15 | "She thought of her watch" | | 16 | "she said finally, turning the" | | 17 | "They descended together, the air" | | 18 | "she breathed, stepping forward" | | 19 | "he whispered, voice raw" |
| | ratio | 0.328 | |
| 77.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain lashed against the pavement" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed" | | 2 | "The air was thick with" | | 3 | "She didn’t know what she’d" | | 4 | "Tomás Herrera moved like smoke" | | 5 | "The scar along his left" | | 6 | "His Saint Christopher medallion glinted" | | 7 | "He’d seen worse than this—the" | | 8 | "The air hummed, almost alive," | | 9 | "Harlow’s fingers tightened around the" | | 10 | "She’d chased ghosts before, but" | | 11 | "Her jaw set, she pushed" | | 12 | "A man in a trench" | | 13 | "Harlow’s voice cut through the" | | 14 | "He looked up, eyes widening" | | 15 | "he replied, voice steady despite" | | 16 | "The conversation hung between them," | | 17 | "Harlow’s gaze swept the room—past" | | 18 | "Her mind raced through scenarios:" | | 19 | "Tomás reached into his coat," |
| | ratio | 0.766 | |
| 78.13% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, faced with Tomás’s trembling" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles that reflected the distorted city lights, her breath coming in short bursts between steps." | | 1 | "He’d seen worse than this—the hospital wards, the midnight calls, the faces of people who shouldn’t have survived—but tonight felt different." | | 2 | "A man in a trench coat leaned over a table, counting coins that shimmered unnaturally under the green light." | | 3 | "It fluttered to the table, landing beside a glass of amber liquid that smelled of burnt sugar and iron." | | 4 | "Thought of the girl who’d once believed justice was a straight line, now realizing it bent like the rain-slicked streets beneath her feet." | | 5 | "The hidden room beyond the bookshelf was narrower than she’d imagined, shelves lined with jars of glowing liquids and folded papers that whispered when touched." | | 6 | "Tomás moved first, grabbing her wrist, pulling her back as the figure raised a hand, palm outward." | | 7 | "She saw the coordinates still in her hand, saw the scar on Tomás’s arm, saw the way the green neon outside pulsed faster, brighter, as if feeding on their hesit…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "he replied, voice steady despite the rain drumming against the roof" | | 1 | "she snapped, though her voice wavered" | | 2 | "he whispered, voice raw" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she snapped (snap)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "he whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.412 | | leniency | 0.824 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.353 | |