| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He stepped further [further]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.255 | | leniency | 0.511 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.043 | |
| 94.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 856 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 41.59% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 856 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "reminder" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "weight" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "sent a jolt through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 52 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 848 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "When dawn crept through the curtains, painting the room in pale gold, Rory spoke again." |
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| 80.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 500 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 1.4 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.8 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 848 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 18.43 | | std | 13.71 | | cv | 0.744 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 40 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 56 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 17 |
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| 98.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight caught the edge of his platinum hair and the faint scar that ran from temple to jawline—an old reminder of battles fought in shadows." | | 1 | "Lucien’s gaze flickered—just for a heartbeat—to the small crescent scar on her wrist, then back to her face." | | 2 | "The touch sent a jolt through her—familiar warmth mixed with something sharper, like static before rain." | | 3 | "Their foreheads touched first, then noses, then lips—soft, tentative, then urgent." | | 4 | "He smiled—a real one, bright and crooked." | | 5 | "And so he listened—about the job offer in Edinburgh, the pressure from his father’s old contacts, the fear that love would make him weak." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 508 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.03740157480314961 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.003937007874015748 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 9.86 | | std | 6.31 | | cv | 0.64 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 67.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4418604651162791 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 45.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, voice steady though" | | 1 | "His eyes, one amber, one" | | 2 | "he asked, arching a brow" | | 3 | "she replied, crossing her arms" | | 4 | "He let the cane rest" | | 5 | "He stepped further into the" | | 6 | "His voice dropped, rougher now" | | 7 | "She turned away, staring at" | | 8 | "Her voice cracked on the" | | 9 | "His expression softened, just a" | | 10 | "He paused, searching her face" | | 11 | "She shook her head, eyes" | | 12 | "She nodded, barely audible." | | 13 | "He leaned in slowly, careful," | | 14 | "Their foreheads touched first, then" | | 15 | "He lifted her hand, pressed" | | 16 | "She considered, heart hammering." | | 17 | "He smiled—a real one, bright" | | 18 | "They sank onto the couch," | | 19 | "She exhaled, shaky." |
| | ratio | 0.438 | |
| 53.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s knuckles rapped twice against" | | 1 | "she called, voice steady though" | | 2 | "The door swung inward and" | | 3 | "Moonlight caught the edge of" | | 4 | "His eyes, one amber, one" | | 5 | "he asked, arching a brow" | | 6 | "she replied, crossing her arms" | | 7 | "He let the cane rest" | | 8 | "Rory’s laugh was brittle" | | 9 | "Lucien’s gaze flickered—just for a" | | 10 | "He stepped further into the" | | 11 | "Rory’s fingers tightened around the" | | 12 | "His voice dropped, rougher now" | | 13 | "She turned away, staring at" | | 14 | "Lucien moved closer, slow enough" | | 15 | "Her voice cracked on the" | | 16 | "His expression softened, just a" | | 17 | "A ghost of a smile" | | 18 | "The air thickened." | | 19 | "Rory’s breath hitched." |
| | ratio | 0.813 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 19 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Moonlight caught the edge of his platinum hair and the faint scar that ran from temple to jawline—an old reminder of battles fought in shadows." |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she called, voice steady though her pulse thudded in her ears" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "he whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.128 | | leniency | 0.255 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.085 | |