| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she says quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "she says softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.405 | | leniency | 0.81 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |
| 91.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1149 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1149 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicker" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "tracing" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "framework" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "almost alive" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.01% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 106 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1141 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "Lugdunum Codex" | | 1 | "umbra essence" | | 2 | "Lugdunum Codex" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 13.86% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 808 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.72 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 22 | | Quinn | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 2 | | Eva | 13 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Codex | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Compass | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Camden" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Kowalski" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Compass" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.139 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "shadows that seem to breathe, its face obscured by a mask of shifting patterns" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 35.66 | | std | 24.46 | | cv | 0.686 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 129 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 67 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 64 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 44 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.04% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 106 | | ratio | 0.038 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickens with the scent of damp stone and something metallic—like iron filings left too long in the rain." | | 1 | "The tunnel beyond is narrow, its walls lined with graffiti that shifts when viewed sideways—faces, eyes, mouths that blink." | | 2 | "At the far end, a thin line of light stretches across the void—a rope bridge woven from threads of gold and silver." | | 3 | "“It’s not real. Not anymore.” She pulls a small vial from her satchel—Eva’s notes had mentioned a substance called *umbra essence*, a substance that binds souls to thresholds." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 812 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 22 | | adverbRatio | 0.027093596059113302 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011083743842364532 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 106 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 106 | | mean | 10.76 | | std | 7.08 | | cv | 0.658 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 61.32% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.39622641509433965 | | totalSentences | 106 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the distance, a" | | 1 | "Somewhere, a rift closes." | | 2 | "Somewhere else, a door remains" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "She pockets the token without" | | 1 | "Her satchel sways with the" | | 2 | "She kneels, gloved hands tracing" | | 3 | "Her eyes flick to the" | | 4 | "She stands, brushing dust from" | | 5 | "They move through the station’s" | | 6 | "she murmurs, flipping pages" | | 7 | "Her voice drops" | | 8 | "Her hand hovers over the" | | 9 | "she says quietly" | | 10 | "They push through the door." | | 11 | "They descend, the air growing" | | 12 | "She pulls a small vial" | | 13 | "Its voice is a chorus" | | 14 | "She opens her journal, revealing" | | 15 | "They climb back up the" | | 16 | "It’s warm now, pulsing like" | | 17 | "she says softly" |
| | ratio | 0.237 | |
| 25.79% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain slicks the iron stairs" | | 1 | "The abandoned Tube station beneath" | | 2 | "A bone token rests on" | | 3 | "She pockets the token without" | | 4 | "Her satchel sways with the" | | 5 | "Harlow says, her voice low," | | 6 | "She kneels, gloved hands tracing" | | 7 | "The chalk is fresh, but" | | 8 | "Eva leans closer, her freckled" | | 9 | "Her eyes flick to the" | | 10 | "Harlow nods, her gaze never" | | 11 | "She stands, brushing dust from" | | 12 | "They move through the station’s" | | 13 | "The air thickens with the" | | 14 | "Harlow’s watch ticks loudly, a" | | 15 | "Eva trails behind, her satchel" | | 16 | "she murmurs, flipping pages" | | 17 | "Her voice drops" | | 18 | "Harlow stops at a rusted" | | 19 | "The metal is cold, almost" |
| | ratio | 0.868 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.59% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow says, her voice low, almost a growl" |
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| 30.95% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmurs (murmur)" | | 1 | "she presses (press)" | | 2 | "Eva whispers (whisper)" | | 3 | "she breathes (breathe)" | | 4 | "She pulls (pull)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 42 | | tagDensity | 0.31 | | leniency | 0.619 | | rawRatio | 0.385 | | effectiveRatio | 0.238 | |