Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS4GN2GWHNV0XEV5S4Y5X8

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
26.5s
Cost:
$0.000181
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaks open. Aurora stands there, rain dripping from her hair, eyes scanning the room like she’s measuring distances no one else would notice. Lucien leans against the frame, cane tapping once against the floorboards. The scent of old paper and something faintly metallic lingers in the air. “You shouldn’t be here,” she says, voice steady but edged. Her gaze flicks to the half-open window, then back to him. He smiles, slow and deliberate. “Neither should you.” His hand rests lightly on the cane’s handle, fingers curled around the ivory grip. “But here we are.” Aurora steps inside, boots leaving dark prints on the worn rug. The room feels smaller now, walls pressing closer. Books crowd every surface, spines cracked and ink faded. A single lamp glows low, casting shadows across Lucien’s face. “You still keep everything organized?” she asks, eyes narrowing at the neat stacks. “Some things don’t change,” he replies, shifting his weight. The movement brings him closer, close enough that she catches the faint smell of cedar and something sharper—like ozone after lightning. She crosses her arms, shoulders squared. “I thought you’d moved on.” “I did,” he says, but his tone isn’t triumphant. It’s tired. “Or maybe I just learned how to hide better.” Aurora’s jaw tightens. She moves toward the kitchenette, fingers brushing the edge of a chipped mug. “You could’ve called.” “I didn’t want to.” His voice drops, almost a whisper. “Not like this.” She turns, meeting his eyes. The amber and black of his irises seem to swirl, pulling her gaze deeper. “You know why I’m here.” “No,” she says softly. “You don’t.” Silence stretches between them, thick with all the things they never said. Lucien reaches out, hesitates, then lets his hand fall. “I brought something.” He pulls a small leather pouch from his coat pocket, sets it on the table. “For you.” Aurora lifts the pouch, runs her thumb over the stitching. “Why?” “Because you left,” he answers, voice rough. “And because I couldn’t stop thinking about the night we got caught in that storm.” Her breath catches. The memory surfaces—rain slashing sideways, the way he’d laughed despite the cold, the warmth of his hand in hers even as thunder cracked overhead. She closes her eyes for a heartbeat before opening them, searching his face. “That night wasn’t the same,” she murmurs. “No,” he agrees. “It wasn’t.” The lamp flickers. Shadows dance across the walls, stretching long fingers toward them. Aurora’s fingers tighten around the pouch. “What’s in it?” He doesn’t answer right away. Instead, he reaches into his coat again, pulls out a folded piece of parchment. Unfolds it slowly, revealing a map. Lines crisscross the parchment, marked with tiny symbols she recognizes—her own handwriting. “This was my attempt to find you,” he says. “After everything…” Her throat feels dry. “You never told me you were looking.” “I didn’t know how.” His gaze drops to the map, then back to hers. “I thought you’d moved on. That you’d forgotten.” Aurora’s laugh is bitter. “You think forgetting helps?” “I think it hurts less.” He steps closer, close enough that she can feel the heat radiating from his body. “But I was wrong.” She looks down at the map, tracing a path with her finger. “You drew this?” “Every night. For months.” His voice cracks. “I kept waiting for you to show up.” The room seems to shrink further. Rain drums harder against the window. Aurora’s pulse thrums in her ears. She sets the pouch down, picks up the map instead. “Why now?” “Because I found something else,” he says. “Something about your father.” Her eyes widen. “What?” Lucien hesitates, then pulls a small vial from his pocket. Inside, a liquid shimmers—a deep blue that seems to swallow the light. “This came with the letter. From your mother.” Aurora’s hands tremble. “You never told me about this.” “I didn’t know if it was safe.” His voice softens. “But I had to see it myself.” She uncorks the vial, holds it up to the lamplight. The liquid swirls like liquid night. “What does it mean?” He meets her gaze. “It means your mother knew. About the thing you’re running from.” Aurora’s breath hitches. The room tilts slightly. “Run from what?” Lucien’s smile is sad. “From the truth.” Outside, thunder rumbles. The lamp flickers again, casting their shadows larger against the walls. Aurora’s fingers brush his sleeve. “Show me.” He nods, lifting the vial between them. “Together.” They lean in, foreheads almost touching. The air hums with unspoken words, with memories of storms and laughter and the weight of secrets. Somewhere in the distance, a clock chimes midnight. The vial catches the light, refracting it into tiny stars. Aurora watches them, heart pounding. Lucien’s hand finds hers, fingers interlacing. “We’ll figure it out,” he whispers. She squeezes his hand. “We always do.” The rain eases. The shadows retreat. In the quiet that follows, something shifts—not resolved, but understood. They stand there, hands clasped, waiting for dawn.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His hand rests lightly [lightly]"
1"she says softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.08
76.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount836
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount836
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"dance"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count1
10
word"resolved"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"weight"
2"whisper"
3"silence"
4"warmth"
5"dance"
6"tracing"
7"pulse"
8"unspoken"
9"pounding"
10"resolved"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
89.29% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"seems to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences112
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords832
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.71% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount616
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity1.79
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora11
Lucien6
Silence1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Lucien"
2"Silence"
places(empty)
globalScore0.607
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
79.81% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.202
wordCount832
matches
0"not resolved, but understood"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean18.91
std10.91
cv0.577
sampleLengths
049
121
226
338
413
530
611
720
819
913
1024
116
1241
1311
1422
1540
167
175
1822
1937
2011
2111
2222
238
2424
2515
2615
2730
2811
294
3030
319
3217
3320
3415
3510
367
3721
388
3931
4021
416
427
4324
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
15.31% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences112
ratio0.045
matches
0"The movement brings him closer, close enough that she catches the faint smell of cedar and something sharper—like ozone after lightning."
1"The memory surfaces—rain slashing sideways, the way he’d laughed despite the cold, the warmth of his hand in hers even as thunder cracked overhead."
2"Lines crisscross the parchment, marked with tiny symbols she recognizes—her own handwriting."
3"Inside, a liquid shimmers—a deep blue that seems to swallow the light."
4"In the quiet that follows, something shifts—not resolved, but understood."
96.96% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount621
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.043478260869565216
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008051529790660225
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences112
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences112
mean7.43
std4.75
cv0.639
sampleLengths
04
121
211
313
410
511
65
717
84
911
108
119
1210
1313
149
1521
166
175
189
192
209
213
2213
233
2410
253
265
2714
285
294
302
3112
329
3318
342
3510
361
377
3815
393
4024
4113
427
433
442
453
4610
476
483
495
61.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.38392857142857145
totalSentences112
uniqueOpeners43
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"Instead, he reaches into his"
1"Somewhere in the distance, a"
ratio0.027
52.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences74
matches
0"she says, voice steady but"
1"Her gaze flicks to the"
2"He smiles, slow and deliberate."
3"His hand rests lightly on"
4"she asks, eyes narrowing at"
5"he replies, shifting his weight"
6"She crosses her arms, shoulders"
7"he says, but his tone"
8"She moves toward the kitchenette,"
9"His voice drops, almost a"
10"She turns, meeting his eyes."
11"she says softly"
12"He pulls a small leather"
13"he answers, voice rough"
14"Her breath catches."
15"She closes her eyes for"
16"He doesn’t answer right away."
17"Her throat feels dry."
18"His gaze drops to the"
19"He steps closer, close enough"
ratio0.419
0.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences74
matches
0"The door creaks open."
1"Aurora stands there, rain dripping"
2"Lucien leans against the frame,"
3"The scent of old paper"
4"she says, voice steady but"
5"Her gaze flicks to the"
6"He smiles, slow and deliberate."
7"His hand rests lightly on"
8"Aurora steps inside, boots leaving"
9"The room feels smaller now,"
10"Books crowd every surface, spines"
11"A single lamp glows low,"
12"she asks, eyes narrowing at"
13"he replies, shifting his weight"
14"The movement brings him closer,"
15"She crosses her arms, shoulders"
16"he says, but his tone"
17"Aurora’s jaw tightens."
18"She moves toward the kitchenette,"
19"His voice drops, almost a"
ratio0.919
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she says, voice steady but edged"
1"His hand rests lightly, fingers curled around the ivory grip"
2"she asks, eyes narrowing at the neat stacks"
3"he says, but his tone isn’t triumphant"
4"he answers, voice rough"
90.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmurs (murmur)"
1"he agrees (agree)"
2"he whispers (whisper)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.44
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.12
78.0250%