| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 993 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 993 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 137 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 137 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 16 | | totalWords | 982 | | ratio | 0.016 | | matches | | 0 | "You shouldn’t have come." | | 1 | "You’re late." | | 2 | "Near a Hel portal," | | 3 | "You’re not alone." | | 4 | "You’re mine now." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.93% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 979 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 1.02 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.989 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if expecting shadows to spill out from beneath the tables" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.037 | | wordCount | 982 | | matches | | 0 | "Not much—a mere inch, but enough to make her breath hitch" | | 1 | "not in her ears but behind her skull, a voice" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 20.46 | | std | 21.1 | | cv | 1.031 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 98 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 69 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 44 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 47 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 41 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 1 |
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| 95.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "was strewn" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was shattered" | | 3 | "was swallowed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 137 | | ratio | 0.066 | | matches | | 0 | "The air inside hung thick with the tang of stale beer and something older—something metallic that clung to the back of her throat." | | 1 | "Not much—a mere inch, but enough to make her breath hitch." | | 2 | "One caught her eye—a jar of amber liquid, its contents sloshing as if disturbed." | | 3 | "A sound then—a whisper, not in her ears but behind her skull, a voice that wasn’t a voice." | | 4 | "She remembered the pendant—the Heartstone—its crimson glow pulsing when she’d first touched it." | | 5 | "But the feeling lingered—a weight, a presence." | | 6 | "Shards littered the floor, each reflecting a different version of her—some with hollow eyes, others with mouths stretched wide in silent wails." | | 7 | "In the circle stood a figure—tall, featureless, its form shifting like smoke." | | 8 | "The last thing she saw was the figure’s face—if it could be called that—before the darkness consumed her." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 12 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 0 | | adverbRatio | 0 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 137 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 137 | | mean | 7.17 | | std | 5.1 | | cv | 0.711 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 1 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 48.18% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.30656934306569344 | | totalSentences | 137 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the shadow of a" | | 1 | "Too fresh for the stillness" | | 2 | "Just the rows of chairs," | | 3 | "Somewhere, a door creaked open." | | 4 | "Then, a hand brushed her" | | 5 | "Just the empty bar, the" | | 6 | "Then, a door." |
| | ratio | 0.062 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Her fingers brushed the scar" | | 1 | "She’d asked for whiskey, but" | | 2 | "Her pulse thrummed in her" | | 3 | "She told herself it was" | | 4 | "Her flashlight beam cut through" | | 5 | "She stepped closer, the beam" | | 6 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 7 | "She moved toward the back," | | 8 | "She reached for it, but" | | 9 | "They shattered, the sound sharp" | | 10 | "It died instantly, as though" | | 11 | "*You shouldn’t have come.*" | | 12 | "Her neck prickled." | | 13 | "She spun, flashlight beam sweeping" | | 14 | "It was open now." | | 15 | "She’d locked it." | | 16 | "Her hand flew to the" | | 17 | "She remembered the pendant—the Heartstone—its" | | 18 | "Her flashlight flickered, casting jagged" | | 19 | "It wore a tuxedo, its" |
| | ratio | 0.257 | |
| 79.47% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 86 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora’s boots sank into the" | | 1 | "The air inside hung thick" | | 2 | "Her fingers brushed the scar" | | 3 | "The jukebox lay dormant, its" | | 4 | "She’d asked for whiskey, but" | | 5 | "The door creaked shut behind" | | 6 | "A flicker of movement in" | | 7 | "Her pulse thrummed in her" | | 8 | "The pub had been empty" | | 9 | "She told herself it was" | | 10 | "Her flashlight beam cut through" | | 11 | "She stepped closer, the beam" | | 12 | "The stool didn’t move again." | | 13 | "The light caught the edge" | | 14 | "Her voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 15 | "Aurora’s skin prickled." | | 16 | "She moved toward the back," | | 17 | "The counter was strewn with" | | 18 | "She reached for it, but" | | 19 | "The bottle was warm." |
| | ratio | 0.761 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 71.43% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d asked for whiskey, but the bartender had only shaken his head, eyes darting toward the back room as if expecting shadows to spill out from beneath the tab…" | | 1 | "One caught her eye—a jar of amber liquid, its contents sloshing as if disturbed." | | 2 | "A sound then—a whisper, not in her ears but behind her skull, a voice that wasn’t a voice." | | 3 | "Her flashlight flickered, casting jagged shadows that danced like dancers." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |