Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS3QYVG5G5H8AVEE4CJNV2

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
35.5s
Cost:
$0.000235
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain slicks the iron stairs as Detective Harlow Quinn descends into the belly of the city, where the air tastes of rust and old secrets. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden yawns open like a mouth, its walls slick with condensation and the faint glow of phosphorescent moss. A bone token rests on the platform’s center, its surface carved with runes that flicker when Harlow’s leather-clad fingers brush it. She pockets the token without ceremony, her sharp jaw tightening against the chill. Beside her, Eva Kowalski adjusts her round glasses, the lenses catching the dim light as she tucks a strand of curly red hair behind her ear. Her satchel sways with the rhythm of her nervous habit, filled with pages of notes and maps annotated in green ink. “Another missing person,” Harlow says, her voice low, almost a growl. “But this one’s different. The victim—Lena Voss—was a graduate student at the British Museum. Specialized in pre-Roman artifacts.” She kneels, gloved hands tracing the edge of a circle drawn in ash. The chalk is fresh, but the lines waver, as if someone tried to erase them and failed. “No signs of struggle. No blood. Just… absence.” Eva leans closer, her freckled cheek brushing the edge of the circle. “Maybe she was taken by something that doesn’t leave traces. Or maybe she walked into it herself.” Her eyes flick to the compass at Harlow’s wrist, its brass casing etched with sigils that hum faintly against the metal. “That thing’s been acting up since we entered the station. It’s pointing north, but the needle’s spinning.” Harlow nods, her gaze never leaving the platform. “The Veil Compass. Crafted by a Shade artisan. It shouldn’t work here. This isn’t its domain.” She stands, brushing dust from her trousers. “But it does. And it’s pointing toward the old sewer tunnels beneath Camden Town.” They move through the station’s skeletal framework, footsteps echoing like gunshots in the silence. The air thickens with the scent of damp stone and something metallic—like iron filings left too long in the rain. Harlow’s watch ticks loudly, a metronome counting down to something unseen. Eva trails behind, her satchel bumping against the wall as she consults a weathered journal. “Lena’s research focused on the *Lugdunum Codex*,” she murmurs, flipping pages. “A text about liminal spaces—places between worlds. She wrote about ‘thresholds’ and ‘veils.’” Her voice drops. “What if she found a way through?” Harlow stops at a rusted door marked with a symbol: a spiral encircling a key. The metal is cold, almost alive. “This isn’t a normal door,” she says. “It’s sealed with a ward. Someone—or something—kept it closed.” Her hand hovers over the handle, then she presses a finger to the sigil on her compass. The needle steadies, pointing deeper into the station. Eva’s breath hitches. “The Veil Compass. It’s reacting to the ward. That means there’s a rift nearby. But why would Lena go looking for it?” Harlow’s jaw tightens. Three years ago, DS Morris vanished during a case involving similar symbols. The official report called it a collapse. Harlow knew better. “Because she thought she could control it,” she says quietly. “Or someone promised her she could.” They push through the door. The tunnel beyond is narrow, its walls lined with graffiti that shifts when viewed sideways—faces, eyes, mouths that blink. The compass spins faster now, its brass casing warm against Harlow’s wrist. They descend, the air growing colder, until they reach a chamber where the floor gives way to a chasm. Below, a river of liquid shadow flows, reflecting nothing. “Water doesn’t reflect here,” Eva whispers. “It swallows light.” Harlow steps to the edge, her boots crunching on gravel. The compass dips sharply, pointing downward. “There’s a bridge,” she says. “Not made of stone. Made of… memory.” Eva follows her gaze. At the far end, a thin line of light stretches across the void—a rope bridge woven from threads of gold and silver. “It’s real,” she breathes. “But how?” Harlow’s fingers tighten around the compass. “It’s not real. Not anymore.” She pulls a small vial from her satchel—Eva’s notes had mentioned a substance called *umbra essence*, a substance that binds souls to thresholds. “Lena used it to anchor herself. To cross.” Eva’s eyes widen. “But if she’s already crossed—” A figure materializes at the bridge’s midpoint. Tall, cloaked in shadows that seem to breathe, its face obscured by a mask of shifting patterns. The air thrums with static. Harlow’s hand drifts to her gun, but she hesitates. “Stay back,” she says. The figure tilts its head. “Detective Quinn.” Its voice is a chorus of whispers. “You seek answers. But some doors close because they must.” Harlow steps forward, the compass burning against her skin. “My partner died trying to open one. I won’t let you take another.” The figure laughs, a sound like breaking glass. “Your partner was weak. He couldn’t hold the veil.” Eva steps beside Harlow, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. “He wasn’t weak. He just didn’t know what he was dealing with.” She opens her journal, revealing sketches of the *Lugdunum Codex*. “Lena found the same text. She thought she could use it to save him.” The figure’s mask ripples. “And now you’ll stop her?” Harlow meets its gaze. “No. We’ll make sure she understands.” The compass spins wildly, its needle piercing the air like a spear. The bridge trembles. Eva reaches for Harlow’s arm, but Harlow shakes her off. “Go,” she says. “Find her. Tell her the truth.” Eva’s eyes fill with tears. “What truth?” Harlow looks down at the shadow river, at the figure’s fading form. “That some truths aren’t meant to be known. That some doors stay closed.” The compass falls from her hand, landing with a clink. The bridge dissolves. The figure vanishes. They climb back up the tunnels, the air lighter now, as if the station itself exhales. Eva leans against the wall, breathing hard. “Did we save her?” Harlow stares at the bone token in her pocket. It’s warm now, pulsing like a heartbeat. “We gave her a choice,” she says. “And she chose to walk away.” Above ground, dawn breaks over Camden. The city stirs, unaware of the threshold they’d nearly crossed. Harlow adjusts her watch, its ticking steady again. Somewhere in the distance, a train rumbles through the tunnels, carrying secrets back to the surface. Eva watches her, then turns to the exit. “Next time,” she says softly, “let’s investigate a murder that doesn’t involve ghosts.” Harlow smirks, though her eyes remain distant. “Where’s the fun in that?” The Veil Compass lies forgotten in the dirt, its sigils fading as the sun rises higher. Somewhere, a rift closes. Somewhere else, a door remains shut. And in the quiet of the abandoned station, two detectives walk on, their shadows stretching long behind them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she says quietly [quietly]"
1"she says softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.405
leniency0.81
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.095
91.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1149
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1149
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"framework"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"almost alive"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"chill"
2"tracing"
3"etched"
4"framework"
5"footsteps"
6"echoing"
7"silence"
8"almost alive"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
74.01% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords6
totalWords1141
ratio0.005
matches
0"Lugdunum Codex"
1"umbra essence"
2"Lugdunum Codex"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
13.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount808
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.72
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow22
Quinn1
Tube1
Camden2
Eva13
Kowalski1
Morris1
Codex1
Veil1
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Eva"
4"Kowalski"
5"Morris"
6"Compass"
places(empty)
globalScore0.139
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"shadows that seem to breathe, its face obscured by a mask of shifting patterns"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1141
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"mouths that blink"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean35.66
std24.46
cv0.686
sampleLengths
0129
167
267
345
460
534
662
725
841
964
109
1128
1232
1342
148
1542
1624
1722
1817
1949
209
2110
2234
237
2425
2516
2627
2729
2840
2921
3012
3144
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
35.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences106
ratio0.038
matches
0"The air thickens with the scent of damp stone and something metallic—like iron filings left too long in the rain."
1"The tunnel beyond is narrow, its walls lined with graffiti that shifts when viewed sideways—faces, eyes, mouths that blink."
2"At the far end, a thin line of light stretches across the void—a rope bridge woven from threads of gold and silver."
3"“It’s not real. Not anymore.” She pulls a small vial from her satchel—Eva’s notes had mentioned a substance called *umbra essence*, a substance that binds souls to thresholds."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount812
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.027093596059113302
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.011083743842364532
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean10.76
std7.08
cv0.658
sampleLengths
025
123
221
313
426
521
611
731
817
98
1012
1138
1217
138
1423
1514
1614
1720
1811
1915
2011
2116
227
2315
246
257
2626
278
283
2922
303
3112
327
333
3410
356
365
3719
3812
3919
409
416
423
4310
446
455
467
474
4822
494
61.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.39622641509433965
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences76
matches
0"Somewhere in the distance, a"
1"Somewhere, a rift closes."
2"Somewhere else, a door remains"
ratio0.039
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences76
matches
0"She pockets the token without"
1"Her satchel sways with the"
2"She kneels, gloved hands tracing"
3"Her eyes flick to the"
4"She stands, brushing dust from"
5"They move through the station’s"
6"she murmurs, flipping pages"
7"Her voice drops"
8"Her hand hovers over the"
9"she says quietly"
10"They push through the door."
11"They descend, the air growing"
12"She pulls a small vial"
13"Its voice is a chorus"
14"She opens her journal, revealing"
15"They climb back up the"
16"It’s warm now, pulsing like"
17"she says softly"
ratio0.237
25.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences76
matches
0"Rain slicks the iron stairs"
1"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
2"A bone token rests on"
3"She pockets the token without"
4"Her satchel sways with the"
5"Harlow says, her voice low,"
6"She kneels, gloved hands tracing"
7"The chalk is fresh, but"
8"Eva leans closer, her freckled"
9"Her eyes flick to the"
10"Harlow nods, her gaze never"
11"She stands, brushing dust from"
12"They move through the station’s"
13"The air thickens with the"
14"Harlow’s watch ticks loudly, a"
15"Eva trails behind, her satchel"
16"she murmurs, flipping pages"
17"Her voice drops"
18"Harlow stops at a rusted"
19"The metal is cold, almost"
ratio0.868
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow says, her voice low, almost a growl"
30.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she murmurs (murmur)"
1"she presses (press)"
2"Eva whispers (whisper)"
3"she breathes (breathe)"
4"She pulls (pull)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.619
rawRatio0.385
effectiveRatio0.238
82.9565%