Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS459K0TZ151ZS8WNRZZTM

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
13.5s
Cost:
$0.000108
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted metallic, like rusted iron and old blood. Aurora stepped off the narrow path, boots crunching on gravel that hadn’t been there moments ago. The moon hung low, a pale eye watching. She pulled the Heartstone Pendant closer, its faint glow pulsing against her chest. The standing stones loomed ahead, ancient and unmoving. Time felt thick here, pressing against her skin. A rustle. Not wind. Something else. She froze. The trees around the clearing swayed though no breeze stirred. Her breath hitched. The pendant warmed, almost feverish. She turned slowly, eyes scanning the shadows. Nothing. Just the dark, thick with unseen weight. Footsteps. Light. Deliberate. Not hers. She tightened her grip on the silver chain. The ground beneath her feet felt spongy, damp. She moved forward, each step deliberate. The clearing opened wider, revealing a circle of moss-covered stones. At the center, a hollow in the earth glowed faintly. The pendant thrummed louder now. A whisper. Not words. Just sound, scraping against her nerves. She pressed forward, heart hammering. The air grew colder. Her breath misted. The pendant’s glow brightened, casting jagged shadows. Something shifted in the hollow. A shape, too tall, too thin. It didn’t move, but she felt it. Watching. She backed away, but the path had vanished. The stones closed in. The whisper rose, sharper now. Her pulse roared in her ears. She reached for the pendant, fingers trembling. The ground trembled. The hollow pulsed once, then stilled. A hand brushed her shoulder. Cold. Real. She spun, but the clearing was empty. The pendant burned against her skin. The whisper returned, clearer this time. A name. Her name. Aurora. She gasped, stumbling back. The stones began to shift, rearranging themselves. The hollow yawned wider. The pendant’s glow flared, blinding. Shadows coalesced into a figure—tall, faceless, its form flickering like smoke. It raised a hand. Aurora screamed, but no sound came. The figure stepped closer, and the world tilted. The pendant fell from her grasp, landing with a soft thud. The clearing dissolved into darkness. Silence. Then, a single flower bloomed where the pendant lay. Its petals were deep red, matching the gemstone. The air smelled of iron and decay. Aurora knelt, reaching for the flower. Her fingers brushed something beneath it—a small, carved token. A child’s drawing. A face, scratched out. The pendant’s glow faded. The figure was gone. Only the flower remained, its stem twisting upward, reaching toward the stars. Aurora stood, legs shaking. The path back appeared, faint but real. She walked, the flower clutched tightly. Behind her, the clearing whispered, but she didn’t look back. The night swallowed her steps, and the forest held its breath.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
77.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount446
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount446
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count3
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"scanning"
2"weight"
3"footsteps"
4"whisper"
5"pulse"
6"trembled"
7"pulsed"
8"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen16
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords444
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount444
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Aurora5
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.937
windowScore1
87.50% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"appeared, faint but real"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount444
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
0.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs9
mean49.33
std7.18
cv0.146
sampleLengths
063
141
252
348
439
546
650
747
858
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs90
matches(empty)
70.52% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences79
ratio0.025
matches
0"Shadows coalesced into a figure—tall, faceless, its form flickering like smoke."
1"Her fingers brushed something beneath it—a small, carved token."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount447
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.035794183445190156
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.008948545861297539
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean5.62
std3.25
cv0.579
sampleLengths
010
116
28
313
48
58
62
72
82
92
1010
113
125
137
141
157
161
171
181
192
208
218
226
2310
2410
255
262
272
286
295
304
313
327
335
346
357
361
378
384
395
406
417
423
436
445
451
461
477
486
496
39.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3037974683544304
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences61
matches
0"Just the dark, thick with"
1"Just sound, scraping against her"
2"Then, a single flower bloomed"
3"Only the flower remained, its"
ratio0.066
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences61
matches
0"She pulled the Heartstone Pendant"
1"Her breath hitched."
2"She turned slowly, eyes scanning"
3"She tightened her grip on"
4"She moved forward, each step"
5"She pressed forward, heart hammering."
6"Her breath misted."
7"It didn’t move, but she"
8"She backed away, but the"
9"Her pulse roared in her"
10"She reached for the pendant,"
11"She spun, but the clearing"
12"She gasped, stumbling back."
13"It raised a hand."
14"Its petals were deep red,"
15"Her fingers brushed something beneath"
16"She walked, the flower clutched"
ratio0.279
9.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences61
matches
0"The air tasted metallic, like"
1"Aurora stepped off the narrow"
2"The moon hung low, a"
3"She pulled the Heartstone Pendant"
4"The standing stones loomed ahead,"
5"Time felt thick here, pressing"
6"The trees around the clearing"
7"Her breath hitched."
8"The pendant warmed, almost feverish."
9"She turned slowly, eyes scanning"
10"She tightened her grip on"
11"The ground beneath her feet"
12"She moved forward, each step"
13"The clearing opened wider, revealing"
14"The pendant thrummed louder now."
15"She pressed forward, heart hammering."
16"The air grew colder."
17"Her breath misted."
18"The pendant’s glow brightened, casting"
19"Something shifted in the hollow."
ratio0.902
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences12
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Only the flower remained, its stem twisting upward, reaching toward the stars."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
82.0350%