| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.563 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1014 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "lightly" | | 3 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1014 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "calculating" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1002 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "Whispers of the Veil" | | 1 | "plink" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 882 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.91 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Lucien | 7 | | English | 1 | | French | 1 | | Aurora | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 60.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a greeting, more a question suspended in time" | | 1 | "as if approving the reunion" |
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| 0.40% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.996 | | wordCount | 1002 | | matches | | 0 | "not forgiveness, not yet, but the fragile beginning of understanding" | | 1 | "not yet, but the fragile beginning of understanding" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.43% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 15 | | mean | 66.8 | | std | 20.87 | | cv | 0.312 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 110 | | 1 | 99 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 88 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 83 | | 6 | 77 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 47 | | 9 | 51 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 71 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 66 | | 14 | 31 |
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| 94.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0.145 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots scuff the worn floorboards—soft, but not silent—and the scent of cardamom and old paper clings to the air." | | 1 | "She doesn’t look up immediately; instead, she lets her gaze settle on the figure silhouetted in the doorway, the way one might study a map before stepping onto uncharted ground." | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes catch the light—amber on one side, black on the other—as though he’s carrying two halves of a moon split by some ancient rift." | | 3 | "He crosses the threshold without waiting for permission, the cane tapping once against the floor—a sound like a metronome counting down to something inevitable." | | 4 | "Lucien’s smile is a ghost of what it once was—half-smile, half-apology." | | 5 | "One catches his eye—a volume titled *Whispers of the Veil*, its pages dog-eared, margins filled with notes in both English and French." | | 6 | "She wants to deny them, to rewind the moment, but the truth sits heavy in her chest—a knot she’s carried for months." | | 7 | "Aurora’s breath hitches; she realizes she’s holding her breath." | | 8 | "Aurora’s mind races—calculating risks, weighing consequences—but her heart has already made its choice." | | 9 | "But here, now, in this cramped flat above a curry house, something new begins—not forgiveness, not yet, but the fragile beginning of understanding." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 897 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.03455964325529543 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006688963210702341 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 14.52 | | std | 7.06 | | cv | 0.486 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 56.52% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.34782608695652173 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 54.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, Lucien cups her face," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 95.41% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots scuff the worn" | | 1 | "She doesn’t look up immediately;" | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes catch the" | | 3 | "He lifts a hand, not" | | 4 | "she says, voice steady but" | | 5 | "She steps back, the motion" | | 6 | "He crosses the threshold without" | | 7 | "he answers, tone smooth as" | | 8 | "His gaze flicks to the" | | 9 | "She shifts, crossing to the" | | 10 | "she says, not turning" | | 11 | "He moves toward the living" | | 12 | "she asks, though she already" | | 13 | "he replies, voice low" | | 14 | "He turns, meeting her eyes" | | 15 | "She wants to deny them," | | 16 | "His hand rises, hesitates, then" | | 17 | "She leans into him, just" | | 18 | "His lips brush hers, tentative," |
| | ratio | 0.311 | |
| 17.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "The door creaks open on" | | 1 | "Aurora stands in the threshold," | | 2 | "The late afternoon light slants" | | 3 | "Her boots scuff the worn" | | 4 | "She doesn’t look up immediately;" | | 5 | "Lucien leans against the frame," | | 6 | "His heterochromatic eyes catch the" | | 7 | "The tailored charcoal suit hugs" | | 8 | "He lifts a hand, not" | | 9 | "Aurora’s pulse thrums in her" | | 10 | "she says, voice steady but" | | 11 | "The words hang between them," | | 12 | "She steps back, the motion" | | 13 | "The flat feels smaller suddenly," | | 14 | "He crosses the threshold without" | | 15 | "he answers, tone smooth as" | | 16 | "His gaze flicks to the" | | 17 | "The tabby watches him with" | | 18 | "Aurora notices Lucien’s stare lingers" | | 19 | "She shifts, crossing to the" |
| | ratio | 0.885 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The late afternoon light slants through the narrow window above the sink, catching dust motes that drift like forgotten thoughts." | | 1 | "His heterochromatic eyes catch the light—amber on one side, black on the other—as though he’s carrying two halves of a moon split by some ancient rift." | | 2 | "The tailored charcoal suit hugs his frame, the fabric whispering against the faint scar that runs along his jawline, a relic of a fight he never spoke of." | | 3 | "The kettle hums softly, a mundane sound that contrasts with the storm brewing beneath her skin." | | 4 | "The touch is warm, familiar, a spark that ignites something dormant beneath her ribs." | | 5 | "Ptolemy stretches, arching his back as if approving the reunion." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she says, voice steady but edged with something sharper than she intends" | | 1 | "he answers, tone smooth as aged whiskey" | | 2 | "she says, not turning" | | 3 | "he replies, voice low" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmurs (murmur)" | | 1 | "he whispers (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |