Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS5BZYE6KZ32EPCD4PMPN1

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
31.6s
Cost:
$0.000193
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain fell in sheets over Soho, turning cobblestones to black mirrors that reflected the sickly green glow of the Raven’s Nest sign. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles as she pursued the figure ahead—Tomás Herrera, his silhouette hunched beneath a tattered trench coat, eyes flickering like candle flames in the downpour. His scar, a thin silver line across his left forearm, caught the light once before he ducked into an alley, leaving Harlow to follow. The air smelled of wet wool and something sharper, metallic, like blood left too long in the rain. Harlow’s fingers tightened around the leather strap of her watch, its surface worn smooth by years of gripping during stakeouts and interrogations. She’d lost her partner three years ago, under circumstances that still haunted her dreams—DS Morris, found in an alleyway with eyes wide as if he’d seen something no human should. The case had gone cold, but the whispers had never stopped: whispers of things that moved between shadows, of clients who didn’t exist until they did. Harlow’s boots echoed against brick walls as she rounded the corner, her breath coming in short bursts. Tomás was faster than she expected, weaving through narrow passages between buildings where the rain couldn’t reach. She heard the scrape of metal—a knife?—and pivoted, but the alley ended abruptly at a brick wall, its surface pockmarked with graffiti. No exit. Then she saw it: a bookshelf, half-hidden behind a sagging door, its shelves bowed under the weight of forgotten volumes. A faint draft whispered from within. Harlow’s pulse quickened. She’d seen this before—in the backrooms of old police stations, in the hidden rooms of places that shouldn’t exist. The Raven’s Nest wasn’t just a bar; it was a threshold. She lunged, yanking the shelf aside. The bookshelf groaned, then slid open with a creak that sounded too deliberate to be coincidence. Darkness swallowed her whole. The air inside was thick, humid, carrying the scent of incense and something sweeter—like overripe fruit left to rot. Harlow’s flashlight cut through the gloom, revealing a narrow staircase descending into blackness. The walls were lined with jars of preserved specimens, their contents shifting in the beam. A low hum vibrated through the floorboards, almost like a heartbeat. Tomás emerged from the shadows, his medallion catching the light as he turned. “You followed me here,” he said, voice steady despite the tremor in his hands. His eyes, warm brown and sharp, studied her with a mixture of fear and defiance. “You shouldn’t have.” Harlow’s hand drifted to her gun, but she hesitated. This place felt wrong, not just the air but the way the walls seemed to breathe. She thought of Morris again—the way his last words had been a whisper, not a scream. *“They’re not dead,”* he’d said before the darkness took him. “I’m not here to hurt anyone,” she replied, though her voice wavered. The Veil Market’s entry requirement flashed in her mind: bone token. She hadn’t brought one. Tomás stepped closer, his scar glinting. “You want answers? This is where they trade in secrets. But be careful—every deal has a price.” The hum grew louder. Harlow noticed now that the jars contained not just objects but figures, suspended in amber liquid, their faces frozen in expressions of terror or ecstasy. One jar held a woman with eyes like shattered glass. Another, a child holding a toy sword. “What is this?” she asked, though she already knew. The Veil Market dealt in stolen souls, in bargains struck with entities that wore human skin like costumes. Tomás’s jaw tightened. “Souls. Memories. Things people forget.” He reached into his coat, pulling out a small vial filled with something that glowed faintly blue. “I’ve seen what they do to those who cross them. They don’t kill you. They… unmake you.” Harlow’s flashlight flickered. The beam revealed a door at the far end of the chamber, its frame carved with symbols that pulsed faintly. Beyond it, a corridor stretched into darkness, lined with more jars. The air here was colder, heavier, pressing against her chest like a hand. She thought of her partner’s case, the way Morris had spoken of “the hollow ones” who fed on fear. Had he been right? Had she been chasing ghosts all along? Tomás grabbed her wrist, his grip surprisingly strong. “You have to see this. There’s something here about Morris. About *us*.” His voice dropped. “They took him. Not killed him. Taken him somewhere else.” The vial in his hand trembled. Harlow’s mind raced. If Tomás was telling the truth, this wasn’t just a black market—it was a prison. A place where the lost wandered, trapped between worlds. A sudden crash echoed from deeper in the market. The hum intensified, becoming a roar. Shadows shifted, coalescing into shapes that didn’t belong. Harlow’s breath caught as a figure materialized at the edge of the light—a man with no face, only a void where features should be. Tomás shoved her back, his scar glowing faintly. “Run!” But Harlow stood frozen, her watch ticking loudly in her ear. The face in the shadows raised a hand, and suddenly, she understood. The choice wasn’t between following or fleeing. It was between seeing the truth and letting it consume her. Her finger brushed the trigger. The world exploded in white. When the light faded, the two were lying on the stone floor, surrounded by silence. The jars were gone. So was Tomás. Only Harlow remained, her watch cracked, her reflection staring back from a shard of broken glass. In the distance, a voice whispered her name—not her real name, but the one she’d buried with Morris. *“Detective Quinn.”* She closed her eyes. Somewhere, in the depths of the Veil Market, something stirred. And it remembered her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount969
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount969
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"echoed"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"quickened"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"wavered"
count1
8
word"glinting"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"raced"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"weight"
2"pulse"
3"quickened"
4"gloom"
5"vibrated"
6"whisper"
7"wavered"
8"glinting"
9"shattered"
10"flickered"
11"pulsed"
12"trembled"
13"raced"
14"silence"
15"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
65.64% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords6
totalWords960
ratio0.006
matches
0"“They’re not dead,”"
1"us"
2"“Detective Quinn.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.63% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount874
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven2
Nest2
Harlow13
Quinn1
Tomás9
Herrera1
Morris4
Veil3
Market3
persons
0"Raven"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Morris"
6"Market"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.756
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.125
wordCount960
matches
0"not just the air but the way the walls seemed to breathe"
1"not just objects but figures, suspended in amber liquid, their faces frozen in ex"
2"not her real name, but the one she’d buried with Morris"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean38.4
std20.96
cv0.546
sampleLengths
076
196
258
359
426
558
645
751
827
923
1046
1127
1242
1347
1430
1533
1633
1747
189
1941
205
215
2238
2320
2418
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"were lined"
1"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs167
matches
0"was telling"
1"were lying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences80
ratio0.125
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles as she pursued the figure ahead—Tomás Herrera, his silhouette hunched beneath a tattered trench coat, eyes flickering like candle flames in the downpour."
1"She’d lost her partner three years ago, under circumstances that still haunted her dreams—DS Morris, found in an alleyway with eyes wide as if he’d seen something no human should."
2"She heard the scrape of metal—a knife?—and pivoted, but the alley ended abruptly at a brick wall, its surface pockmarked with graffiti."
3"She’d seen this before—in the backrooms of old police stations, in the hidden rooms of places that shouldn’t exist."
4"The Raven’s Nest wasn’t just a bar; it was a threshold."
5"The air inside was thick, humid, carrying the scent of incense and something sweeter—like overripe fruit left to rot."
6"She thought of Morris again—the way his last words had been a whisper, not a scream."
7"If Tomás was telling the truth, this wasn’t just a black market—it was a prison."
8"Harlow’s breath caught as a figure materialized at the edge of the light—a man with no face, only a void where features should be."
9"In the distance, a voice whispered her name—not her real name, but the one she’d buried with Morris."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount883
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"colder, heavier, pressing against her"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03284258210645526
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.011325028312570781
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean12
std7.08
cv0.59
sampleLengths
022
130
224
318
422
530
626
717
817
922
102
1120
126
133
1419
1511
166
1716
184
1919
2013
2115
2211
2313
2414
2515
263
279
2816
2916
3010
3112
3211
334
346
3517
364
3725
3810
397
409
4118
423
4322
4417
453
4620
4711
4813
4919
65.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4125
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences73
matches
0"Then she saw it: a"
1"Only Harlow remained, her watch"
2"Somewhere, in the depths of"
ratio0.041
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences73
matches
0"His scar, a thin silver"
1"She’d lost her partner three"
2"She heard the scrape of"
3"She’d seen this before—in the"
4"She lunged, yanking the shelf"
5"he said, voice steady despite"
6"His eyes, warm brown and"
7"She thought of Morris again—the"
8"he’d said before the darkness"
9"she replied, though her voice"
10"She hadn’t brought one."
11"she asked, though she already"
12"He reached into his coat,"
13"She thought of her partner’s"
14"His voice dropped"
15"It was between seeing the"
16"Her finger brushed the trigger."
17"She closed her eyes."
ratio0.247
49.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences73
matches
0"Rain fell in sheets over"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed"
2"His scar, a thin silver"
3"The air smelled of wet"
4"Harlow’s fingers tightened around the"
5"She’d lost her partner three"
6"The case had gone cold,"
7"Harlow’s boots echoed against brick"
8"Tomás was faster than she"
9"She heard the scrape of"
10"A faint draft whispered from"
11"Harlow’s pulse quickened."
12"She’d seen this before—in the"
13"The Raven’s Nest wasn’t just"
14"She lunged, yanking the shelf"
15"The bookshelf groaned, then slid"
16"Darkness swallowed her whole."
17"The air inside was thick,"
18"Harlow’s flashlight cut through the"
19"The walls were lined with"
ratio0.822
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"If Tomás was telling the"
ratio0.014
30.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Rain fell in sheets over Soho, turning cobblestones to black mirrors that reflected the sickly green glow of the Raven’s Nest sign."
1"She’d lost her partner three years ago, under circumstances that still haunted her dreams—DS Morris, found in an alleyway with eyes wide as if he’d seen somethi…"
2"The case had gone cold, but the whispers had never stopped: whispers of things that moved between shadows, of clients who didn’t exist until they did."
3"She’d seen this before—in the backrooms of old police stations, in the hidden rooms of places that shouldn’t exist."
4"The bookshelf groaned, then slid open with a creak that sounded too deliberate to be coincidence."
5"The Veil Market dealt in stolen souls, in bargains struck with entities that wore human skin like costumes."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, voice steady despite the tremor in his hands"
1"she replied, though her voice wavered"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.3592%