| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she says quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.435 | | leniency | 0.87 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.087 | |
| 81.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 803 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 25.28% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 803 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echo" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "resonance" | | 7 | "echoing" | | 8 | "glinting" | | 9 | "navigate" | | 10 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 111 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 17 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 797 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.34% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 694 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.87 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 13 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Isolde | 8 | | Nyx | 13 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Pendant | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Pendant" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.563 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 20.69% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if struggling to stay solid" | | 1 | "quite sky" | | 2 | "shadows that seem to drink the light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 797 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 20.44 | | std | 11.85 | | cv | 0.58 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 51 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 35 | | 4 | 43 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 35 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 30 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 19 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 27.65% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 124 | | ratio | 0.04 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath their feet is uneven—some stones warm, others cold." | | 1 | "The vines twist, forming shapes—faces, hands, eyes." | | 2 | "Aurora draws her knife—a simple kitchen blade—but it feels useless." | | 3 | "It screams—a sound that cuts off abruptly." | | 4 | "A vision flashes—her childhood home, her father’s voice, the smell of rain on cobblestones." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 64 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 1 | | adverbRatio | 0.015625 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 124 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 124 | | mean | 6.43 | | std | 3.35 | | cv | 0.521 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 7 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 41.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.2903225806451613 | | totalSentences | 124 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 67.34% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere far away, a bell" | | 1 | "Somewhere in the distance, a" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath fogs in the" | | 1 | "They step forward." | | 2 | "It thrums against her skin." | | 3 | "she says, eyes darting to" | | 4 | "Their voice carries a hollow" | | 5 | "she says, more to herself" | | 6 | "She reaches out, gripping Nyx’s" | | 7 | "Their skin feels colder than" | | 8 | "They move deeper." | | 9 | "She reaches out, touching one." | | 10 | "It dissolves into mist as" | | 11 | "Her voice is steady, but" | | 12 | "Its eyes are empty pits." | | 13 | "It raises a hand." | | 14 | "It reforms, stronger." | | 15 | "Their dagger glows faintly in" | | 16 | "They strike true, slicing across" | | 17 | "It screams—a sound that cuts" | | 18 | "She sees something glinting in" | | 19 | "She touches it." |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 10.51% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hums with a" | | 1 | "Aurora’s boots echo on the" | | 2 | "Nyx drifts ahead, their silhouette" | | 3 | "Isolde lingers at the threshold," | | 4 | "Aurora asks, voice barely above" | | 5 | "Her breath fogs in the" | | 6 | "Nyx tilts their head." | | 7 | "They step forward." | | 8 | "The walls pulse with a" | | 9 | "The ceiling disappears into darkness." | | 10 | "A faint scent of burnt" | | 11 | "A corridor stretches ahead, lined" | | 12 | "Each archway pulses with a" | | 13 | "The ground beneath their feet" | | 14 | "Aurora’s hand brushes the Heartstone" | | 15 | "It thrums against her skin." | | 16 | "she says, eyes darting to" | | 17 | "The violet glow deepens where" | | 18 | "Nyx steps closer, their form" | | 19 | "Their voice carries a hollow" |
| | ratio | 0.899 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 63.49% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 18 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The walls pulse with a slow, rhythmic throb, as though something vast breathes beneath the surface." | | 1 | "Nyx’s form flickers more frequently now, as if struggling to stay solid." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora asks, voice barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "she says, eyes darting to the nearest arch" | | 2 | "she says, more to herself than anyone else" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora asks (aurora ask)" | | 1 | "they murmur (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispers (whisper)" | | 3 | "she breathes (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.391 | | leniency | 0.783 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.348 | |