| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 4 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.65% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 749 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 749 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "shattered" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "throb" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "quickened" | | 7 | "footfall" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "loomed" | | 10 | "etched" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "throbbed" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "resolved" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "charged" | | 17 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 79 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 742 | | ratio | 0.02 | | matches | | 0 | "Not yet" | | 1 | "thump-thump, thump-thump" | | 2 | "“Some doors, once opened, can’t be closed.”" | | 3 | "Stay" | | 4 | "“you belong here”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 6 | | wordCount | 730 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 0.68 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like they’d been carved by trembli" | | 1 | "something like it" | | 2 | "felt like a physical weight" |
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| 65.23% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.348 | | wordCount | 742 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the absence of sound, but the presence of something else" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 28.54 | | std | 24.82 | | cv | 0.87 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 50 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 10 |
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| 87.50% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "been carved" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 125 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, her breath fogging in the cold, and glanced over her shoulder—nothing." | | 1 | "Not the absence of sound, but the presence of something else—a low hum, almost imperceptible, vibrating in her bones." | | 2 | "She closed her eyes, focusing on the rhythm—*thump-thump, thump-thump*—and suddenly, the hum resolved into a melody." | | 3 | "A memory surfaced—her father’s voice, sharp with warning: *“Some doors, once opened, can’t be closed.”*" | | 4 | "Then, a sound—soft, deliberate, like a footstep." | | 5 | "She could almost make out words—*“you belong here”*—but they dissolved before she could grasp them." | | 6 | "The figure loomed, its features blurred, yet she saw the eyes—hollow, black, reflecting the crimson light." | | 7 | "Her reflection stared back from the stone—eyes wide, lips parted in a silent cry." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 738 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.037940379403794036 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01084010840108401 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 9.28 | | std | 5.53 | | cv | 0.597 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 45.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.2375 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 19 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the skeletal trees clawing" | | 1 | "Only the hum, now louder," | | 2 | "Just the flicker of the" | | 3 | "Only the air remained, thick" | | 4 | "Then, a sound—soft, deliberate, like" | | 5 | "Only the pendant remained, glowing" |
| | ratio | 0.083 | |
| 81.11% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused, her breath fogging" | | 1 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 2 | "Her pulse quickened." | | 3 | "She stepped forward, each footfall" | | 4 | "They glowed faintly, as if" | | 5 | "Her voice echoed, brittle and" | | 6 | "She reached out, fingers brushing" | | 7 | "She spun, but there was" | | 8 | "Her breath came faster now," | | 9 | "She closed her eyes, focusing" | | 10 | "Her mother’s voice, or something" | | 11 | "She took a step back," | | 12 | "She whirled, but the figure" | | 13 | "Her hand flew to the" | | 14 | "She spun again, but the" | | 15 | "Her fingers scraped against it," | | 16 | "Her knees buckled." | | 17 | "She sank to the floor," | | 18 | "She didn’t move." | | 19 | "She could almost make out" |
| | ratio | 0.347 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s boots sank into the" | | 1 | "The air hung thick with" | | 2 | "Moonlight filtered through shattered stained" | | 3 | "She paused, her breath fogging" | | 4 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 5 | "She pressed a hand to" | | 6 | "The Heartstone had never failed" | | 7 | "The sound came from the" | | 8 | "Her pulse quickened." | | 9 | "She stepped forward, each footfall" | | 10 | "The chapel’s altar loomed ahead," | | 11 | "They glowed faintly, as if" | | 12 | "Her voice echoed, brittle and" | | 13 | "She reached out, fingers brushing" | | 14 | "The stone was cold, but" | | 15 | "A shadow shifted." | | 16 | "She spun, but there was" | | 17 | "Her breath came faster now," | | 18 | "The pendant burned." | | 19 | "She closed her eyes, focusing" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hung thick with the scent of damp earth and decay, a cloying sweetness that clawed at her throat." | | 1 | "Just the skeletal trees clawing at the sky, their branches twitching as if alive." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |