Run: 2026-02-26-01KJCSAETX2SSW7KKCFRKMV1TJ

Run Details

Model:
LFM2 24B
Duration:
39.3s
Cost:
$0.000194
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The door creaks open just enough for Aurora Carter to see Lucien Moreau’s silhouette framed by the dim hallway light. His silhouette is all sharp angles and quiet confidence, the ivory cane tapping once against the worn floorboards before he steps inside. The scent of old paper and something faintly metallic lingers in the air, mingling with the ghost of cardamom from the curry house below. She stands frozen, one hand still resting on the doorframe, the other clutching the strap of her delivery bag like it might anchor her to the present. Lucien’s eyes—one amber, one black—catch the light from the single bulb overhead, and for a heartbeat, neither moves. The half-demon’s gaze flicks over the room: stacks of yellowed parchment, scrolls coiled like sleeping serpents, the cat Ptolemy watching from the windowsill with a slow, deliberate blink. His expression remains unreadable, but his posture shifts, a subtle loosening of the tension in his shoulders as if he’s been waiting for this moment longer than he lets on. “You didn’t answer my message,” she says, her voice steady but edged with something sharper than she intends. The words hang between them, heavy with the weight of unsaid things. “I didn’t need to,” he replies, his tone smooth as polished stone. “You know how I work.” His hand brushes the cane’s handle, fingers lingering on the ivory grip as though testing its balance. “Though I suppose I should have expected you to be here. The flat’s… familiar.” Aurora’s jaw tightens. She steps back, the door swinging wider, revealing the narrow corridor behind her. The walls here are lined with bookshelves, their edges worn smooth by years of use. A map of London sprawls across one wall, marked with red ink and cryptic symbols. She notices the new additions—a cluster of notes near the window, a small vial of something amber glowing faintly on the sill. Lucien’s handwriting, jagged and hurried, fills the margins. “What are you doing?” she asks, though her eyes drift to the vial. Her pulse thrums in her throat. “Research,” he says, but there’s no conviction in it. His gaze drifts to the scar on her wrist, visible where her sleeve has slipped down. The crescent-shaped mark from a childhood fall, now a silent testament to a past they both avoid mentioning. She crosses the room in three strides, stopping just short of his space. The air between them crackles, not with anger but with the residue of what they’ve left unsaid. “You could’ve called,” she murmurs, her fingers twitching toward the doorframe as if to push him back. “I did,” he counters, voice low. “But you weren’t answering. And when you finally showed up…” His smile is faint, almost regretful. “It felt like the universe had a sense of humor.” Aurora’s breath hitches. The memory surfaces unbidden: rain-soaked streets, the scent of wet wool and desperation, his hands gripping hers too tightly as they ran. She’d run then, away from the chaos of his world, away from the man who had once been her anchor and her prison. Now, here he is, standing in her kitchen like nothing happened, and the contradiction gnaws at her. Lucien sets his cane against the wall, the blade hidden but the threat palpable. “You left without a word. No note. No explanation.” His amber eye flickers to hers, searching. “I assumed you’d moved on.” “Did you?” The question is sharp, but her voice wavers. She wants to deny it, to pretend the ache in her chest isn’t still raw. Instead, she reaches out, her fingertips grazing the edge of his suit jacket. The fabric is cool, tailored to perfection, but beneath it, she feels the faint tremor of his heartbeat. He doesn’t pull away. “You always were good at disappearing.” His thumb brushes her wrist, a touch so light it might have been accidental. “But I never stopped looking.” The room seems to shrink. The cat padded closer, tail flicking once before it retreated to the shadows. Aurora’s mind races—what had he found? What had brought him here, after all these years? The unsaid things press against her ribs, a tide of guilt and longing. “I didn’t know how to tell you,” she whispers, the words escaping before she can stop them. “Not about the letter. Not about… everything.” Lucien’s expression softens, just slightly. “You think I don’t know?” His voice drops, rough with something like sorrow. “I’ve carried every word you left unsaid. Every night I wondered if you’d come back.” The vial on the windowsill catches the light again, its glow casting golden shadows across his face. Aurora’s gaze drops to it, then back to his eyes. There’s a question there, unspoken, but she doesn’t ask. Not yet. Instead, she steps closer, the space between them narrowing until the scent of his cologne—something dark, like aged leather and smoke—fills her nostrils. His hand rises, hesitates, then rests lightly on her cheek. The touch is tentative, as if he fears breaking her. “You shouldn’t have come here,” she says, but her voice lacks heat. It’s a statement, not a plea. “And yet here we are.” His other hand finds the back of her neck, fingers tangling in her hair. The kiss is slow, deliberate, a collision of memories and possibilities. It tastes of salt and regret, of promises unkept and chances reclaimed. When they break apart, her breath is shallow. The room feels different now, charged with the weight of what they’ve begun again. Ptolemy watches from the sill, ears twitching at the sound of their ragged breathing. Lucien pulls back just enough to meet her eyes. “We have time,” he says. “For what happens next.” Aurora’s lips part, but no words come. The door remains ajar, the world outside forgotten. Here, in this cramped flat above a curry house, the past and future blur into a single, trembling moment. Outside, the city hums, unaware of the quiet storm brewing in its heart.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.609
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1000
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"slightly"
2"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1000
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"unreadable"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"testament"
count1
6
word"sense of"
count1
7
word"palpable"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count1
9
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"unreadable"
1"tension"
2"weight"
3"familiar"
4"pulse"
5"testament"
6"sense of"
7"palpable"
8"unspoken"
9"charged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences68
matches
0"t with anger"
1"a tide of guilt"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seems to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords994
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount858
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora6
Carter1
Lucien6
Moreau1
Ptolemy2
London1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
66.67% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though testing its balance"
1"something like sorrow"
99.40% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.006
wordCount994
matches
0"not with anger but with the residue of what they’ve left unsaid"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
92.31% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean41.42
std19.59
cv0.473
sampleLengths
093
176
230
348
476
519
643
747
832
965
1035
1156
1229
1346
1424
1533
1638
1743
1818
1942
2036
2118
2234
2313
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"are lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs132
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences75
ratio0.053
matches
0"Lucien’s eyes—one amber, one black—catch the light from the single bulb overhead, and for a heartbeat, neither moves."
1"She notices the new additions—a cluster of notes near the window, a small vial of something amber glowing faintly on the sill."
2"Aurora’s mind races—what had he found?"
3"Instead, she steps closer, the space between them narrowing until the scent of his cologne—something dark, like aged leather and smoke—fills her nostrils."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount867
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03690888119953864
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0057670126874279125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean13.25
std6.34
cv0.478
sampleLengths
020
122
224
327
418
528
630
718
812
912
1022
1114
123
1313
1415
1515
1622
178
1813
196
209
2116
2218
2313
2417
2517
266
2716
2810
293
3022
3123
3217
3314
3416
355
3610
3715
3813
3918
404
4120
425
435
4413
456
469
4713
4817
497
58.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.36
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"Instead, she reaches out, her"
1"Instead, she steps closer, the"
ratio0.03
50.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences66
matches
0"His silhouette is all sharp"
1"She stands frozen, one hand"
2"His expression remains unreadable, but"
3"she says, her voice steady"
4"he replies, his tone smooth"
5"His hand brushes the cane’s"
6"She steps back, the door"
7"She notices the new additions—a"
8"she asks, though her eyes"
9"Her pulse thrums in her"
10"he says, but there’s no"
11"His gaze drifts to the"
12"She crosses the room in"
13"she murmurs, her fingers twitching"
14"he counters, voice low"
15"His smile is faint, almost"
16"She’d run then, away from"
17"His amber eye flickers to"
18"She wants to deny it,"
19"He doesn’t pull away."
ratio0.424
13.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences66
matches
0"The door creaks open just"
1"His silhouette is all sharp"
2"The scent of old paper"
3"She stands frozen, one hand"
4"Lucien’s eyes—one amber, one black—catch"
5"The half-demon’s gaze flicks over"
6"His expression remains unreadable, but"
7"she says, her voice steady"
8"The words hang between them,"
9"he replies, his tone smooth"
10"His hand brushes the cane’s"
11"Aurora’s jaw tightens."
12"She steps back, the door"
13"The walls here are lined"
14"A map of London sprawls"
15"She notices the new additions—a"
16"Lucien’s handwriting, jagged and hurried,"
17"she asks, though her eyes"
18"Her pulse thrums in her"
19"he says, but there’s no"
ratio0.894
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Now, here he is, standing"
ratio0.015
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His expression remains unreadable, but his posture shifts, a subtle loosening of the tension in his shoulders as if he’s been waiting for this moment longer tha…"
1"She’d run then, away from the chaos of his world, away from the man who had once been her anchor and her prison."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"he replies, his tone smooth as polished stone"
1"she asks, though her eyes drift to the vial"
2"he counters, voice low"
3"His thumb brushes, a touch so light it might have been accidental"
4"she whispers, the words escaping before she can stop them"
5"she says, but her voice lacks heat"
6"other hand finds, fingers tangling in her hair"
63.04% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she murmurs (murmur)"
1"she whispers (whisper)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.348
leniency0.696
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.174
81.6391%