Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS5RZ0C7T8JT514M9QVCQK

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
26.9s
Cost:
$0.000179
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain slicks the iron stairs of the abandoned Camden tube station, each step echoing like a drumbeat against Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots. The air smells of rust and damp wool, the kind of scent that clings to old stone and forgotten things. She pauses at the mouth of a narrow passage, her leather watch catching the dim glow of a single lantern hung from a frayed rope. The compass in her pocket hums faintly, its needle twitching toward something just beyond sight. Beside her, Eva Kowalski adjusts the strap of her satchel, fingers brushing the edge of a leather-bound tome. Her green eyes flick to the shadows where the walls seem to breathe. “You feel it too,” she murmurs, voice low enough that only Harlow hears. “Like the air’s holding its breath.” Harlow nods, though her gaze stays fixed on the entrance to the station. The floor is slick with water and something darker—something that glints like oil under the lantern light. She steps forward, boots sinking slightly into the muck. The floorboards creak, but not from weight; they sound… deliberate. As if something waits beneath, patient. “Look at the pattern,” Harlow says, crouching. Her hand brushes the ground, tracing a circle of stones arranged in a spiral. They’re not natural. Too precise. Too close to the sigils etched into the brass compass in her palm. The metal warms against her skin, a pulse thrumming beneath the surface. “These aren’t just stones. They’re markers. Someone’s mapped something here.” Eva leans closer, her freckled nose wrinkling. “Or someone’s tried to hide it.” She pulls a small notebook from her satchel, flipping to a page filled with sketches of symbols. “The Veil Market trades in secrets, but this… this feels older. Like it predates even their deals.” Harlow stands, brushing off her knees. The compass needle spins wildly now, pointing not upward but sideways, toward a gap between two collapsed pillars. “There’s a rift here,” she says. “A tear in the fabric. Whatever’s on the other side… it’s bleeding through.” They move toward the gap, the air growing colder with each step. The walls press in, their surfaces slick with condensation that smells faintly of burnt sage. Harlow’s watch ticks louder, a metronome counting down to something inevitable. “You think this is connected to the case?” Eva asks, her voice tight. “The one with the missing partner? The supernatural stuff?” Harlow hesitates. Three years ago, DS Morris had vanished during a raid on a black market auction. No bodies, no leads—just a single bone token left at the scene, carved with the same sigils now visible in the stone. “Morris believed in the old ways,” she says finally. “He thought the Veil wasn’t just a market. It was a threshold.” Eva’s fingers tighten around her satchel. “And now?” “The same threshold is moving,” Harlow replies. “And whatever’s crossing over… it’s hungry.” They reach the gap. The rift is barely visible—a shimmer in the air, like heat haze over asphalt. But the compass needle digs deep, trembling. Harlow reaches out, but Eva stops her. “Wait. Look at the stones again.” Harlow squints. The spiral isn’t random. It mirrors the pattern on the compass face, the protective sigils etched into its surface. A key. “It’s a lock,” she breathes. “Someone built this place to keep something contained.” Eva traces a symbol with her finger. “Or to trap it.” A sudden gust of wind howls through the tunnel, carrying with it the scent of ozone and something metallic—blood. Harlow’s hand flies to her gun, but there’s nothing to fire. The rift pulses, and the stones begin to shift, rearranging themselves into a new shape. “They’re closing it,” Eva says, eyes wide. “But not all the way.” Harlow steps forward, the compass burning against her ribs. The needle points straight at a fissure in the stone, a crack that wasn’t there a moment ago. “We need to seal it,” she says. “Before it opens wider.” Eva nods, already pulling a small vial from her satchel. Inside, a liquid like liquid night swirls. “This is from the restricted archives,” she explains. “A binding agent. But it’ll only work if we use it together.” Harlow meets her gaze. “You trust me?” “I’ve seen what you do when you’re right,” Eva says, pouring the liquid onto the stones. The fissure hisses, then seals with a sound like a sigh. The rift collapses inward, leaving only a faint scar in the air. But the compass still hums. Harlow clutches it to her chest. “It’s not done,” she says. “Not yet.” Eva follows her look. In the distance, a faint glow flickers—blue, then red, then gone. “What was that?” Harlow’s jaw tightens. “Something watching. Waiting.” She glances at the lantern, now sputtering. “We need to leave. Now.” But as they turn to go, a whisper slithers through the air, soft as silk and sharp as glass. *You shouldn’t have come back.* Harlow freezes. The compass needle spins once more, pointing not at the rift—but at her. At the bone token she’d worn since the day Morris died. Somewhere in the dark, something answers.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she says finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.063
94.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount858
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount858
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"etched"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"weight"
2"tracing"
3"etched"
4"pulse"
5"whisper"
6"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
42.25% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences71
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"begin to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords852
ratio0.006
matches
0"You shouldn’t have come back."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
28.23% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount657
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.44
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Detective1
Harlow16
Quinn1
Eva10
Kowalski1
Morris2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
4"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.282
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
82.63% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.174
wordCount852
matches
0"not upward but sideways, toward a gap between two collapsed pillars"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean31.56
std19.43
cv0.616
sampleLengths
082
150
255
361
447
543
638
722
860
98
1013
1132
126
1336
1411
1545
1612
1738
1837
197
2039
2118
2218
2318
2424
2526
266
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs102
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences89
ratio0.079
matches
0"The floor is slick with water and something darker—something that glints like oil under the lantern light."
1"The floorboards creak, but not from weight; they sound…"
2"No bodies, no leads—just a single bone token left at the scene, carved with the same sigils now visible in the stone."
3"The rift is barely visible—a shimmer in the air, like heat haze over asphalt."
4"A sudden gust of wind howls through the tunnel, carrying with it the scent of ozone and something metallic—blood."
5"In the distance, a faint glow flickers—blue, then red, then gone."
6"The compass needle spins once more, pointing not at the rift—but at her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount664
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.03614457831325301
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.012048192771084338
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean9.57
std5.64
cv0.589
sampleLengths
022
120
225
315
418
513
613
76
813
917
109
119
121
136
147
1514
163
172
1813
1912
2010
217
2223
2317
246
2518
266
2713
2812
2915
3011
3113
329
332
3415
3522
369
3712
386
392
407
416
424
4314
447
457
466
472
484
4915
68.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.42696629213483145
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences59
matches
0"Too close to the sigils"
1"Somewhere in the dark, something"
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences59
matches
0"She pauses at the mouth"
1"Her green eyes flick to"
2"she murmurs, voice low enough"
3"She steps forward, boots sinking"
4"Her hand brushes the ground,"
5"They’re not natural."
6"She pulls a small notebook"
7"They move toward the gap,"
8"she says finally"
9"They reach the gap."
10"It mirrors the pattern on"
11"She glances at the lantern,"
12"*You shouldn’t have come back.*"
ratio0.22
61.69% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences59
matches
0"Rain slicks the iron stairs"
1"The air smells of rust"
2"She pauses at the mouth"
3"The compass in her pocket"
4"Her green eyes flick to"
5"she murmurs, voice low enough"
6"Harlow nods, though her gaze"
7"The floor is slick with"
8"She steps forward, boots sinking"
9"The floorboards creak, but not"
10"Harlow says, crouching"
11"Her hand brushes the ground,"
12"They’re not natural."
13"The metal warms against her"
14"Eva leans closer, her freckled"
15"She pulls a small notebook"
16"Harlow stands, brushing off her"
17"The compass needle spins wildly"
18"They move toward the gap,"
19"The walls press in, their"
ratio0.797
84.75% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"As if something waits beneath,"
ratio0.017
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The air smells of rust and damp wool, the kind of scent that clings to old stone and forgotten things."
1"The floor is slick with water and something darker—something that glints like oil under the lantern light."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she murmurs, voice low enough that only Harlow hears"
1"Eva asks, her voice tight"
2"Eva says, eyes wide"
56.25% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmurs (murmur)"
1"she breathes (breathe)"
2"she explains (explain)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.688
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.188
82.2504%