Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS3PYA2MM6T3QWGHRJDVBS

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
24.1s
Cost:
$0.000163
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door creaks open just enough for Aurora Carter to see Lucien Moreau’s silhouette framed against the dim hallway light. His ivory cane leans against the wall beside him, the faint glint of its concealed blade catching the edge of her attention. She stands in the doorway of her flat above Eva’s, the scent of cardamom and old paper clinging to the air like a memory. The cat, Ptolemy, watches from the windowsill, tail flicking as if sensing the tension coiling between them. “You shouldn’t have come here,” she says, her voice steady but edged with something sharper than she intends. Her bright blue eyes narrow, scanning the lines of his face—the heterochromatic gaze, the way his platinum hair catches the light like liquid silver. She notices the faint scar on his jaw, a thin white line that mirrors the crescent on her own wrist. Lucien inclines his head, the movement slow, deliberate. “Neither should you have let me in.” His French accent lingers on the last word, a relic of Marseille’s salons that now feels out of place in this cramped London flat. The security of three deadbolts feels meaningless against the weight of what they’ve both carried since they last met. Aurora steps aside, gesturing him in with a flick of her wrist. The room swallows him whole—stacks of books teeter on every surface, scrolls spilling from wicker baskets, the faint hum of a desk lamp casting shadows over maps marked with cryptic symbols. Ptolemy leaps down, arching his back as if to greet Lucien, then settles beside a table littered with half-empty teacups and a brass astrolabe. “Sit,” she orders, though her fingers twitch toward the small dagger tucked into her boot. Not out of fear, but habit. The one she keeps close since the night she fled Evan’s apartment, since the night she learned some wounds never fully heal. He lowers himself into the chair opposite her, cane thudding softly against the floorboards. The cane’s handle bears a faint engraving—a serpent coiled around a key, the same symbol etched into the locket she’d once pressed to her lips. Lucien notices it too. His amber eye flickers to hers, a silent question. “You’re still using that?” he asks, nodding at the dagger. “Still carrying ghosts?” she counters, leaning forward. The air between them crackles, old heat buried beneath layers of unsaid things. For a heartbeat, neither moves. Then Lucien reaches into his coat pocket, withdraws a folded letter sealed with wax the color of dried blood. He slides it across the table. “This arrived today. No return address.” Aurora’s breath hitches. The seal bears the crest of a serpent devouring its own tail—a sigil from the old world, the one they’d sworn to leave behind. Her stomach drops. “Evan sent this?” “Or someone pretending to be him.” His voice is low, almost amused. “The handwriting’s off, but the intent isn’t. They want us to meet. Tonight. At the old clocktower on Fleet Street.” She stares at the letter, the ink bleeding slightly where her thumb has pressed. Memories surge: Lucien’s laughter in the rain, the way his hands had trembled when she’d pulled away after their last fight. The way she’d told him to stay away, to let him go. How she’d failed to stay away. “Why now?” she whispers. “Because the past isn’t done with us yet.” He stands abruptly, cane tapping against the leg of the table. “We have a choice to make. Run again… or face what we’ve been running from.” Ptolemy mews sharply, pressing against her ankle. She kneels, brushing a stray hair from his forehead. The touch is electric, a spark that ignites something dormant in her chest. “You always did hate running.” Lucien’s smile is sad, crooked. “And you always knew how to make me stay.” Outside, thunder rumbles. The clocktower looms in her mind’s eye, its gears grinding like the bones of their shared history. She thinks of Evan’s betrayal, of the nights she’d lain awake wondering if he’d ever truly understood her. Of the way Lucien had seen through her armor, had always seen through her. “What if we don’t come?” she asks. His gaze drops to her lips, then lifts to her eyes. “Then we let the past bury us both.” The letter trembles in her hand. Somewhere beyond the walls, a clock begins to chime. She imagines the tower’s shadow stretching across cobblestones, the cold bite of fate waiting there. But her feet move before her mind can protest, her fingers closing around the dagger’s hilt. Lucien watches her go, the ghost of a smile playing at his mouth. “Come on, Rory. Let’s see if we can still burn bright enough to light the way.” The door closes behind them, sealing the room in silence. Ptolemy watches, eyes gleaming, as the storm gathers outside.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He stands abruptly [abruptly]"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.118
75.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount811
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"sharply"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount811
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"glint"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"looms"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"glint"
1"tension"
2"scanning"
3"weight"
4"etched"
5"stomach"
6"trembled"
7"electric"
8"looms"
9"silence"
10"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"begins to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords807
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount684
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Aurora3
Carter1
Lucien9
Moreau1
Eva1
Ptolemy4
French1
Marseille1
London1
Evan2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Eva"
5"Ptolemy"
6"Evan"
places
0"Marseille"
1"London"
globalScore0.842
windowScore1
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if sensing the tension coiling between them"
76.08% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.239
wordCount807
matches
0"Not out of fear, but habit"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs22
mean36.68
std20.46
cv0.558
sampleLengths
083
162
258
367
443
552
610
720
836
933
1032
1153
124
1334
1434
1514
1652
177
1819
1946
2029
2119
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs111
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences61
ratio0.066
matches
0"Her bright blue eyes narrow, scanning the lines of his face—the heterochromatic gaze, the way his platinum hair catches the light like liquid silver."
1"The room swallows him whole—stacks of books teeter on every surface, scrolls spilling from wicker baskets, the faint hum of a desk lamp casting shadows over maps marked with cryptic symbols."
2"The cane’s handle bears a faint engraving—a serpent coiled around a key, the same symbol etched into the locket she’d once pressed to her lips."
3"The seal bears the crest of a serpent devouring its own tail—a sigil from the old world, the one they’d sworn to leave behind."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount689
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.036284470246734396
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008708272859216255
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean13.23
std7.16
cv0.542
sampleLengths
020
122
224
317
418
524
620
78
831
919
1012
1131
1224
1315
146
1522
1614
1725
184
199
2010
217
2213
235
2419
256
266
273
2824
293
303
3112
3220
3314
3421
3512
366
374
3819
3915
407
419
4213
435
445
459
463
4717
4818
4914
81.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.4918032786885246
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences51
matches
0"Then Lucien reaches into his"
1"Somewhere beyond the walls, a"
ratio0.039
63.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences51
matches
0"His ivory cane leans against"
1"She stands in the doorway"
2"she says, her voice steady"
3"Her bright blue eyes narrow,"
4"She notices the faint scar"
5"His French accent lingers on"
6"she orders, though her fingers"
7"He lowers himself into the"
8"His amber eye flickers to"
9"he asks, nodding at the"
10"she counters, leaning forward"
11"He slides it across the"
12"Her stomach drops."
13"His voice is low, almost"
14"She stares at the letter,"
15"He stands abruptly, cane tapping"
16"She kneels, brushing a stray"
17"She thinks of Evan’s betrayal,"
18"His gaze drops to her"
19"She imagines the tower’s shadow"
ratio0.392
38.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences51
matches
0"The door creaks open just"
1"His ivory cane leans against"
2"She stands in the doorway"
3"The cat, Ptolemy, watches from"
4"she says, her voice steady"
5"Her bright blue eyes narrow,"
6"She notices the faint scar"
7"Lucien inclines his head, the"
8"His French accent lingers on"
9"The security of three deadbolts"
10"Aurora steps aside, gesturing him"
11"The room swallows him whole—stacks"
12"Ptolemy leaps down, arching his"
13"she orders, though her fingers"
14"The one she keeps close"
15"He lowers himself into the"
16"The cane’s handle bears a"
17"Lucien notices it too."
18"His amber eye flickers to"
19"he asks, nodding at the"
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The cat, Ptolemy, watches from the windowsill, tail flicking as if sensing the tension coiling between them."
1"She notices the faint scar on his jaw, a thin white line that mirrors the crescent on her own wrist."
2"Ptolemy leaps down, arching his back as if to greet Lucien, then settles beside a table littered with half-empty teacups and a brass astrolabe."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He stands abruptly, cane tapping against the leg of the table"
32.35% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she orders (order)"
1"she whispers (whisper)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.588
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.235
79.6022%