Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCS73WNQWYX3JKEMDVDBX3M

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
29.8s
Cost:
$0.000167
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain slicks the platform like oil, the abandoned Camden tube station lit only by the flicker of a single overhead bulb. Detective Harlow Quinn stands at the mouth of the old tunnel, leather watch catching the dim light as she adjusts her collar against the chill. The air smells of rust and damp stone, a scent that clings to her coat like a memory. She checks the bone token tucked into her pocket—its smooth edge a silent promise—and exhales slowly, eyes scanning the cracked tiles where the body lies sprawled. Eva Kowalski kneels beside the figure, fingers brushing the edge of a leather satchel spilling pages and vials across the floor. Her green eyes dart between the scattered notes and the faint smudge of ink bleeding into the concrete. "This isn’t random," she murmurs, voice low enough that only Harlow hears. "Look at the placement—they didn’t just drop him here." Harlow nods, boots crunching over gravel as she approaches. The victim’s face is pale, lips blue-tinged, but it’s the small silver locket at his throat that catches her attention. It’s open, revealing a miniature sketch of a woman with storm-gray eyes. Eva’s breath hitches. "That’s not ordinary," she says, pulling a notebook from her satchel. "I’ve seen this symbol before—in the margins of those occult texts I found last month. The one that looks like a broken hourglass." Harlow crouches, gloved fingers tracing the locket’s edge. The metal is warm, almost alive. "Broken hourglasses mean time’s been stopped," she mutters. "Or stolen." Her gaze lifts to the ceiling, where faint chalk marks spiral outward like ripples. "And someone’s been marking the ground. Not just for us to follow—it’s a map." Eva traces a finger over the lines, her freckled hand trembling slightly. "The Veil Market moves every full moon, right? But this station… it shouldn’t exist. Unless someone built it here." She pulls a crumpled map from her bag, comparing it to the tunnel walls. "These tunnels were sealed decades ago. Who’s maintaining them now?" A distant echo answers—a footstep, too deliberate to be coincidence. Harlow’s jaw tightens. She reaches for the Veil Compass hanging at her hip, its brass casing cool against her palm. The needle quivers, then steadies northward, pointing toward a gap in the wall where shadows pool thicker than they should. "There," she says, standing. "Something’s behind that." Eva follows, her satchel bumping against her side. The gap yawns wider than expected, revealing a narrow passage lit by bioluminescent moss clinging to the stones. Harlow steps forward first, watch glinting as she pushes aside a tangle of ivy. The air grows colder, carrying whispers that sound like half-remembered names. They descend into darkness, hands brushing along rough walls until Eva stops, pointing. On the floor ahead lies a circle of ash, centered around a single black feather. Harlow kneels, brushing away debris to reveal a sigil carved into the stone—a circle bisected by a jagged line. "A severed ouroboros," she breathes. "Life consuming itself. This isn’t just a crime scene; it’s a ritual." Eva’s voice trembles. "The woman in the locket… she’s part of this. Maybe she was trying to stop it." She gestures to the feather, still faintly glowing. "What if the Veil Market isn’t selling goods? What if they’re trading pieces of something bigger?" Harlow’s mind races. The compass spins again, now pointing toward the circle itself. "We need to document everything," she says, snapping photos with her phone. "But carefully. If this is a trap…" Her eyes flick to Eva’s trembling hands. "We move together. No surprises." They circle the circle, noting the ash pattern matches the sigil’s shape. Eva traces the lines with a fingertip, whispering, "The storm-gray eyes… she’s the key. Or the sacrifice." Harlow’s watch ticks loudly in the silence, counting down seconds until the next phase. Somewhere deeper in the tunnels, water drips in a rhythm too steady to be natural. A sudden gust of wind slams the passage shut, forcing them back. Harlow curses softly, reaching for the compass. Its needle spins wildly before settling on a direction—a staircase descending into pitch black. "It’s leading somewhere," she says, voice steady despite the cold creeping up her spine. "Down, not up." Eva hesitates, then meets her gaze. "Then we go together. But if this is connected to the disappearances…" She trails off, remembering the missing students, the vanished researchers. "We’ll need more than luck." Harlow nods, adjusting her grip on the compass. "We’ll find the source. And if it’s tied to that locket…" She pauses, thinking of the storm-gray eyes staring back from the photograph. "We’ll end it." They descend, shadows swallowing their figures as the tunnels groan around them. Somewhere below, the Veil Market waits—its bone tokens clinking like teeth in the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.44
leniency0.88
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount804
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"carefully"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount804
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"tinged"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"almost alive"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"chill"
2"scanning"
3"tinged"
4"tracing"
5"almost alive"
6"echo"
7"glinting"
8"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences50
matches(empty)
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences50
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords795
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
57.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount592
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.86
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow11
Quinn1
Kowalski1
Eva9
Veil2
Compass1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Compass"
5"Market"
places(empty)
globalScore0.571
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount795
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
44.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean53
std16.11
cv0.304
sampleLengths
090
160
278
352
455
557
651
764
843
944
1058
1150
1233
1334
1426
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs109
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences61
ratio0.098
matches
0"She checks the bone token tucked into her pocket—its smooth edge a silent promise—and exhales slowly, eyes scanning the cracked tiles where the body lies sprawled."
1"A distant echo answers—a footstep, too deliberate to be coincidence."
2"Harlow kneels, brushing away debris to reveal a sigil carved into the stone—a circle bisected by a jagged line."
3"\"Life consuming itself. This isn’t just a crime scene; it’s a ritual.\""
4"Its needle spins wildly before settling on a direction—a staircase descending into pitch black."
5"Somewhere below, the Veil Market waits—its bone tokens clinking like teeth in the dark."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount602
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.03820598006644518
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.013289036544850499
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean13.03
std7.14
cv0.548
sampleLengths
021
125
218
326
421
518
612
79
89
920
1012
113
1211
1323
148
156
168
1716
1814
1912
2033
2110
2210
233
2417
2520
264
273
288
2918
3014
3111
3213
3315
3419
355
3612
373
3824
3916
403
4110
4212
4314
445
4512
4631
4715
4812
497
77.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.47540983606557374
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences48
matches
0"Somewhere deeper in the tunnels,"
1"Somewhere below, the Veil Market"
ratio0.042
61.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences48
matches
0"She checks the bone token"
1"Her green eyes dart between"
2"she murmurs, voice low enough"
3"It’s open, revealing a miniature"
4"she says, pulling a notebook"
5"Her gaze lifts to the"
6"She pulls a crumpled map"
7"She reaches for the Veil"
8"she says, standing"
9"They descend into darkness, hands"
10"She gestures to the feather,"
11"she says, snapping photos with"
12"Her eyes flick to Eva’s"
13"They circle the circle, noting"
14"Its needle spins wildly before"
15"she says, voice steady despite"
16"She trails off, remembering the"
17"She pauses, thinking of the"
18"They descend, shadows swallowing their"
ratio0.396
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences48
matches
0"Rain slicks the platform like"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stands at"
2"The air smells of rust"
3"She checks the bone token"
4"Eva Kowalski kneels beside the"
5"Her green eyes dart between"
6"she murmurs, voice low enough"
7"Harlow nods, boots crunching over"
8"The victim’s face is pale,"
9"It’s open, revealing a miniature"
10"Eva’s breath hitches."
11"she says, pulling a notebook"
12"Harlow crouches, gloved fingers tracing"
13"The metal is warm, almost"
14"Her gaze lifts to the"
15"Eva traces a finger over"
16"She pulls a crumpled map"
17"A distant echo answers—a footstep,"
18"Harlow’s jaw tightens."
19"She reaches for the Veil"
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
28.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The air smells of rust and damp stone, a scent that clings to her coat like a memory."
1"The victim’s face is pale, lips blue-tinged, but it’s the small silver locket at his throat that catches her attention."
2"She reaches for the Veil Compass hanging at her hip, its brass casing cool against her palm."
3"The air grows colder, carrying whispers that sound like half-remembered names."
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she murmurs, voice low enough that only Harlow hears"
1"she says, voice steady despite the cold creeping up her spine"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she murmurs (murmur)"
1"she mutters (mutter)"
2"she breathes (breathe)"
3"a fingertip whispering (a fingertip whispering)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.32
leniency0.64
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.32
73.5963%