Run: 2026-03-03-01KJTXSK75GZAWZ6P8TE94J3QY

Run Details

Duration:
4m 43s
Cost:
$0.003980
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had turned Soho’s cobblestones to slick black mirrors by 11:17 PM, and Aurora Carter’s boots squelched through a puddle wider than her shoulders as she tucked the empty delivery bag under her arm. The last order of the night—pork dumplings, chili oil, a side of sticky rice for a silver-haired regular on Brewer Street—had netted her a five-pound tip, enough to buy a root beer and a moment of peace before she trundled up the stairs to the flat above the bar. She’d been avoiding this corner of Dean Street for two years, ever since she’d stopped leaving her front door without a jacket pulled high over her wrist, but her feet ached so bad she could barely feel her toes, and the glow of the green neon raven sign through the fogged window looked less like a warning and more like a lifeline. The door’s brass bell jingled sharp as she pushed inside, and the smell of roasted barley and wood smoke wrapped around her like a familiar blanket. A handful of regulars hunched over pints of stout in the back corner, their voices low over the hum of a Billie Holiday track crackling from the jukebox. The walls were lined with yellowed maps of London and frayed black-and-white photos, some of Soho alleyways from the 1970s, others she’d never bothered to ask about. Silas stood behind the bar, wiping a highball glass with a linen cloth, his grey-streaked auburn hair pulled back in a loose bun, his neatly trimmed beard dusted with a stray flour speck from the pretzels he’d set out earlier. His left leg propped on a wooden crate to take pressure off the old knee injury, and his silver signet ring glinted when he shifted the glass onto the rack. He hummed a slow Irish tune under his breath, the same one her father used to sing over Sunday brunch in Cardiff. She leaned against the bar, her voice soft enough not to startle him. “Can I get a root beer, please?” Silas froze mid-wipe, the cloth slipping from his fingers to clatter against the marble top. He blinked, his hazel eyes locking on hers, and for a beat she thought he didn’t recognize her. Then his gaze dropped to her left wrist, where her rolled-up sleeve had slipped a fraction, revealing the tiny crescent scar peeking out from the cuff of her black t-shirt. His breath hitched. “Rory?” She tensed, yanking her sleeve back down to cover the mark, her shoulders hunching. “Uh—you’ve got the wrong person. I’m Laila.” Silas scoffed, a dry, amused sound that made her smile twitch despite her nerves. He set the empty glass down, leaning both palms on the bar, his left knee creaking as he shifted his weight. “Laila? You stopped introducing yourself as Laila after you spilled stout on my favorite leather stool and admitted your real name was Aurora, but you hated it so much you begged me to call you Rory. I’d know that scar anywhere. You sliced it open hauling your thrifted couch up the flat’s staircase, slipped on the kitchen linoleum and slammed your wrist into the edge of the sink. You said you’d write a silly limerick about it and mail it to your mom, the Welsh teacher who still asks after it every time you call. You never did send it, last I checked your answering machine.” She pulled her sleeve up again, exposing the faint, silvery crescent. A shaky laugh bubbled out of her, and she wiped at her eyes with the back of her hand. “I never did write that limerick. Mom still teases me about it. Says she’s been waiting for the poetic tribute.” Silas turned behind the bar, grabbing a glass bottle of root beer from the cooler and twisting off the cap with a satisfying pop. He slid it across the bar to her, their fingers brushing; his were calloused, same as they’d been two years prior, from wiping glasses and fixing the jukebox after a drunken patron knocked it off its base last winter. “Thanks” was all she managed, taking a sip that fizzed up her nose and cut through the exhaustion in her bones. He gestured to the empty stool next to him. “Sit. You’ve got a minute, right? I haven’t seen you since you stopped leaving crumpled notes on my bar counter asking for extra sugar for your post-shift tea.” She hesitated, then peeled off the Golden Empress delivery vest, folding it neatly under her arm, and perched on the stool. The leather creaked under her weight, just like it had when she’d first moved into the flat above the bar two years prior. Her gaze drifted to the tall bookshelf pressed against the back wall, the one she’d always written off as a quirky decorative piece, stuffed with weathered crime novels and travel guides. “I never knew that was a secret door,” she said, nodding at it. “Lived above this place for two years and never noticed. Thought you just had a really weird bookshelf that didn’t fit anywhere else.” Silas followed her gaze, a quiet smile tugging at his beard. “That’s the point. It’s a bar for people who don’t want to be found. Well, mostly. You were the exception. You’d leave your flat at 7 a.m. every morning, wave at me when you passed the staircase, and stumble home at 1 a.m. smelling like fried rice and cheap hairspray. I thought you were gonna make it big as a lawyer, you talked about pre-law so much.” She picked at the label on her root beer bottle, her throat tightening. “I quit pre-law. Left Evan. Fled to London with Eva. Thought starting over would be easy. Turns out it’s just… different.” Silas nodded, his hazel eyes softening. “I saw Evan, three months after you stopped coming down to the bar. He was loitering out front, wearing that stupid leather jacket he used to wear, asking the bartender if they’d seen a girl named Rory Carter. I told him I didn’t know anyone by that name, and I haven’t seen him since. I should have told you, but I figured you didn’t want me sticking your nose into your business.” Rory set the bottle down hard enough that fizzy liquid sloshed over the edge, her eyes widening. “You saw him? Why didn’t you tell me? I was so scared I thought he’d track me right to my door.” He shrugged, grabbing a handful of salted peanuts from the ceramic bowl on the bar. “You were clearly trying to lay low. Wore long sleeves even in July, covered that scar with a stupid beaded bracelet, started going by Laila. I didn’t want to make it worse. You’ve always been good at taking care of yourself. You left an abusive guy, moved across the country, got a job delivering food. That takes guts.” She laughed, this time a little louder, and wiped at the tears that had spilled over. “I was scared every single day. I thought if I didn’t use my real name, Evan couldn’t find me. I thought if I stayed hidden, I could just forget all of it.” Silas glanced down at her scuffed boots, the toes peeling, laces frayed where she’d been wearing them for three years. “Your soles are coming loose. You’ve been wearing those things since you moved here, haven’t you?” She looked down, her cheeks heating. “Yeah. Can’t afford new ones right now. Delivery pay’s not great, and rent’s going up next month.” He shook his head, reaching under the bar for a metal toolbox. “I’ll fix them for you. No charge. Got extra leather and glue in the back. Been meaning to patch up my own work boots, anyway. Come back tomorrow around 5 p.m., they’ll be done.” She hesitated, then nodded. “Okay. Thanks, Si.” Her gaze drifted back to the cash register, where a crumpled yellow note was taped to the side. She squinted, recognizing her own messy scrawl from tired post-shift nights. “Is that…?” Silas followed her gaze, his smile softening. “Yeah. That’s the one. You left it after your first week waitressing at the pub near Leicester Square. Bought yourself a fancy root beer and a plate of Welsh rarebit, brought a portion over for me. Said landlords shouldn’t charge extra for broken hallway lightbulbs.” She laughed, wiping at her eyes again. “I can’t believe you kept that. I thought you’d toss it after a week.” He shook his head. “It was the nicest thing anyone had done for me in months. I’d just come off the last of the desk work after retiring, and I was going crazy fixing up the bar. That note made me feel like I wasn’t just running a bar for strangers. Made me feel like I had a friend.” The jukebox switched to a slow folk tune, and the bar fell quiet save for the rain tapping against the windows and the distant hum of London traffic. Rory checked her watch, 11:42 p.m. She stood up, refolding the delivery vest under her arm. “I should go up. My shift starts at 7 a.m. tomorrow, need to sleep.” Silas stood too, his limp more noticeable as he rounded the bar to shake her hand. “Wait. Next time you come down, leave the delivery vest at home. Wear that beat-up black t-shirt you used to wear, the one with the cracked raven printed on the front. Stay for a pint. No hiding, no lying about your name. Just… catch up.” Her bright blue eyes crinkled at the corners, the same way they had when she’d first moved to London, full of reckless hope. “I will. Thanks, Si.” She pushed open the door, the rain now a fine mist that stung her cheeks less than the earlier downpour. The neon raven glowed green above her, and she could hear Silas calling after her, voice rough with amusement: “Don’t be a stranger for another two years!” She laughed, waving over her shoulder as she climbed the creaky wooden stairs to her flat. When she reached her door, she paused, pulling up her sleeve to stare at the crescent scar. For the first time in two years, she didn’t feel like hiding. She felt like coming back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1719
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1719
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"marble"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
highlights
0"familiar"
1"marble"
2"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen106
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1717
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.39% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount988
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Soho2
Aurora1
Carter1
Brewer1
Street2
Dean1
Billie1
Holiday1
London3
Irish1
Sunday1
Cardiff1
Golden1
Empress1
Silas10
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Billie"
3"Holiday"
4"Irish"
5"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Brewer"
2"Street"
3"Dean"
4"London"
5"Cardiff"
globalScore0.994
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1717
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean57.23
std39.92
cv0.697
sampleLengths
0146
1173
220
366
41
521
6141
750
884
937
10111
1178
1234
1378
1438
1573
1648
1736
1823
1946
207
2131
2252
2321
2459
2558
2661
2727
2847
2950
85.40% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences53
matches
0"were lined"
1"were calloused"
2"was taped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs167
matches(empty)
68.65% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences77
ratio0.026
matches
0"The last order of the night—pork dumplings, chili oil, a side of sticky rice for a silver-haired regular on Brewer Street—had netted her a five-pound tip, enough to buy a root beer and a moment of peace before she trundled up the stairs to the flat above the bar."
1"He slid it across the bar to her, their fingers brushing; his were calloused, same as they’d been two years prior, from wiping glasses and fixing the jukebox after a drunken patron knocked it off its base last winter."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount998
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.028056112224448898
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003006012024048096
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean22.3
std18.02
cv0.808
sampleLengths
035
149
262
326
428
527
640
730
822
913
107
1115
1218
1330
143
151
1614
177
1814
1921
20106
2111
2219
2320
2424
2539
2621
279
2828
2921
3023
3131
3213
3323
3411
3567
3613
3721
386
3972
4017
4121
4215
4358
4416
4532
4620
4716
486
4917
54.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.33766233766233766
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners26
62.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Then his gaze dropped to"
ratio0.019
1.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences53
matches
0"She’d been avoiding this corner"
1"His left leg propped on"
2"He hummed a slow Irish"
3"She leaned against the bar,"
4"He blinked, his hazel eyes"
5"His breath hitched."
6"She tensed, yanking her sleeve"
7"He set the empty glass"
8"She pulled her sleeve up"
9"He slid it across the"
10"He gestured to the empty"
11"She hesitated, then peeled off"
12"Her gaze drifted to the"
13"she said, nodding at it"
14"She picked at the label"
15"He shrugged, grabbing a handful"
16"She laughed, this time a"
17"She looked down, her cheeks"
18"He shook his head, reaching"
19"She hesitated, then nodded."
ratio0.547
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount49
totalSentences53
matches
0"The rain had turned Soho’s"
1"The last order of the"
2"She’d been avoiding this corner"
3"The door’s brass bell jingled"
4"A handful of regulars hunched"
5"The walls were lined with"
6"Silas stood behind the bar,"
7"His left leg propped on"
8"He hummed a slow Irish"
9"She leaned against the bar,"
10"Silas froze mid-wipe, the cloth"
11"He blinked, his hazel eyes"
12"His breath hitched."
13"She tensed, yanking her sleeve"
14"Silas scoffed, a dry, amused"
15"He set the empty glass"
16"She pulled her sleeve up"
17"A shaky laugh bubbled out"
18"Silas turned behind the bar,"
19"He slid it across the"
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She tensed, yanking her sleeve back down to cover the mark, her shoulders hunching."
1"Silas scoffed, a dry, amused sound that made her smile twitch despite her nerves."
2"He slid it across the bar to her, their fingers brushing; his were calloused, same as they’d been two years prior, from wiping glasses and fixing the jukebox af…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.037
leniency0.074
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.9062%